Everyone Awakens a Superpower

I can't stand this, it makes me feel sick to my stomach. It's not funny at all. . . The character setting is not very good either. The bodies of the two sisters and Xu Weiran are unbearable. Also, the world is a bit chaotic and dark. Chapters 1 and 2 that don't start are okay, but the rest will be. . . . . The setting of superpowers is interesting, but the author can't write a story with funny ideas. Anyway, I personally don't think it's funny. The whole article feels very depressing, even more uncomfortable than the domineering president of a female channel. In short, it is just as uncomfortable as S. Shuangwen and this are like two extremes. I am not criticizing the author, I am simply expressing my displeasure with the work. I suggest that those who like to read cool articles don't read this one. Just read it if you can stand it. Anyway, I felt discomfort discomfort very uncomfortable! ! ! 😟😟😟😟😟😟😟

Why! It's because I'm old and can't keep up with the times. I can't hold on anymore. Farewell.

To be honest, this book is the most poisonous of all the novels I have ever read. The first few dozen chapters were a bit too poisonous, but it was still fun to read, but as the book went on, it became more and more unreadable, so I had to skip reading. Just like book friends commented, this book is a self-pleasure article. In fact, the setting of superpowers in this book is quite interesting, and it can be written as an everyday novel. Maybe the author got too fancy and added some inexplicable things that made the book nondescript. There are so many poisonous spots at the back that I can't bear it even while watching. However, it is fair to say that the author's imagination is good and a bit unconstrained. I hope you can keep it. But the content of this book is really irritating to me. I can't bear to pick and choose. I'm sorry that I can't understand what you want to express. After all, there is no introduction to the book. My personal guess is that I might just write it casually. It feels a bit pity.

The beginning of a novel determines the fate of a novel. No matter how good your subsequent writing is, as long as your beginning is not good, no one will skip the beginning to see your wonderful results. Effect without cause. What's more, your results are not perfect, or even very bad, and no one likes to see them. I'd like to give you a suggestion: start another novel similar to this one. You experiment with this novel. First post some of what you want to write, and let us review it. If you have a good setting, you can adapt it and send it to another novel. I can't say much more. The success or failure depends on your own pursuit. Why should I prompt you to help you? Because I think the setting of this novel, everyone has super powers at some time, is very good. To put it bluntly, I don't want this world view and setting to be wasted by you.

I read more than 20 chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. It feels really awkward. It makes me feel uncomfortable. I read the introduction to your book and found it very interesting. But it's too conventional. Does the protagonist have no brains at all? A boy with a second-rate style. My father didn't applaud during the performance because he was tired of watching it. He suddenly jumped out and cursed people. What the hell was that? But it's just a brain thing?

I don't know whether I read this book in 18 or 20 years ago, but it still makes me forget it. I accidentally saw this book while browsing the bookshelf today. I turned over it on the bed and decided to keep something. This book is different from other books I have read. There has never been a book that gave me such a strong feeling before. It is like the junction between the spiritual world and the real world, so that when reading it, there will be a strong sense of exclusion, especially from the beginning to the end of the awakening. People can clearly feel that they are not In this world, a sense of absurdity and falsehood arises from the bottom of my heart, as if you are reading a paper book and tearing it apart. The behaviors and events of everyone in it are so weird but reasonable that when you read the book seriously and want to get involved, it will push you out with a push. When I saw the plot after the awakening, I felt bored for some reason. Maybe it was because the plot after the awakening was a little more normal and no longer so absurd, but it made me unable to watch it anymore.

Want to play in depth? Went to the wrong place. Wouldn't it be better to submit to an essay competition than get scolded here? And getting slapped three times in less than 20 pictures is too much.

......... How can I put it, I haven't read the rest yet, but the first few dozen chapters are indeed the childish worldview and psychological activities of middle school, which are the same as the rebellious phase of my middle school disease.

I've read half of it, and I think it's okay. I've read more novels than yours before. Basically, the protagonist saves a city with an awesome armor that he has cultivated through life and death (the kind where he is already invincible, but he is so awesome with his talent) and then hands over the armor and lives in a foreign land like a brainless person. At least your logic is still pretty fluent 😂

I don't really like the protagonist described by the author. But there is nothing wrong with what he describes. He has never been out of school, has not been severely beaten by society, and has not experienced many difficulties. Especially since he has experienced so many things at that age, it is easy to forget. This gives me the feeling that I don't know what to do and I don't have much ability, but I want to be strong and too fanciful. Not understanding parents' difficulties. No self-knowledge. I didn't have the ability but I gave the promise. But these are relatively common in reality. I have met such people as classmates when I was studying. This novel is about the character of the main character, which I don't really like. But there is nothing wrong with the description.

Objective understanding A twisted society, the protagonist is incompetent and loves to show off. The beginning of the story about a girl who has no background and loves to make promises, and falls in love with a big family is really unpleasant. (Just like Cinderella falling in love with Prince Charming) The first few dozen chapters were very depressing. (Why do you say it is depressing? There is no laughter, it makes people lose motivation to continue watching, and there is a feeling full of negative emotions) Is your IQ low? (I think the author wants to add the mentality of a weak person to the middle school, a highly hierarchical country, and the psychological factors of inferiority and delusion caused by poor families) (Of course, it is also possible that the author cannot write a character that makes the protagonist feel normal, and then follows the foreshadowing at the beginning and is too lazy to change it, so he writes it all the way)

The inorganic combination of the nonsensical beginning, the urban routine, and the fantasy process is like mixing Sichuan hot pot, the best sashimi, and the best chocolate together and eating them together. By the way, there is also a common problem among new authors: elements are missing. They have good things in mind, but they always miss some elements that should be explained when writing, but the author knows it himself, so the author seems to feel normal.

I guess the author either hasn't been in love yet, or has been in love but hasn't had much experience yet.

After dozens of preparations, the result is a D-level ability. It's like a beautiful woman taking off her clothes for five minutes only to find that her clothes are bigger than yours. Do you know that feeling? You are really crazy

He is an amazing talent to be able to write this novel. I am really speechless and too lazy to curse.

Four works, only one grade. What does the author think?

What is a poisonous spot? It is said that there are many poisonous spots? Actually, I don't like watching it, so I'm just looking for a reason to comfort myself. In my personal opinion, there are two types of so-called poisonous spots. The first type is logical poison, which is really poisonous. Every time I see this kind of stupid article, I feel that my IQ is insulted. The first type is actually a poisonous point in the trend. Your novel just does not conform to the trend and no one likes it. For commercial works, it is naturally very poisonous. But based on the story, it's no problem. Start the example now 1: The protagonist's emotional line is a little fast, the logic is slightly poisonous, and it seems a bit embarrassing and a bit inexplicable. 2: Grandma Doctor, she is a one-tool person. There is no foreshadowing for some reason. The logic is medium to low, but it is okay. 3: There are too many high-level players in the Four Cities Conference, and the power system may collapse. 3S and 2S are suddenly worthless, but there are still some parks, and the logic is slightly poisonous. 4: Recently, the main character's spiritual awareness has been highlighted. Others are all soft-footed shrimps and so on. They are too deliberate and look too embarrassing. After all, they are social elites with highly poisonous logic. Author, you have already let yourself go, why are you still forcing yourself to write? Before Chapter 40, it was an absolute masterpiece (very niche), but after that it became boring. My feeling is that the novel is okay, at a food-level level, but the subject matter is too biased and does not conform to the trend of commercial writing. For those who like it, it's naturally great (before chapter 40), but unfortunately most people don't like it. Seriously, I don't think about trying it on female channels. They probably prefer this kind of sadistic content, at least it's more acceptable than male channels.

I saw the chapter where the pig's feet are about to explode. I don't know if it's too much, but I'll briefly share my opinion. The subject matter and setting are quite interesting, I think. There are all kinds of funny superpowers, and the author's imagination is really big. But novels are not only attractive because of their novel themes. The logic of the plot is too confusing. According to the male protagonist you set, I really can't understand that the female protagonist, a wealthy daughter, would be devoted to him? I was baffled by the description of emotions. There are also a few weird powers that were awakened at that celebration. If I remember correctly, all the people who came to the celebration are the children of the family. With such awesome powers as the elimination ability and the halo of a one-time protagonist, you used such a funny way to let people receive box lunches? The previous ones are not too important. I can read it as a comedy, but I really can't handle the three views and IQ of pig's feet! According to the setting in the book, the abilities of family members directly affect the abilities of offspring, except for a few mutations. Pig's Foot himself also knows that his ability may be at a very low level, but he will be fine up to this point! But pig's feet don't have golden fingers, so he just goes to participate in this kind of celebration that represents the face of the city once every few decades? Later, his ability level was indeed low, and he did lose face to the city. He still blamed the audience for laughing at him! I would like to ask you if you are competing in various countries, you are just a piece of rubbish relying on connections, and you come up to embarrass the country. Shouldn't you be scolded? Selfish! ! And that Liu Guo, who was obviously killed by superpowers, actually bit back and said it was Liu Bian or someone who trampled him to death, and then the heroine still looked adoring! I'm confused, is this really because I can't keep up with the times? To be honest, the author has a lot of imagination, but the character settings are messy, the emotional lines are inexplicable, the character of the pig's feet is not likeable, and it is difficult to make people feel immersed in it. The control of superpowers in this genre is too messy. For example, Liu *** has the ability to save a person who had his head cut off for several hours, but her husband was just written to death by you in just a few words. Brother author, you may really not be suitable for writing books. After reading your novel, my head was buzzing, and I couldn't help it even though I never open posts! Too poisonous!

The setting is too ridiculous. The talent can carry the cauldron. The talent can only carry the cauldron, not chopsticks. Even if there is a straw on the cauldron, it cannot withstand it. To put it bluntly, straw is a multi-molecule polymer, and dust is also a multi-molecule polymer. Your cauldron is spotless? What bullshit setting?

Books that can support a family now have two characteristics. The first is refreshing writing, and the second is clear logic and strong artistic flavor. But, no matter what? They all have the same characteristics, fast food writing, I don't know what to say about this novel? As an old book fan on the Internet for 7 or 8 years, I have read basically all kinds of books, but I have never seen a book worse than this one. First, the protagonist is too childish, second, the social atmosphere is too depressing, and the whole society feels lifeless, third, the writing is not good, and fourth, the supporting characters are not good either. I think the good thing is that the setting of the whole book is very interesting, especially the one where everyone can awaken superpowers, but the social background is too different.

If you can carry the cauldron, you can't hold anything else except the cauldron, you don't have the strength to eat, and you can't speak normally with the lion's roar skill. This setting is too rubbish. If it were set like this, wouldn't the protagonist have to bite everything he sees in his hunting? Does the ability to sing mean that you can only sing when you open your mouth? Can't walk because of the flying ability?

Since you read 100 chapters, you gain Poison Resistance +999. You are immune to all poisons!

It's too childish. Whether it's the protagonist, the heroine, or the writing style, the story gives people a very childish feeling. I'm the same age as the protagonist (but I've been a bookworm for six years), but the protagonist cries when he wants to, laughs when he wants to, and slaps him when he wants. I feel guilty. It all happened too fast and too fiercely. I am ashamed of myself. So did the heroine. This love came too fast. Can you say that it is not the hero? A passer-by was about to leave at that time. The heroine fell in love with the passer-by. This is simply I'm willing to run away with someone after just a few days of knowing each other. There are so many exclamation marks in the full text that my head feels like an exclamation mark. The story is creative and lacks rationality. In an era where superpowers are rampant, there are so many people who have slipped through the nine-year compulsory education. Why don't we study our abilities and get an ability-limiting bracelet? Since there are super villains and a one-time protagonist's aura, isn't there some kind of earth explosion and human extinction? This kind of superpower. If he hadn't been taken away, I guess the world would be over.

The further I read, the less I know what it is about. I have read all the newer ones, and the summary is this. The protagonist is a high school student, everyone has superpowers (it's just a bit crooked), and out of nowhere there is a super beautiful and rich goddess classmate who likes him very much (still a stereotypical woman with an engagement) After that, someone inexplicably gave me a protagonist halo and successfully awakened the lowest level D-level ability (waste style). Finally, there was an inexplicable super villain who could be beaten by a group of people called dad even before he was awakened. After that, everyone was happy together in the Brawl mode!

In fact, the writing is pretty good and the imagination is rich. You said it was well written, but the male protagonist may be toxic. But the plot development is quite interesting. All in all, I personally think it's pretty good

Why does the protagonist like to be someone else's grandson? ! I was made stupid. I started out as a grandma and became my grandson, but later I became a beggar. My parents didn't want me anymore. What a fairy setting 😅

I saw that before awakening, the protagonist clearly understood himself. He was born in a poor family. Although he complained, he did not blame his parents. There were still some feelings that he could not write about. Anyway, this book is completely distorted and cannot be read in the form of an online text. It seems distorted, but if you read it carefully, it feels like it is reflecting social phenomena. Of course, it may be that I have over-interpreted it.

Can this crappy book be included in the daily guide? So blind

The homework is so unrestrained. It depicts the dark side of society in a comic and humorous way. It is very poisonous and very sad.

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