My Powers Are Increasing

If the author can update twice at a time, my vote will not be torn, please update quickly

The writing is good and the subject matter is good. As the author, can you please check it before updating every time? Lots of typos. Many sentences are not fluent. The compositions of elementary school students are not like this. Is it okay to check more?

Seeing the clichéd and speechless setting of pretending to be a pig, I gave up. Goodbye.

Why do most people who write urban novels have an older sister or younger sister, and then they are not in person, and then they are cruel to you on the surface, and then they are kind to you on the inside, and then they engage in ambiguity. It is really disgusting. You are either a classmate or a friend. Such an ambiguous sister in name is really disgusting.

The protagonist is a rich second generation, right? But why do I feel like what I wrote is like porn? It's not a mockery, I really have this feeling, and it doesn't capture the temperament of a rich second generation at all.

The novel is very interesting, the pinnacle of life, you can read it, but don't read it, because by the time you read it, the book may have starved to death, so you know how to read it.

Well written, cheers! The investment has been pursued!

A good novel has collapsed! Logically speaking, isn't it good to write according to your own ideas? I have to listen to this and that, and make random changes.

From the front, I feel that the subject matter is very good, but the sub-personality problem is very serious. And since it is a superpower, can superpowers also force tasks? Are there rewards and punishments? Punish yourself? Since the reward is a superpower, you should also reward yourself by consuming yourself. Isn't it getting worse and worse than eating? There are still many plots that are embarrassing to watch and there is no point in watching them. To be honest, some plot settings are very interesting to watch, but it is really embarrassing after watching them. Can it be improved? I can't say what it is. Someone has said it. I like this setting very much. I beg the author to stop the plot from being so embarrassing.

I personally suggest that the author can write a story about a mount, or a story about a pet, or a companion. For example, the protagonist can draw out the contract ability, or have a production ability to make items for time travel in the world, so as to intervene in the plots of other worlds and obtain items through other worlds, such as contracts. The production method, the knowledge on the mysterious side, and the cultivation techniques, and at the same time use the method of intervening in other worlds to make connections, such as a transfer station. Either write a transfer station directly, or for example, when traveling through the world, you obtain a certain skill in a certain world, or a way to connect the world. Fa, the key point of the subject matter you write is that it should be big and the background should be big. Traveling through the world is not enough. Just like the beginning of some novels, the world where the protagonist travels is a world where the whole world is a time traveler. You can use this kind of subject matter, for example, the current plot to upgrade, how to step by step To improve and develop step by step, the earth is the transit station of the universe, and the universe is the transit station of other universes. You can write parallel universes, but when writing parallel worlds, be careful to combine them with parallel universes, because parallel universes mean that there are countless universes, and the background will be huge, but parallel worlds are one Things in the universe have limited backgrounds in disguise. For example, in Marvel, no matter how powerful the six gems are, they can only destroy half of the creatures in their own universe. There can be multiverses, but be careful not to collapse the system. Just be down-to-earth and don't write too ethereal, like something that can be wiped out in one blow. The system of the universe and the like is a bit broken. This is to control the rhythm of the plot development of the novel. Also, after reading this book, I feel that it is a cool novel, the kind where the protagonist is invincible, so be careful not to encounter any evenly matched opponents in the plot, because cool novels do not need such opponents. What I focus on is the portrayal of the life period, and when traveling through the world, be careful to write with a sense of expectation. For example, when you watch the plot of the world, people will think, what will happen if I go, what will happen if I have the ability, what will I do, it must be in line with the public's ideas, and you can also bring in some when necessary. The key point for plots that are opposite to the plots of the original world is not to be the same. There are too many cool novels nowadays. Don't write all the same plots. There must be changes. That is to do your best to change the original plot within the range of readers' expectations, but the changes should not be too big. If you are a little hungry, remember to add more details.

Did you change something? It's not as good as before. Let's go..

I just want to say how can I be included in the new book selection after being discontinued for ten or twenty days?

Originally, the female supporting role was okay and not annoying, but you changed it to a vile one, which is disgusting.

Why are you pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? It's disgusting. The routine is so old. If you are invincible, you are invincible. How can you be low-key and still be a rich second generation?

It's always xxx Ha, ha, ha, do you really not know what it means to write this thing or the number of words?

The original book is quite good. Why should I change it?

It feels like this book has become like "European God" now, and it is preparing to follow the path of Tang Ji and Chen Hongdou.

What can I say? The subject matter is good, but the writing style makes me not want to read it.