I Just Want to Draw a Card Quietly

I feel that this book by the author is very special. Some of the writing may seem unreasonable, but if you read a chapter or two more, you will find some truths. Many people just quit when they see the system's unreasonable tasks for the protagonist or some stupid things arranged by the character, and do not see what happens later. It is a pity.

The facial makeup of the characters is a bit obvious, the foreshadowing of the series of tasks feels a bit abrupt to be honest, the overall plot is like wanting to be happy but not very happy, the introduction content of the card must be written once every time a card is drawn, and even twice if the same name card is drawn twice in ten consecutive rounds, this is a bit excessive.

Just think of it as a statement First of all, I am a new writer with no experience in long-form writing before, so the writing style, story structure, and characterization are all deficient. I have admitted it myself. If you are dissatisfied with it, you can make comments and delete the book and leave, but please don't use meaningless abuse. I will delete the ban if I see it. Second, I am not a full-time writer, and I am not even as good as many part-time writers. I can only type some words when I get home from get off work every day, so it is not easy to write 4,000 words a day. I hope everyone can understand me. Third, writing articles is unlikely to be my main income in the long run. I don't rely on writing books for a living, and I don't ask for a book to become popular. I just want to do something interesting when I get off work. Therefore, those who scold me for being a loser can be spared. No matter what my grades are, I will finish the book. Well, that's it, thank you readers who are still supporting me.

I read the book and it was very boring. If it weren't for the author, Pan An, I would have given up long ago ()

Already invested, please do not eunuch, otherwise you will be cut off🐔🐔

For people like me who read novels and like to take notes, this is still worth reading. Every time a card is drawn, the effect is written on it, etc. This is even more good news to me, because it saves trouble to remember. As for the role issue! I won't comment too much. Because there are all kinds of people and different things, I can't refute it. Because everyone has different views and different perspectives. For me, if I come across a character that I really don't like, just skip the character or skip the book. It's generally fine to read various works as long as there are no logic problems.

The introduction is not great, but the content is pretty good and interesting.

Work for the sake of the task, rather than create a character for your own life. If you have a system, you live like a dog, so why do you need a system? Why not just lick it directly?

In fact, the subject matter of the author is quite interesting, and I was attracted by the name. But so far, I actually feel that there are still some small problems with the writing (personal opinion, it may not be right and too subjective, after all, I don't know what the author thinks, and there is not a lot of content now). The plot of Li Yan was cleared up too quickly (I think), but I guess the author should have some supplements from Li Yanxian later. After all, the internship is not over yet, and the conflict with his husband will definitely continue to be written. Then there is the route of the heroine (probably for now), which is the same as Li Yan's mission, and it feels very uncomfortable😣. I guess the author is probably going to write about having her life planned by her parents and having no choice of her own, but it feels really weird to directly title it as a deformed life. There is also the issue of cards. It would actually be better to make cards like Heavy Attack permanent. Freeing up the positions of these cards allows the protagonist to draw a few more magic cards, so that the content of the book can be broader, instead of repeating these cards every time, which feels boring. And the card that asks the question is too forceful. The author must be leaving a foreshadowing, right? But it felt too tough and had the opposite effect. The author is a new writer after all. I hope he won't be discouraged by some slanderous book reviews. I hope he can keep writing. And the writing is actually pretty good and interesting. I hope the author can work hard and write better and better.

Author: You said you are spraying poison on me, spraying plot** on me, what is the use of this and that? I don't delete books and rewrite them. I will just delete you

Li Yan is right. The protagonist is a waste. He is a puppet of the system. He can do whatever he is told to do. He can quarrel with Li Yan if he is told to quarrel with her. He is a puppet of the system.

A cowardly protagonist was offended by the sight of it.

I read the comments and it was okay, but looking at the content, haha, some people like this are just like elementary school students, to be honest.

When the protagonist meets someone else with a card, the rush is already scheduled. .

Well, what should I say? Since there is such a plot, do you want to know more about the "Anti-Domestic Violence Law"? The original police officer is going to be screwed (he works in schools, hospitals and other places, and if he discovers domestic violence and fails to report it, he will be held legally responsible)

How about we build a building? I'll do it first The author has entered the palace~~🙂🙂

The second one is a heartfelt one, well written.

The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, and the content is resonant and thought-provoking. It is one of the few good books I have encountered in hundreds of years. My only regret is that I have not read a word of it.

You kid said you would come back! It's been so long! That really kept me waiting.