The God of Rebirth Is Systematic

Mainly talk about my personal opinion! High School drags on for too long, is too watery, forcibly intersperses the plot, rambles on, and I just don't understand what the author wants to express! ! ! ! There is no clear positioning, the emotional scenes take up too much space, and the film is too watery and too big.

I just can't figure it out, why can't I recommend it after writing so many good articles? If you have some spare time, go find the owner of the book list and do some py trading. This book is suitable for people with life experience. If you have experience, you will naturally not spend money to read the original version. The results will be great~ If I hadn't seen it on the book list today, I would have missed it. Thank you to the author who likes to chat and eat happily for bringing me a happy afternoon.

Judging from the title and introduction of the book, I guess it's Xueba Wen and then I'll start by writing a long emotional drama and a bloody drama. I can't believe that the direct interaction between the protagonist and important supporting characters in the free chapter may not have been direct interaction between supporting characters for many years. Directly exclude part of the audience who read Xueba article. Then it was like a rich second generation from another world. "The Domineering President Falls in Love with Me" has a sense of déjà vu that makes people react Then it has a disgusting best friend setting and a bloody plot. No matter how good your relationship is, can you force someone to ask for their password? Interfering in other people's feelings or making assumptions and slanders without understanding, and finally falling in love with the male protagonist to seduce him physically 😰😰😰 (forcibly occupying personal space + interfering in feelings at will + molesting one's best friend haha) Add the already obscure and difficult-to-understand professional knowledge, and then eliminate part of the audience who read daily dog ​​food. What is your positioning and audience?

I just came over QQ. After reading it for five or six years, I can barely be considered an old bookworm. There are very few books that can make me stay up late to read. You succeeded, the author. The characters in the book are very good. I also like this kind of specific type. As a book friend said, there is nothing wrong with the plot synopsis But some articles that are too professional have too many descriptions. After reading too much, I feel a little confused and helpless. After all, we are not professionals and cannot understand. I feel that we should speed up the progress In fact, it would be more perfect to summarize the high school stage into over-segmentation. Just like our own lives, college is the starting point of many of our dreams. Reading is not just about looking at your own regrets. You have not completed what you have not experienced. It is actually very pleasant to see the protagonist getting better and better. The comfort of reading is the first. The best one that suits you. No need to be too long-winded. Finally, I hope that the author, if you see this comment, please support me and support the genuine version. Of course, I need to speed up the update, otherwise our 40-meter sword can't wait. Haha The book friends who saw it can help pin it to the author. I wish all my friends a happy new year, happiness, success, and good health.

There are currently not many people in the group, and the author bubbles up from time to time. Everyone is welcome to discuss the plot and exchange knowledge about computers and machine learning.

Isn't it good to write about academic overlords? Isn't it bad to write about bullshit relationships between female classmates? Isn't it bad to write essays to study and show off? Also, the name of the heroine is really old-fashioned. The name of the heroine in a novel ten years ago.

A science and technology novel turns into a romance novel, with an inexplicable plot

The biggest reason why no one is watching is that the heroine's sense of superiority over the upper class is disgusting. Any other protagonist who is a top student would not like this. No matter how awesome your family is, can you be as awesome as me? Except for the protagonist, who is interested in sex, other top students will only like those with bright spots. Are you qualified to fall in love with top students and gods even if you don't have any special skills?

I don't think there is any need to exaggerate how beautiful the heroine is. After studying for so many years, I have never seen anyone who is particularly good-looking.

Chapter 1: Rebirth as a sophomore in high school, Chapter 432: College Entrance Examination. This beaver?

In fact, if this book removes the villain line and lowers the plot line of the female protagonist, the popularity will at least increase by 10 to 20%.

Some suggestions: There are too many scenes for the heroine, and she is a bit tired. I can only skip and watch the love story later. The progress is too slow. How to arrange so much time after writing so much in a high school?

The author is capable of writing, but the writing is too complex and messy, more like a romance novel, with more than half of it being romance. As a high school student, he published many SCI papers and created a new genre. However, in addition to being shocked, the reality did not reflect the nb of the protagonist, a scholar. When I read it, I always felt that I was short of breath. In layman's terms, I almost reached the climax every time.

The biggest problem with this book is that there are too many romance parts, which even account for more than half of the total length. Too many romance parts will cause those who want to read Xueba content to not want to subscribe, and those who want to read romance content will not want to subscribe. Even if you only write about one aspect, Monk's writing is better than your half-and-half approach, Your 50/50 writing method is very discouraging. If you really want to write a heroine, you can go to other similar novels to see how they are written. This is the first time I saw in a non-light novel that a trip requires about ten chapters. Do you know what these ten chapters are for people who don't want to read romance content? That's five or six days in a row. Can't these five or six days make people leave your book?

I feel like the main character is well written, but the supporting characters are too up for grabs. I couldn't stand it after seeing over 80, so I had to leave it for now.

The result is not good, mainly because the title and introduction of the book are not attractive, and the main line is unclear. If you want to learn to master the line, you should follow it clearly. The introduction is too bad and you can't understand it. Please change it to something more concise and easy to understand. Thank you 🤫 Just say that this is a book about learning to master, find some jokes, make it interesting... Oh, it is really annoying.

The biggest problem is that too many emotions are written about

It's very well written, I read it carefully and understood why it wasn't popular. 1. It is true that there are too many emotional dramas, which are too watery. You have to position yourself when writing an article. This book should be classified as a xueba essay. You can write emotional scenes, but don't take up too much space. 2. Since I am a master of literature, this book contains too little content. It only has 97w words and won a little championship. Although I have published a lot of papers, I feel that there are too few interesting things to read. 3. When reading this kind of book, I really want to have fun and make up for the effort and talent I don't have in reality. I really want it to be pure, and I don't want too much intrigue. To be honest, this book is really well written, the writing style is good, and it is very professional. Maybe the author did not grasp the key to writing online articles.

I specially come from QQ to comment. The content of the book is overall good. At least it won't be embarrassing to see the show of affection between the male protagonist and the female protagonist (I am a single person who is so enthusiastic about reading it?), And the characters have a certain resonance. The main problem with the novel is that it describes too much unimportant things. I am a computer science and technology major, and I can understand everything you write about machine learning, but for others, there is no need or interest in understanding what machine learning is. The author's overall writing will become a "popular science" article about computer-related concepts after further processing. Personally, I suggest you streamline the content in this part, otherwise the few chapters updated every day will be content that other readers are not interested in knowing, which will make people abandon the book. Some of the metaphors in it are interesting and vivid, but there is too much supplementary knowledge in others. It is recommended that you find someone who is not a computer student to help you read the manuscript.

I invested 10,000 and cheered up a lot.

There is a reason why this book is not popular. I read more than a million words, wrote some papers, and made some inventions, but they seemed to be of little use. Pig's feet and cow pen? Of course he is very good. Not to mention those papers and inventions that I don't know are very good. Just say that the full score of the college entrance examination is only two points short of that, and he is very good. But the author may have a problem with his writing expression, and the reader may not feel it at all. There is also a shock system. Everywhere in the book, someone is shocked, but I, the reader, don't feel the shock. This is very strange. Then there is the daily drama. The more I watch it, the more ridiculous it becomes. Duan Yu + Xiao Yuer are really unbearable.

Sure enough, Xueba's article is really selling itself off again. I thought it was a good-looking scientific research article by Xueba, but I didn't expect it to be a romance article about picking up girls. Really, any article can be written as a romance about picking up girls, right? The romance plot is also very bloody. I want to find a scientific research article that is a true academic master. Can any brothers recommend it to me?

A best friend like Su Wanying is simply too poisonous. On the one hand, he slandered his best friend's boyfriend, and on the other hand, he seduced her best friend's boyfriend, and then he called it: helping his best friend to test. Deliberately creating ambiguity with my best friend's boyfriend, pretending to say something to leave memories between the two of them, and finally stressing that I don't want my best friend to misunderstand. This kind of best friend is simply an enhanced version of White Lotus in the new century🌸 This kind of character is actually a positive character in the book. I can't stand it anymore, so I gave up and said goodbye!

After watching it for a long time, it became more and more boring. There was no epoch-making technology at all. It was just bragging and nonsense. It was really a piece of trash and blinded the system in vain.

Brother Tang, update quickly! !

Finally on the shelves! ! It's not easy!

I beg you to write less romance. Is it worthy of the title?

After reading dozens of chapters, half of them were awkwardly written about emotional scenes. It is recommended that the title be changed to "The Rebirth of the School Beauty's High School Junior".

The first few chapters are okay, but the rest is a romance novel about Chengdu! Romance in the guise of a top student, if you like reading romance, you can read it!

Another book to support yourself to death,