I Make Kamen Riders by Hand in Marvel

I finished reading it all. When I read about ten chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore, but I really ran out of books to read. I kept at it and I felt much better. However, I have to complain about explaining so many settings and then restricting this and that. Objectively speaking, it's not wrong, but it just gave me a feeling that the armor was very low and was weakened. The main reason is that the power of Kamen Rider's armor has not been reflected for too long. The more it is written, the more it feels, not the stronger it is, but the weaker it feels due to various restrictions.

You'd better delete that system and just travel back to American comics.

After reading all the chapters, the protagonist is still looking for supplies and preparing transformation props. It will probably take a hundred chapters to get to the topic. What is the system used for? Apart from being a robber-eater, there's no other use for it.

I've read almost a hundred chapters, and I'm still writing the narration and setting. Are you going to write the book by copying the original work? What about the knight? I suggest you change the name to "I am dawdling in Marvel". The introduction says that this is a novel about an ordinary young man reading the plot in the third person of Marvel, and there is also a guest appearance by Kamen Rider 😡

When it comes to rubbing your belt with your hands, you have to talk about that man: Long

It's too messy. DC Marvel has a lot of settings that make people have a headache. The author knows a lot about Kamen Rider, and the writing of Making Rider makes people feel immersed in it. If there are not too many settings, the rest is okay. Your book title says hand-rubbing Kamen Rider, then just write about Kamen Rider. But at the beginning, there are all kinds of conspiracy theories, magic, hell, Ancient One, Mugen Family, you are not tired, the readers are tired

It's terrible. The author may want to write it in more detail, but the plot is extremely boring and the author drags it on, making this book a boring book.

I almost vomited after reading more than forty chapters, and I still haven't explained the protagonist's positioning and abilities clearly. Whenever I have nothing to do, I will enter the narration mode in my head and spit out the settings. I will always spit out a long paragraph, or even an entire chapter. It's okay to say it's useful, but the key is that after the beeping, I'm still confused. Regardless of whether the composite world can be written well or not, the mere presence of magnets plugged into the terminal makes people feel shrouded in the smell of fart, making it confusing and confusing. At the beginning, Panda said it would provide a system, but what about the system? ? Have you eaten? ? ?

It's 2019, and there are still people who can't write a good beginning within three chapters of a book, so they come here to read it, and it's different from what they imagined.

For book lovers attracted by the title and introduction, please note that the protagonist of this book has not become a Kamen Rider beyond Chapter 70 . I don't have the patience to continue chasing it. Even though it's on the shelves, it doesn't have many chapters and it doesn't cost much to subscribe. To be honest, it's boring to watch the author fail. What he probably means is that he knows he's wrong. The popularity of Kamen Rider and the mixture of Marvel and DC has been very successful in attracting readers. Although it's his fault that he didn't become Kamen Rider after almost 75 chapters, he just doesn't change it. I was quite speechless too The main character didn't have any bright spots either. Throughout the whole story, it was like a running account before the money was put on the shelves, and I couldn't remember what the main character did. It's not that exciting, and there's nothing that's eye-catching. Those who have the patience to keep chasing can do their best