The Demon-Eyed Sorcerer

At the beginning, when the protagonist travels back in time and sees the little girl about to be hit by a car, the description is that he says "no" and is filled with anger. I couldn't continue reading immediately. This description is too bizarre.

My impressions based on only reading up to chapter 82: The concept is good, and the world-building is decent. However, the author's skill is lacking, with numerous logical inconsistencies. For example, several Silver-ranked characters are suddenly weakened by a buff and can't even defeat the protagonist, a Black Iron noob.

This is my first time becoming a fan, and there might be some slightly off-putting elements, but as a reader with 100% tolerance for such things, I'm fine. And I happen to like some of the settings. 😄

The protagonist and Lori fought orcs together, so they were comrades-in-arms. Lori even helped the protagonist during the battle. Later, Lori invited the protagonist to join the Revolutionary Army and took him to the academy. This is the background. Against this backdrop, the protagonist discovers a group within the academy recruiting students under the guise of the Revolutionary Army.

I bought it during the limited-time free period, and chapters 75 and 76 are extremely toxic. The story is supposed to be about surviving in another world, but suddenly a terrorist organization is recruiting. Instead of reporting to the school, the author tries to investigate on their own, forcibly lowering their intelligence for an adventure, awkwardly pushing the plot forward.

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The synopsis made me think he was a powerful protagonist who would eventually conquer Earth during its spiritual revival. However, the protagonist's actions were truly incompetent. He started off cautiously, but later became less cautious, failing to report problems when necessary, and ignoring issues he should have. He didn't even maximize his potential.

The logic is chaotic. There's always forced additions of unnecessary scenes. Since such an overpowered cheat code has already been added, why not figure out how to progress through the levels? A grander setting does get exciting, but you have to consider whether you can handle it. There are many novels with grand settings, and many fall apart in the later stages.

It's no wonder this book isn't popular! The writing feels disorganized, switching between fantasy and Earth without any clear focus. The author isn't a top-tier writer, so why insist on playing with card games? Not everyone is Fang Xiang! Otherwise, why are there so few imitations of "Card Master"? In short, the story is immature, the protagonist is immature, and the writing style is practically nonexistent. If there's one redeeming quality, it's only that the sentences are fluent!

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