Super Time Fortress

Brother, as long as you sign the contract, I will book it all, come on

1. Write a good title for each chapter 2. The writing is relatively smooth but there are many problems. The beginning of the chapter keeps talking about useless things without any plot. At the beginning, there is a major plot, such as zombies or mutant beasts attacking the city, to catch the eye. 3. There is a reason why there are not many recommendation votes. You must learn to look for mistakes. There are hundreds of thousands of words in it, and no one will read it if the beginning is not good. 4. Overall, the beginning is not good. After three or four chapters, there is no interesting story at all. I hope the author can improve it.