Stepping Into the World of Wuxia on Screen

The plot is reasonable, the dialogues are rigorous, and the characters have online IQs. The shortcoming is that the description of the action scenes is too stiff and feels a bit turn-based.

First of all, this book is extremely poisonous and it is not recommended to get into it. As a time traveler who is familiar with the plot, the protagonist possesses extremely high force and a very high military status and background at the time, and then is slapped to death by a group of people. A single sentence can determine his life or death. The old man who relies on his old age to retaliate has no way to avenge the death of his family. He even has to have his wife abandon the protagonist in order to avenge his father. This recommendation is also miraculous. The writing is good at the beginning, but suddenly the author starts to work hard. Even if he writes a book to make money for himself, can't he design the plot out of his head? The simplest thing is to put yourself in someone else's shoes when designing the plot. How would you deal with this matter if you were the author? You are like the protagonist, and your father-in-law is killed by others. A few days later, a group of old men are yelling at you, forcing you to give in and force your wife to leave. Then your wife abandons you and takes revenge. Then you verbally threatened those old men, then compromised and allowed the matter to continue? Is this something that humans can do? ! Author, can we use our brains to make up stories? You said that you are still writing when you use your brain, and you are also writing when you write blindly. This is also related to the issue of making money. Your writing skills are quite good. Can you get over your head? Even if you really want to write about the helplessness and sorrow of the warriors of that era, could you please make your design reasonable? We really can't read books without thinking. Books like this can only be discarded.

Come on, this book is okay, but the update is too slow

This is a dissuasive book review, and readers are advised to be cautious when clicking on this book. This book gave me the biggest feeling: lifeless. As a time traveler, the protagonist was quickly corroded by the pretentious structure and airs of the Republic of China. He exuded an old and stale atmosphere in his bones. I retreated after reading Chapter 22. After a quick glance behind me, the weapons turned into cigarette sticks, meow meow meow? As a martial artist, the protagonist cannot protect his wife in front of a group of aggressive elders who are traitors, and cannot break through the layers of the so-called rules of the world. However, in the final analysis of martial arts, fists are the biggest, and weak words can be used to persuade physically. Not to mention you have firearms. As a result, fists + firearms cannot suppress this group of elders who are traitors. They have no heart, no ambition, and rotten wood cannot be carved! As a soldier, when you kill a traitor, you still have to murmur, "Ah, I will definitely kill him", "Ah, how miserable I am", (details in Chapter 19), but in the end, there is nothing, nothing. The traitor was killed by his wife, and the price was that his wife also died. Well, it copied the plot of the movie, not bad. As the author, who is in the late stage of literary youth disease, his wife has a duel with a traitor, so the wife must die? Could it be that unless my wife dies, I can't continue writing this book? Wouldn't you be able to write without leaving the original movie? In the final analysis, Wen Qing is in the advanced stage of cancer. At the end of Chapter 22, there is [the protagonist finally becomes a grand master]. I just want to ask you if you are worthy. What earth-shattering things have you done? The Japs have not been killed, and the traitors have not been eradicated. What qualifications do they have to be called a master? Give money to those literati in the Republic of China and blow it out! Summary: A stale protagonist who exudes a stale smell is destined to make no waves in the tide of the times.

According to the writing style, plot, logic, results, writing speed, and the Black Face Master's own insights mixed into it, I patiently wrote the ending for the author, hoping that the Black Face Master can use it by then: At this time, Pang Guan's martial arts had reached a state of perfection. Suddenly, he felt something in his heart and looked up at the sky. He finally discovered the mastermind behind the scenes. Pang Wudi shouted loudly and used a very rare kick in Wing Chun - the upward kick. Suddenly, the sky shattered. The black-faced red-hearted man who was sitting in front of the computer was caught off guard. His lower body was hit by a kick that suddenly appeared from the screen. He rolled on the ground in pain and shouted: I am an eunuch, I am an eunuch... If a guy like the author doesn't fight against the eunuchs, he will be close to death at the starting point. I will post this as proof. I hope everyone will support and witness.

I personally feel that the author wrote this book in a nondescript manner. First of all, the author writes that the protagonist is a martial artist, and the theme is martial arts, so there should be no talk of national justice or national justice, because from these perspectives, the protagonist is not doing anything serious at all. As a time traveler, the protagonist's vision and knowledge are not limited by the times, and his heart If your chest is really that great, and if you want to be a hero for the country and the people, you should not practice martial arts, but study hard, and then serve the country. If you are in the liberal arts, you should quickly spread the Maoist concepts and Marxism. In the sciences, in that era, others who studied the atomic bomb were looking for a path in the dark, while you were running forward with your eyes on the end. Others don't know the future, but the protagonist doesn't know it yet? The future is an era of science and technology. Can practicing kung fu save the country? ? You have never done anything to save the country, so why are you talking about tiger skin? You have some concepts and ideas. It's okay for you to write anti-Japanese novels and put them in martial arts novels... Haha, you are like a cook. You think about saving the world with your cooking skills all day long. You think you are the little master of China.

A poisonous novel, in the first world, someone has the power and power to force his wife to death. The second man lost his memory and his wife became his brother's wife. Goodbye. I can't bear it anymore.

As soon as Pang Guan arrived at the store, all the readers looked at him and laughed, and some shouted, "Pang Guan, I heard that the woman you like died again?" Pang Guan opened his eyes and said, "Why do you accuse someone of innocence out of thin air..." "What innocence? I saw your number one wife die a few days ago, and the woman you liked died again in the snow, and you didn't even take revenge." Pang Guan blushed. The veins on his face and forehead popped out, and he argued, "Gong Er, how can Gong Er be considered the heroine...! My friend's wife, no, I don't like her...?" Followed by difficult words, such as "the righteousness of the family and the country", "obeying the old rules", and "I'm just a blacksmith", etc., Which caused everyone to burst into laughter, and the readership was filled with a happy atmosphere.

The Grandmaster was written with frustration, and I hope the plot will be changed in the next one. In the end, I found that except for the protagonist's achievement of becoming a Grandmaster, the plot of the movie has not changed at all. The father-in-law is still dead, and the wife is also dead. In a word, why should we follow the plot?

Dissuade Post If you want to read it, please note that the protagonist of this article has little impact on the original plot. He is cowardly and aggrieved, and the plot twist is blunt.