Martial Arts Data Storm

The design of the system exercise plot and the like are okay, but it looks awkward to keep accepting girls. A woman falls in love with the protagonist. The protagonist keeps accepting girls while constantly emphasizing that he loves everyone. There are many minors. Either the protagonist has a problem or the author has a psychological problem.

The settings are too loose. If you don't practice heaven-level martial arts at the beginning of martial arts but practice basic techniques, you will be ruined in this life and you will not be able to break the void. What is the forced setting? Can't you practice basic internal skills first? Can't you practice martial arts moves first? Can't you practice the Dugu Nine Swords first? If a person has the wisdom and wisdom to defy the heavens, The ancients have never been seen before, and the coming ones will never be seen again. If a genius doesn't practice heaven-level martial arts, he can't break the void. Can't he learn hundreds of self-created martial arts? For example, in Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty, if the martial arts introduction is not the four great books but other martial arts, then he can't break the void in this life. That is too far-fetched.

Speechless, I don't know how to practice low-level martial arts first and then slowly go up. I have to be at a certain heaven level.

I forced myself to read twenty chapters, and I felt like an idiot.

I will withdraw it first. This book is too poisonous and there is no cure.

This protagonist is unreasonable. He traveled through time and did not practice cultivation. It is a miracle that he did not die.

Twenty-six hasn't started practicing martial arts yet ~ What settings?

The themes in the first few chapters are okay, but later on the author's conception of the plot is a bit weak, and many problems arise. If the plot is weak, it can be covered up with a funny writing style. If there are too many routines, I am not interested.

It's so wild, it talks about practicing martial arts to break the void, but the author is just messing around!

Why is the protagonist the enemy of the whole world? I'm so tired of watching it😫

The protagonist is a bit pretentious rather than a bit slutty. . . .

I don't understand a bit →_→, can someone help explain it? Can you only practice one internal skill and mental method in your lifetime? Why can't we practice the easy ones first and then change to the difficult ones? And according to the setting, that 10,000-day-level magic skill should not be able to break the void! Since it can't be broken, why should we practice? Once you practice, you can't change it! The higher you go, the harder it is to change, and the more complicated it is, the less easily it can be changed!

The IQ of the characters in the author's book is equal to the author's own IQ. If the author does not have such a high IQ, he cannot create a character with a higher IQ.

Others are novice writers, but you are a second-rate writer.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 7

I'm really mean, adding books to the bookshelf

It has nothing to do with martial arts

The author's subject matter interests me

I read a lot of works that make trouble. I don't really like this kind of stuff anymore.

No, if you don't know how to write about the relationship between men and women, you don't have to write about it, but it's boring if you keep trying to lower your intelligence like this.

It seems that my skills have improved again, and I was able to survive until chapter 14 before being poisoned. It suddenly dawned on me.

I persisted to 45 cards, but there were too many poisonous points. I set up a stall in the street to collect money to explain other people's secrets. When I didn't have the inner strength of martial arts, I would forcefully slap him in the face. From being sent by others to a small gangster, to being beaten by a young man from a famous family. Although I won every time with martial arts and hidden weapons, I didn't feel any better, I just felt very poisonous. In a dangerous world, there seems to be no rush for anything. Calling it martial arts, it feels like a routine in a fantasy novel.

The protagonist's personality is too pretentious. Girls don't like boys like this very much.

No matter how many routines you read, your story will still be more exciting.

In data-based martial arts, let's not talk about the issue of changing the martial arts when adapting them. The naming after the change (the ultimate breathing technique) is a problem.

It feels a bit silly, knowing other people's names without even meeting them in person.

Are there any people reading such novels?

The introduction is so awesome that I didn't know what to write after reading it for a long time. Writing the beginning of a novel is very important, but I have written dozens of them and I can't see that you have anything to do with the introduction. You should refer to the opening chapter of Dou Po. If you don't want to get excited, at least it should make the reader want to read on.

Less than ten chapters, so I won't comment on the first few chapters. Chapters 7 and 8 are simply more poisonous than arsenic.

There are too many martial arts. Just learn the palm skills, boxing skills, kick skills, finger skills, body skills, light skills, and internal skills. There are a lot of them that you don't need yet.