This Fantasy World

Belated test of poison, hello, I'm finally here. The story is pretty good. It actually comes together as one body and three souls. It's just about clarifying one's identity. The writing is a bit messy, but it's still long and long. In addition, the rhythm of the story did not keep up with the development of the plot, the plot was not attractive enough, and it did not show the huge world view, making the pattern seem much weaker. Looking forward to the development of the plot in the future, please do your best (ง •̀_•́)ง

Three souls in one body. Although one of the souls has completely disappeared, the protagonist needs to be improved. It gives me the energy of a passionate young man. I am worried that the protagonist will cause trouble if this continues, and the narrative is a bit messy. The development is smooth. The description of the fighting is not delicate enough. This aspect needs to be strengthened. Moreover, the article seems to be missing something. Come on, author, don't forget the original intention, continue to keep it up, and remember to reflect.

The subject matter is quite novel. Come on, keep an eye on you.

Come on, already invested! Hurry up and update 3,000 a day!

This book is bound to be popular, so book it in advance and pick it up!

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

Hey, let me see the good guys. Come on💪💪