Mysterious Gift

What is written about the economic system. . Previously, the protagonist bought the most expensive wine, which cost three silver coins. Then it was said that the sailor went to sea for six years and two hundred gold coins. Finally, the ordinary worker in the royal capital only got five gold coins per month. Then the ordinary worker in the royal capital was really happy. The most expensive wine the protagonist drinks can be drunk every day.

It's a bit poisonous. It's okay to watch without thinking. I was persuaded to leave

The plot logic is poor. Why do the natives have to let the protagonist and his party escort the children into Hong Kong? As long as they let the children sneak into the city, the plague in the whole city will die and they may not be able to find the source. It is secretive and safe.

I have read more than 100 chapters and I really can't stand it. Why are there civilian rebellions? Even if some civilians get fat, their careers will not be disrupted at all, because most of the extraordinary people in this world are nobles, and only nobles, and various religions have the channels to rise. If they are simple civilians, there is no way to become strong. There were also riots, and even if there were people behind them to support it, you think more people supported the common people than the nobles.

Are the higher-ups planning to kill the protagonist? First the royal capital was saved, and then the reward was withheld. Then there was the Rain Demon, but there was no reward at all. When it's over, you'll be designated to go to Enamel, and the protagonist will have all the dangerous things done. Are you ready to go dark? Or rebellion? Assassination?

The world view is well set up. The plot always lacks IQ but the general idea is okay. Unfortunately, the affixes are the same as the game one after another. The protagonist's operation is not very clever. Many places where more words should be spent are almost meaningless. The depth of the whole story is gone The script is good but not good.

Can you write steampunk well? Don't just do steampunk. If you don't understand that stuff, don't do the porcelain work.

🙂It is said that you should not take novels seriously. If you take them seriously, you will lose. But it's too damn crazy to write it without any brains 😡. At least you can sort out the outline and at least have some common sense. For example, you can give me a complete pair of calculations.

Does the author have any misunderstanding about archers? In reality, archers need unicorn arms. Not those archers in online games who cut off melee combat for the sake of balance. An archer who can shoot arrows from a distance and swing a weapon in close combat (miracles can be achieved with great strength). Since ancient times, archers have been a bad guy. Although it is meant to be a joke, archers are really awesome. In fact, the protagonist likes firearms, so there is no need to belittle archers.

The protagonist is no different from ordinary people except for the ability to use guns. The gunner's shortcomings are too great and he cannot carry a gun at all times. He does not have superhuman strength, so he is just an ordinary person. He only relies on guns to use his abilities. The limitations are too great. The cost of a gun is also high. One bullet costs 10 silver coins. The gun itself is a consumption. For the same extraordinary professional gunsmith, the most troublesome thing is to reload bullets. This time is enough to kill him countless times. Basically, I don't read novels that purely use guns as the protagonist of a supernatural professional. Whether it is an enemy or a weird enemy, it is easy to assassinate or weird. Needless to say, taking everything into account, this is a rubbish supernatural worker.