Lu Looking for Fairyland

Because the author is not very good at writing about new book previews, I also went to book circles, new book promotion circles and other circles to learn from some book reviewers' posts. This is my first attempt. If there are any problems, please criticize and correct me~ Work: "The Deer Seeks the Immortal Path" Author: Gugugu Gugu (LV1) Type: (Female Channel) Fairy Love • Classical Fairy Status: Signed • Already on the shelves (2019.10.24) Number of investors: 105 Number of words: 210,000 words Total recommendation votes: 6724 Number of fans: 2126 Number of trial reading chapters : Chapter 3 Comments: When I saw this book, my first impression was that the cover was quite artistic: a bright moon, a dead tree, a white deer, and a person next to the deer. Introduction to the book "The white deer looks for immortality, draws the sword to ask for immortality, who says women are inferior to men?" Chapter 1 [The Deer Comes from the Mountains]  Introduces the protagonist's name, personality, family background, and the turning point in his life. The heroine's nickname is "Xiaolu", she has a lively and quirky personality; she was born in a small mountain village, and her parents are farmers. His aunt is married to a restaurant owner in the city, and his uncle, as an outer disciple of the "Kongwu Sect" of a martial arts sect, has two places to participate in the sect's test, and one of them is going to be given to the heroine Xiaolu. After reading the first chapter, the author's writing style is good, and the various descriptions of the protagonist are also well organized and not confusing. There are some minor problems with the monetary system. In the first chapter of the book, it is mentioned that a deerskin can be exchanged for more than one tael of silver (which seems a bit too much), which is the expense of a family of six for three months. Compared with the fact that the inner disciples of the Kongwu Sect also mentioned in the first chapter can get one tael of silver a month, it seems even more inappropriate. A piece of rabbit skin, so valuable? Perhaps there is something unusual about the deerskin described by the author. I won't know until I read the rest of the article.       ……， Chapter 2 [Small town named Xiangshan]  Introducing the protagonist after entering Xiangshan City and meeting his uncle. Later, a steward from the Kongwu Sect came to pick him up, which further expanded the background of the world and introduced the history of the Kongwu Sect's rise and decline in the Liu Kingdom before retreating to a remote place, as well as its local counterweight: Kuangfeng Village. Chapter 2 is quite satisfactory. There are some contents worthy of praise, such as the detailed description of when you first enter the city and the introduction of local forces is also clear and simple. Chapter 3 [First entry into the Kongwu Sect] The protagonist enters Muyue Mountain, where the Kongwu Sect is located, and prepares to take the entry test.                                                                                                                                                                       A bunch of children's psychology and actions are well described when they are together on the entrance road. The text describing the environment of Muyue Mountain is also relatively beautiful: Muyue Mountain is actually not a separate mountain peak, but a combination of five peaks arranged in a half-moon shape. During the day, the mountains are shrouded in clouds and mist, making them look like Penglai Fairy Mountain. At night, the valley bathed in moonlight looks like a fairyland. Although the scenery of Muyue Mountain is graceful, it is not slender, but rather majestic. The main peak, Yuehua Peak, is ten thousand feet high and steep. A long bluestone staircase is laid all the way up from the foot of the mountain, passing through the tall mountain gate. Next to the gate stands a huge stone tablet with two large characters "Kongwu" carved in gold and iron. —————————— After reading the first three chapters, I have a basic understanding of the content of this book. It's probably a story about a heroine who was born ordinary and who continues to rise through struggles and hardships. There are no big problems in the logic of the first three chapters, but there is a slight flaw. Since the protagonist's aunt and uncle only have one son, why would they give another entrance test slot to the protagonist Xiaolu? It seems that the explanation is not very clear. According to the author, this book is about an indigenous leisure female protagonist, with no male protagonist, no time travel, and no rebirth. It unfolds with the heroine's initial story in the secular world, and the plot is slow to heat up. Of course, the heroine has a golden finger, which has not yet appeared in the first three chapters, and is basically setting up the world framework.       ，，，，，，       ， End

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The subject matter is very good, and there is no male protagonist. I support it! !

I really can't stand it anymore, I will be pissed to death if I continue to watch it, I am already in my teens and still so weak and mentally immature, even though my cultivation level is already quite high, I still have no strength to fight. I close my eyes and wait to be beaten. It is so frustrating. I have never seen such a weak and non-CP heroine. It's so annoying, I'm so angry

The progress shouldn't be so slow. There is no sense of cultivation anymore and the cart before the horse is put before the horse. He has always been the eldest son of the family and the weakest of the family. He is a little genius. He wants to move towards the world of cultivation step by step instead of always following the bloody path.

The heroine is not ordinary weak. The fifth level of Qi training is of no use at all. Just cast a spell and the spiritual energy will be exhausted. It's all soy sauce. Even a mortal is not that weak, right?

The heroine is so weak that she can't even beat a warrior at the fifth level of Qi training.

I feel like the heroine's fourth brother is really not a thing. The more I watch, the angrier I get. What kind of thing is he? After using the sixth sister to frame the heroine, he also wanted to raise his own worth by marrying a young lady from the Xu family. In the end, he ended up miserable and had to explain himself with gorgeous words. To put it bluntly, he is a selfish person. He values ​​cultivation and status more than love. In the end, he actually said that if the sixth sister is rescued, he hopes that the sixth sister will forget him? I want to say, where does he have the nerve to think like this, forgetting that he is not basic? Does he still think he holds much weight in Sixth Sister's heart? Why don't you have a clear idea? Why are you pretending to be a noble person? In the end, you still have to behave like you have fulfilled others? Bullshit

Okay, okay, good, good, come on, come on

This is the first time I read a story without a male protagonist, and I thought it was pretty good.

It looks good and the writing is good, please update it. This is without cp. But don't have a male protagonist. . . .

I came here after listening to your female voice, haha

The author's voiceover is so cute that I couldn't help but click on the avatar. It turns out that I can also write books, and I will give you six tickets every day from now on.

I hope that after the author restores and updates the heroine, she will grow up, become smarter, and have a clearer mind. Now she looks worried about the protagonist sometimes 😭

Please add the character Luo Lin, thank you, everyone loves Luo Lin

In the world of cultivation, men are not superior to women, right?

You can start catching up again 🤭

The author is great, I haven't updated for several days 😢

Seeing the chaos in Zongyuan City, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was originally a small climax, but the protagonist's foundation building was mediocre and undescriptive. Xiaoqing was upgraded inexplicably. He clearly said before that he couldn't upgrade without elixirs. When faced with the crisis, the arrangement was just one sentence, 90% of the marriage was on the same day, and then he went straight to kill, saying that the city lord and the Demon Sect jointly wanted to unify Zongyuan City. Is this city lord a fool? Why should he be the city lord when everyone has been sacrificed? Isn't it better to just follow the original decent life? Even if it describes the internal strife between bad guys, there is no foreshadowing and it is really hard to watch. There are also a bunch of people who built foundations in their teens, not to mention those who formed pills in their decades, not to mention those who were still mortals...