White Night Walker Heping Hotel

A book that is a bit put off by its name. The writing is delicate, the plot is well conceived, and it doesn't seem jerky. There are not many words at the moment. I hope the author can keep updating and speed up the plot a little. This is a small suggestion from me. Judging from the content of the existing chapters, the world view the author is trying to build is very exciting, but this requires a lot of subsequent efforts by the author to maintain. As an ordinary reader, this is something to look forward to! The road of writing is very difficult. Everyone who works hard deserves admiration. Come on💪!

The protagonist is actually a thief, which is really interesting. Compared with most books, I am tired of seeing the protagonist's life experience, and I have a certain sense of expectation for the fate of the protagonist. The author's writing skills are experienced and he is definitely not a newbie. The plot in the book is full of ups and downs and is suitable for readers to read slowly. The updates are a bit slow and not enough to watch, so I can only wait until they are fattened up before killing them.

The writing is very good, the writing style, character creation, including the suspense setting and rendering are all very comfortable. The characters are really full-bodied, and every move has the character's own logic, such as the protagonist's claustrophobia. I really like novels with vivid characters, but it's really hard to find them nowadays. I haven't finished reading more than thirty chapters yet, but the beginning is pretty good, starting with a theft and starting to advance the clues. The story is layered and layered to whet one's appetite. Personally, I feel that the branch plots before and after the carjacking seem to be pushed too much at the same time, which makes it a bit messy. Overall, it is still very comfortable. I look forward to the overall scene later. I will write it soon hahaha. I wish my book a good success.

When I see this VIP five author with only one new book, I feel sorry for you for a second 🥺

How many works have been 404ed?

The author's writing is very strong, the narration is smooth, and the plot twists and turns, especially the carjacking scene, the scene is strong, like watching a movie. Later, the protagonist joins the He Ping Hotel team, which reminds me of a masterpiece of web drama - Mao Liang! The protagonist is as good at stealing and unlocking as Xu Dongdong, and has a bizarre life experience! The difference is that the protagonist is still young, has a restrained personality, and still has room for growth. I wonder if the author can learn from it. I have caught up to the latest chapter and am completely into it. I am looking forward to the meeting between Zhang Wei and the protagonist. I hope the author will update more, 😁

Come on, old man, I've finished reading your excellent Prince of Yama (although I read a pirated copy: I can't read it from the starting point after all), and I'm looking forward to your new book.

The author is very good at advancing the storyline layer by layer - the cell phone locked in the safe, the mystery of his parents' accidental death, the strange owner of the restaurant, etc., And gradually outlines a story that is both reasonable and unexpected, everything is logical. Although the protagonist is set to be a thief, he is kind-hearted and upright, which makes this book full of positive energy. All in all, this book is worth reading.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

No way... It's only chapter 28 and there are already three female protagonists?

The writing style of this book is good, and it is relatively literary. The suspense set up in the plot at the beginning also entices people to read on. What secrets does a broken mobile phone locked in a safe contain? As a suspense novel, this suspense design is eye-catching, and the first step of the rhythm has been successful. It would be nice if this suspense was continued in depth. The subsequent plot seems a bit messy, including the mean aunt and director of the orphanage, the brothers being adopted, and even the waiter in the hotel... The words spent on these characters are also a bit long-winded. If they do not have much effect on the subsequent plot, it is better to write them briefly. Today's readers are very impatient.

The novel of literature is thought-provoking and touching; the wonder of literature makes people fascinated; the essence of literature is all in vain if the sentences are deleted; the truth of literature touches stone hearts with passion. The literary talent is outstanding, the rhetoric is gorgeous, the language is simple, the writing is fresh, the emotions are rich, the characters are full, the organization is clear, the structure is hierarchical, the plot is reasonable, the ups and downs, the description is vivid and fascinating, the artistic appeal is strong, the ending is the finishing touch, the meaning is profound, thought-provoking, and the meaning is long. You can selectively ignore the nonsense above. The following is my feeling after reading this book. (Contains mild spoilers, please read with caution) First of all, let's start with the protagonist's life experience. When he was a child, his parents suddenly disappeared and he became a beggar living on the street. He was accidentally taken in by an old beggar and lived together for a while. The old beggar disappeared, which may be a hidden clue. Then Li Qian entered the orphanage and began a sweet and happy life. The dean's mother is considerate and gentle, and she takes care of the orphans in the hospital from dawn to dusk every day. Under such conditions, the protagonist Li Qian, as a motivated and sensible child, naturally has to share the pressure of the dean's mother. So he began to learn skills secretly without outsiders knowing. After completing his studies, he started making money with his good friend Zhang Wei. He set a small goal to collect five thousand yuan and take his good brother out of the orphanage. This not only reminds me of my experience working as a summer job, but it took a month of hard work to earn enough money for a mobile phone. It can be seen that the author has a very deep understanding of life, which is why he can describe this plot in detail. Over time, Li Qian earned three thousand yuan with the help of his good friends, and with the last two thousand yuan left, they set their sights on He Ping Hotel. One dark and stormy night, they sneaked into the hotel quietly and easily took away the safe in the hotel. Haha, awesome... Then the main plot unfolded, using Li Qian's parents as clues to lead out a large number of people in He Ping Hotel. Qin Luji is wily and cunning, charming and charming, not afraid of anything from the great chef, he pretends to be more low-key than the food waiter, and there is also the ice-snow and smart Qin Xueer. According to the introduction in the article, these people are inextricably linked to Li Qian's parents. At this time, I have to introduce the identities of Li Qian's parents. Both of his parents are top students, with academic qualifications and abilities. I can't say that they are pillars of the country, but at least they are social elites. I don't know how I got it, but I became a member of the Hushubao Brigade. He died accidentally during a mission. Judging from the identities of Li Qian's parents, these people at He Ping Hotel are all very extraordinary. If they don't have extraordinary knowledge, at least they have excellent skills in the world. It was such a group of well-hidden veterans that two teenagers stole the safe containing important items. It took a whole night, but they finally found out who the thief was by watching the surveillance. What does this mean? Are these veterans of the martial arts bluffing? Of course not, this is obviously a trap set by them! As mentioned earlier, they are inextricably linked to Li Qian's parents. After the death of Li Qian's parents, Li Qian lived a life of a beggar. These guys didn't show up to help. Why? There is only one possibility. Li Qian's parents concealed this matter. They did not know the existence of Li Qian at all. Everyone knows that occupations that are generally difficult to explain to outsiders are often very dangerous. If you are not careful, you will not only die but also implicate your family. Therefore, it makes sense for Li Qian's parents to conceal Li Qian's existence. But how do they know Li Qian's life experience? And why was this situation set up to allow Li Qian to get in? Predict what will happen next, and listen to the explanation next time.

Regardless of the content, there is something wrong with the title of the book. It is not attractive at all. I suggest changing the title first. It is said that it is really miserable for the creator of the world to move to the starting point. Let's encourage each other!