It Started with Connecting to a Hotspot

The hairstyles of the extras already appearing in this book include: buzz cut, crew cut, mushroom cut, ramen noodle cut, and pompadour. What other hairstyles will appear later? 🤭

This book has a fresh theme; it's rare to see such an interesting book in this era of formulaic writing. As the saying goes, "A beautiful appearance is a dime a dozen, but an interesting soul is one in a million." I hope the author continues to do well; the future is bright!

The plot is too fast-paced, and somewhat nonsensical, with unclear character relationships.

Normally, I update twice a day, once in the afternoon and once in the evening. If I don't update in the afternoon, then I can only update once (sometimes I really can't write anything ╯╰). Because I don't have any drafts saved up, and I don't want to stop updating, sometimes I finish writing very late and then rush to publish it. Then I'll go back and revise some parts, so...

The plot is a bit clichéd, the fight scenes are okay, but the villains are a bit mindless and there are too many of them. This style is likely to get banned. The conflicts feel a bit forced. If they were written more naturally, it would be perfect. But overall, the novel is alright.

Where did Song Yiren go? I want to see Song Yiren! 😳

The novel is well-written, keep it up! However, there are too many system appearances, which makes the character development insufficient.

Keep it up, it's really good! You have to work five hours a day, otherwise I can't eat or sleep.

I've read the first four chapters. The writing is excellent and flows smoothly. The story setting is very novel, and the writing style is lively and interesting. It's engaging and enjoyable to read. I've already added it to my collection. However, the system appears a bit too frequently, and there are quite a few different energy settings, which is giving me a headache...

Just dropping by! Keep it up! ^0^~