The Correct Way to Open the Wizard

I skipped through more than 200 chapters, and also looked at the topic of rape discussed in the comment section. In my personal opinion, it would be better not to use human beings to call people from other worlds at the beginning; You can use Moran people or XX people to call people from other worlds, and describe them as humanoid creatures, similar to humans like elves; There is only one real human being, the protagonist. The current description in the book refers to people from other worlds as humans. As of more than 200 chapters, all we see is that the protagonist, a human being, is anti-human and helps other races to do so. Don't you think this is inappropriate? Why do we use humans to call people from other worlds? Why not indicate from the beginning that aliens are a species similar to humans like elves? Shouldn't the title human be reserved for the protagonist?

I'm going off topic here and there. This book should be called The Correct Way to Open Dwarves and Halflings.

Long Aotian's novel, appraisal completed

The clearest timeline is the annual great migration. The protagonist only experienced it twice when he came to the camp. When the protagonist first arrived, it was just autumn. He stayed for two months. The migration came, and after winter, he left again. In this short time, there were already anti-equipment, cannons, and steamships. Then the second migration came, and steel-making and railway construction were already underway. This development speed in one and a half years was too unscientific. When I looked at it at the time, I thought it had been two or three years. . . It's good to have a faster pace, but it's too fast. It's not that the plot is fast, but the timeline is a bit unreasonable. Then there are a lot of typos in the book, which makes me really sad. The subject matter is very good. I hope it can be written well. We will not be too entangled in the details of building ships, guns, and cannons. After all, it is enough if it is enjoyable to watch.

It's too watery, the words "water" are too confusing, and there are no attractive routines.

The book is very good, at least the ending is good, I will go home and read it

Have you ever made a movie or created a magical version of the Internet?(¯ㅂ¯Յ) I haven't started watching it yet. Can anyone tell me about it?

The wording is inappropriate and there is no sense of substitution. Compared with other novels, first of all, this word is not used for the protagonist, and then the name of the protagonist is often not needed. It is equivalent to reading a composition. I am used to reading novels, and it is extremely uncomfortable to read this. Sorry, I only read a few pages of the first one. I can't stand it anymore.

If the internal combustion engine comes out, it is not practical to directly build combat vehicles in the early stage, especially since there are few good cement or asphalt roads in the entire continent. If you use this kind of early-stage diesel engine-powered vehicle with little shock absorption as an off-road tool, it will not last long before mechanical failure even if it runs in the gravel wasteland. Therefore, if you want a combat vehicle, it is recommended to stick to track technology. Crawler technology has several advantages. First, it can directly produce crawler tractors. After it is used in agriculture, you do not need to continue to divide the fields, because a driver can solve the farming problem of at least hundreds of acres of land a day using a tractor. You are so short of people that you have to go to the human world to recruit workers. Why not directly collectivize and drag the halflings who are wasting the land into factories to work? Obviously halflings are more reliable. The tractor usage policy can be rented to farmers for free, or a low-priced usage fee can be charged appropriately, so that your food production costs will be far lower than those of all small-scale farmer economies. The second is that armored combat vehicles in this dimension are still tracked and are more suitable for off-road use. Your territory is not only the wilderness, but also the desert. It is not easy to drive wheeled vehicles in places like the desert. And depending on the situation, it is not impossible to fight in forests, mountains, hills, or even human beings later. It is more convenient to use crawlers in these roadless places. In the early days, it was not difficult to use balanced suspension technology, which only tested metallurgical technology with a leaf spring. Third, you use tires. Tires are a big weakness for combat vehicles. Once the tires are punctured, they have to stop. Modern military vehicle tires seem to be unable to do so with current technology. The tracks are made of steel after all, so this aspect is much less of a problem. Moreover, with the existing technology, the wheeled type cannot carry too high a load, but the crawler type does not have this problem. Of course, this does not mean that the wheeled version is useless. It is still good for use as a transport truck. Moreover, the crawler type also saves you the need to study the steering device. In the early days of crawler vehicles without dual power flow transmission, the direction could be controlled directly by the speed difference of the two crawler tracks. There are also many templates for various tracked combat vehicles. With the current processing level, at least the T26 tank can be made, and changing the turret to various self-propelled artillery is not a problem. In addition, isn't the author planning to develop a gasoline engine? For aviation engines, diesel engines have little advantage, and gasoline engines are more suitable for aviation engines. And with this thing, what kind of airship is needed? Transport planes are faster and safer than airships, even powered gliders are fine.

The author has the talent to eat this bowl of rice, but his mentality is too impetuous. Both books have a clear purpose of pursuing a job, and of course there is nothing wrong with that. But at least you should know where you belong in this circle. First write a good book without so many distractions, improve your reputation, and then think about how to make money. Don't be impatient, it's really for your own good.

The correct way to open the elves✘ The leisurely daily king of farming✔

It's not difficult to give a reward. I'm an apprentice and I'm proud of it.

It's not scientific enough. The protagonist studies mathematics and is close to the coast. Wouldn't the first reaction be to check whether the world is a sphere, the size, area and mass of the planet?

Why are so many people disgusted with the protagonist for helping the elves? They saved his life, and the elves are about to be exterminated by humans. It's not wrong for him to help the elves become stronger and get out of trouble. As long as the book is not written in the end to push humans into despair, I think it is okay. Besides, humans and elves can also give birth to offspring. It can be said that both can be divided into one category, and the other world is not the earth. Those people still look different from the protagonist.

You guys are really idle. Before the compatriots on Earth have united, you are going to outer space one by one to look for your compatriots? Pig's feet come from the earth. For other worlds, regardless of whether they are "humans, elves, dwarves, etc., They are not of the same race as pig's feet! Where did the traitor come from? It cannot be because the other ethnic group uses the term "human" to refer to it when translated into Chinese. The other side is the same as us! Pig's feet have not had children with the creatures over there, so maybe they don't have the same number of chromosomes as us!

I'm really convinced that any novel can bring up racial justice. So, if you choose the orcs to play World of Warcraft, do you have to apologize to all mankind?

The score of this book is unexpectedly poor. I have read Chapter 60. The only dissatisfaction is that there are too few words in one chapter (of course I can't say anything for nothing). I am very satisfied and like the rest. There are many people who pursue reasonableness and point at the author, questioning the project or the quality of the sphere. I have a few words to say about this First, you are so awesome. Why don't you write a book? Why are you making a fuss in the comment area? Speaking of many rigid theories, what is the actual level of education? ? This book is not RMB. Every thing has two sides, so how can we have everything we want? Second, fantasy novels, about traveling through other worlds to help elves develop and grow. No matter what the author describes, I think it is very reasonable. Of course, this is my personal idea. What the three combinations of dwarves + elves + halflings who are good at forging create is very reasonable. Just as fantasy is fantasy, fantasy plots, things, and characters Thirdly, have you forgotten the foreshadowing of the first four or five chapters? I don't know what you saw, but I saw a flesh-and-blood male protagonist, a beautiful and kind-hearted elf (don't get me wrong, although the pointy ears are arrogant, at least they are only for people they don't know). In the end, the two supported each other and came to Cattail City. The emotional description and the inner psychological activities of the male protagonist seemed perfect to me and I really liked it. I won't say that much anymore. I support you as an author. Although I don't know what makes good writing, some mobile phone keyboard warriors are not qualified to say that your writing is poor. I also hope that you don't like it and just leave silently. If you really want to criticize, at least get an apprenticeship or fully subscribe and then criticize again. Anyway, I personally feel that If it's good for you, I'll read it. If it doesn't suit me, I'll skip it. Having said all that, I hope readers can be kind to each other and the author. I'm really afraid that he won't update Eunuch that day, or that he will end it hastily with more than 800,000 words. No matter what, it must be more than 2 million words 😍😍

The word "child" sounds too much like an oriental word. It feels weird in a fantasy world.

I feel like the elves still look down on the protagonist deep down After all, he is a human. Even if he is given an elf surname, the honorable elf great sage from another world still cannot change the fact that the protagonist is a human. Just like what the Dharma Saint said, if you want to be a halfling, it depends on whether the halfling agrees---you can be the president of the United States, but you are not white after all. What the protagonist did in these chapters was too wasteful. He betrayed his race for a woman, gave away the system and knowledge that his race had built over hundreds of years, and was ruthless in defrauding his fellow humans, without any recognition of his own racial identity. The key point is that he is not an ordinary wasted youth. For this world, is a scientist and thinker at the level of an academician of the Chinese Academy of Sciences with a wasted youth mentality afraid? I am afraid that humans will be trapped in barren and small reservations like Indians in the future. And the descendants of the protagonist may be deliberately alienated from him. And the Dharma Saint seems to have murderous intentions. You have a machine gun and a cannon. I am afraid that the Dharma Saint will ignore the convention and kill the protagonist. After all, there is no Dharma Saint among the three tribes. I am afraid that the three tribes will not protect the protagonist to the death. Although they have technological weapons, the casualties against the Dharma Saint will definitely be huge. And then the protagonist, a traitor, wants to find a more efficient way to kill humans. After all, if the protagonist loses, the human beings will definitely not give the protagonist freedom based on the casualties you bring to mankind. There are still a group of people lining up to kill the protagonist, and the three tribes who know your abilities will not let you live.

Do you know why it's not popular? Just collapse. A heroine is still struggling. She has already stopped and finished her work. She is like a eunuch with few skills.

I chose the wrong race at the start, and my popularity is not increasing. The protagonist is a human race, but I ended up farming with elves. I feel like I have betrayed my own race. This is basically a righteous thing. If it goes wrong, it will be difficult to get a sense of substitution. Elves and humans are two species, and the race is a traitor 😐

I don't know since when, those who write books are either weak to spread knowledge and gather people for development, and strong at the beginning must be on the path of spiritual practice and do something that gathers great power into one body. It's just that there is no spirit of universal cultivation + universal science and technology, and selfishness pervades the novel world. Is this the mainstream consumer group born in the 90s and 00s, or is this the so-called market law? Kindness? In the end, when traveling to such a world, as an ordinary earthling, the probability of death is 99.9999%! Language barrier! The difference in clothes makes him look like a stranger from another world or a devil, a devil, a natural disaster... The background setting is too dark and too desperate. How many great authors have emerged in recent years? How many books are there that can make people think about life? Apart from the good lines, it's very cool, but can it be used as a guideline for your survival and life? In the end, they are all abandoned and forgotten by readers. In other words, writing a book for the sake of writing a book leaves the author with too little personal property.

The butt determines the head. Wherever you stand, which side you are on. The protagonist is a time traveler, and it was the elf who paid a huge price to save him at the beginning. Without the elf, he would have died. Is there anything wrong with him repaying the elf? Not everyone is a white-eyed wolf. What does the outsider have to do with the protagonist? It's not necessarily a species, it's not evolved from the same ancestor, and it doesn't help the protagonist. Why does the protagonist have to lick it? It's just because the author used the word human. Do I have to be a spiritual alien?

Is the author quarantined? 😰

I just read it, and there is a question I really can't help but want to ask - author, do you have any misunderstandings about the big firecrackers? The Dark Titan can only lie in the laboratory and be used as material... Titan is the incarnation of the planet, the walking world ~ in short, it is a star like the earth, but Titan is alive, and IMHO, even if the world's cannons explode on the earth, it will not cause much damage to the earth. Only humans will perish, right? The continental plates of the earth may be greatly affected, but it will not cause much harm to the earth itself... So where do you get the confidence to think that humans can use the Dark Titan as material if they have big artillery?

Everyone is playing Plague Inc. There is no one alive on earth, and they are starting to talk about racial injustice here, it's really awesome🐮

People who are not from my race must have different hearts. The protagonist foolishly helps the elves. The most fundamental thing has not changed, and everything is in vain.

I don't know why so many people say that the protagonist has betrayed humanity. It was said at the beginning that there are no humans with black hair and eyes. Moreover, the heroine exchanged her own life and the sacred object of her race for the hero's life, which is equivalent to a second life. There is no way to repay it too much. What a disgusting bunch of keyboard warriors!

The final ending is too poisonous, with advanced high technology returning in a humble form.

After reading a few pictures, I can see from the text that the protagonist has a strong house odor, which is quite disgusting and obscene.