I Seek Immortality in the World of Martial Arts

Since we want the protagonist to develop from a martial arts hero to a fairy hero, then we should not write the protagonist like a clown who always wants to do something beyond his ability: he wants to clear an area, but he causes a mutiny; he has to compete with others and has no backup to protect himself. He relies on on-site adaptability and sacrifices his own swordsmanship to others; he captures the innate grandmaster of the Shenxian Sect, but the method of restraining her is not safe and may attract more masters. Originally, it seemed like the beginning was pretty good. I thought the protagonist would be more intellectually oriented, someone who had no clues, or something like that. Otherwise, what should I do if my plan to ascend the dimension ended up being involved in some bullshit things? I feel like the author can't control it anymore, ugh

The article is not on point, Holy Mother, indecisive, overpowering, and the most egregious one is the challenge of leapfrogging.

There is actually nothing wrong with the protagonist's idea. He seeks invincibility first and then immortality. To create a prosperous martial arts era, he must first be the best in the world, otherwise he has to make wedding clothes for others. However, the disadvantage is that the protagonist in this book has already established his martial arts skills as soon as he appears. This makes people lose the sense of involvement. This is probably why this book is not popular.

Go Holy Mother. Activate the ultimate skill to care for the world and save all sentient beings.

It makes my head hurt to look at it, what the hell is this? A stick in the east and a hammer in the west

What does it take to live forever? The method of immortality in martial arts is to have no leaks in the acupuncture points of the body, perfect internal alchemy, and mental visualization to preserve the spirit. Only when all three are perfect and without leaks can one achieve immortality, and then find a way to refine the immortal nature, or integrate the heaven and earth, or create the inner heaven and earth by oneself, and interact with the outer heaven and earth to baptize it, making it immortal and everlasting.

The promise of cultivating immortals turned out to be a case solved! Selling dog meat on a sheep's head

The IQ is online, which suits my taste. Just try to make waves first. Only when you have the strength can you start making waves. If you don't have the strength, then you are seeking death. It's just that the plot is too compact, it would be nice if it was a bit more routine. I won't talk about other shortcomings. Which book now has no faults? Don't worry about it so much. If you take it seriously, can you still read it? I also agree with the character, if you can be ruthless, be ruthless. Kill if you can, don't be verbose.

This book is well written, the only flaw is that the protagonist's butt is not done right. The evil heretic protagonist thinks that eradication is okay, but it is wrong to think that everything should be in charge of the court and respected by the court. After all, the protagonist is from a sect, and what is within the law is just a fallacy that he feels that he is not controlled, while everyone else must be managed. Just like the ancient imperial court had no justice and much morality at all, there was no difference between soldiers and bandits. This is especially true for ordinary officials. To put it bluntly, people in the martial arts world are just blocking internal conflicts. It is conceivable that all people in the martial arts world can only obey the imperial court. There are no chivalrous and righteous people at all. The most terrifying thing is the harm done to a country by using martial arts for political conspiracy. So, generally speaking, the martial arts and the court should be separated as much as possible and bound by some hidden rules. As for the imperial court, unless it is a modern society from the beginning, spiritual energy recovery can only be achieved. In other eras, it will only cause weapon upgrades. This is why ancient people preferred moral restraint to legal restraint. It's not that it can't be done, it's that it can't be done. It's like killing someone to avenge his father! But his father was killed by bad guys. He must be killed according to the law, but if he is killed, he will lose his heart! People's aspirations and moral values ​​are different. The protagonist entrusting everything to the court is tantamount to tying everyone to the court. Once the court collapses, no matter how moral it is, it cannot be saved. On the contrary, the imperial court was about to be destroyed, and the martial arts people had nothing to do, so they allowed a new imperial court to appear instead of everyone dying together. In general, it is okay for the protagonist to hoe the strong and support the weak, but childish thoughts should not appear behind it. After all, the protagonist threatens the prefect with poison and kills officers and soldiers. According to the law, it is not the killing of the nine tribes. Could it be that the protagonist is allowed to commit suicide, so martial arts know that he is breaking the law, but he still has to act chivalrously.

The protagonist is really disgusted because of whether or not he should kill the woman who was born with magic.

It's no longer possible. Just look back and read it by yourself. Or maybe change a book. It's been written to waste. The writing is okay. The content is a mess. The Holy Mother didn't tell you. You're still meddling in your own business. It's not that the protagonist has already died. He can fight with the innate and make trouble with the juniors.

The article is not on point, Holy Mother, indecisive, overpowering, and the most egregious one is the challenge of leapfrogging.

What is this main line? Messy

Have you read Chapter 70? The magic door inside does not give me the feeling of being a person in the magic way at all. It is more like an experienced baby carefully cultivated in a greenhouse, and the mentality is not at all like those who have climbed up in the magic door. Then the plot about Murong made me confused. In the extraordinary world (even though it's just Wu), what gives you the confidence to do things like this? It's like you and the CEO of a Fortune 500 company. Of course, maybe the protagonist in the author's outline has a very cool background, but we readers don't know it, and the protagonist's IQ and EQ are extremely unstable. Sometimes he is like a child, without logic, without thinking and weighing. It is recommended to read it a few times after each writing to see if the behavior is consistent. There are silly and cute ways of writing for the protagonist, and I am afraid that the protagonist will be alone today and alone tomorrow ps I just looked at it and suddenly thought bb. Mind if you delete it.

The plot is a mess, with no main thread

Long live the Salty Party! The world belongs to our salty party! Anyone who eats tofu without marinating it will be punished! Repent at the stake! The evil sweetie!

Toxic, the main character is nosy. This novel is written in a mess.

After reading the first three or five chapters, I didn't even know who the protagonist was, so he chose a name like this. Looked confused. How could anyone else look down?

This is really the first time I have seen such a good novel with more than 200 chapters but only single-digit reviews. So here comes the question, how did I find this book🤔🤔🤔

Who is the heroine? It's best not to have a heroine. It would be too annoying to watch the harem.

Being chased away like a dog, not knowing what to do.

The breakthrough point for immortality is either through shedding one's skin, alternative immortality, or learning Taoist visualization, Buddhist meditation seals, Miao witchcraft, etc. To increase spiritual power. Through the biological energy of martial arts, adding the spiritual power of the soul, fusion control, the birth of spiritual energy similar to artificial intelligence control, continuous body circulation to repair the body, and initially extending life. In the later stage, improving inner vision will improve Gao's precise control over the body enables him to observe cells, control cell division, break through the limits of cell division, and achieve the goal of greatly extending life. The protagonist's energy is automatically working, so the body is always being repaired. The next step is to keep the soul's exhaustion from declining. I thought of mentioning it... I haven't read the novel, but the idea came to me instantly after reading the title of the book.

This book is a rare fairy grass, welcome to taste it

Alas, it was too little and I listened to it in two days, and it was gone in one day without playing the game. Come on 😡😡😡

Martial arts articles, collect them first and take the time to read them in detail

Personally I think it's okay😄

The book is still worth reading, but it seems that the performance is a bit poor now. Ask the editor to promote the new book, or ask the old author how to attract readers for the new book. There are only a few comments. If this continues, I'm worried that you won't be able to write anymore and will enter the palace.

The book is good, let me recommend it to you.

Capturing the Immortal Clan's daughter, the Innate Queen, is becoming more and more rubbish.

I read the book review and decided not to read it.