My Wild Tribe

I just watched it, it was okay at first, but after Chapter 7, it became a suicide attempt. I don't know how high the sky is, but I personally think it's very, very poisonous.

The writing is not rigorous enough. When the status of the human race is so low and life is not guaranteed, how do the protagonist and the tribe understand those words? ? ? You must understand that there is a difference between language and writing. You can speak it but you may not necessarily be able to read or write it. Author, if you don't go into details, at least introduce it. It's so inexplicable that everyone knows it. It's very funny.

After the blood transfusion, the blood vessels were opened, but why did it suddenly turn into a blood vessel, a fighting body, and nirvana? There is also no comparison between the realm of the protagonist and the enemy, and there is no comparison between the realm of his tribe and the enemy. Anyway, I am awesome here, and more people does not mean more strong people.

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After reading Chapter 9, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. Even though he knew it was a forbidden area, he still went in just to find a weapon. It feels like no normal person would go in.

😁😁The first one!

This book feels a bit like "Dragon Ball" 🥵🥵🥵 At the beginning, the stage was a wild world with the highest god. Then we added an upper bound and several small worlds, the highest "heaven". Later it became the universe, and the "heaven" of the wild world became a projection of the "heaven" of the universe. In this case, I might have guessed the background and realm behind it.        ，""，，， There is another infinite universe that becomes a dimension, and the strongest person becomes the master of the dimension.        ，，， Infinite matryoshka dolls.

Who did this author offend? A lot of trolls came to complain.

I just discovered this book today, and after reading the free chapter, I felt a lump in my chest. Here are some personal opinions. In Chapter 28, the protagonist already has the strength of ten thousand jun (I personally think that the amount of strength is the weight of things that can be lifted). What is the concept of ten thousand jun? One jun is equal to thirty kilograms, and ten thousand jun is equal to 150 tons, which is more than two thousand times the strength of ordinary people. With such great strength, holding a twenty-pound stone spear would feel heavy. After all, for the protagonist, holding something weighing twenty kilograms should only be equivalent to an ordinary person holding something weighing five grams. Completely unable to justify it.

When they destroyed games, I didn't speak because I don't play games; When they destroyed anime, I didn't speak because I rarely watched them; When they destroyed movies and TV shows, I didn't speak because I rarely watch TV series; When they destroyed novels, I started to protest, but no one spoke for me anymore.

I thought it was about leading everyone to become stronger together, and most of the farming stories were about the adventures of the protagonist. It was so funny.

This book is so poisonous that I can't bear it after reading Chapter 30

Some places are really poisonous First, a person from another race will shout "ant" whenever he sees the protagonist. Three or five times is enough. It happens three or five times in each chapter. Really, it's visual fatigue Second, the protagonist is a modern person who has traveled through the past. His IQ is about the same as that of primitive people. He doesn't think about anything or anything. Looking at the consequences of his own actions, it seems that the author is very ignorant. For example, the Bluestone Tribe clearly knew that the human race was at a disadvantage, but they did not kill all the people of the Xuanniao Tribe. They did not deal with the funeral affairs and left directly. Everyone knew that they would be retaliated. Then, the result was that the Bluestone Tribe was cool Thirdly, the villain is really brainless. For example, villain number one and number two are about the same strength. Villain number one was beaten to death by the protagonist three or five times. Villain number two watched from the side and still yelled, provoked, and shouted ants. Use your brains when writing a book Fourthly, the protagonist really has no brains. He keeps using his fists during fights. You are a modern person, not an ape. Man, you also have your innate stone sword. You don't use it every time, even if you are hit until you vomit blood, you don't use it. You will always block other people's attacks with your hands and arms. You are really an ape-man Fifth, it is obvious that the human race is enslaved, and there will be some internal fighting. I won't say more about the Xuanniao tribe Finally, you can't use your brain when reading, you can't use it at all.

As soon as I read the introduction, I knew it was not a book from Qidian. Qidian doesn't have such a second-rate introduction anymore. Looking at the catalogue, it starts charging for 100,000 words, so it's not Qidian. Even the platinum ones from Qidian are rarely as popular as this.

When I saw the introduction, I knew it was a lj book. Kill one of me and destroy your entire clan. . . Not that it's wrong, but if you do this, there will only be killing and no order! There will be no civilization! In addition, what if your tribe inexplicably killed hundreds of people from another race (I don't know what quantifier to use), and then that race killed your tribe, and then you wiped out the entire tribe? This is not the road to survival, this is the road to death. No matter how strong you are, there will be races against you, and even the Bai race will attack you! ! !

The protagonist always appears to be of a low level, and then abuses those of a higher level. The villain is shocked, shocked, and very shocked. This routine is repeated over and over again. I didn't farm in the primitive wilderness, but kept using my low level to show off. It's amazing.

Let's not talk about the weakness of the human race in the wilderness. If the protagonist wanders around without even a member of the clan, isn't he afraid that the clan will be wiped out when he comes back? And even if the human race is weak, those alien races will be able to speak out their contempt if they have nothing to do. For example, if I saw an ant, I would press him to death. When I pressed him to death, I would tell him, "You humble ant, it will be your honor for me to press you to death." Moreover, the human race is inherently weak, so you go out to wander around when you have nothing to do, and the one you kill is a foreign genius. Even if you kill him, you don't clean up the land. You are afraid that the alien race will not find out that it was the weak human race that killed him. Just like now, if there are a few mad dogs in the city and kill a person, I estimate that a dog hunting team will be organized in the city immediately, and not even a stray dog ​​will be spared.

No matter in terms of physique, skills, weapons, or combat experience, he is inferior to the alien race in all aspects. He is so low in rank and has crossed such a large realm to kill enemies; tens of thousands of wolves are scared away by the protagonist; the mount wanders around without knowing where it is; the tribe is just a page that occasionally comes to mind; a wolf's skills can be practiced by a human, and the meridians are exactly the same; there are so many elixirs in the Wolf Valley, and there is a spiritual spring at home, and the wild wolf is injured and healed by cannibalism in the protagonist's tribe; too many, too many

According to your introduction, are all the hundreds of races enemies of the human race? If that were true, the human race would have been wiped out long ago. And if you kill one of me, I will kill your entire family? Author, do you feel no problem at all?

It's so poisonous. The protagonist seems to have no brains.

This book has no sense of hierarchy. The protagonist is flying high, and civilization is developing as fast as a rocket. Today, he is still holding stone tools and bone sticks, but in the blink of an eye, he has stepped into bronze. I am also curious about how the protagonist understands the alien skills? Is it about human race or primitive society at the beginning, but then the protagonist turns out to be a language expert, and all races speak the same language?

After reading the introduction, I guessed it was rubbish. I couldn't help but take a look, and it turned out to be rubbish.

The main character, the Virgin. Although the leader of the Bluestone Tribe saved him, the protagonist also saved the leader's life. The favor has been paid off, but what I can't figure out is why the protagonist is so kind to Qing Yi and gives her all the good things.

I just can't help but want to complain, it's really too poisonous! ! What I can't stand the most is the invincible cheat, where anyone can be the protagonist!

You can still watch it. But since the protagonist met Medusa, he started to take the secondary route. It is obviously a world where people eat people, and he says some frivolous and brainless words inexplicably. I don't know if the author wants to set up a female protagonist, or to ease the atmosphere. The protagonist's personality has changed too much. In the future, I have to do everything with Medusa, fighting and killing people, which feels a bit like a dog-eat-dog. It's a bit poisonous, and there is no clear explanation of the realm, especially the main character's body, soul, and cultivation are all in a mess. It's both a rule and a law, hey. Other than these two, it feels okay.

If a book is to be read, the reader must have a sense of immersion, that is, the reader should be involved as the protagonist. Since the eighth chapter, I have no sense of immersion. Instead, I want the protagonist to die. People in the tribe have said that the forbidden area cannot be entered. The author is still writing the protagonist and is curious. He also said that modern people are very curious. I'm sorry if I were to time travel. I know that I will become stronger very quickly after all. After all, I have a golden hand. It means that the monkey will not take risks at all. At least he has to become stronger. The monkey's corresponding strength will not take risks. If he wants to die or die, it is like being obsessed. The tribesmen persuade the protagonist not to go and return the moral kidnapping. If you are scared, just wait here. Haha, I know that the author wants to find powerful weapons for the protagonist and the tribe to deal with the gods, but the writing is too deliberate. The author looks like a novice or has no talent for writing novels.

In fact, it's okay. It's much better than most novels. At least it's not embarrassing. Some novels made me suffer from embarrassment and I couldn't speak fluently. It felt like I was the patriarch of the clan.

The writing is not bad at all. Why are so many people criticizing it? I am speechless.

This book is still very good. Some people say that there is a big gap in strength between the protagonist and his subordinates. But if you think about it, doesn't the leader have to lead the way? In the later stage, the protagonist's subordinates will gradually follow. What can I say? This is a cool article. Just read it and feel comfortable. Don't be too harsh. A novel has a world and a concept, so there is no way it is perfect. If you look at the reviews of those platinum masters, some people will say they are "junk". Different people see different styles and support different authors. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. You won't lose anything anyway, so why bother. Support the author

I can't stand it anymore, rubbish