Desperate Mobile Game

The early part of the book is very good. Different from other online books, the interaction between reality and games in the book is a novel and interesting setting. After 150 chapters, entering the base battle completely becomes the description of "Honor of Kings". After killing Supervisor Luo, the protagonist becomes the next Supervisor Luo, and his personality changes too much. Quick, it should be that the game world and the real world both influence each other, and the background setting is too big, and it turns out that it is useless at all. It might be better if the scope is narrowed and the growth line is lengthened, the divine domain forces are removed, and it becomes a battle between the light brain and the human resistance, and a little apocalyptic setting is added.

I can't understand it when I see it later.

I was fascinated by the first hundred chapters. Although I have seen similar games before, it is quite interesting to connect to the end of the world and bring the economy. I feel that the Demon Labyrinth RPG in the back is a bit redundant. It is said that the strength is a hundred times different and it can torture people. It is very messy. The relationship between the characters is wrong. It is still acceptable. It is a pity that the theme is good. The death arcade with the same theme is relatively good.

I feel that this book is too slow to develop, and if mobile game employees don't want to work, tell the leaders first, so that the game has time to recycle the characters [and then kill the employees who don't want to work? I guess the game won't let people be exposed. In a certain chapter, someone didn't want to do it and just caused trouble in the game and then the real person died]. I think this setting is weird.

I, the old Shennong, was almost poisoned to death. This book is poisonous to death. The beginning was simply speechless. For example. The most ridiculous thing is the Luo family's attitude towards the protagonist. . With the power of the Luo family, it would be easy to find out whether the child was born to your daughter. As a result, Luo Ye's brother finally believed it. The Luo family really believed that the child was born to the protagonist and Luo Ye. . . And there's no need to check at all, right? The Luo family can't tell whether Luo Ye is pregnant or not? Or does Luo Ye live alone?? ? The Luo family really believed it, and instantly felt that their IQ had been insulted.

I'm blown away, I'm blown away. First of all, I want to make it clear to people who are 17 or 18 years old. People of our age are really not as silly and sweet as the protagonist, and they have never done anything illegal. Most of them, and of course the protagonist is a small number, I won't say anymore. As for the protagonist's violation of the law, he did not fulfill his right to education at the beginning and used unfair means to raise his children. This will most likely result in the children losing their household registration and not even being able to go to school when they grow up, thus harming the children's own interests. Know the law and do not break it, start from yourself.

To summarize, after the protagonist came into contact with this game, three supporting characters appeared who received lunch boxes. These three supporting characters also perfectly reflected the ugliness and beauty of human nature. Taolin is a profit-seeking person, but he is not at all disciplined and is a gangster who has failed in his career. Luo Jing is a lazy hypocrite who fantasizes about freedom and enjoyment. His family life is very false and he takes advantage of the woman's feelings unilaterally. Luo Xiangchun is a person who works seriously and responsibly, abides by his duties, and has a beautiful vision for his family. No matter whether his career is ruined three or four times by gifts from his woman, he will eventually return to his homeland and still hold hope and love for his family. (This can be seen from Luo's vision when he died on the train in the novel) The author uses these three characters, two negative and one positive, to accurately reflect this part of society and family business. It also cleverly uses the temperaments of the two villains to set off the positive characters, but even the good guys on the positive side cannot withstand the ravages of reality and still die at the feet of fate, which also expresses the author's inner helplessness towards the real society. Although there is not much emphasis on the supporting characters, which is not as good as a textbook prose novel, and the praise of the characters is not obvious, it still makes people feel that the author has good intentions from the starting point. Come on, author. 🤫🤫🤫👍👍👍

Some ideas for Lao Mo's reference. Showing off and slapping someone in the face is a routine, but the routine is not static. When it becomes outdated, it needs to be changed. These chapters in the world can be written like this: the protagonist meets Liu Qian, and Liu Qian is shocked. How can such a strong person come from this world? The protagonist also wonders where Liu Qian's steel power comes from. Liu Gan's few words make people imagine endlessly. It deepens the speculation about the truth of the other world. Exorcism can be used as a carrier, mixed with mutual temptations between Jin and Liu, each with his own merits, doubling doubts. Then there is a sudden wave, Luo Ye's appointment, and the dance are just the beginning. Luo Yi's wife is kidnapped, and various devastating and unfortunate news are released. Then the protagonist hesitates to rescue, and gradually it is revealed that Guo Tian seems to have special powers, making the protagonist even more doubtful whether the other world is just a mission. He even wanted to give up rescuing Gu Jiaojiao, but he couldn't bear to let her fall into the devil's cave. In the end, due to the acquaintance between Jin and Liu, the superpowers of the protagonist were easily solved, and he lightly used the fact of grassroots counterattack to slap the face and ridicule, and replaced the pretense to slap in the face with the harshness of the world. It also adds to the suspense of the world. This set will be far longer than the current one, and it is also the method that Lao Mo is good at, and it is not a cliché. I hope Lao Mo writes more and more exciting stories!

When you find a baby in the snow, wouldn't your first reaction be to call the police? Why did you get into trouble with the welfare home? If the police are called, they will at least conduct a DNA test on the baby, investigate the surrounding surveillance, and see if there are any missing persons reports... This large series of procedures must at least go through. And the male protagonist is only 17 years old, a minor, a high school student, and he decided to give up his studies and move away from home in order to become a baby daddy... Forget it, there are too many flaws, and I was persuaded to quit after two chapters.

This book is a one-size-fits-all: a normal two- or three-character name is required, and a few sentences of description of personality and specialties can be included. Because it is a thriller novel, most of the supporting characters will not end well and will die tragically in various ways. The author does not care about killing or burying the characters, so be careful when entering the trap. 😁

When writing 5v5, I posted a post saying that the more elements there are, the more it will collapse. Ban me directly. It's so funny.

What fascinates me are the plots written by scholars, the whole book "The Computer", especially the gas station, the soul cabin and the toilet (I forget the specific plot, it is about playing with mobile phones in the toilet), and the castle plot in "The Prison". But this kind of plot has always been popular but not popular. In the era of high traffic and fast pace, fast food and entertainment articles are doing well. A thousand fans are not worth 10,000 people passing by looking for entertainment. But to be honest, scholars are relatively weak in writing pretentious articles. I personally think that scholars' abilities are ranked as follows: suspense and thriller > ambiguous and erotic > forced pretentiousness. Compromising to Xiaobai for the sake of livelihood has caused some of the books he once wrote to look different. The scholar must have been heartbroken. But now scholars are doing great in writing cool articles, which can capture a part of the public. Then, suspenseful articles are like condiments and can be accepted by many people. I write what I am good at while ensuring the survival of my work. It took me a long time to work out the appropriateness. Thank you for your hard work. So, book friends: If you want to write a good book, you must first survive. To survive, you need many readers, so it is necessary to write a book that is pretentious (at least before you truly become a god). For those of you who like refreshing novels, please be more patient when it comes to a plot like this that seems to be dragging out and confusing. The refreshing feeling after writing this kind of plot is really great. If it is well written, it is like the ones mentioned in the opening article. It is so refreshing that it can be remembered for years. There are too many pretentious articles out there, please try a different one, dear.

I've never given up on a book, and this is the first one I can't stand. Since it is classified as suspense and thriller, it should be suspense and thriller. The supporting characters are all mentally retarded and will die. Forcibly slap the protagonist in the face. The character changes abruptly and the plot takes a strange turn. Chapter 430, while looking forward to the next chapter not being so disgusting, I read it with the feeling of eating shit. I just want to ask the author, can you read a book like this yourself?

Halfway through writing, I couldn't take it anymore. Well. The second half is all a mess.

I read the book reviews and also read the previous one or two. This routine of raising a daughter is indeed better, but there are still pitfalls. Firstly, there is not enough reason for adopting a daughter just because Pig's Feet and the school beauty are so young. Secondly, the first one or two months of adoption were not written down in detail, so I couldn't fully appreciate the reluctance of Pig's Feet and the school belle to let go of their daughter (to be honest, from an onlooker's perspective, it was a bit silly).

At the beginning, there was the happy start of the game, and then the protagonist started the adventure game mode. I thought he would continue to take risks, but who knew that it was later changed to an immersive adventure game, and then I added a few games of "Who is the Undercover" on a whim, and then I was dissatisfied with the game mode and added a turn-based game. Later, I actually found a UFO that traveled back to reality from the game world, and a big boss came back to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and there were also decryption games interspersed in the middle. I haven't finished reading it yet. Are there any game modes that I want to add later 🙂

The first four hundred chapters are truly a masterpiece, but then they become more and more crumbling. What a pity.

. . . The idea is good, although the early stage is a bit cliche, but it's still manageable. . After it was released, the word count began to slowly increase, and in the middle period, it started to collapse. It was almost impossible to see what the plot was, and it was a mess. . . I can't even talk about the little white text. . . I just feel like I just write whatever I want and it's a waste of creativity. . .

Haha, luckily I abandoned it at King of Glory.

When I saw Chapter 241, I said I couldn't stand it anymore. I don't know why this book was classified into the suspense category. From the beginning, the subject matter was quite attractive. As I read it, it started to deviate from the main line, until pesticides appeared, and then I felt nothing at all. Looking at the comments, I found that many people said that it would be more tragic after Chapter 400. I admire those who can read it after Chapter 400.

After reading it, is the author unable to continue writing? The finale ended with a confused look on my face. To be honest, I wanted to beat the author to death. Why didn't he continue writing if the subject matter is so good?

The front is fine, but the back is getting more and more watery.

It was pretty good in the early stages, but it fell apart after a few hundred chapters. I don't want to say anything bad, so let's just leave it at that, ugh...

Everyone, please understand, Lao Mo has too many distractions, and sometimes he is very helpless. The brothers and sisters who support him probably won't care about these details. Just tell everyone a joke when Lao Mo is tired from writing. Even if he writes more than a dozen chapters in seven or eight days, it will only cost one or two yuan, right? Just stay calm and wait for the old devil to hold back his ultimate move.

In fact, the plot is not bad, and I can accept that the character's IQ is not high, but this character's words are too poisonous, and the players don't care, and the NPCs all act like Internet trolls.

The middle and later stages are not a matter of being obsessed or not.. The author has probably given an outline But the writing collapsed in the mid-term,,, The collapse is probably the beginning of materialization. The subsequent plot is very messy In fact, the early stage affects the real setting perfectly, and can even be extended to continue writing instead of intervening in the virtual And the description of the horror atmosphere is very good. I don't know if the author failed to finish the book because of the writing failure, or if something was not laid out well. It's such a pity for this book.

I promised that the heroine would only appear in the show. How many chapters have I read and there are other heroines?

I remember this was not written by "Two-shot Sniper"? There seems to be more than one like this, I remember reading two

At first it looked fine from the beginning, and the setting was good, but it started to get toxic in the middle and I couldn't watch it at all.

Lao Mo's new book, I picked up a piece of wilderness and learned about it