Trap the Death Dragon at the Beginning

The author is a capable person. I'm impressed. It's hard on my brain just to read it. It must not be easy to write. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I was fascinated by the first chapter. Could it be that the book can only summon the dragon once? Why did you rush to play word games through loopholes? In the first chapter, you could be careful to get some gold, but in the second chapter, your IQ dropped.

After reading 15, I can't stand it anymore. The reasons are as follows. 1. After the protagonist becomes a dragon, a series of experiments prove that it is impossible for the protagonist to kill the dragon. Through experiments, we learned: ① Dragon Balls are supplied through wish power. The stronger the wish, the higher the reward/punishment. ②Every time a wish is fulfilled, the length will increase by one meter. From the original text, we can assume that Shenlong's rejection of the first wish may be more hurtful. The initial Shenlong stretched his head from the sky to the window, which can prove that the injury was not serious. After the protagonist finished writing his second wish, he hesitated when Shenlong didn't answer, indicating that after being rejected once, his second wish was not very powerful. But it is very contradictory that a low level of willpower can force Shenlong to death. No matter how to fill this hole later, the article will feel unsound. 2. This book actually looks okay. The first thing I feel is that it is easy to read in daily life. It is a so-so book that can be used in times of book shortage. But in Chapter 14, a sudden "head" on the phone directly persuaded me to quit. To be honest, the plot is already very neat, but if you insist on imposing a background setting, it seems very abrupt. Isn't it also telling the readers that you have to limit the number of words? Taking a step back, I can understand the number of words in daily writing. I am afraid that there will be plots such as conspiracy and revenge later on, which will be very uncomfortable. The above are the two points that I think make me feel uncomfortable. I don't know how the author did the structure. My suggestion is that the background must be explained clearly in the first five chapters. After all, the plot begins to unfold after chapter 5, and adding more settings will appear disharmonious. Other theoretical data can be adjusted slowly, and even if it is not serious, readers will not care much. That's it, I hope the author gets better and better.

It would be much better if the author did not add that divine power will be deducted if the wish fails. Now that I have read Chapter 46, I have found many poisonous points. 1. That drinking gambler, you are a bit poisonous, but you can still bear it. It is true that people who are not from my species have different hearts, but you also have to look at the situation. In the case of the appearance of an extraordinary creature, which Guo Jia would do something to Shenlong because Shenlong punished an ordinary person. 2. Although the video sent to the little loli was deleted, it should be retained in the database. If you don't want to solve it, this may be a handle. 3. Expanding the scale and allowing Shenlong Pen to appear is even more of a sign of dementia. Can your wisdom alone compare to the wisdom of the whole world? As long as one person reports it, the Guo Jia machine will start and immediately analyze your action pattern clearly. And as long as Guo Jia knows about this, it will definitely be possible to find hundreds of people for experiments. When the time comes, a volunteer will repeatedly wish to become a god. Will you refuse or agree? Don't underestimate human wisdom. Judging from the current situation of the protagonist, it is estimated that within a week of the release of the Shenlong Pen, it will become like the Great Shenlong at the beginning.

If you can make a wish, refer to the Dragon Ball fandom. Many authors set that the creator of Dragon Ball: the God of Earth, had too low combat power when making it, resulting in the dragon being too weak. Then, when the protagonist makes a wish, he will add a restriction: realize his wish under the maximum power of Shenlong. For example, increase my IQ and give me some knowledge under the maximum power of Shenlong. Or, write directly on the summoning medium: This dragon's abilities are limited, and if your wish is too great, it will become your wish to realize this dragon. Right: Shenlong himself can realize his wish, so why not set an over-limit counter-restriction for the wish-maker: for example, a wish limit of 10 silver, but when more than 5 silver is consumed, the wish-maker will realize one of Shenlong's wishes. Or: Simply transform yourself and pretend to be a certain god who delivers a child. The divine power is single. Moreover, you can set how many people must make a wish together to ensure the success of the gift. For example, if you need 50 silver to deliver a child, the wisher must find someone to provide 100 silver of wishing power. Best: Shenlong sets up a clergy upgrade system by himself, allowing the wishing power to replenish the specific consumption level by level. Adding a mark to mark the firmness of the wisher for a certain wish, screening the market segment of the wisher just like screening customers. That is, do your job before Shenlong does his job. Supplement: Since wish power is vitality, then don't give it to the medium at the beginning. Instead, make a wish for yourself in exchange for money. Directly use your ability to collect wish power, be the middleman yourself, and split it 50-50 with others. There are too many poor people who are short of money but not short of extra willpower. There are many people online. Then you can avoid the biggest restriction of this book. If you don't know it at the beginning, then just try to recover the media.

If this book is not popular, it will be intolerable to heaven. If this post is not accurate, it is a crime worthy of death.

I think we can let Zao Wou-Ki make a statement. I remember that there was a video of the first time he made a wish. At that time, he asked how much the wish could be realized, and then the protagonist said that it would not be realized if it exceeded 1.5 Million. I think it can be explained this way. The primary school student's dragon is generated from the primary school student's wish, and then most of the wish power is used to form the primary school student's dragon. The rest is the funds he uses to realize the primary school student's wish. When other adults make wishes, they steal the primary school student's wish power through a rule bug, so they are punished. It's as if all the primary school students contributed a dollar and then set up a foundation to randomly help primary school students realize their wishes. Most of the money was used to establish the foundation, and the remaining funds were used to realize their wishes. Then the primary school students continued to generate new wishes by injecting funds. When adults make wishes, they steal the foundation's funds and will be punished by the foundation.

To be honest, the author's book is really good, but it's very unfriendly to new readers. For old bookworms like us who read more miscellaneous books, we can probably understand the meaning by writing a paragraph, but for new book friends, they can't understand it at all. I jumped from here to there at once, and I don't know where I went in the middle. Come on, I think this style is good, but the author is really short and weak, and I feel that I can't stand it 🔪

The protagonist of the book is a bit greedy and disgusting. First there is Goldfinger, who summons the dragon. Then the author disgusts the readers and teases everyone about the problem. Then the dragon commits suicide for no reason and treats the readers as fools.

At first I thought it was quite interesting, it was easy to read and funny, and a dragon with a sharp tongue who doesn't play by the rules is also pretty good. But the more I write about it, the more it falls apart. The more I read about it, the more something is wrong. The identity of the protagonist, a federal EK researcher, a mysterious organization, the main plot is too confusing, and the settings are inconsistent. I was confused when I read it. In fact, if the author maintains the previous style, this will be a masterpiece. The author's writing style is not very good, and the connection between the article and the article is not very good, but the ideas are very clear, but I guess the author did not write an outline, and he wanted to write one after another. He was so excited about writing that the readers were confused. The dragon's wish experiment written in the previous article was too different from the ideas in the following article, and the readers must not have a good experience. And there is a problem with the setting of Shenlong. Why does Shenlong give you a free opportunity to make a wish? As a creature in the mysterious world, even in the Dragon Ball world, Shenlong has to collect all seven dragon balls before it can make a wish. Think about it, in the Dragon Ball world, there was a fight for seven dragon balls, and only then did it get a chance to make a wish. Therefore, the setting of Shenlong should be mysterious, powerful, and difficult to obtain opportunities. Why do you need to wholesale wishes to let yourself grow? Moreover, Shenlong died at the hands of the greedy protagonist at the beginning. The protagonist is still wholesale wishes in the human world so that everyone has a chance. Is it because he doesn't die fast enough? The setting will definitely collapse later.

This "researcher" line is really poisonous. The originally light and funny style of writing has completely changed. . .

Writing a novel like this must have been very taxing for the author, and the updates are extremely slow, right?

Maybe everyone feels differently. Anyway, I think this book is pretty rubbish.

In fact, I think you can have double standards for some wishes. Those who want to be gods: Become a god of games, or a god of tumble ropes 🤭, who can do all tumble ropes. Anyway, you didn't say anything about gods. There are many categories of gods. You can also turn him into a statue of the Three Pure Ones, the Jade Emperor, or God. This is another way of becoming a god. If you want endless money: just adjust the gold coins of his game account to unlimited. How simple. Is there any type of money? If you want real money, that's fine. Give him a printing press, and he can have as much currency as he wants, and give him whatever currency he wants. You say whether this is endless money, you can print it as you wish. There is no problem in printing 1,000 trillion. This is a real money printing machine, and the money printed is also real money, because you are sent from the mint 😁. Those who want to be immortal: freeze him instantly. Do you think he is immortal? His appearance will remain unchanged after hundreds of thousands of years. You can also try turning him into a plant or something, which will also make him immortal. Or you can misinterpret the time of immortality and add an hour to your life span. I think it means you have immortality. I think you will live forever if you live for 80 years. Anyway, when Shenlong fulfills his wish, it's not the person making the wish who thinks it, it's the Shenlong's feeling. Shenlong thinks that if you live forever, you will live forever. Have you set a limit on how long you should live? Those who want to be the owner of the Wishing Dragon: give him a life-size Wishing Dragon doll, it will be called the Wishing Dragon, and now you are its master. If not, let's be the master of infinite 0.000001 Seconds. I guess he didn't say forever. You can also let him have a dream, in which he becomes the master of the dragon. Those who want world peace: The simplest thing is, if there are no more people, then there will be peace. You must know that people are very fragile, and a virus can kill them. What a T virus comes with it.

What is the purpose of this book? Is it a disgusting reader? ps If you don't do anything well, you will turn into a garbage dragon. Its combat power is weaker than that of ordinary people, and its lifespan is only a few years. The most important thing is that every ten days, you will be blackmailed with mandatory tasks, haha

What the heck is Noah coming out? It's all foggy. It's best to change the protagonist's identity to an ordinary person. If it's some bullshit mysterious organization or some bullshit genius, I'm sorry, but this book will most likely never be used again. This routine was written ten years ago and is now synonymous with trash novels. Personally, I think it's well written now, but in your latest chapter, some of the protagonists are disgusted after looking at the lofty background. I really don't want to add a rat excrement to a good pot of soup

To be honest, this book has collapsed. At the beginning, the protagonist is a poor loser who doesn't even have 1,000 yuan. Later, he becomes the leader of some WC research institute, and then travels through the world of martial arts. The author probably has no outline. He writes whatever comes to mind. I have been reading novels for 15 years, and I can see that there are no more than 10 novels. You can count this as one book. To be honest, there is no main plot in a novel.

This cover has a lot of starting points recently.

This setting is not bad (≧∇≦*) Transforming into a dragon... It feels very powerful

The author completely thinks that a dragon that has lived for hundreds of thousands of years is not as intelligent as an ordinary person. It really makes me laugh to death. They say that it takes how many decades for a person to become a mature person? A million-year-old dragon doesn't understand these things. It really makes me laugh to death. Can't dragons also stay in the human world? Then Shenlong doesn't understand things in the human world, doesn't it understand today's human beings? It was really hilarious.

The author is awesome, but I feel like I'm going bald

Useless to humans, so disappear. . . . Ugh... When I saw this question, I was very confused about the complexity of human nature...

Is there a group? Suddenly I saw that other novels have group 1 group 2 .

Let's talk about your opinions, 1: Unsatisfactory, the protagonist is too aggrieved and very annoying to read. 2: There is no main line, and it is completely impossible to see what the meaning is. 3: The protagonist has no ability to act independently and is led by the author. Advantages: The setting is novel and the author writes with great care.

Updates are a bit slow. The idea is good, if you write it down like this, your results will be very good. . If the updates are slow, the book club will lose a lot.

A good book, but the author also wastes his hair

Make a fake summoning medium. After being summoned, it is projected over and after confirming the wish. Just replace the fake ones with the real ones.

The author is a ruthless person

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I discovered that the protagonist's so-called ability to make wishes and fulfill wishes is the ability to trade whether one wants or not. Talking about trading is an exaggeration. The protagonist is like a slave wage earner. If he is not careful, he will die 🪖

Thinking too much, Shenlong can just change the protagonist to a useless personality without harming the protagonist and without violating the protagonist's subjective wishes 🤭