Konoha's Mortal Wisdom

This novel... How should I put it... It's equal parts poisonous and interesting. First of all, let's summarize the highlights: The research on Chakra and Ninjutsu system is big enough, but not detailed enough. However, it was downplayed in the description. Yoichi is a genius so he researched it. The feeling that the research process was unimportant was covered up. Generally speaking, it's okay. It's better than many writers who are struggling to write clearly because they can't write well. Then there is the poisonous point: Holy Mother, Gentleman (weak attack on women). As the protagonist of an invincible novel, the Virgin has enough power to crush the world so that she and the people she wants to protect will never be harmed. The Virgin is acceptable. What is unacceptable is that you obviously have to fight with all your strength, but your family is killed because the Holy Mother let others go. The gentleman part... This is a scumbag. The author is also very self-aware. Barely able to see. Finally, this is probably the biggest bottleneck in fan fiction. The compulsion of the original plot. It seems that Uchiha has been saved, the third generation is not dead, and the 12 little ones have become stronger, but in fact? The plot hasn't changed at all. The collapse of Konoha still happened, the Zabuza incident still happened, and even the order of the Chunin Exams remained unchanged. I can guarantee that Pain will still attack Konoha with a Shinra Tensei. The difference is that Yoruichi might block it. But it still happens. Jiraiya will definitely sneak in, and at most he will be rescued by Yoruichi. Although it seems to be justified now, Yoichi left Konoha only after the god of death took one hand away, but! Mingming Yeyi's character is not warlike... But rather troublesome, but instead of coming up with a binding method to seal the first and second generations, and then forcing Kakuzu and Hidan into the Four Purple Flame Formation to let them fend for themselves, and then watching the third generation strongly, he is playing with the four enemies who were crushed five years ago? This seems like forcing Yoruichi to leave Konoha in a place not described in the original work to avoid the subsequent plot from happening. After all... Technology is the primary productive force. I don't believe he can't make an assembly line with electromagnetic guns or something like that. If the author says it can't be worked out, the character will be ruined.

It is written like a running account, with a primary school student's writing style

Reminds me of a book I read before. The protagonist had nothing but his imagination and was invincible. Various ninjutsu have been developed, but the strongest defense seems to be non-Newtonian fluids. The front-facing rigid-tailed beast doesn't even move its legs 😁

Why didn't you kill the ninja after you defeated him? They've already blatantly killed you.

Being a ninja and not hitting women? Run away without fighting when you meet a kunoichi? Otherwise, we will be trapped and not take action? 🤤🤤🤤

Disadvantages: 1. The trouble with people is that they are good teachers! The protagonist easily gives his things to others for free, which is a poisonous point for most readers! 2. Being overly hypocritical, not killing people, not hurting women, although being too friendly to women, and being too embarrassed to involve women, although this shows that the protagonist has a lot of personality, it is also the biggest poisonous point of this book!

We will still be good friends even after three generations.

It's so poisonous that when I was 2 years old, I let a group of women use fans to practice paper painting!

I have done so many Naruto fanfics, and this is the best one. At the age of five, the Fourth Raikage can be the peak of the Iron Kage. I can't imagine that she can beat Kaguya to the ground when she is ten years old? This is not cheating, this is production cheating.

The biggest flaw is that the protagonist should not be a ninja!

Dear book friends, see you again by fate, I will take a step first 🙏🙏🙏

The age of the protagonist still needs to be mentioned. This is five years old. It's too exaggerated. It seems like the kind of Hokage fandom from the past. He was a super shadow level at five years old and a sixth level at ten years old.

How to say it? This book gave me the feeling that the IQs of the author and the protagonist are not equal, and the writing style of the book is simple and elementary school student, and there is no sense of empathy at all.

Elementary school student's diary, fat house's imagination, everyone, I will withdraw first.

No, I'm not complaining. I just learned the Three Body Technique a month after entering the ninja school?

Is it the wisdom of mortals? I didn't see it. I only saw a real hanging hanging b.

I simply read a few chapters, it's a cool novel for no brainers, and the flowing writing skills of middle school students, don't read it with your brain.

If you don't do anything to women, what kind of ninja do you think? The biggest disadvantage is that you can't do anything to women 🙂

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