The Demon-Eyed Sorcerer

At the beginning, when he traveled back in time and saw the little girl about to be hit by a car, the protagonist said no, and then his heart was full of anger, and he couldn't stand it for a moment. This description is too weird. For ordinary people, when they see someone in the middle of the road, and then a car speeds up and is about to hit him, isn't it possible to save the ones who can be saved? Do the ones who can't be saved shout to get away? And some shout no? Can you still feel angry? Why can't you do this after seeing the little girl a few times? The writing here is not good. . As soon as I started watching the video, I felt like it wasn't working. I couldn't let others watch it.

I only have my personal feelings after reading Chapter 82. The creativity is good, and the world system setting is also good. But the author is not good at it and the logic is confusing. For example, several silver bosses were weakly defeated by a wave of buffs and could not defeat the protagonist, a black novice. It seems okay, but don't forget, this is not a game, and it's not just about comparing numerical values. There are too many factors that affect the outcome of the battle. If nothing else, the protagonist jumps directly from Black Iron to Silver. What should we do about the body control problems caused by the attribute gap? According to the author's setting, this is a sudden difference of several times in physical fitness. If the protagonist can stand still, he will be regarded as awesome. Secondly, although the protagonist has copied many skills, there is something called combat literacy. As an ordinary person, how can the protagonist compete with warriors from a fantasy world in terms of combat prowess? To put it bluntly, the protagonist has a bronze-level consciousness. Although he has many skills, why should he fight against the king? The king cheated the protagonist after a few waves of skills. How can modern people have any fighting wisdom? It would be good to be able to use skills in combos. I don't believe that Bai Yin can be so stupid that he can't even try to counterattack or show weakness to the enemy. Secondly, I don't understand why the protagonist was angry when he first saw the little girl? We have seen too many traffic accidents, so in reality, the protagonist cannot squat on the roadside every day and get angry. He might as well become a roadside warrior, and he will be infinitely angry. In addition, many aspects are not handled well. First of all, the way to obtain XP. Why doesn't the protagonist join the army and become a soldier? Anyway, the protagonist is invincible at the same level. As long as he is careful and runs through time and space, at least there is no problem in saving his life. It's not a bad idea for the protagonist to go to the cooking class. Anyway, if you can see the battlefield from the edge of the battlefield, you can get XP. Isn't that nice? It's better to set up killing to get xp, which is more reasonable. In addition, there are also big problems with the use of XP. I learned a card, but then I didn't get any further, and I learned alchemy, but then I couldn't get any further. I saw two deputy positions, but none of them created actual value. It was a complete waste. I don't see the protagonist preparing to make one and sell it in the cards, and I don't see the protagonist preparing to rely on it to gain a certain status in alchemy. It seems that learning is purely necessary for the plot. The purpose of learning cards is to contact the succubus, and to learn alchemy is to crack the ring. As for other things, these sub-jobs have nothing to do with it. Knowing that he can't get anything good from cards with limited attributes, does the protagonist want to go there and improve his attributes? The same goes for learning skills. I learned a lot of messy skills, but they didn't match the protagonist's profession. The knight can kill two companies with his palace swordsmanship and sword energy, and the mage can conquer the world with a fireball. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist is good at everything, but is bad at everything. He does not fully utilize the ability of both magic and martial arts in both long-range and melee combat. The protagonist's long-range damage is not explosive, the chanting time is long, and melee combat relies on palace swordsmanship, and he is completely useless in both magic and martial arts. Secondly, his own combat ability is not systematic, which is also a supplement to the above. The biggest advantage of dual cultivation of magic and martial arts is balance. He is capable of long-range damage and is not weak in melee combat. He is not afraid of others' provocations and is not afraid of flying kites. But what about the protagonist? The long-range fireball spell does damage, but it's not outstanding, and the cast time is too long. Apart from palace swordsmanship, he has no other skills at close range. As a result, the protagonist has no countermeasures at mid-range. The read bar is too long to use, and the palace swordsmanship cannot be used. At the same time, when the enemy gets close, the mage profession is completely abolished and cannot even provide assistance. At least, a few quick spells can be used to interfere with the enemy.

Being a fan for the first time may be a little bit toxic, but as a reader, it's okay to be 100% anti-toxic. And I happen to like some of those settings. 😄

The protagonist and Luo Li have killed orcs together. They can be said to be comrades-in-arms. Luo Li also helped the protagonist during the battle. Later, Luo Li invited the protagonist to join the revolutionary army and took the protagonist into the academy. This is the background In this context, the protagonist discovered that there was someone in the academy. A group of people absorbed the academy under the banner of the Revolutionary Army, and the protagonist has confirmed that this group of people is not the Revolutionary Army. First, there is no such group of people in the real Revolutionary Army group chat, and second, that group of people does not have the etiquette of meeting with the Revolutionary Army In this way, the protagonist does not put this situation into context Kuang told the real revolutionary army, that is, Luo Li, and Luo Li's status in the revolutionary army is not low. For details, please see Chapter 76. The protagonist also has a problematic ring issued by the fake revolutionary army. The protagonist only needs to tell the real revolutionary army the situation, and then explain that he feels there is something wrong. Without wearing the ring, and then giving the ring out, the matter was settled But the protagonist did not tell the real revolutionary army and forcibly subdued him. The rest of Chapter 76 will be handed over to other Shennong. I will take the first step Thank you, Brother Shennong.

Those who come in are exempted, 75,76 are extremely poisonous. It was obvious that he was going to another world to work, but he suddenly encountered a terrorist organization recruiting new members. Instead of reporting it to the school, he wanted to investigate on his own, so he forced himself to take risks, which bluntly promoted the plot. I skipped reading at 77. The first subscription was not good and the author did not reflect on why he had so few subscriptions and continued to spread the poison. At 99, he bluntly explained that the school was afraid of alerting others, and he also got inside information. What's the use of this? The feeling this plot gives me is that if you find out that the MLM organization is recruiting people, you don't refuse immediately and call the police. You insist on joining, and after working for a while, you drag the people who were also tricked into calling the police. What do you get? More than 10 chapters have been written, but how many people have watched the plot and it still satisfies the author's own desire for adventure? I wrote so much because the author started with a good setting and obviously had great potential, but as a result, he was dumbfounded before it was put on the shelves, and he was happy after it was put on the shelves. This book is a pity. The limited exemption only allows you to read 100 chapters. There are no votes for the recommendation today. I will vote for it tomorrow and I will support it.

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When I read the introduction, I thought it was an nb protagonist, but in the end he pretended to be a guide to revive the earth with spiritual energy. In the end, the protagonist's behavior was really bad. He was relatively stable at the beginning but later became more meticulous. He reported or didn't report when he should. He didn't care about problems when he saw them. He didn't make the best use of what he could. I felt like how could such a protagonist unify different worlds? None of them are suitable to be kings or leaders. They don't have any conditions or ambitions to become a unified ruler. There are relatively few conditions to create conditions but they have no ambitions. If they are promoted, they are just puppets with the most strength.

The logic is confusing. Always forcing extra drama. Since such a perverted plug-in has been added. Just research how to take the upgrade route. The background is grander, and it really makes people excited to watch. But you have to see if you can hold it. There are many novels with grand backgrounds, and many of them collapse in the middle and later stages. But at this early stage, I feel like I'm falling apart. I kept skipping to read it, and this book gave me no desire to continue reading. Others feel that it is nonsense. There is no useful information at all.

That's right if this book isn't popular! I feel like the writing is very confusing, sometimes it's another world, sometimes it's the earth, there's no focus on either side. You're not a master in the first place, but you still have to play cards? Not everyone thinks so! Otherwise, why are there so few "Katu" followers? In short, the story is immature, the protagonist is also immature, and the writing style is almost non-existent. If I have to have one advantage, it would only have smooth sentences!

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