Fan Hua Lu

Let's talk about the highlights first. To summarize, it is a rare fairy tale with a righteous male protagonist. It has a strong literary flavor. It is not like some random copies of popular poems or awkward original sentences. The overall character IQ is online. The world view is unfolded from the male protagonist's perspective. The dialogue description is very good. I also like the writing style. Next, I will not talk about the shortcomings, but just make a few small complaints and sighs. It is normal for the male protagonist to suffer hardships as he grows up, but the female characters are also enamored and abusive towards the male protagonist, which is simply torturing the hearts of readers, especially singles 😢 I personally believe that a gentleman should enjoy others first before enjoying himself, and be honest with himself before others, and we can be on the right path and live happily together. However, the current male protagonist Zhengji lacks a bit of the freedom and ease of a gentleman. Courtesy is the way of communication rather than the rules of cocooning. In the world of cultivation forged by strength, it is normal for younger generations to surpass their elders and form their own sect. Why do they bind themselves emotionally in the name of master and apprentice? Why do they have to suffer both themselves and the women around them? We look forward to the follow-up of him, the master and several beauties. By the way, it's a bit rash for the fairies to land on the island this time. It would be troublesome if the opponent maliciously ambush the bamboo forest, but the eye contact between Zhang Yu and Li Yu should be a foreshadowing In short, I support the author and continue to follow. I look forward to seeing the male protagonist's emotional outpouring in the following chapters, which can make the anxious single readers feel the joy of vomiting 🤭

It's not a routine article⊂(˃̶͈̀ε ˂̶͈́ ⊂ ), I like it! The characters are full and vivid, the emotions are delicate, and they are beautiful. If a good book is not popular, it will be difficult to tolerate it. Don't be discouraged, author, come on!

The author's writing style is very good, and he is one of the few who can write original poems. I am not embarrassed by it, and I am not bragging, because I specialize in writing modern poetry and have achieved some success. The shortcoming of the book is that the plot structure of the chapter layout is sometimes not very good at arranging the ups and downs of the plot. For example, in the first 100 chapters, the letter that stood out to me was not the plot, but the writing. The article seems to be full of dissatisfaction. In the first 100 chapters, the behind-the-scenes plan was directly revealed twice in the first 100 chapters. Can you think of a better way to handle it? Also, the first hundred chapters lack explosive points and real plot climaxes, so it is difficult to retain people to pay. I stayed because the writing was really good and it was more comfortable to read than other novices. Full support. Of course, if you don't make money and the author gives up, I'd be fine with it. Sometimes, I feel that the author does not understand emotions and his portrayal of women is a bit strange, especially the design of the Eight Fairies and their names. I Amway gave this to my girlfriend and she made her laugh. I hope it doesn't turn into "the fairy fell in love with me". Come on, author💪, I still support it. I don't know how many chapters the author plans to write, but I would like to give the author a suggestion to understand the core driving force of the protagonist's behavior and the driving logic of the behavior. For example, rescuing Sister Yue'er, going on a trek, defending Bailu Castle, and going to battle can all be regarded as the core drive of part of the content, but the core drive that implements the whole still needs to be put forward, and it is best to arrange it in the early part of the novel.

To be honest, people who are a bit literary at heart will probably like this novel. Although I can't write it, it doesn't stop me from shouting 666😭 The combat power is very casual, whether it is the protagonist or other characters. This is something I feel a little uncomfortable with now. After all, I have read too many upgrade novels 2333 But I always feel that if you can achieve the ultimate in a certain aspect, it is a rare and good novel. It's like "The Great Butler". It has many shortcomings, but the emotions are written very well, so I like it very much. Just like "Purple River", I was persuaded to quit in the early stage, but after watching it, I had to sigh that the plot was so good. Just like this book, maybe there are many things you don't like about it, but as long as there is one thing you like, then keep reading.

This is the starting point for reading this book. When I get my pocket money after school starts, I will definitely subscribe and recommend it. This book is definitely the strongest online article I have ever read. There is no other. Come on, author! I believe that good works will not be buried

I went to the starting point specifically to reward you. This book is not yet a hit, but for me it is a rare masterpiece. Although there are thousands of words, they eventually turn into two words: confidant. Use a poem by Huang Chao to express his feelings. When autumn comes on September 8th, I will kill all the flowers after they bloom. The array of soaring incense penetrates Chang'an, and the city is filled with golden armor.

I read a book called The Seven Evil Monuments a long time ago. I think the author has returned to the world.

I'm a little panicked after reading hundreds of chapters that took three years to write.

Thumbs up! The writing style is very good, elegant and free, in the style of fairy tales! The author maintains this style, which may not necessarily make him a big hit, but he certainly won't be a hit. There are too few independent-style articles nowadays. For example, the wretched development of longevity and looking for chess pieces on the Xianxia list have become popular. The same goes for the author. He will definitely get better after his book becomes fatter and gets some exposure. It's a pity that I am now in my third year of high school. School may have started by the time you put it on the shelves, so I won't be able to give you the first order. After reading books for so many years and listening to so many complaints from authors, I decided to officially convert them to official books after graduating from high school. Don't worry, you'll get a copy if you order it all! Finally, a few suggestions. I hope the author will make the update frequency clear, this is really important to some readers. Don't you see, Platinum Master Ergen's updates have been unstable for half a year, and now the book has no reputation at all.

Originally it was just for fun, but unexpectedly it turned out to be as beautiful as gold, phoenix and jade. The book is full of love, and the strange layout is very popular with me. The text is simple and clear in meaning. The writing style is clear and beautiful, and the intention is far-reaching. The reversal and fall of life can make people fall into emotion and reason, which shows that the author has thought deeply about Fu Hui.     ，，，，， After a quick glance at the bad reviews, most of them accused the author of "utilitarian" behavior, spending large sums of money, maliciously criticizing reviews, angrily criticizing readers, etc. The behavior was exaggerated by harsh words, but there was a faint tendency to make money. Originally, I was preconceived and contemptuous, so I only used it for entertainment after meals. I didn't want to be impressed by the author's style, so I forgot about it for a while, and tweeted about people. The previous heart-breaking words showed the bias of looking at the moon through a mirror. The author is aware of his difficulties. Although I don't offend you for your indignation, I can't excuse you for replying. It's just that readers are just passers-by, and they should not be limited by good or bad, and should be open to the public. Readers should not be defined by the eyes of power. It should be noted that the sea is open to all rivers, and tolerance is great. In my opinion, the author does not want to be stuck in the bottom of the valley. He has the elegance of writing and ink (not in a derogatory sense), and he should be willing to accept piracy. Otherwise, it will really be looked down upon by people to gain merit through literary work. (I don't mean anything else, it's just that the author's writing is obviously contrary to the mainstream. It is obvious that the author's music is high-minded and it is inevitable to be unpopular. If you are not angry about this, it is unnecessary) The author also once said that subscribing is a duty, and giving rewards is a duty. Although such words are explicit, they are not wrong, and they have fulfilled the duty of readers. I also often think about it, and I am willing to spend money for the sake of good reading expectations. It's just that I encountered a masterpiece, and I regret seeing it too late. Not everyone thinks so. What's more, the reviews are biased and the current is turbulent. I only hope that the author can block everyone's mouth with a pen as big as a rafter, so that the clouds can pass.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             but all the people in the world don't know you. This is my first time reading a book, and I would like to share this sentence with the author. Come on!

Alas, Qidian is a place for writing online articles, but the author wants to write a poetry novel, and his values ​​are so upright. There are many authors in Qidian, such as Eternal Fire, who wrote a novel called World of Gods, but subscriptions are not very good because he wants to reason truth to readers, and the balance between truth and storytelling is difficult to grasp. The author has a lot of experience, the writing is fluent, and the story is actually there, but it does not conform to the mainstream of the market. However, I still have some humble opinions to share with the author. 1. In terms of writing, the author's ancient prose skills are breathtaking and the reading is very charming. However, sometimes a plain sentence can arouse the reader's empathy more, making it more difficult for the reader to invest in it. But the author must not abandon the current sentence. My suggestion is to describe more details and shorten the distance with the readers, which may be better. 2. In terms of plot, I have only read the first ten chapters so far, but the author of the plot description is indeed very good, but the problem is still that it is not detailed enough. Others may write five or six chapters for one plot of a novel, but the author only writes one chapter. Although everyone talks about water, in fact, this kind of water can make people feel happy, which shows the author's ability even more. Why? Because water characters are what readers think, but is the author really writing water characters? Often what those great authors value is not words, but an emotional foil. The reason why writing novels makes people addicted lies in the words "water" and the emotions they evoke. If you blindly pursue refinement, you will not be able to attract readers. 3. Realm aspect. Nowadays, many online articles are no longer what they used to be, and readers are also changing. The author is able to adhere to correct values ​​and spread good things, which is very valuable. It's a pity that some people can't understand this, and instead indulge in desire. This is actually human nature. So will high-level novels never come to prominence? I think a good novel only has four words: emotional. As long as it can touch people's hearts, desire may not matter. But such a novel needs a good story as its core. That's it, I hope it can help the author. Hope to continue to persevere. Come on! !

An excellent book, the lone moon soars in the sky and the stars recede. Looking forward to the day when it will be made into a TV series

Show your support. The author has the passion and sincerity to write, and we readers can continue to read it. The book is indeed niche, but there will always be a day when it will shine!

After flipping through a few chapters, the author's writing is quite good. It feels like I used to stay up late reading martial arts novels and read "Zhu Xian". To be honest, there are so many Qidian books, but there are really not many that can be read. Most authors' first books contain the author's original pursuits and dreams. Best reflects the author's style. One thing to say, the title and introduction of the book are not very suitable for the market. If it were recommended on the bookshelf page, I would probably skip it. I suggest changing the introduction and writing more. The first impression is very important. After all, new writers have no readers, so it is very slow to attract readers by word of mouth. (Whether or not you are short of money is one thing, whether you can make money is another. Positive feedback can increase enthusiasm for writing, which is good for everyone. Some authors with good writing skills seem to have changed their careers before becoming popular)

The book is really a good book! Worth recommending!

It's rare to find a good book. It's a fast-food novel. The author put a lot of effort into creating it but few people know about it. It's heartbreaking.

Wow, I saw a chapter where the author said that he rewards himself! ... I'm really afraid that the author won't be able to continue writing. It's rare to find a good book, so keep going💪! I will continue to support you 💪

I really didn't understand that such a good book is not read by as many people as those casually written novice system articles.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a pig's foot that is upright and forward-moving all his life. He's frank and passionate 👍

At the beginning of the novel, the description of Li Yu's righteousness was a little too deliberate (he kept sighing in words). Later, the writing was obviously stronger than at the beginning. I hope to make a breakthrough again.

For those of you who come after me, if you just want to find a harem novel to read, you have come to the wrong place.