Fishing for a Master of Arts and Entertainment
钓出一个文娱大师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Showbiz Romance
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
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This book has a lot of problems. That's about the protagonist's character design. These days, omnipotent protagonists are annoying and unreadable, especially in urban novels. In entertainment novels, it's usually enough for the protagonist to have two or three abilities.
Your urban fantasy novel is so over-the-top and awkwardly pretentious, and you don't even bother to back down. Pretending to be cool and then getting slapped down go hand in hand. When someone questions you, you either ignore them, or you plagiarize poems to show off, and then you don't even bother to refute them or act like nothing happened? Do you have any respect for those timeless masterpieces you casually use?
Holy crap, someone was jumping off a building, and the protagonist went over and played a song on his guitar and stopped jumping. How dare they write something this toxic? The worst part is that the person was a foreigner, and you wrote that he couldn't understand Chinese, yet he was moved by a guitar piece alone. He died from the poison!
Author, I'm a bit confused about the character you've created for the protagonist. Later on, it feels very similar to the character of CEO Pei from the other author's novel. However, CEO Pei only makes money when he's losing it, while your protagonist is clearly a fool who has money but refuses to make it.
The system needs popularity, so it's an entertainment novel. And the protagonist? You're telling me to keep a low profile? Afraid of the system being discovered? Who the hell could possibly discover you have a system? I'm speechless. Do you even respect the quatrains you plagiarized? And you're even cultivating your own trolls to attack you? That's toxic! It's worse than swallowing a fly.
Successful authors are all unique, but those who fail are all alike. I'll just mention two points: first, they criticize themselves; second, the system relies on popularity, yet they try to be low-key. Most importantly, their characters lack depth and their personalities are contradictory.
If you're going to write an entertainment story, just write an entertainment story. Why bring up martial arts and traditional Chinese martial arts out of nowhere? Will the system give me another mission later to help a girl challenge other martial arts schools and participate in matches? This is too much of a mixed bag. I'm outta here!
To be honest, I hate seeing scenes like "monthly ticket wars" in online novels the most. Without a doubt. 🙂
It's too messy, and it's done across different departments, so it looks too superficial and sluggish.
Too many flaws, the writing style is okay, but the disjointed and haphazard writing style is really unappealing. When I saw that woman take the fish scales away, I left too; I couldn't stay until I saw the published content.