Hundreds of Years of Immortality

I originally read it as a novice novel, but I thought I'd give it up after I finished it. I didn't expect it to have so many poisonous points, and I really couldn't handle the few chapters it put on the shelves. Just a rant. 1. The protagonist has a serious double standard. He is weak at home but can bully others and pretend to be aloof. 2. It was said that Yan Xue was to be his apprentice, and he was inexplicably forced to marry her as his wife. However, later in the story, Yan Xue was clearly treated as a maid, and there was no emotional basis at all. 3. The holy mother bitch is also childish. She wants to help everyone she sees, but the way she helps is childish and ridiculous. 4. Repeatedly emphasize the setting of the Immortal Emperor in the previous life. The problem is that the way and attitude of dealing with others is the same as that of a mentally disturbed child. I suggest the author to learn the writing techniques of the rise of literary giants in the Republic of China. It is refreshing, private, and highly intelligent.

The protagonist, a dignified immortal emperor, was reincarnated and created hundreds of millions of assets for his family through his own efforts. As a result, he turned into a fairy and a flower boy. He was laughed at everywhere, but he didn't care at all. Author, have you ever thought about how readers feel after stepping into the role of the protagonist?

I also don't like to fight and kill at every turn. There are too many anecdotes in this book. The protagonist's personality is shaped like a childish middle school boy. The author's subjective will has always influenced the protagonist. Although he is afraid of 404, the author always makes the protagonist linger on the edge of 404. He said that he was afraid of the way of heaven, but no one dared to save him (revolutionary martyrs, etc.), He was afraid of the way of heaven, even the famous ones did not dare to show mercy (Lao She, etc.), He was afraid of the way of heaven, but I wanted to save him by some strange means (Xu Zhimo), good guy, I am a direct good guy, not to mention that the protagonist was an immortal emperor in his previous life, The long road of life is as far as one can see. With this will and the completely humiliated Immortal Emperor's strong character, he comes up with every idea. The principle jumps repeatedly with the author's ideas. The character creation is extremely failed. The supporting characters are ten million times better than the protagonist. After reading about a hundred chapters, I have There are good points and bad points. I have seen the revolutionary martyrs written by the author, the social layout and the relationship between the characters. They are all very good. Although most of them are just watery, they are still worthy of recognition. The only thing that makes people complain is the protagonist. The character creation is really a failure. He is a piece of trash. You don't want to be famous but you want your family to be famous. Two people in the family won the Luo Prize and one is a great poet. He is just a loser. Isn't this just disguised fame? While she didn't care about worldly opinions, she was forced to marry her apprentice (according to the comments, she didn't regard her apprentice as his wife and still worked as a maid). Can the character not jump around like this repeatedly? Is this what the author understands as the Immortal Emperor who has lived for ten million years? The protagonist's sister has a better character than him 😅

You always have to explain that the protagonist cannot do this or that. Although there are 404 factors, it is too verbose for you to always explain it in the tone of the protagonist. I won't talk about the early stage accounts. You said that you wanted to show the true situation of that era, and there was no portrayal of the underlying characters. The character description is limited to beauties. The more I am afraid of being sensitive, the more I write about big shots, haha I feel nothing but aggrieved when watching the whole movie. Baidu copied and pasted a lot of information to enrich the pale writing. It is so boring. The protagonist is just a coward, a turtle, and I vomited.

After watching it for so long, I have several questions. First: The production and discovery of penicillin medicine was discovered by the protagonist. The protagonist's mother was not involved, so does she know its principle? Will she not be suspected by others? Why is everything done by the protagonist? Why hasn't the protagonist's mother done anything for the protagonist? Saying that the protagonist should be low-key doesn't mean being low-key. Second: Let's talk about the protagonist's sister. The protagonist has done so much for her, but she always thought that the protagonist was an average person with no talent or ability. Mortals, the maid next to the protagonist is so powerful. The Qin family does not doubt the protagonist at all, and the protagonist's sister is like a vampire now. She only knows her own honor but has never been grateful to the protagonist for what she has done. The protagonist has done so much for her, and she is like a stone. Third: The protagonist has accepted such a powerful apprentice, but no one has doubted the protagonist's ability. The Qin family has never doubted it, as if they don't know how it is possible. How could we not have discovered anything after being together for so long?

Now that the Immortal Emperor has traversed the endless multiverse, the Golden Immortal Daluo can be free in endless time and space. This refers to the unity of the past, present and future. Daluo is everywhere. Even if it dies, those who praise my true name can reunite with the law of Tao and Fruit. So you cannot be called the Immortal Emperor reborn. I can only say that you are an ordinary monk with some achievements in your previous life. Too high would be inappropriate to write now. The level of Immortal Emperor already represents the Tao and Dharma of all heavens and worlds. Time and space cannot be added to my body. If you are still affected by spiritual energy, you cannot be called an immortal. According to what most cultivators say, you should have been a great monk who cultivated the Yuan Shen in your previous life. Even if the physical body does not exist, you can still rely on the Yuan Shen to connect heaven and earth. The Immortal Emperor has passed and passed, too high.

It's not bad. The plain and mysterious feeling is very comfortable to read, but it's a bit confusing, and it's not on the shelves yet, so I can't expect much from you.

Does this book require eunuchs? The problem arises when I write Chapter 289! Wouldn't there be no worries if there were no children? Anyway, I don't think it's right! Could it be that parents' desire to have a grandchild cannot become an obsession! I feel that when writing novels about cultivating immortals, you really need to read Laozi's Tao Te Ching! Understand Lao Tzu's philosophy of cultivating Taoism! Buddhism and Taoism talk about cause and effect, but doesn't cultivating Taoism talk about cause and effect?

The combination of history and immortality is very popular, and there is a wave of spiritual energy recovery at the end. I really like it if history could be pushed forward three hundred years. Daming will be saved

I was a little convinced by this writing style. After reading it The protagonist and the characters in it are quite good, but they open their mouths a lot and the whole book flows smoothly After they finished speaking, my brain was not smooth 😥😥😥😥😥😥😥

Is the author currently living abroad? I would like to know more.

Now I have to wait for updates every day, which is too painful 😆

There has been a book shortage for a long time, and it is rare to encounter a good book 👍

This aunt is a bit annoying, and I feel a bit strange. Qin Di has done so many things, no matter how well he hides it, there are no clues. With so many people in the Qin family, doesn't anyone in the Qin family feel that something is wrong?

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The author doesn't want to be a novice, he is very experienced in plot handling and writing skills

My dear, the first part of your writing is okay, but the ink becomes more and more blurred as you go to the back. A high-quality book does not need to be too long, just exciting and novel.

It looks okay, tepid, a bit like keeping a running account, but it doesn't affect the interest of reading. It's quite comfortable to watch, and you don't have to be too crazy and cool, which makes you feel tired⊙⊙.

It's finally on the shelves, and I hope you'll give it a monthly pass.

Maintain the standard, great writers cannot escape

Such a great family, such a great contribution, so much money donated, so many seniors investing back then, anyone can challenge them now...

After reading your introduction, I am really speechless. Can the author stop forcibly lowering the IQ of an Immortal Emperor? Why would an Immortal Emperor care about the lives of 40 million compatriots? Is this a fake? They are not creatures of the same level at all. Just like a poor person who has climbed to the pinnacle of power and wealth through struggle, he will foolishly donate all his property to help the poor. This is simply unrealistic, and the original logic collapsed.

It was fine in the early stage, but a large amount of private goods began to be included in the middle and later stages. The book compares 404 to the way of heaven. It is written around the protagonist, the Immortal Emperor, who is reborn and is afraid of the way of heaven and dare not change history. In fact, it succeeded in getting his mother and sister to win four and three Nobel Prizes in medicine respectively. He also purchased a large amount of foreign grain to fund the domestic market. In the early stage, he funded a large number of celebrities and generals, and plagiarized later literature, music, novels, movies and TV shows. Waiting for good results to make money, stock trading, real estate speculation, factory building, and even an investment institution abroad specializes in acquiring and investing in large companies in the future. Occasionally, they will turn into thieves and steal tens of millions or hundreds of millions. However, the more you read, the more you will find that the protagonist has been changing history and has turned the world upside down. In the end, history is still the same, without the butterfly effect.

Be wary of those who have ulterior motives in the Republic of China. The pictures of beautiful women posted by the author are not ordinary people, and the lives of ordinary people in the real Republic of China were worse than those during the Manchu rule. I hope book friends will know this.

After reading a few chapters, it seems that the identity of this Immortal Emperor is just a golden finger. I advise future readers to turn off the chapter comments and read. Some people said in the chapter reviews that this poison or that poison really affects the mood of reading.

To be honest, while saying that history cannot be changed, various Western medicines were rushed out many years in advance and money was given to various characters. While not paying attention to the various characters, a heavenly guardian appears, unable to kill people. He jumps repeatedly between realism and immortality, claiming to be a bystander, and is afraid that it will burst.

Let me talk about my feelings after reading it. Overall, it's pretty good. But nowadays, people who write novels about cultivating immortals are influenced by the prehistoric times and the like, so that major events are irreversible and so on 😰. But what is cultivating immortality? Fighting against the sky is endless fun; going against the sky and changing one's destiny is the definition of cultivating immortality. Follow the way of heaven and your destiny cannot be changed. That is what God and Allah do.

~The Immortal Emperor blushed, and the veins on his forehead popped out, and argued, "Registering a patent cannot be considered stealing... Registering... Can the Immortal Emperor's affairs be considered stealing?" Followed by difficult words, such as "Aspirin is destined to me", "The Nobel Prize is awarded to the virtuous", etc., Which caused everyone to burst into laughter, and the book club circle was filled with a happy atmosphere~

You should stay in China after the founding of the People's Republic of China. After all, the plot is very novel and few people have written it. Hong Kong is too impetuous. Coupled with the farce in the past two years, Hong Kong has become outdated in the minds of readers.

I hope that the mythical beast will ignore you, the river crab will slip past you, and its eyes will not be able to catch you. To be honest, there are too few articles about the Republic of China. This one looks pretty good. The author must be careful!