Everyone Awakens a Superpower

… How can I put it, I haven't read the rest yet, but the first few dozen chapters are indeed the childish worldview and psychological activities of middle school, which are the same as the rebellious phase of my middle school disease.

I've read half of it, and I think it's okay. I've read more novels than yours before. Basically, the protagonist saves a city with an awesome armor that he has cultivated through life and death (the kind where he is already invincible, but he is so awesome with his talent) and then hands over the armor and lives in a foreign land like a brainless person. At least your logic is still pretty fluent 😂

I don't really like the protagonist described by the author. But there is nothing wrong with what he describes. He has never been out of school, has not been severely beaten by society, and has not experienced many difficulties. Especially since he has experienced so many things at that age, it is easy to forget. This gives me the feeling that I don't know what to do and I don't have much ability, but I want to be strong and too fanciful. Not understanding parents' difficulties. No self-knowledge. I didn't have the ability but I gave the promise. But these are relatively common in reality. I have met such people as classmates when I was studying. This novel is about the character of the main character, which I don't really like. But there is nothing wrong with the description.

Objective understanding A twisted society, the protagonist is incompetent and loves to show off. The beginning of the story about a girl who has no background and loves to make promises, and falls in love with a big family is really unpleasant. (Just like Cinderella falling in love with Prince Charming) The first few dozen chapters were very depressing. (Why do you say it is depressing? There is no laughter, it makes people lose motivation to continue watching, and there is a feeling full of negative emotions) Is your IQ low? (I think the author wants to add the mentality of a weak person to the middle school, a highly hierarchical country, and the psychological factors of inferiority and delusion caused by poor families) (Of course, it is also possible that the author cannot write a character that makes the protagonist feel normal, and then follows the foreshadowing at the beginning and is too lazy to change it, so he writes it all the way)

The inorganic combination of the nonsensical beginning, the urban routine, and the fantasy process is like mixing Sichuan hot pot, the best sashimi, and the best chocolate together and eating them together. By the way, there is also a common problem among new authors: elements are missing. They have good things in mind, but they always miss some elements that should be explained when writing, but the author knows it himself, so the author seems to feel normal.

I guess the author either hasn't been in love yet, or has been in love but hasn't had much experience yet.

After dozens of preparations, the result is a D-level ability. It's like a beautiful woman taking off her clothes for five minutes only to find that her clothes are bigger than yours. Do you know that feeling? You are really crazy

He is an amazing talent to be able to write this novel. I am really speechless and too lazy to curse.

Four works, only one grade. What does the author think?

What is a poisonous spot? It is said that there are many poisonous spots? Actually, I don't like watching it, so I'm just looking for a reason to comfort myself. In my personal opinion, there are two types of so-called poisonous spots. The first type is logical poison, which is really poisonous. Every time I see this kind of stupid article, I feel that my IQ is insulted. The first type is actually a poisonous point in the trend. Your novel just does not conform to the trend and no one likes it. For commercial works, it is naturally very poisonous. But based on the story, it's no problem. Start the example now 1: The protagonist's emotional line is a little fast, the logic is slightly poisonous, and it seems a bit embarrassing and a bit inexplicable. 2: Grandma Doctor, she is a one-tool person. There is no foreshadowing for some reason. The logic is medium to low, but it is okay. 3: There are too many high-level players in the Four Cities Conference, and the power system may collapse. 3S and 2S are suddenly worthless, but there are still some parks, and the logic is slightly poisonous. 4: Recently, the main character's spiritual awareness has been highlighted. Others are all soft-footed shrimps and so on. They are too deliberate and look too embarrassing. After all, they are social elites with highly poisonous logic. Author, you have already let yourself go, why are you still forcing yourself to write? Before Chapter 40, it was an absolute masterpiece (very niche), but after that it became boring. My feeling is that the novel is okay, at a food-level level, but the subject matter is too biased and does not conform to the trend of commercial writing. For those who like it, it's naturally great (before chapter 40), but unfortunately most people don't like it. Seriously, I don't think about trying it on female channels. They probably prefer this kind of sadistic content, at least it's more acceptable than male channels.