Open That Door

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There are parts of this story that are outrageous. . . Isn't that teacher's setting so stupid that he really just invites a licking dog to go home to cook for him and grade his homework? But he couldn't stand it when he forced the male protagonist to transfer to another school, tsundere? Also, which female protagonists should I accept? After writing these, don't tell me that you won't accept them in the end. Don't be impotent Last point: I guess your idea is to write about the two worlds at the same time. At first, I thought it would be better to have less of the other world But after reading the latest chapter, I feel that it is still okay. I still wear more clothes But it would be better to reduce the description of that side a little bit?

Is this a reimagined "school beauty's personal bodyguard" type article? It's too disturbing.

The story is very good, and the character creation is also online I am very curious about how the author writes about the intersection of the two worlds. It seems that the combat power of the two worlds is obviously not proportional, and the introduction is relatively small. It has only briefly mentioned that the magician opens the portal, but this magician is a bit watery. , What is extraordinary and powerful is not his own strength, but that he can leverage greater power. The combat power of science + magic is not 1+1, and of course it is not 1x1🤭. The author can refer to some Cheng** and so on. Scientific cultivation of immortality is the kingly way. I don't know how the author handles these things. It's easy to write and fall into trouble, and it's easy to meet the river crab master I also feel that Pig's Knuckle is timid in dealing with emotions and does not express his own value. Writing this way will inevitably lead to conflicts with the heroine's family (several women currently appearing are powerful on the surface, but in fact have no support). The author intends to rely on the interests of the development of the two worlds to win over? (There are no signs of self-building strength, and his own strength is not like Chen Beixuan, who can build a country by himself, or he still plans to rely on true love 🤭🤭). According to the main line, Pig's Feet is destined to become stronger, but the truly strong heart has not yet been seen. Although Pig's Feet looks strong now, its tenacity is still relatively naive and has nothing to do with being strong. The character of a leader has not been shown. I feel that with the current progress, pig's feet cannot take on the important task of saving that world.

The protagonist should be thinking about how to pretend to be a ghost and practice elixirs on Earth. The protagonist, the mage, should have no problem pretending to be a qigong master. The poor population and productivity of the alien world cannot establish a democratic system. Rebuilding the empire is the most reasonable choice. However, the protagonist does not have the ability and mentality to become an emperor. He cannot control the travelers from the earth, so he can only fight against foreigners and must first annihilate some of them.

I feel like your book should be classified in the urban category🙂

Finally a new heroine appears. . . Gkd Hurry up and collect it

Suddenly I discovered a problem. There is something wrong with the setting of this mage. QWER will run out of mana after losing a set of skills? If you can't kill others within seconds, will you wait to die? Let's change it later

This novel is amazing, it made me travel through time, the style was ten years ago 😰🤫

The heroine here is a thief, a chicken, and a tsundere. Can't stand it.

The writing is great, I hope you can read mine

It's very well written. I don't know what others think, but I've taken it in anyway. It's very innovative and creative, and the writing is smooth. I'll help you advertise elsewhere.

I give you the recommendation vote. The author writes well. I have 150,000 people to help you post the recommendation. It's too young to say.

The mana consumption of the mage is too high. If you can't use a few skills, you will be empty of mana and you will be at the mercy of others.