Urban Shapeshifting Druid

I gave up on the last book a little bit before I reached the end, and I feel like this book has the same result (The following contains spoilers) . . . . . . . . . . The existence of the protagonist makes me unable to see the emotions that a character should have. He is just a tool for the main plot with a lot of emotions, including the bald man in the last book. The protagonist has always promoted the plot with a detached spectator perspective. This is the case in the main world and the mission world. His existence cannot bring me any emotional fluctuations. He cannot even feel the most basic human emotions. We call other books monk novels. It means that the protagonist in the book does not fall in love; This book is good. Not only does Monk Shangwen not fall in love, he does not even have the most basic need to socialize with other characters. Except for the advancement of the main plot, the world in the book is the same with him or without him. There is no sense of harmony at all. The protagonist is like a stain that should not exist on a white tablecloth. He is not needed at all and is not likable. Reading this book, the protagonist has a sense of alienation from beginning to end. It is very clear and often jumps out to destroy your sense of involvement. And this destruction is not because the protagonist often maintains an animal form, but purely because there is no "complete connection" between this character and other people. "Cause and Effect" For example, in The 4.6 Billion Reprise of Evolution, there is no explicit reference to humans throughout the book, and the protagonist is also a heterogeneous species. However, because the protagonist is connected to other beings in the book, the emotional changes of the protagonist can be clearly seen, so this book has always been very interesting to read. But this one is different. The protagonist of this book cannot see the emotional changes that normal people have at all. The emotions of joy, anger, sorrow, love, hate and fear are not reflected in this character at all. He is just a tool man. I really hope that the author can make this character a little "popular". Even the high-ranking immortal is not like a stagnant water like the protagonist. It is really awkward and tiring to watch.

The author's books have always had a plain, grand style. Although it is not particularly good, it is still very good and has no bad points. It makes me watch every chapter carefully.

This name is problematic. When I first saw the city, I didn't want to click on it. But when I saw the shapeshifting druid, I clicked on it and found that it basically had nothing to do with the city, so I was attracted by the content and continued reading. Urban writing routines are too repetitive, and many books automatically discourage you from reading them as soon as you read the word "urban". This book basically has nothing to do with the city. It is about the system DND class and the content is quite good. I suggest changing the title to a more attractive one, which will be more attractive to readers and more convenient for readers to benefit others.

I feel quite pleasantly surprised that the author wrote about Yi Chun (Yi Qiu's "son" in the Destiny dungeon), because Yi Chun is unwilling to be ordinary, he wants a chance, which was described in the last book. Naturally, I don't want him to be easily taken care of. Yi Qiu is willing to help the lizard mage become a legend (evil mage), and give "son" "Zi" (or the inheritor of will) will not violate his logic at every opportunity, and other readers don't have to worry too much about this book falling into the trap of "I Have a Mighty Dad". The author's writing style will not be like this, and Yi Qiu's logic will not suddenly become like that of Yuanshi Tianzun. Children and grandchildren should be blessed by their own children and grandchildren!

The progress of the book is a bit slow, and the sense of immersion is not fast enough. The protagonist performs a one-man show throughout the whole process, which is too bland and has no elements that make people shine.

It looks really good. . Updates are also really slow

It's great, but it's a bit too prose style, with too many abstract descriptions, which makes it look a bit awkward. Overall, it's an interesting novel. Good luck, author.

Looking at the plot, I don't think it's going to work. The bald orange cat has no chance to appear. I guess it will be a tree-only show in the future. Treants are too strong.

You didn't bring your key when you went out to get groceries, and there's no one at home

The world of this book should be the same worldview as the previous book, with comprehensive network. Assuming this is the case, the protagonist of that book should be the son of Yi Qiu, the protagonist of the previous book, or in other words, the son of Yi Qiu in parallel time and space. How to see it? In Chapters 1026-1029 of the previous book, Yi Qiu experienced an adventure: The Centennial Tomb Keeper. In this incident, Yi Qiu's consciousness spent his whole life in the tributary of destiny, which may also be a parallel world without demons. In this life, he is a teacher and his son is named Yi Chun, which is exactly the same as the information revealed so far by the protagonist of this book. In the first chapter, there is also a murmur that sounds like Yi Qiu, so we guess that Yi Qing is the son of Yi Qiu from parallel time and space!

Is this river wet? The river is wet! The river is extremely wet! ! !

Why is this book written like prose? Nine points of literature and one point of content, often without even a few pages of useful content, just all kinds of rhetorical descriptions.

If you are not an art student, please don't laugh:-D:-D

I have been reading it since I was bald, and I really like it. On the first day of the new book you posted, I read it for ten minutes to invest in the new book. I thought you could change from the increasingly careless writing style of the last book, but the more I read, the more I felt that you were more immersed in it. I was so angry after reading this that I even suspected that you had read too many novels by Guo Jingming and came to take revenge on society. Otherwise, why would your way of writing make my scalp tingle so much? Yi Qiu, online writing and literary youth cannot have both. Can you look at the comment area? I'm not the only one who can't stand it anymore, really, please change it!

Here I am again ~ Airborne directly Come on (๑⃙⃘ᵒ ૩ᵕ๑⃙⃘)♡

How do you manage to read 1 chapter for 10 minutes 😥

Spring moistens things quietly and revives all things. It is the beginning of life. --Yi Chun The scorching sun in summer, the croaking of frogs and the singing of insects are the expression of life. --Yi Xia The red leaves are flying in autumn, and the fallen leaves return to their roots, which is the nirvana of life. --Yi Qiu The snow falls silently in winter and the clouds roll away, which is the tranquility of life. --Yi Dong

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Alas, to be honest, there is nothing I can do about it, but I estimate that this book is worth more than a thousand chapters. Let the epidemic pass quickly and give the bald head more time to write books. By the way, the bald head is still single. If there are female book friends who are also single and want to find a boyfriend, they can go bald. If it works, I will give you a follower 😏

Apart from anything else, I think my prose can be improved several levels after reading this.

Does the author want to go through spring, summer, autumn and winter?

You, the bald monk, became a blockbuster in the city. I always thought that I could write about you becoming a god with your bald head, and I have been looking forward to your novel. After all, the plot is there, the writing is there, and the fan base has brought a large number of readers with the bald head. I didn't expect that you, who had all the conditions to become a god, would wither. This is because you don't want money in front of you. This is what many authors have dreamed of doing.

Did the author use this book to practice writing? I feel like I'm trying too hard, and the language is too complicated. A novel is not prose, and it doesn't need too many gorgeous words. It just needs to be the finishing touch in key parts. The language is better to be concise, and the author's personal feelings don't need to be so many. The truth can be explained, but it can only be reflected by the words and deeds of the characters in the article. Writing a novel in a prose style is too complicated!

Sister is finally back. Wuwuwu It's so uncomfortable to cultivate one's body and mind.

I started to be attracted to Zongwang's The Witch and went back to read the first two books. I couldn't stand the first one, Monk, but this one by Yi Chun was particularly to my liking and I ordered it all. I look forward to continuing the Zongwang series. By the way, the Yi family are very violent.

When will the new book be released? When will my Yidong or Yixia come out?

So? A false dream in the world before the real name appeared? I slowly discovered it after reading Chapter 237. So I can't go back to the first world? . . I still prefer the first world. . . Never mind. . I honestly went to chase witches. .

By the way, can anyone guess the name of the protagonist in the author's next book? 😜 If you guess wrong, please add stupid loli before the ID 😁

If you haven't read the previous book, it will be difficult to lose weight after reading more than a hundred pictures in this one. The author deliberately integrated the systematic things of the previous book, which makes it uncomfortable to read. Forget it, goodbye.

I want a cat vest, so please.