Fishing for a Master of Arts and Entertainment

There are huge problems with this book. That is the setting of the protagonist. Now omnipotent protagonists can be off-putting. Can't stand it. Especially urban novels. When writing entertainment novels, it's enough for the protagonist to have two or three abilities. Many authors write protagonists who wish they could do anything and be the best at cooking. The martial arts are the best, and the medical skills are the best. Or a poet. The author knows everything, and there is nothing the protagonist cannot do. However, writing this way makes people extremely disgusting. I can't stand it anymore. I saw the author writing about the main character copying books and doing martial arts. Can do music. I can make animations and games. I can only say, brother, what you write about is a person, not a god. If you paste these abilities on the protagonist, it will be like an ugly toy with holes everywhere.

You're an urban cool guy, just pretend to be stiff and awkward, you still don't know how to slap someone in the face. Pretending and being slapped in the face are all the same. When someone questions you, you either ignore them or copy the poems and pretend to compare. After copying, you still don't respond and pretend that nothing happened? Are you worthy of those eternal quatrains that you use casually?

Damn it, someone jumped off a building and the protagonist used to play a song on the guitar and stopped dancing. How dare you write something so vicious? The key is that he is a foreigner and you can't understand Chinese, so you moved him just by the guitar music. Death from poison

Author, I'm a little confused about the character you set for the protagonist. After seeing it later, I feel that it is very similar to the character of Mr. Pei from the house next door, but Pei always makes money in order to lose money. Your protagonist is obviously a fool who has money but does not make it. It always feels like the money is being pushed out for the protagonist's so-called low profile, but the author's writing style is so round and awkward that I always feel suffocated while reading it. In my opinion, there is no conflict between being low-key and making money. According to the author's plan, the protagonist's company has many industries, and they are industries that require money. Don't think that servers in the Internet industry are not valuable. On the contrary, servers consume the most money. When there are tens of millions of people online on the Internet, it is estimated that the server investment may require 100 million. The protagonist is always unwilling to make money. Where can the money come from to support so many high-cost projects? Also, there is really no conflict between making money and keeping a low profile. Since you are afraid that others will find out that the company belongs to the protagonist, you can recommend an agent. For example, if the agent Tencent launches as a front is Xiao Ma, then the protagonist is the black hand behind the scenes. In this way, you can make money and keep a low profile.

The system needs popular, entertainment novels. As for the protagonist, you told me to keep a low profile? Are you still afraid that the existence of the system will be discovered? Who can discover that you have a system? I'm really impressed. Are you worthy of the quatrains you copied? It's too poisonous for them to train trolls to spray themselves. It's more frustrating than eating a fly. They don't even dare to die when someone plagiarizes them. They are also afraid that the other person is a slightly famous blogger. It's extremely poisonous. When writing a novel, it is best to understand what readers like and how to enjoy reading it. If it is just for self-pleasure, then treat it as if I have said nothing.

Successful authors are all kinds of weird, and the authors who fail are exactly the same. I will mention two points. First, you are cheating on yourself. Second, the system relies on popularity and you actually want to keep a low profile. The most important thing is that the character's personality is not established and the image is contradictory.

If you write entertainment articles, just write entertainment articles. Just make fun of it. What's the point of Chinese martial arts? Will the system give me another task later on to help girls compete in gymnastics and competitions? It's too complicated, it slipped away

To be honest, I hate seeing plots about monthly ticket battles in online articles. There is no one 🙂

It was too messy and was done across different lines, so it seemed too clumsy and procrastinating.

There are too many poisonous points, but the writing style is not bad, but the way of writing with a hammer here and a stick here and there is really not pleasing to the eye. When I saw the woman taking away the fish scales, I left too. I couldn't hold on to the content on the shelves.