During Those Years When I Was in Xingyue

Let me tell you my thoughts. The protagonist's personality is erratic, like a schizophrenia. His strength increases too quickly, and he is too vulgar to cause discomfort. The rest are pretty good, not considered jelly or poison.

Chapter 1, don't you consider revising it? This is too silly, right? When a person is sure whether it is a dream, he will pinch himself, or even give himself a slap in the face. Who would normally jump off a building?

Let me complain too. Let me start by saying that I have only read ten chapters before reviewing the book, so don't blame me if you change it later. 1. There are only five major methods in Xingyue, and there is no sixth method. This is clearly stated in the Night of the Magician, and in the setting, the thirteenth ancestor of the 27 Zuri, Varachia Night, signed a contract with Kurohime to become a death disciple in order to pursue the sixth method to avoid the destruction of mankind 2. The God of Xingyue Those magics in modern times are called magic, or the magic of the Gods that cannot be used in modern times has never disappeared. It is okay to say that some of it is lost There are very few people writing about type moon fans in the starting point, so our requirements are relatively high. Can the author study the setting before writing? Or should it be clearly stated at the beginning of the introduction that this book is a second set? Those of us who care about the party find it very uncomfortable.

The first chapter directly confronts readers 6666

Why do I always feel that I have read this book?

It's very strange at the beginning. The magician is not so easy to talk to, and he is also a monarch. So if he says he wants to go, he will take you without directly killing people and silencing them. It is already very good.

I am also convinced by you, the author. If you write about Xingyue, just write about Xingyue. What do you want to do by bringing up the ancient prehistoric world of the East? Even if you write some comprehensive comics, they are better than this. What's more important is that you can't even tell the difference between the Sanqing Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty. Is Jiejiao the first to take charge of Guiyuan? Then it's obviously connected to the sky, okay? And don't you think the protagonist's character has become more and more like a charlatan in recent chapters? Especially the chapter where he talked with Liu Che, Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty. And why does Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty Liu Che look exactly like the protagonist Zhang? Don't you think it's awkward to write like this? After all, according to what you wrote, they both come from the main world. Since they come from the main world, why are they the same? This is impossible, okay? If they look the same, the protagonist will be an unknown person in the main world? It's impossible to think about it in the main world where the Internet is so developed, right?

Nine recommendation votes, plus one.

Old bookworms, lovers of the moon, those who are sophisticated about the moon, those who are crazy about the moon, and people with online IQs. . . They probably all left after reading a few chapters. The remaining Shennong Party lasted until chapter 70 at most and then retreated. What is left are some novices, brainless party members, and contact parties who have known a little bit about reality. Let's see how long these people can hold out

There are 4 recommendation tickets every day, and they have been given for 9 consecutive days. Can't you update more? There are also crazy hints for more cum! ! !

If Xingyue doesn't open a harem, what kind of fanfic would you write about Xingyue?

I'm not denying your book, I just don't like this poisonous point. It doesn't matter if you're very good at cheating, but don't limit it if you're full and have nothing to worry about. If the protagonist has thoughts, you, the author, will be the first to die. After all, we readers don't like it after reading it. Since you want to limit it, why don't you give the protagonist power? If you give the protagonist an immediate seal, it will not only let me see that you are in a low word count, but also some of our readers will be very unhappy.

The six recommendation votes are a bit short, but I still want to add some detailsＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏ

Why do current two-dimensional novels, or most new authors focusing on harems, like to portray a protagonist who thinks he is funny and silly but is actually very Rz?

A cliché fantasy wearing a moon skin. Zhiwen

If you want to watch it or not, go away. If I go away, you can do whatever you want.

Studying and being popular are the protagonist's golden fingers, right?

Chapter 1: Persuading people to quit, I feel like Pig's Foot is just a piece of shit

I fucking understand it! This novel is about the love story between Brisisan and the protagonist! I understand! Search Gasnet! 🙂🙂🙂🙂

To be honest, I don't understand why you kneel down when you see Liu Che. What kind of kindness does he have to you to deserve your kneeling? You have never knelt before your master. You kneel to him because he looks like you and he is still an emperor. If it were another Qing Dynasty emperor, would you kneel or not? You are a modern person and you still kneel here and there. Modern education has taught you nothing.

Food and grass are okay. But the latest chapter. It's already 2020 and some people still say that light-year is a unit of time. I'm convinced.

I want to say, those who ask how much a good review costs, are they doing this too much and want to take orders 😡😡😡. They are rubbish. If you think it is just good reviews, you don't have to read it. I have been here all day long, and those who think it is written in a prehistoric way feel that the author is writing randomly. This is all to prepare for the subsequent plot, which will be explained later, okay! Again, if you don't like reading it, go away. Who do you think cares about you reading it? It's not like no one likes to read this book.

I don't know if it's an illusion? I always feel that there are some authors who always like to describe "the East" as synonymous with "wisdom", "mystery", "omniscient", "omnipotent", etc., But they just don't have good enough writing style to write it. As a result, after reading it, I don't feel any corresponding sense of pride at all. Instead, I feel very ashamed and embarrassed! 🥵

Sure enough, there is no harem, because the protagonist is a cuckold who likes to watch the girl he likes fall into the arms of other men 😅

I don't want to subscribe anymore. I'm here to read the novel, not to pay for the trouble. The writing is already very messy, okay, and now it's funny from the Servant Universe?