Walking Among the Heavens

The setting is almost the same as "Starting from Guhuo Bird"

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The author said in the introduction that he wrote the book for me

This is where I put my words. This book will definitely not become a masterpiece, and it is even estimated that it will be unavailable in the mid-term.

The author should not learn from the work, but should also learn from the writing structure of Last Night Heavy Rain and West Pale. Reality suppresses strength, and the copies are all about heaven and earth. These two people have millions of words, and their power systems have not collapsed. They are not finished on the water, but their results are not bad.

After reading three chapters, I guess it's Gu Huoniao. To be honest, the cover is pretty good, but you can't imitate Gu Huoniao at your speed.

The protagonist pretends to be sophisticated at the beginning, thinking he is a big shot, but turns out to be a piece of shit.

I don't really like to pretend to be profound and misty.

Weared by multiple people. It's not unique to the protagonist.

Chapter 1 is extremely poisonous. The writing is extremely watery and pretentious. Example. The protagonist is a martial arts master, that is, a big shot. As a result, the author said that he was not the one and used someone else to fill in a certain number of words. There are some others. The writing is too watery. Pretentious. Can't stand it 886

I started with Gu Huo Niao, but I had no interest in reading the first few chapters. The writing is incomprehensible, I don't know what you want to express.

It's very similar to the novel "Starting from Guhuo Bird"

I think it's pretty good, but I don't appreciate it enough or there are too many trolls. It should be the Navy.

I hope this book will not become [Walking Between Wives] or [Walking Between Other People's Wives]

I watched the beginning and slipped away without understanding.

What's wrong with today's books? I've read a few chapters but I still don't understand them. Is the book too profound, or is my knowledge too simple? So cool.

There is nothing wrong with imitation, and there is nothing wrong with pursuing writing style! But it would be very wrong for you to give everything half a bucket of water... Isn't it more practical to use vernacular language appropriately than to blindly pursue style?

Why is it called walking? It feels inexplicable. It feels very abrupt without any substitution.

Damn it, I'll give you a million rewards. Please add some skills(๑❛ᴗ❛๑) Build a building by the way...

Some books will disappear if you keep them

The Qing Dynasty hasn't let the protagonist die yet.

This book was gone as soon as I read the climax.

It was indeed unattractive at first, but it became more and more attractive later on, especially in the Three Kingdoms period.

I have raised you, and I suddenly found out today that it is over. I just got married. When I looked back and saw that it was over, brother, I have worked hard to raise you until now. Your shock was bigger than when my wife told me she was pregnant. I feel uncomfortable.

I'm still raising it, why are you gone?

The last story about a policeman was very interesting, and the beginning of this book is also pretty good. If the next book is about the world of Hong Kong movies, you will definitely come back if you throw it away. The author writes it very well, I hope you won't give up.

It was wonderful to watch, but suddenly it was so bad?

A future writer has been wiped out by trolls like this. Don't be discouraged, come on!

I read the last chapter (actually I followed the last book, but I didn't like this style, and I didn't read any of it. When I was browsing the bookshelf today, I saw that this book was finished, so I clicked in to read it). I have a suggestion that you can read it (of course you don't have to read it 🙂) The author can try to increase the length of the original plot and characters when writing the book. Don't be too anxious about the original plot. You can carefully consider and create a few outstanding original characters. This can exercise your writing skills.

. . . . How could he die 😰