Konoha: I Am the Slug Immortal

The author is good. When I saw that the protagonist wanted to help Hashirama change the plot, I knew that the author would be able to write a different Naruto fanfic. Good luck, author.

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You were my only warmth once!

Madara and Hashirama are true love, Mito is just an accident.

The writing was very awkward at the beginning, and I was almost persuaded to quit. Fortunately, I watched the extras first and knew there would be some improvement later on, otherwise I almost wouldn't have been able to persevere. . . . The author's age should be too young. If I guess wrong, just think that I am praising the author's youth.

Author, I sincerely give you a suggestion, stop writing the protagonist as a slut, who travels to a slug and lusts after women every day...

It greatly fulfilled my dream, in which Madara, Hashirama, and Izuna all have a wonderful life, and there is no OOC. If possible, I hope none of the Uchiha clan will use kaleidoscope. It's so sad. (⑉• •⑉)‥♡

After reading a few chapters, I was very childish and disliked it.

Come on,＾0＾~＾0＾~

Let me remind the author that snakes and slugs are not on the same level. The slug is on the same level as the Snake Immortal Old Toad. Each time Tsunade channeled only a small part of the big slug, or a split body.

Can you pick out the side chapters? This looks like trouble

Becoming a great immortal is easy, but you must first learn to create ice heart

I ordered it all, the writing is beautiful, I like this style. Would you like the author to recommend himself to the non-heroine bar?

The strength of the three great immortals is unknown. But one thing is for sure. It is definitely the Six Paths level. Psychic beasts are subject to birth, old age, sickness and death. Being able to live a long time is already a sign of strength. Only the Six Paths level can be sublimated. Win immortality. Look at the human beings, Kaguya Rokupatho is the only one who has immortality, and Black Zetsu's stabbing back to kill Madara Rokupatho is no simple thing. As for why it should be hidden. Maybe it's because of the existence of the old man Liu Dao. Those who haven't reached the Liu Dao level are his brother Liu Dao and his two children. All hung up. Chakra reincarnation is also operated by the old man of Six Paths.

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Isn't Madara Uchiha the heroine?

Why do I think the protagonist's IQ is worrying?

This book isn't toxic, it's just extremely boring.

Wouldn't it be nice to write about Naruto properly? How come a group of people all like to practice immortality, and they start cultivating immortality again after writing about it. It's really against the peace, I'm retreating.

It was okay from the front, but when I saw Thousand-Armed Buddha dethroning the protagonist's elder position, I really couldn't help it. Is a person with a God's perspective afraid of this? If a normal person has a temper, he cannot be arranged like the protagonist. You also explained that the protagonist is afraid that his protagonist halo will not be lost, but the protagonist already knows that he is the protagonist, so he is still afraid of this. What you're saying really doesn't make sense.

Protagonist: Do you know how slugs eat, baby Madara Uchiha? Let me... Show you. We turn our stomachs inside out... Impale our prey... And inject enzymes into them. In order to digest them outside the body... Sorry, baby Uchiha Madara.

In fact, it is inferred that the Great Immortal Slug in the original work should be the strongest among the three Immortals.

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A slug is a giant slug, right?

I feel like the Slug Immortal was written too weakly.

I have a headache. I have to subscribe to the full version again. It's very well written. I missed it several times. Sorry.

If you don't practice fantasy and immortality, you won't be able to write a book, or what?

How disgusting, turning into a slug!