League of Legends: The Overpowered ADC

Writing a typical e-sports thriller with a build-up of tension and then resorting to a climax? A typical school bragging trope? That's an outdated formula from years ago. This part should be ending soon. An e-sports story is an e-sports story; stop planting so many plot holes... It's still in the early stages. If you don't keep the readers entertained, you'll see what happens after it's published.

League of Legends esports is a game that relies heavily on youth and skill level. The reason players constantly play ranked games and scrims is to familiarize themselves with the atmosphere and rhythm of competitive matches. Competitive play and ranked play are two different games. A professional player who retires for a year is basically finished; they can't possibly return to the scene.

Doesn't the main character attend classes? Oh, is this an e-sports academy? To be honest, becoming famous through gaming simply means joining a team, competing, and achieving results. Achieving results through live streaming matches—with the protagonist's abilities, is it really that difficult to get into the LPL?

Can you even use scripts to play a match?

The coach's threat to blacklist the protagonist in the first few chapters cracked me up. Even Wang Sicong wouldn't dare say he could blacklist a powerful player, let alone a trash team from a secondary league. If the protagonist were truly that amazing, he could easily get a spot on any LPL team during a tryout.

That was a good start! But why the sudden return to school? That's a disaster! Everyone else goes from school to career, you're going from career back to school! That's pretty unconventional!

I was just wondering why no one was reading a book that started off well... But I couldn't continue after chapter 30. I mean, since the protagonist has the ability to play in the LPL, then why don't you go and work hard to play in the LPL? You've written a hundred chapters of nonsense, just hanging out with the Gold and Silver players, and it's all about slapping people in the face...

Why do these authors who write about alliances like to write about school life? Haven't they read other novels? Don't they know how stupid it is to write about school life?

The beginning was good, but then it went back to school. Is it to hone the protagonist's skills and mentality before entering professional competition? I don't think it's necessary to abandon the book after seeing him enter school. Another important point is, don't create so many infuriating enemies and conflicts in the novel. These days, people read novels for enjoyment, not to get angry.

This kind of pretentious writing is outdated; I reckon this book will be abandoned.