Trembling High in the Sky

I have always felt that unlimited streaming is a very friendly way of writing for authors. Because it is difficult to write a long novel, it is very easy for the combat power to collapse, the plot to be repeated, the main line to be unclear, etc. Infinite streaming allows the author to divide a long story into many short stories, making it easier to improve the quality of the story, and occasionally it can be adjusted at any time if it is written crookedly. But. . . But this book subverted my understanding. The main plot disappeared after one hundred chapters. No one knew what the protagonist was going to do or what the author was going to say. A survival game that has long since lost the pressure to survive? Watch the protagonist Long Aotian experience various lives? Having sex with various women? Eight of the ten stories have no beginning or end. Here are two hellish scripts (pure water word count), and there are two "forced stops by the mysterious boss". If it doesn't work, reset the plot again, and let the protagonist be the director of two chapters. Anyway, however fragmentary, there are only a handful of complete plots. The combat power is not broken, it is completely meaningless. 3,000 Words. The protagonist goes from an ordinary person to the limit of human beings. Brainwashing is useless. Beating dozens of people by one person is like chopping melons and vegetables. After reading nearly a million words, the biggest crisis that the protagonist encounters, I personally feel that at the beginning, a rich second-generation car hits him with a car 😅. Writing so much is just to vent, after all, I spent a lot of money and time, and the result turned out to be such a bad book, I am not willing to accept it But probably no one will read this book review, so it doesn't matter 😴

I don't really care about the character of the protagonist. Although his character is too frivolous, too unstable and mature, too gangster, and too scumbag, it just makes people uncomfortable, but it's still tolerable. But the emotional scenes are too inexplicable. It's really confusing. I really have a lot of question marks 😅

It's too slow to enter the plot after ten chapters, and the beginning is too confusing. To sum up, I found myself on a stone pillar. After a few days, I almost hit the plane and was finally picked up by a helicopter. After a meal, we entered the Waxman Museum. Ten chapters have passed. Chapter 2.3 Is actually enough. Being too slow is a serious form of reader screening.

Another reader is discussing the issue of whether to collapse or not. In fact, I never felt that the plot of Lao Mo was broken, but some readers may not agree with the direction. Moreover, no matter which one is written to the end, if you want to continue writing, you can definitely add another million words. In terms of plot, there is no dead end at all. As long as the old devil is patient, no matter how against his will, no matter how uncomfortable it is, as long as the subscription is barely enough, and he insists on showing the plot from beginning to end, and is not in a hurry to cut off the meat and start a new book, he will most likely achieve a qualitative leap, realize the accumulated popularity, and become a god in one battle. The distance between the old devil and becoming a god is actually just a matter of gritting one's teeth and insisting on completing the book thoroughly.

The book is a good book, but there is a gap in the middle of it. I should be able to say that I am a genuine reader, but I have not read many chapters so far, and I buy back chapters of the books I read every week, so don't laugh at my fandom. I feel that I may not read it later Mainly I want to ask the author, do you want to write a short story or a suspense story? You have writing skills and you dote on your fans, but doting too much on your fans will cause your writing to fluctuate. If the first part is a delicacy that tastes good then in the middle period it becomes a delicacy. After a few bites, you suddenly bite into something that doesn't taste good. But either you can't eat it, or it's hard to swallow compared to the previous part. It's like cutting one's throat When you persist and take two bites, you have become accustomed to this feeling. Even if the pain is a bit irritating, you suddenly have a delicious bite, but now you are used to the not-so-palatable taste, and you will feel pleasure in your body As a result, you are beaten back. The reality is the same The summary is quite simple. The book is a good book, but the position is not firm, and the writing style fluctuates between high and low. A book that was originally considered a good work has been messed up in this way, causing the two sides to be inhumane, and the book is very uncomfortable to read I hope the author can stick to his own opinions. , Write with your own heart, so as to "pamper the fans" and listen to the fans' suggestions to change your own style, in fact, it is irresponsible to the fans and yourself Leaving this comment does not have too many suggestions, sorry, I just hope that after reading it, it will be helpful to your current unstable thoughts.

This is a world where only death is real and everything else is false. At first, it gave me a feeling like the first season of Sword Art Online. In SAO, only death is real. But later, I found that it was more cruel than Sword Art Online, because the system of Sword Art Online is based on rules, but Studio City does not follow rules at all, you can do whatever you want. Almost 99% of people who turn into sculptures will not be saved, and they will immediately die. As for the living people, they are deceitful and shameless. They survived by losing their humanity and gradually became supporting roles, protagonists and even movie kings. But what's the use? For the bosses in the film and television city, these so-called "movie kings" are more like the Dou Di Tianzun in the novel. They are omnipotent in the novel, but they can never hurt the people who read the novel. They are really worse than ants, because the ants still have the possibility of hurting the boss. So this novel is too desperate and aggrieved from the perspective of the protagonist. But looking at the problem from another angle, for the protagonist, isn't the author the CEO of the film and television city, and the readers who spend money are the shareholders of the film and television city? Isn't it a bit cool to think of yourself as the boss? For readers, the protagonist can never escape the movie city! Haha, the author really knows how to tell stories.

This book is one of the best online suspense novels. The main plot of this novel is clear, unlike other novels that have too many auxiliary plots. Moreover, the author's writing style is also excellent, and his control of the plot is just right. Whenever he needs to suppress emotions, he expresses them to his heart's content, without delaying the plot at all. Each character in the novel has his own characteristics. To sum up, the novel is very, very good. The only flaw is that I haven't read it yet.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years. I have read hundreds of novels. Currently, there are fewer and fewer novels that I can read. There is a serious book shortage! I accidentally turned to Lao Mo's Trembling Sky, and it was really eye-catching. This kind of science fiction suspense work is exactly what I like. The author's outstanding creativity and good writing style also attracted me very much. For Shuhuang, every work that catches your eye should be cherished and cared for, and ordering all of it is a must! Support genuine editions, support good works, and support authors! 😊😊😊

Overall, it looks okay, and the author's update efficiency is very fast Poison points 1. The points you need to pay to become a movie king are not as much as buying a year's life 2. The protagonist's golden finger can easily suck the protagonist's life for two years with a script, which makes me feel that the god of death is the king of the cinema. A few more ghost scripts will make the protagonist invincible. (When you kill the Ghost Governor, you are told that you can drop 7 million life sources) 3. The story of Shizhu, which I like to watch the most, is not as delicately written as the previous one, and has been covered in three hasty chapters 4. There are more and more female protagonists in the expansion, and there is a trend of starting a harem, which is very funny. In such a dangerous environment, one can still fall in love with another. . .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              5. If Director Liu is really badass and can make buggy things like the Grim Reaper, why is he still a small director? He should be the big boss behind the scenes, right? The above is purely a personal opinion. I hope the author will not directly make the protagonist invincible. . . . . .

Believe me, it's really beautiful. The author's depiction of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when the Calabash Man goes to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song was right to kill Qiao Feng? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, how could Yang Guo's hand be chopped off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have thought about Guo Ya and Linghu Chong occupying the mountain as king, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character description of the protagonist is very good.

It's super awesome in the early stage, but it's terrible in the later stage. I hope there will be less noobs pretending to be slapping people in the face Others don't quite understand, I hope the author can work harder

It was the first time I read Lao Mo's book, and I found several problems after reading it in one go. First, the plot passages in Lao Mo's book are either brain-burning and abusing the mainstream, or they are brainless and refreshing. I feel like I can't integrate them all. Often after reading dozens of chapters, the style of painting suddenly changes and starts to burn my brain, and after reading dozens of chapters, it starts to be brain-burning. This feeling... Is like drinking juice, and the taste of liquor comes out after drinking it hard. Second, when I saw the script of Time Prison, I felt very good in the early stage, but after writing it, I felt that Lao Mo just wanted to give the protagonist more abilities, which was a little bit broken. Third, when I saw the plot of King of Forces, I basically fast-forwarded through it. To be honest, it was a bit embarrassing. It felt like a great man with an IQ of 160 or above and a doctorate degree had to pretend to be mentally retarded. That's all. Finally, I offer ten monthly tickets. I hope that the old devil will become more and more amazing as he writes, and become a god with one book 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

It looks great, I like it very much. I have ordered all of them. Please give me more details.

The first few chapters were confusing, but once we got to the wax museum it became much more exciting.

Lao Mo's later novels have less detailed descriptions, such as the mysterious computer and the Trembling Sky, which give people a strange sense of alienation (I'm not criticizing, Lao Mo can write five chapters on one pillar). Whether it is the mysterious realm or the script, it is extremely dangerous and needs to be dealt with with 120% of energy. After completion, the protagonist and readers will be deeply impressed by it, but this sense of alienation makes people feel unreal when recalling it. I think the protagonist may have asked himself, are those experiences really mine? Especially the weird realm where the protagonists and Yi Yi (whose name I can't remember clearly) have spent most of their lives in The Computer, makes people sigh and feel an unreal sense of alienation. In both books, the protagonists experience all kinds of lives. There is the Strange Realm where Yiyi is impoverished and the protagonist is an alcoholic in extremely poor physical condition. There is also the Strange Realm where he transforms into a tree man and spends his life with the tree-man princess. It can be said that the protagonist lives a much more exciting life than ordinary people; but if it is just this, the mysterious computer is not enough to become a sacred book in my mind. I have read not too many novels, but most of them are forgotten after reading them. Only the mysterious computer will often be recalled. I am not a person with a very good memory. I can only remember a general outline of most things in the past, but very few details. I often doubt the authenticity of these memories. This feeling has become more and more intense in recent texts, which I have never seen in other novels (it seems that Tomb of Gods has a little bit of this feeling).

Lao Mo's books are indeed good to read. Weird Computer is the most exciting. Who said Lao Mo's books are for the niche audience? Every book I read is wonderful.

This book is still very exciting, especially the struggle between exploiting bugs and system debugging. I read it at two or three in the morning. But it is still difficult to be scary all the time. I don't know if the author has the confidence to go all the way. If the quality of the suspense and thriller can be guaranteed, I would like to continue to subscribe 🤭

I had seen the Hell Show before, and now I have seen a single chapter of Lao Mo and came back to read it. From my current point of view, this book still has potential. I read it almost to the end in one go. But there are also a lot of things worthy of criticism (which is why I haven't caught up with the update before). For example, the narrations and side descriptions of supporting characters are often embarrassing. If you bring yourself into the scene, you will find that they are incongruous. That is, these are not the "dialogues" we are familiar with, but some explanatory sentences, or even some straightforward "first suppress and then raise" scenes. It's not that these cannot be included, but if they account for too large a proportion, it will cause some damage to the reading experience, especially the latter. I will post now, and I may continue to write (edit) when I come back after reading the latest. I also hope everything goes well for Lao Mo.

The author is worried about why there are less follow-up votes, because everyone really likes Shuangwen Main points 1. Your vote after forcing King of Kings made everyone think that your future plots are all ghost movies, but I still like all the films. 2. Are all the votes cast as follow-up votes? I'm not, I read free novels. If I vote, it must be a ghost movie 3. This has to do with the plot. When writing ghost movies now, some viewers don't like ghost movies, especially when reading novels at night. They will wait until you finish writing the ghost movie and start filming the next plot.

There is a chapter in the front where the protagonist suddenly writes about his doubts about his own existence, his doubts about his memory, and his doubts about the real existence of the world. The writing is very abrupt and has no foreshadowing at all. It seems like the author is trying to elevate the world view, which is too blunt. Forget it, just treat it as the protagonist's bold guess. But where did the subsequent careful verification go? When supernatural forces appear in the daily world, the first thing to doubt is the three views, which are caused by insufficient understanding of the world, rather than doubting the authenticity of the world. Doubting whether a world is real or not is because the rules of the world are not self-consistent, and it is the accumulation of all kinds of disharmony, advancing step by step. When you have doubts, you can either try hard to find evidence in subsequent copies to confirm your suspicions. Either you consciously create disharmony and paradox, causing the false world to collapse (the chess pieces jump out of the chess board and compete with the players). As a result, a packaged version disrupted the rhythm and the overall foreshadowing, creating a thrilling and suspenseful atmosphere. After finally pretending that the book is over, I started playing amnesia jokes again. . . So far, I feel that there is no main line, or that the main line is chaotic and uncontrollable. There are too many things I want to express, but there is no order. Just like the anime "Problem Children from Another World", there are too many settings and it is too confusing. In upgrade novels such as cultivating immortals, the process is unknown and the ending is known. It depends on the author's imagination, arranging unexpected and reasonable adventures, with a clear main line and clear organization. The infinite flow of this book should be that the process is known, but the ending is unknown. What you can see is that the author reveals the final answer through each copy, like solving a puzzle. The main line is also clear and clear. As for now, tsk tsk tsk

It's too short and weak. The plot feels tired.

Um... Okay, I want to say that you subscribe until the end of the last script. After this script started to lose its memory and the chapter names were all the same, I lost the urge to subscribe. I haven't read it in the past few days and have been waiting for the new script! I don't know if anyone is the same as me!

Come on, boss (ง •̀_•́)ง

An old Qidian reader would like to give some advice to Lao Mo. If you don't like it, don't comment! I have read a lot of books, both pirated and genuine. From the beginning, I only liked books in one category, and now I like all categories. Due to my career, I always subconsciously research why people like this book when I read it. I forgot when I came into contact with Lao Mo's book. I am almost 40 now. When I first came into contact with Lao Mo's book, I was amazed. I watched it almost until three or four in the morning for many days, so I will be very busy at work tomorrow, but I still can't help but read it. My favorite is the book "The Wilderness", but I like the beginning chapters even more, even though I have finished reading the whole book I started reading Trembling Sky in the past few days, and I was amazed by the setting at the beginning, but I still wanted to say something when I saw the old devil's painful persistence. Old Devil, you should stick to your own path and not be swayed by comments. Although this is related to your family's livelihood, the taste of the public is unlimited. You should care more about the thoughts of people who really like you. It's very simple, or the people who won't be left behind within 100 chapters of reading your book from the beginning In fact, the advantages and disadvantages of your book are very obvious, because the age of the readers Problems with numbers and experience lead to the fact that you don't know what readers like I think the struggle setting at the beginning is perfect and the sense of substitution is strong, but this substitution is always forcibly interrupted by you. This is the reason why readers abandon the book. I couldn't stand it when I saw the protagonist lose his memory I couldn't stand the chapters that were pretentious before, because you interrupted my reading experience. But it is undeniable that there are still many readers who like this kind of plot So why can't you integrate these two parts? I guess some people can't stand it when the protagonist gets older, especially after knowing that he can't recover, so these are the shortcomings of interrupting people's sense of involvement The protagonist is growing up and getting stronger, and there are several confidants in the process. Brothers, you should also keep pretending to be cool with normal thinking instead of being brainless. Amnesia, aging, time travel, blocking golden fingers, etc. All interrupt the sense of immersion, because many people in the starting point actually want to read cool articles, but they don't like being brainless And your initial setting has actually brought in human nature. Those introverts or pessimistic people like to encounter things constantly in a small space. The love continues to break through, and the big plot slowly unfolds Infinite Streaming actually unfolds each scene with the continuous acquisition of the protagonist, and you give the protagonist gains and losses in each scene, and once you lose it, many people will not like it I believe that many people who like the Old Magic Book are because the protagonist went to a mysterious place at the beginning, and everything was unknown. , The protagonist figures everything out step by step. Although you also wrote it like this, the risk of you constantly changing scenes is very high, because readers have different tastes and they prefer immersive reading. If you suddenly let him jump out, he will not be able to read anymore Finally, I wish Lao Mo will continue to double his income as he writes more and more One of your life-long fans.

The stone pillar character drawing I drew did not pass the review. . Then put it here

I was shocked in the early stages, but I was confused in the middle and later stages. It didn't affect me even if I watched it completely. Are these two authors?

Old devil, you can't write a book like this. You are not making money, you are challenging the readers' bottom line of tolerance for you. I know it's difficult for you, you have to make money, but you have to make money comfortably, right? A lot of the plots are indeed good, but the interruptions and the sense of reading are too bad. I watched it for a few days and subscribed until the part where I was pretending to be a slap in the face, but I gave up, just like the previous book "Gold Medal Anchor". You are not challenging the reader's bottom line, you are tearing the reader's bottom line apart, stamping on the ground, and then kicking it into the pit. Lao Mo, you are a very clever author, but you lack the ability to organize stories. We, readers, are not tools to give you money for no reason. I will never read your future books again. I will never see you again. Bye.

If you keep writing it well, it will be another masterpiece. Don't let it collapse halfway again.

If this book is written at this pace, it will definitely be a masterpiece, I say.

Why spend money to get the first place on the list? Didn't Lao Mo say that the family is in a very difficult situation? It seems that the author is no longer called Lao Mo. Did he change his name or someone else? It's so strange. Can anyone explain it? . .