Alchemist of Doom

This style of writing is really strange. . . . There is also a plot. At the beginning, there is an old man, a bunch of enemies for no reason, and a younger sister. The plot is really real. . . .

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Three settings whose presence is getting weaker and weaker. 1) The Ball of Doom seems to be becoming more and more useless. . . 2) The protagonist can see ghosts, but except for the chattering ghost, there are no more. 3) Guwu has almost disappeared.

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Personally, I like this style of writing very much. It's to my liking. Keep up the good work, author.

Oops, this golem was so cute in Chapter 108 (manual funny)

A good book, at least it is very good until I see it on the shelves here. I don't know why there are not many monthly tickets and recommended tickets. I have already ordered all the monthly tickets. The author works hard.

The character design in the opening is really average. The instructor's two questions are smooth and refers to modern industry. You see, Tutankhamen's golden mask in Egypt also looks like modern industry. The translation of those words means that it is no problem. The idiot instructor also asked you if I can see the soul. I also asked you if archeology is cursed. This archeology setting is a bit poisonous. It is better that the protagonist himself is a mysticologist or enthusiast.

This is not a fantasy. It is actually an apocalyptic fantasy. Live a humble life, live a difficult life. Live just to struggle.

Let's play a story solitaire game. In an unknown forest, the sound of water flow kept ringing. The dense leaves allowed a small amount of sunlight to illuminate the ground. In the darkness, a young man with tattered clothes and stubble on his face could be vaguely seen sitting quietly by the waterfall. The rolling water was as restless as his irritable heart. This young man has only been in this forest for less than a day, but this day is like a year to him. A few hours ago, he was browsing the website on his mobile phone in the comfort of his home, studying various *** and drawing inspiration from them. Inspiration is crucial to his career. It is with this passion that he has become a famous author known to everyone in the online novel industry at the age of less than 30, with the pen name Bai Yixian. Readers of his works mentioned that he gave him a domineering nickname, Eunuch Dawanzi. Readers who often read novels know that the great writers in the author world have countless famous works. They cannot be said to be golden classics, but the quality is absolutely guaranteed. He, Bai Yixian, although he cannot be called a great god, his works are guaranteed... Guaranteed to be unfinished or eunuchs. As the author Bai Yixian, he encountered the inevitable beginning in every popular fantasy novel. When he traveled to a different world, he just looked at a flash picture sent by a group of friends in the QQ group. As a result,

Aliens are the greatest threat to human society. Alchemists, do you have any news about the alien race? Alien name:??? Form:??? Ability:??? Social structure:???

Well written, I hope you will continue to work hard

Some authors write a messy protagonist for the first time. The characters in this book are great so far. The system is also very complete. Only the naming ability is a little bit good. . . When I watched it, I thought of Naruto😜😜😜😜 Come on, author↖(^ω^)↗

Big brother, my dear big brother, how much reward can I give for more updates? After seeing this chapter, I felt so happy and ended here. . . .

Well, if someone commented on the book list, I'll give it a look I've read about ten chapters, and the plot and characters are pretty good.        ，，，，，，， I have tried writing novels before, but these problems can only be solved by writing slowly and practicing to find the feeling. Some detailed problems are that some story backgrounds are not clearly explained at the beginning, and the protagonist's character is not fixed, so some plot developments will feel very inexplicable, making readers lose their sense of involvement. Then these more abrupt changes may become some annoying readers or pure trolls. If this author sees it, he can pay attention to it, and the plot changes can be slightly foreshadowed, so as not to write it down as a running account. As for the punctuation issues in other book friends' comments, I don't care too much, I don't think it's a problem.        ，，，，，

It's a bit depressing, and I feel like the human race is too difficult.

Discuss the current settings of travel. Zhou You is the protagonist of this book. A protagonist always has a purpose and setting. 1) The big goal is to return to the world where you came from. Small goal is survival. 2) How to achieve (1)? Power requires strength. Zhou You's initial setting and behavior were to ensure his survival and strength by cheating. (Black Mist) But there is a bottom line, not to harm the civilians he sees and to protect his family. (When Songjiacun and District 9 are attacked) 3) In the current novel world, the protagonist needs three things besides Goldfinger. 1) Power. Traveling around the Alchemy Association, the beginning is the nature of attachment. We see the struggle and scramble at the bottom. District 9 fell, and we saw him seize power. This kind of plot can be found in any work. The difference is the process. In the end, it is better to be a member of an organization or to become a leader. And what is the organization's policy and what is the difference from hostile forces. 2) Sub-career. Zhou You is a combat alchemist. Alchemist has become a sub-profession. It is okay to have no sub-profession in the whole game, but there will be less opportunities to show off and introduce bosses and enemies. (There are no sub-professional works, I only know the works of Feng Qiyue...) 3) Companion or female companion. Companions are subordinates and like-minded partners. Their ideas and behaviors allow Zhou You to solve conflicts and problems. At the same time, their existence shows Zhou You's advantages. It's hard to say about female companions. It depends on the author's writing style. If the writing is good and the finishing touch, the writing is not good. . . Refer to {"NickName":"NorthX","UserId":310962139}

If you write tens of millions of words, the first priority is to gain followers. If you don't collect it, the author will burst into tears.

Not interesting! The battle of wits is written so that the protagonist is just showing off all by himself! There is nothing attractive about the world view! After reading dozens of chapters and hooking up with the alchemist, where is the bad luck? Except for a ball! It is recommended to change the name! How about "The cautious survival of a humble alchemist apprentice in another world"? !

Looking at the back, I found that the alchemist is really nb! By the way, author, you won't write about Zhou You punching the earth and blowing it up in the future, right? Only now do I realize that Zhou You has just touched the threshold of the alchemy world...

I'm sorry, I put it on the shelves later than you, but why do I have hundreds of thousands more words than you?

I (the reader) have always been interested in abilities. Guess what bloodline abilities will appear next?

Very well written, very exciting, waiting for updates

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Bloodline is outdated. The future is alchemy formation (including but not limited to human body alchemy and formation). Discuss what will happen next.