Winning Over the Villainess

Some suggestions for authors I remember that I wanted to write a protagonist with three distinct views, love and hate. Actually, to be honest, I think the current protagonist is very immature. First, as a time traveler, the protagonist has an intelligence advantage and knows everyone's fate. But I think the author's early time-travel novels are best based on changing the fate of the original characters. Writing needs to be innovative and refreshing. Using techniques when everyone already knows all kinds of tricks gives people a refreshing feeling. It is recommended that the author refer to "Reincarnation Paradise". In the early stage of "Reincarnation Paradise", the author also wrote about the animation world, but the in-depth exploration of the world and the changes in the fate of the characters were well grasped. There must be a reason for a popular work! Second, it seems that the protagonist was not very old before time travel? It seems that if the author wants the protagonist's personality to be more obvious, the reinforcement of hard training will be strengthened. In fact, as a refreshing novel, this is pretty good, with a fast pace and a compact storyline. But this book is obviously not fast-paced. Instead, it should be slow and then fast, but forced into a half-fast and half-slow pace, which is very uncomfortable to watch. A character with a clear distinction between love and hate must be supported by love, friendship, family and the like. Thirdly, I think the author's article can be called semi-infinite flow. In fact, I can't even remember how the protagonist traveled through time. It seems that there is very little description about this aspect. It's a pit that's not too big or too small. But I have a question, that is, after the protagonist breaks through the world of Red Eyes, how can he travel through time and space? It's obviously not possible. I don't remember anyone helping me travel through time. If there was, but I forgot, it also means that the author's description was not very memorable. I hope the author can listen carefully to my suggestions. There may be some harsh words, but as a new writer, this is inevitable, so keep up the good work! (Ps: Attached is my favorite Icarus )

Why isn't Charlotte Lingling the villainess in One Piece? 😂😂

Well, as a new book, it seems that the update is a bit slow and a bit uncomfortable. I hope you can work hard! Although there is no need to worry too much about characterization, I feel that the character of the male protagonist is not very obvious and the impression is not deep. On the contrary, the content in the introduction is more attractive (for me, when the character is known). If the introduction can be changed, I hope it can be changed (for example: In the world of red eyes, Esdeath's cold eyes that repel people thousands of miles away gradually fade away, leaving behind a blazing gaze, and the domineering leakage echoes all around. Language: "Bai Feng, you are my prey... I can't wait") (Suggestion! Just a suggestion, I think it feels good. After all, attracting attention is very important, don't criticize me, make your own choice) I think what attracts this book is the female protagonist, and the male protagonist's tactics against various villains and female protagonists. The male protagonist's character also has room for growth. Of course, everything depends on the big picture, I am just making a suggestion. Come on! ! ! 😁😁

Just looking at this cover makes me want to read more

The subject matter attracted me... But there are too few words, so I'll just keep it for now...

I'll go. Esdeath is awesome…

Will the one who receives it take his wife through time?

The author must have won! Been quarantined! It's been so long since I've updated. Is it because I'm pregnant?

Passers-by passed by and thought, "Holy shit, is Yim a woman?"

Come on, cadre stack, the content is really good.