The Residual Dream of the Old God

I have been reading online articles for ten years. From the very beginning, the pictures are quick and refreshing. The main character pretends to be there, and the writing and plot are good. The writing is logical. It is rare to find a book that suits my appetite. This is a good book that I rarely found after going back to the starting point for three or four days. It's hard to imagine that this is the author's first time writing an article. The plot is a little delayed, but the pace is much better later on. However, there is too much knowledge that ordinary people will not come into contact with. Nowadays, online articles generally accept the same old world view settings. Evil, it's just a matter of stance: the first meeting of Fangs is a fight to the death, the kind where everyone is killed if there is a slight advantage on either side. In ordinary online novels, the ashes of those who dare to fight like this with the protagonist will not be raised; or the first transcendent person the protagonist encounters in the bootlegging conflict is generally The method is to give him a deeply abhorred motive or position, and put him on the opposite side of the protagonist. He can kill without hesitation and feel very comfortable, but later the protagonist discovers that he is just a soldier who takes risks in order to have more money to help his comrades. This kind of writing is better than that kind of character opposition. It's a cool text with facial expressions. If you are opposite me, you are the bad guy. See if I don't push you down. The newbie's thinking is much better. The relationship and image between the characters are more profound Generally speaking, this is an easy book to attract old bookworms who have requirements for writing and logic. It has a strong dissuading effect on students who pursue refreshing and have a black-and-white outlook. Come on, author After improving in all aspects, this is definitely a boss level. What gives me a similar feeling is the mystery of Cuttlefish. The early supplements of Cuttlefish on prices, food and accommodation, etc. Let me know People have a vivid understanding of the world, and have good control over the reader's enjoyment and plot flow The author can actually look at his own positioning of his work, which is simply the hard-core direction of writing his own story. If he wants to lower some standards by taking into account the needs of more popular readers, such as the relatively secondary world view and power structure, the character setting and plot system are undoubtedly outstanding. I think this aspect is the author's unique understanding and characteristics. Unless the audience really needs it, it is an absolute bonus. I hope to witness the rise of a big boss, come on

In terms of setting alone, it can be said to be the top level of the idealistic worldview. I think first of all, it is a reference to the Esoteric Cult simulator, including the expansion of mysticism-related content on it. Secondly, the sun, as a channel for energy pouring, reminds me of the setting of The Elder Scrolls. For Nirn, the sun and stars are holes for energy flow. With this association, the concept of the crown seems to be very similar to the concept of the tower in The Elder Scrolls, as well as the God's Head and the Indescribable One, and some places also have a sense of déjà vu. Although the various important settings of this work (as well as mirror images and so on) inevitably draw lessons from other excellent works, it is undeniable that the author has found his own style (more accurately, it can be said to be a painting style) in it, and depicts a bizarre, strange and strange world. As a worldview lover, I am quite satisfied. Although there are some bugs in this book, I think those are superficial mistakes (meaning they can be modified under the current worldview). The worldview of some works becomes more and more broken in the end as it is written. This is a problem with the underlying core of the worldview. Then I think it is a pity that the author's writing skills do still have room for improvement (but I am not talking about the writing style. I think Brother Huozi's writing style is very good and fits the style of this article. If you want me to evaluate the characteristics, it is a bit frigid orz, cool!) For example, the rhythm of the storyline, including the speed and ease of the plot, I have read it twice, and there is really something wrong with the part before Ji Li'an performs the ceremony. But in the end, I would like to thank Brother Huozi for bringing me such an exquisite, unconstrained and heavy world of artifacts!

The author's settings are really great. What I like most is that the characters are named after galaxies when they upgrade. I have read a book called Cthulhu in Tokyo before. They are named after the depth of the ocean. From the low-light layer to the Gutenberg layer, they can be used as names for the sublimation methods of sinking. The two are so appropriate. When I think of the starry sky and the bottom of the sea, they are completely synonymous with the unknowable, dark, boundless, and unknown... Then the imaging setting is really great, with the feeling of Saya's Song. You see only what you wish to see, but the truth never appears to limited wisdom.

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that it's not a book of this era, or it's not a qualified online article. It has certain requirements for readers' knowledge reserves. The book involves a lot of mythological knowledge, as well as Jung's psychological theory of archetypes and masks. The setting is very clever, but the plot construction is too plain compared to the setting. Too much emphasis on setting and characters makes the story lose its vitality. What should have been a magnificent story has become a strange world and an approaching storm, but there is no follow-up. Overall, it's a great novel, but it's a pity that it's too ahead of its time. Personally, I have seen "The Hero with a Thousand Faces", the "Mythology Library" series, "The Golden Bough", "Jungian Analytical Psychology", and what the author said is "The Divine Comedy". It is a good novel for the creator, but not very accessible to ordinary readers.

I don't know how to encourage the author, but try to express my reading experience from a pure reader's perspective. I think people who are addicted to occultism are more or less obsessed with a world full of symbols, yearning to seek indescribable mysterious experiences in the dense forest of images, and it is also very likely that they are fetishes (in a non-disease sense), pursuing inorganic things endlessly, or out of a kind of sympathetic sensitivity. Therefore, I personally like the details and atmosphere described by the author, and I also believe that other readers who are interested in radio waves will most likely be happy as well. Being able to keep readers from looking away or skipping paragraphs when reading online articles at least proves that the author's construction of an illusory world is successful. It's still too thin now, and it's hard to wait for updates (∇)

When one plot is inserted into another plot, and it takes two weeks and several chapters to describe it, then it should have an effect on the overall plot of the entire volume, otherwise it is a digression. For example, the recent plot of Bloodline of the Kingdom Next Door was criticized by some readers. First of all, an important part of the latest volume, namely the plot of Emerald City, has been written for a year or two. The update is slow and the number of chapters exceeds that of any previous volume, which makes people wonder if the author is running out of time to write. This is a long-standing problem. Secondly, half of the author's six-month update was devoted to shaping the character of Lausanne, and even the main line was pushed to write about Lausanne's fight... (Although I think the writing is very good, I can't say it is nonsense, but it is an old problem: inappropriate details) There are specific book reviews there, but here I mainly want to talk about this book. The plot of Emil's memories feels a bit similar to me. Why? The author previously said that the main line of this book is to reveal the truth about the world, but it is not just a collection of settings. The plot and settings are both equally important, so the focus will be on creating "people who explore the truth of the world." ——To be honest, both the setting and the plot are particularly attractive to me, and the author combines the two very beautifully in this book, so there is no need to question my love for this book. Speaking of which. If Emil was also one of the explorers of the truth about the world, then I would really like this way of writing, but there seems to be no sign of this at present. So I don't know what this person does... (Mentioning emotional issues serves the plot of the future encounter between Colin and Ji Li'an? Does language magic involve important settings or plot branches? Paving the way for some reversals in the subsequent fight against the Grand Duke?) Is it mainly an update issue? It doesn't matter if it's slower, but it also raises some questions. I really look forward to it if there is really a design in place rather than a bunch of random ideas that result in inappropriate details. After all, this volume is a bit long. If the update is fast, it can be clearly seen whether it is too watery or there is a lot of plot. The root cause of the slowness is a lack of ideas, so people suspect it is the former. --If you waste your inspiration on minutiae, you will be rewarded. Above, some recent questions. In addition, I wish my writing ideas to flourish, my writing to flourish, and my writing to become more brilliant🙂

Although it's a bit mind-numbing, it's still a good reading experience

Looks good, matched with the author's channel

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It's really good-looking, and I find most of the settings interesting. It's just that I really don't like and don't want to read the story of a gangster. I'm looking forward to the author's next book.

The atmosphere and details are handled quite well. The only drawback is that the plot twists are a bit stiff.

It's a very good book. Although the author's writing is a bit verbose, it's still worthy of my starting point.

People are dancing in the circle of fate, group after group, and one of them is named Colin He is different from everyone else, in the circle within the circle, the net within the net, he has nowhere to escape Who is he? Whether it is good or sinful, His past, his present, and his future Reluctance, greed, fear, cowardice, anger All of this may be meaningless to us Maybe he is a miracle, an unknown possibility But the times swallowed him up and turned him into a faceless man Giant network, can you tell us, who are you? ——Colin's nature

The Remnant Dream of the Old God The Gun of Ember The Endless Debt The Bloodline of the Kingdom Krafft's Anomalies Notes I give the world destruction and rebirth The Law of Werewolf Hunting Alchemy Notes The Abyss Train The Fist of Utopia Experts in subduing demons Not monsters Gunfire, punks and masters of the undead Since I have no money to go to college, I have no choice but to slay dragons Guide to medical treatment in the 19th century The sin of wearing a crown Musicians of the past Steel gunpowder and spell casters Cyber Heroes Apocalypse Forecast

I recently re-read it and sorted out the settings, because many book friends have forgotten the settings. 1. World view "The 'Ineffable One' is located at the center of the world, and concepts and power flow infinitely from him. These 'shifts' constitute the original image of the world, but when it falls in the eyes of humans, it collapses It collapsed into an incomplete silhouette and was recorded as a complex myth. " 1)Six Forms of Creation Form 1, the twins 'Yi' and 'Su' gave birth to the world in their union - what he depicts is the separation of duality and the balance of the confrontation between the two sides. It is the archetypal mirror image of all sun and moon, light and darkness, father and mother. [Example: ① In the article, the Ankh League believes in the king "Yi" on the sun (the masculine side of Gemini); ② Colin's goddess Dark Mother Bode Avis/Black Lady Gatha (the split and deteriorated silhouette of the feminine side of Gemini). [Embodiment: Elf Magic] [Embodiment: Cherish Life Magic] Form 2, The remains of the giant 'Ololon', decay and differentiate into all things - what he depicts is the eternal separation and deterioration of divinity. That is to say, the "indescribable" ones are eternally radiating outwards, while the "moving surges" are also in the process of continuous division. " [The Ineffable → Ideal Realm/Prototype Realm → Virtual Realm → Etheric Layer → Material Realm] Form Three, Sacred Geometry 'Mat', calculates all things from its own structure - what he depicts is all things The creator drew the drawing in his hand, and all the mirror images in the world were established. In addition, it also symbolizes the cycle, because the cycle is the mirror image in time. " [First appeared in "The Shepherdess Fragments", and the law of mirror images was confirmed. Form 4, 'Void Body', the world is born from nothingness for no reason. What this form depicts is still open to speculation: dreams, contradictions, unknowns, or it may have nothing to do with the above and is just artificial fiction. [Reflection: The Road to Awakening the Inner God] Form Five, the Dark Mud of Ignorance 'Sanahari', that is, the world emerges from the mud of the seabed - the Ankh people believe that He will be regarded as the creator god, which is the embodiment of human beings' ignorant heart. Because what He describes is the "triple curtain" itself that blinds mankind. Form six is ​​ouroboros ring, pale giant egg, disc and other circular shapes. The Holy King believed that the original form of these silhouettes should be simple rings, and the head and tail of the snake, the protrusions of the eggs, and the inscriptions on the disk were details given by later generations. [What this form actually depicts is the process by which the Master Builder 'Demuge' built the material world, that is, the process of spiritual decay into matter. It is also the mirror image of the physical structure taking effect. The birth of the material world is not the same as the birth of the world. 2) Three Realms [doge] ①The Conceptual Realm/Prototype Realm It is the place where the mirror image is stored. It stores the mirror image of each spell itself, which is the common "mold" and "drawing" of its countless projections in the material world. If the drawing is changed, its projection will naturally change accordingly. [The First Order has set up the "Imaginary Temple" in the ideal world/archetypal world, which can detect the movement of certain spells (such as various curses and killing spells). ②VoidWorld I can't explain this to you, after all, people Human beings do not have spiritual organs. Jpg ③MaterialWorld I can't explain this to you, after all, you have not traveled through time. Jpg There are five continents in the material world, namely: Central Continent, Eastern Continent, Western Continent, Southern Continent, and Kayu Subcontinent. Mid-Continent The most powerful continent, the existing forces include: Ankh Alliance, Sinal Kingdom (), ancient kingdoms, etc. Eastern Continent Known: Due to the collapse of the civilization circle, it has been destroyed. At the same time, the Eastern Continent is also the most likely hometown of the Night People. WestLand Known: There is the famous espionage capital Lenggang, which is also the birthplace of the Insects. SouthContinent Known: The area is not smaller than the Central Continent, with six climates. The local power Iceni Empire once destroyed the sun-blocking stone set by the Alliance in the Southern Continent, forcing the Alliance to withdraw its strength. KayuYu Subcontinent Known: The location of the Kayu Continent is almost exactly symmetrical to the Alliance mainland (Middle Continent) with respect to the center of the earth, which means that it is already the farthest civilizational circle on the planet from the Alliance. Zhelan is one of the small uncivilized countries and a newly conquered colony by the alliance. 3) Triple Curtain ① The first layer: The first layer of the "triple curtain" in the Holy King's prophecy means that human beings are limited by their own primitive perceptions and cannot directly perceive the deep existence of the world. (Note: ⅰ Anhe people claimed that the imaging method broke the first curtain; ⅱ Colin's spiritual nerve truly broke the first curtain.) ②Second level: Human beings are confused by themselves/the extremely mysterious heart of the other. ③The third level:? ? ? 2. Power system 1) The road to ascension: There are countless ways of practicing magic in the world, but they all lead to the same destination. That is to allow the spirit to continuously dive deep beyond the material layer and reach the truth of the "ineffable" in the center of the circle, so they are collectively called "The Road to Ascension". Ascension There are two differences and three ways. (The two differences are whether the "self" should expand to the external world or dive into deep consciousness.) 2) The way to sink: The direction is opposite to the road to ascension (probably). There are two ways, so sinking is more difficult. 3) Classification ❶Heaven level system (that is, based on the standards of celestial and star magic as the reference system) ① Ziyuetian & Seven Categories (Arrived at Ziyuetian, it symbolizes breaking through the first curtain) ②Red Star Sky & Category six ③ Red two-star sky & Category five ④ Female moon sky & Category four (Arrived at female moon sky, it symbolizes breaking through the second curtain) ⑤ Green star sky (Note 1) & Three categories ⑥ White star sky & Category 2 ⑦Lightless Starry Sky & Category 1 ⑧Starry Sky ⑨Primary Sky [Note 1: The Green Star Sky stage is further divided into Green Star One, Blue Star Two and Green Star Three (1→2 Downstream, 2 Fixed, 2→3 Countercurrent, 3 Floating). Note 2: & is the new rating method for the alliance. 4) Wizard Lineage About (see Chapter 11 of Volume 2 for details) 5) Known Path ① Celestial Star Magic By sensing and imagining the stars, you can connect your consciousness with a certain astral path as a stable source of spiritual essence. As the traveler's own intentions strengthen and merge with the celestial bodies, he will gradually be able to perceive more distant stars. The movement of stars in the material world is driven by the "celestial pathways" in the virtual world. The ether layer surrounding the planet is the most stable channel for spiritual elements to enter reality from the virtual world. So this type of magic has become the most versatile and reliable system. [Such as Prohibition Commissioner Linus and Ellie] ②The path of the lampkeeper in his hometown ③The elf messenger ④The path of awakening the inner god (such as Arecio, "Old City Eagle") ⑤The path of all hearts 6) Mirror Law 3. Forces in the Material Realm 1. Ankh Alliance It originated from the legions summoned by various kingdoms to resist the crisis of the Dark Ages. Forced by the crisis, these legions chose to unite. They formed the precursor of the alliance through a coup in the old Ankh Kingdom area. 2.

I was flipping through the bookshelf just now, and found "Remnant Dreams of the Old Gods", "Blood Tax", "Experts of Conquering Demons", "Bloodline of the Kingdom", and then "Pillars of Eta". I suddenly felt tightness in my chest and I couldn't breathe. Suddenly I glanced at the time in the display bar of my phone, and suddenly realized the need to adjust my schedule...

If you feel impatient or unreasonable about the plot, you can tell me in the chapter review or here. In the same way, you can tell me which part of the plot you are more excited about, and what you want to see the protagonist do/encounter, and I will make some adjustments depending on the situation.

It's been a while since I've watched it, so let's talk about my thoughts. I don't understand some of the settings. I'll read it again to add comments. First of all, the description of the characters' appearance is quite lacking. Except for Scarface, I don't have a very intuitive impression of each character. Although the characters are fully fleshed out through language and psychology, I think the appearance is still captured and grasped by readers before all other details. Of course, it is not like piling up adjectives. You can try to use them. His character's perceptions, reactions and comments can be used to describe the character's appearance or use your vivid metaphor skills as the author. I think the metaphor is quite vivid when you write the voice of the big boss (ps: I am definitely not doing it for a sense of substitution, wiping my saliva) The rest, such as plot advancement and intensification of conflicts, I think are quite natural, although some readers think it is more deliberate. I think this should be due to the author's excessive explanatory text, which is equivalent to saying all the things that should be complained about. (And it is through the character's own inner activities or language), it covers everything, and it is difficult for readers to criticize. To be honest, I am not good at finding flaws, I am just disgusted with the routines There is also the problem of not being happy enough due to too many details in the explanatory text of the fight. I don't shy away from saying that you are better than losing weight. His Lord of the Stars basically has no description of fist-to-bone combat during the fight. Many times I was inexplicable after reading it (conspiracy and heart) There are too many physical activities), I think you did a good job of leaving blank spaces and layers during the fight, and your text is quite suggestive, but it may be because the protagonist does not have a golden finger in the early stage, and does not have the means to finalize the decision, so he can only fight and grind boringly (just like fighting a BOSS). I think you can try to increase the protagonist's output methods or create some plots where you break through or understand something during the battle. This may be more igniting, and doesn't he already have a crown? You can explore the ability of the crown. I don't have any good suggestions for this. Maybe a kind of "reiatsu" with its own aura can do it. It would be cooler to think about it... Also, I want to talk about the part that made me a little impatient when I watched it. It is basically just a pure setting. The realm in the front is fine, but a formula is directly created in the back... I haven't understood it, but I didn't understand it at the time. I felt that this section was not poorly written, but that it was very tiring to watch. I thought it could be written in a science-oriented expository language, and try not to write it in the climax, which would easily dilute the emotions brewed by the previous words. I couldn't sleep for a long time after seeing it yesterday, I almost stayed up late, and then it disappeared? That's it? That's it? It's just a joke, although I'm looking forward to it, it would be better to prepare it with more preparation. For example, it would be better to write a separate chapter about the heroine's experience of being alone (I think it is very necessary. This will make readers look forward to it more than simply explaining how they will meet in the future). For example, reasonably interspersing some conflicts. Doesn't the heroine not know that the hero is back? Maybe she hates the male protagonist more now, and the male protagonist doesn't dare to express it despite being forced by many forces, so some sparks can definitely be sparked (but don't abuse him, otherwise he will send you the blade) Although the male protagonist himself had a very prominent image in the first and second volumes, he was too dull and mechanical. Now he has almost regained his memory and solved his obsession. Although he is still playing the role of a god, he will not do so in the future. It can't enrich his emotions, otherwise it won't be enough to just show the inner activities of the heroine, and it will seem like the heroine is being reciprocal. It's not my bad taste. I feel that the hero owes him too much Finally, I hope to update more. To be honest, the biggest gain from this book is that I actually found a motivation to work hard--hell, these days, I can't even read novels. I won't say anymore. I have to study hard (ps: it took more than 2 hours of beating, please give me some juice)

Fuck, I'm convinced

Brothers, are there any similarly rigorous books? The subject matter doesn't matter, it doesn't just have to be one poisonous point in each chapter

Although it's not very pretty, it's suitable. .

The writing is very good. I haven't seen a novel with good setting and writing in a long time. But when I read Chapter 51, I froze. The author seemed to have fallen into a common problem among excellent newcomers. For the sake of the novel setting and story logic, the plot developed too slowly, making the plot boring. (This is a fast-paced novel, not a narrative set in a PO setting. It must have a main conflict) My personal opinion is that the world view is not described enough, the protagonist's progress is slow, and the entire plot is not wavy, but smooth and without ups and downs. By chapter 51, there are already three small events. Too much pen and ink was wasted on it and a relatively complete world view has not been explained. Instead, the plot has not developed and the protagonist has not been substantially changed. I feel that skipping the middle thirty chapters will not affect the subsequent plot. Because there is no main contradiction, no conflict, and the people around the protagonist are all good people. Currently, the only main plot is to unlock the seal and get the memory back. There is no organization exposed in the middle. I believe there is, but there should be some suspense here. There is too little written about the extraordinary. In extraordinary novels, there is no point in writing too many plots about ordinary people, because this is the starting point and the pursuit of the current pleasure. It's still a matter of rhythm. The story background is explained in the first 20 chapters. The protagonist gets clues and sets up the plot to give the protagonist a small climax. In chapters 50-70, the protagonist becomes extraordinary and is just about to be released. A big climax and big setting can be arranged to attract readers. Instead, it follows the author's rhythm, which is in line with the fact that many excellent novels end up being discontinued midway due to performance, plot, and other reasons. The procrastination of the plot affects the reading experience too much, and also affects the author's update rhythm. We are more curious about the protagonist's abilities, the protagonist's story background, the novel's world view, and how the protagonist becomes extraordinary. That is just an appetizer. The appetizer does not need to be too long, it does not need to be too good, just appetizing. I hope the author can work hard. I can only read novels. Regarding these, you can refer to the narrative rhythm of the Lord of Mysteries.

Don't ask, just ask because it looks good.

It's quite tasty, but updates are a bit slow.

As the title says, all the books I opened before are very old. Here are some good books from the new era. It's still the same as the old rules. Everyone has his or her own preferences. The books I like don't mean they are well written, but they just look good to me. In addition, eunuchs and slow updates are not my fault Let me briefly introduce my requirements for judging whether a good book is good, that is, storytelling. A book is essentially a world built by the author, so if the author can justify himself, no settings will be considered. Therefore, only the storytelling is emphasized, including characters, plots, etc. In simple terms, as long as the story is told It is good, or the characters are well created, all poisonous points are not considered, and are not limited to the label of systematic cool novels or novice novels. Two-dimensional light novels can also have grand narratives and bitter hatred, and unsystematic indigenous realistic novels can also have daily freshness and nonsensical points Superpowers in Sky City Destiny and Ascension Night Journey Pastoral Tantra Players are super righteous I am in the hive city, and I am the leader of the secret cult My cyberpsychosis is a task prompt (very good-looking, but the update is too hip) Wasteland Drifting Deception game High in the Sky Sinners, Exile and Rusty Throne Psykers do not die by gunfire Pagan Codex Osua's War Sign Cyber One Hundred Ghosts Parade of Flowers and Dragons Tokyo Creator Weird Spokesperson I had no money to go to college and had no choice but to slay the dragon The end of the Song Dynasty Not well-dressed and traveling to the south Strange tales of the Northern Qi Dynasty I loaded the love script My girlfriend was reborn Love purification agreement Winter returns Falling in love with Cthulhu After the breakup, my ex asked me to attack her Am I really addicted to female voice actors? I was trained by the childhood maid to become a master of love After the player is reborn I loaded the love revolving lantern Love must be after the simulation Coaching in Tokyo The Long Night Will Be Bright The Green Plum Quartet in the Snow Country

Hooks, pulleys and shafts, red silk wound between cast iron wheels; pale dolls, hanging in the dressing room, dazedly floating. The door is ajar, the dim light is floating, the longing gaze is like crazy, looking at the illusive and delicate petite girl; Lydia! The count is calling, the life he gave birth to in his dream is not a machine, not a puppet, a madman's mind is looking for delusions. The collision of rippling nerve currents, the nobles put on the clothes of craftsmen, reached out to steal the blasphemous mirror image; take a medicine powder that can maintain the symptoms, make the changeable morbid wishes prosper for a long time. The charm of showing off, the empty eye sockets, the soul without a soul is dull and dull; the real publicity, the glitz is rippling, the pale goddess is reborn. The deep balance of the universe is reversed, The magnificent swing returns. The steel wire cuts the skin, cold blood leaks, the resurrected doll's eyes are confused, watching the old and rickety Earl; without calling, the slender fingertips stretch out and sink into his chest. A near-death look at the broken illusion: The antlers of the stag, the fertile and decaying earth —flowers in full bloom. 2023 2 17

I've been watching it since I was in high school, and now that I'm a sophomore, I'm watching it again and it's not finished yet.

The Seventy-Two Transformations of Earthly Fiends, The Story of the Green Dragon Building a Nest, The Road to Becoming the Leader of a Cultivation Sect, Starting from Gu Huoniao Write the novel for me.

When it was updated back then, the writing was really good. I remember it was in the top ten of the list, but it's a pity that it is no longer updated. It's probably the best Christian essay I've ever written.

The remnant dream of the old god never changes again and again!