Patrolling the Heavens with a Crimson Heart

I really like Ashika's character name

I can see that Jiang Wang's so-called sincerity means having clear thoughts, not letting yourself feel aggrieved, and doing whatever you want, no matter who dissuades or blocks you. Although this kind of behavior of doing whatever it takes to do whatever it takes is commendable, the problem is that Jiang Wang has no ambition and only cares about his own one-third of an acre. Not only does he have no clue about changing the situation of people with the same background as him, but he also becomes a vested interest, and all his energy is spent on revenge. The so-called righteousness of the human race is only limited to the abstract concept of "human race", not the struggling people of those small countries who are suffering from the disasters of ferocious beasts. Beheading foreigners is purely for psychological comfort and numbing oneself. The benefits this brings to the human race will only fall on the royal relatives and not even the common people. The word "Surveying the Sky" in this book is not to do something that others cannot do and let everyone praise you, but to do something that is beneficial to the people and let everyone in the world thank you. The current starting point for eradicating the Bone Cult is revenge, and bringing back the news about the world of Shenxiao depends entirely on Bu Lian. All the contributions I have made to the world are due to chance encounters or by chance. None of them are done out of my heart. I feel that this is what I should do and work hard to complete it. He can't afford the word "surveying the sky".

It is said that grudges are happy, but surprisingly, after killing Zhuang Gou, the book "Chixin" does not necessarily bring any relief. Jiang Wang's cry is heard in the wilderness. Even if he kills his enemy with his own hands, it will be difficult to realize the old dream of Fenglin. What kind of revenge can free people from pain? It's just so that you won't think about it all the time. So when the last volume ended, I was not happy. As in the past, when I saw the plots of various works come to an end, what I looked forward to was always the discussion at the end of the day - the reactions of all parties, the future direction... After the great revenge is avenged, how should people behave? These contents are more touching than the revenge itself. And Ash also understands this. Therefore, this volume has not been troubled so far. It is full of gags and youthful spirit, and it is all about love affairs, drunkenness and singing. The years of being overwhelmed by hatred have all been completed today, and it reminds people that, compared to the empty names of the number one palace in Qing history, and the hegemonic prince, he was first the Five Heroes of Maplewoods who wanted to fight with the sword Tianya, and first he was the passionate Fengxia Xiaojiang. This is the youth he is missing. This complement is Ashen's tenderness, and this tenderness extends to this chapter - reaching its peak during Rucheng's wedding and banquets from all directions. It's like the deck in One Piece that drifts through the world, telling Xiao Jiang's relatives and friends along his journey his changes, and also witnessing his whereabouts: Just move forward! The young man had no intention of talking about the wind and rain. He couldn't see the way home, and he was worried about killing the people in the maple! Just move forward! Now I have cut off all the troubles, dyed the color, and entertained all the guests!

Some people lose their relatives and friends overnight. Illuminating the wrong path with my pure heart, watching the wind blowing the Samadhi fire, the sword-wielding immortal carrying the blood of a city on his back. Some people use their spears to pierce the fire and become trapped animals in drums. After serving the country, he committed treason, tearing apart all the hypocritical tenderness, and only clinging to the fire of his hometown. Some people cannot control their own lives and will kill those who believe in them and love them. Although I have the talent to look down upon the evil god, as the day and night pass, I still miss an auspicious cloud and a journey of loess. Some people are passionate and prefer drinking. He was born to be a fierce general, but he tearfully used the heads of his teachers and friends to win the trust of his enemies. No limbs are seen, no strong drink is drunk, the wild tiger hides in the snake's den. There are people with all kinds of charms, but they meet their true love due to bad consequences. Love and hate are entangled, and there is no gain in staying together. Several times when I woke up from the dream, my heart for loving him was as strong as iron, and my heart for hating him was as strong as iron. Some people are unrestrained and romantic, and have no intention of losing their royal power, and would rather spend their lives idle. But in the end, Xinhen faced a feud. Some people are kind-hearted by nature and cannot tolerate the remains of bones on the roadside. The silent merits created by their benevolence are greater than the twisted inscription outside the city. Some are magnificent, some are covered in mud, some are carrying a heavy burden, some are carefree, some are born noble, some are helpless, some have no future, some have a decayed sword, some have exhausted all their abilities, and some are ambitious. Bo, some people are steady and tolerant, and some people kill relatives to ask for directions... This is a group portrait article. It talks about the protagonist's invincible road, but also about the frost and dust, it talks about happiness and hatred, and also about the impermanence of the world. It talks about geniuses and heroes, but also about the bones on the roadside. It is a world book. There are big countries in the world that are burdened. A small country is humiliated; there are heroes rising together, the sun and the moon competing for glory; there are legendary figures, the scenery of the small town... Every character is vivid, and every battle has complicated causes and consequences. Thank you Lao Shen, thank you for this wonderful world. I have always felt that "Red Heart" is an undoubted masterpiece. It has a grand layout, a vast world, and vivid characters. It is difficult to see it in online articles. The lines are full of the beauty of words and the interest of logic. I don't understand why "white and shallow" has become a characteristic or even a requirement of online articles But, thanks to the update time and the quality of readers, it is difficult for online authors to carefully construct the text, and readers have no time to read too deeply. However, "Red Heart" is not lonely and cold, and is still a popular read. It just takes a little thinking to appreciate the beauty of the text and feel the author's exquisite arrangements. I can't help but admire the stories happening outside the text - time is flowing in the world of Chixin, not only the part of time mentioned in the text. It was flowing. When the author wrote about Jiang Qingyang practicing swordsmanship late at night, although Lao Shen did not write about it, the world was also going on at the same time. Xuan Pang and Shi Shi were shy, Huang Jinmo and Zhu Weiwo were shy, Zhao Rucheng and He Lian were so shy, but Lao Shen did not write about it. Friends, think more. One of the interesting things about reading stories is to communicate with the author through words and learn about tricks. In addition to this fun, I don't think Lao Shen's stories are boring. The whole world of Chixin is vivid. How can such a story be boring? Even if you are pursuing simple entertainment, you cannot say that this is not a good book. It is a novel with the beauty of words, the pleasure of reading, and the logic of the story. You cannot be accused of stupidity because you refuse to think. In my heart, he will always be the first group portrait article. In "I am like a god," although everyone is making fun of everyone, Jiang Wang only has one. But I think Jiang Wang is an introduction, allowing us to see the geniuses of this world, and then Jiang Wang comes and competes with heroes for heroes. He is the most heroic. This is also one of the great pleasures of group portrait novels. This kind of pleasure cannot be brought by novels with facial makeup of supporting characters. Give Lao Shen some time to tell stories, and give us some time to read stories. We are reading novels to kill time, rather than rushing to read novels. In fact, I think it is nonsense for me to be so proficient in Chinese characters. After all, I can appreciate words. As a person with a sense of beauty, I say it's unnecessary, but as someone who can't accept the foreshadowing of group portraits, it's useless for me to say so much, but these are more to support Lao Shen—— Above, Thank you Lao Shen for writing such a wonderful world for us.

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So when you reply, please only focus on the plot,and don't make it about people. ① The cold poison enters the life, and the lie is revealed to the truth in one step (Chapter 1-10) Among the controversial scrolls about the arrival of God, the least controversial one is probably its opening chapter. Of course, if you are also a follower, you will know that this kind of controversy is only relative. At that time, Jiang Wuqi, a young man whose life was poisoned by cold, suddenly came to his inner palace on a foggy morning, and then he really froze to death and died in front of his father.     ，， Of course he died before all the idiots, sorry I use such words to describe other people. He shouldered the title of peerless genius. None of the characters who appeared or were legendary at that time had such a genius. I have to say here that Jinda handled it very well. He let this genius die, and his death was reasonable. The good thing about Jiang Wuqi is that he is dead. Among all the posts about combat power idealism in the future, the posts about Jiang Wuqi's one-step divine arrival are the least, and Jiang Wuqi is rarely mentioned in discussions about combat power idealism. Because the handling here is really good, there is Jiang Wuqi's golden sentence "Toward Daqi, you are facing me", and later Jiang Wuqi naked and holding a jade begging for death, and then Jiang Wuqi and Jiang Wang had a fight and finally got his wish. There are various signs and aftertaste, it can be seen that he has long wanted to die. Wu Qi did not appear many times, and the portrayal was spot-on, and his death was tragic and lonely. Compared with the follow-up Chongxuan's "I have seen all the scenery along the way" and then God comes, Jiang Wuqi's naked body is better than the white one. Jiang Wuqi makes people lovable, and Zhong Xuanzun makes people dislike them. They are all the merits and demerits of character portrayal. I believe that Chong Xuan Zun, who punched the body of a near god on the river viewing platform and was chopped by Dou Zhao with a knife, and his face turned pale, was loved because everyone knew that his clothes, as white as snow, could be stained. "General Zhan Yu will never bear the rain, and the immortal son will not live forever." Borrowing poems from book friends, we can see that Yan Tu and Xiu Yuan, who were only described in a few chapters at that time, left a deep impression on people. The portrayal of Emperor Qi as an emperor and husband is also quite wonderful. Jiang Wuqi only appeared in three chapters as a living person. I have to say that the characterization of the characters in these three chapters reaches the pinnacle of this volume. In the future, even if there is an explosive appearance of the big brother crossing the water, there will also be Taiyin's heroic exit of "The formation has its own destiny". Not as good as this young man who was married to Qiu Shuang. After his death, Jiang Wuqi gave the protagonist a famous book, a collector's edition of "The Biography of Thousand Beauties of All Nations". This stroke adds a touch of humor to this young man who has had a rough life. With more life, there is less sadness caused by death. At the Wuqi funeral, and in the undercurrent of the confrontation, the three crown princes and a monarch father were portrayed very wonderfully. The only shortcoming is the serious problem left by the portrayal of Jiang Wang in the Fuyao volume. The Fuyao volume suddenly added a characteristic to Jiang Wang that he was less educated and greedy for money, and this problem became increasingly obvious in the Shenlin volume. Jiang Wang, who had little education, could still speak well every time he faced Emperor Qi. It was really surprising that a person with little education could use his magical power to compose poems with great emotion when he was fighting. Let's talk about the controversial Dragon and Tiger incident in the mourning hall in the later period. Jiang Wang himself is such a person, and has been described in many previous articles. A man who is the best in the world in the Yellow River was still taking evening classes on the night when he won the championship. You can understand that his practice in the mourning hall is actually normal. But what's unusual about this is that the super-grade Taoism has been weakened too seriously. To give an inappropriate example, a person who attended a funeral and memorized vocabulary words scored 10 points on his CET-4 test. You tell me who is watching and not laughing at him. However, these two shortcomings have little to do with this opening chapter. Overall, the beginning of the chapter is very good. I said it in my post a long time ago. With this opening, I can't find the second volume even if I read it again. Such an intense opening only has ten chapters, and ends with "Breaking the Willow". Generally speaking, it received rave reviews, but the controversy focused on Jiang Wuqi's one-step divine arrival. Later, he died and the controversy ended. ② Where is the green card? Defending the Universe with Death (Chapter 11-35) First of all, I have to say that the beginning of this case was still very confusing. With the transmission of information from Jiang Wang, Lin Youxie, and Zheng Shangming, this major case that may shock the court was opened. First of all, Feng Gu's death was just a small case, but behind him was the assassination of a noble concubine in the 38th year of Yuanfeng. Lin Kuang, a famous arrester of a generation, died in this case. Lin Kuang's knife was placed in front of his daughter again today. At this time, Beiya Governor Zheng Shi is about to come. Whoever can handle this case well will be able to stand in that position. But whoever wants to handle this case successfully will face the threat of death. According to the original text, What a fascinating but dangerous case! At this time, except for the fact that Lin Youxie was certain that Feng Gu committed suicide based on past experience that "the corpse will not lie to me", there was no big problem. Because you don't have to pursue the details of character reasoning in fantasy novels. However, the next plot took a turn for the worse. First, Jiang Wang relied on the red mirror and thought he could find clues before the two heirs, so he changed from a supervisor to a murderer. It's actually very confusing here. Jiang Wang obviously doesn't need to make those choices. You only need to supervise Feng Gu's case to be investigated smoothly and it will be over. If someone comes to hinder the investigation, you have to fight with your life. If someone comes to warn you, you should catch him instead of letting him go back to deliver the message. You should not be biased towards either Lin Youxie or Zheng Shangming. Your trust in Lin Youxie is as inexplicable as your distrust in Zheng Shangming. If you really care about the truth, please grasp the clues and tell them to every expert who is investigating the case, so that the truth can be closer to the truth, instead of handing it over to the person who is more chivalrous in your heart. It's because there are too many such things happening, and everyone is allocating the right to know the truth, that's why this case has been delayed until today, isn't it? I would like to add something here. Later, many book friends said that Jiang Wang became unpleasant in this volume. This is because Jiang Wang's portrayal has become increasingly flat, and his martial arts drama: Tsing Yi, firm eyes, a sword fairy in a lust cloak, piercing the enemy's abdomen with one sword. Literary and Opera: Little reading and poverty. If you read too much, you will no longer have any new ideas, and you will naturally become bored. For example, as long as Zhong Xuansheng and Jiang Wang are together, Jiang Wang will seem to be buffed by a higher level of intelligence. In the dialogue from the end of Chapter 16 to the beginning of Chapter 17, Chong Xuan Sheng's genius was not shown, but Jiang Wang's stupidity was vividly portrayed. A genius should be set off by a genius or an ordinary person, not a fool. There are many similar plots later on, and the more I read, the less I realize how smart Chong Xuan Sheng is. The process of solving a case relies entirely on a lot of dialogue, and even undocumented death cases can be inferred. Zheng Shi's son Zheng Shangming was originally a very polite young man. What caused him to part ways with the protagonist? Lin Kuang's daughter Lin Youxie is a very irritating girl. What makes him reconcile with the protagonist? There is only one answer: The truth. However, the truth has long been buried by Jiang Wuqi and Lin Kuang in the 38th year of Yuanfeng. The truth that the plaintiff died and was buried is evidence of the spectators' pursuit of power. Whoever gets this evidence first will be qualified to sit in the position of a third-grade official. Qi Guonuo's officialdom and Qi Dino's majesty are both terrifying and ridiculous. I don't admire any of the living people who appeared in the Lei Guifei case. I only admire those Qingpai who died in the dark and bitter rain to investigate the truth. Because most of them don't know the truth, but they really sacrificed their lives for the truth. There is no earth-shattering truth in this case, nor is there a fight scene on the street at the end. The struggle between darkness and light has to be figured out by your own imagination. But I personally think the ending is good. Jiang Wang finally told a ridiculous story. A ridiculous story is just right for a bloody court. The case is over, the clouds are calm and the breeze is calm. The truth was dug out by death and told to those who already knew the truth. In the end, I can only say that this case is so big that it must have given up a lot of plot, making it look more like a bad extra. The meaning of a bad extra is that it's fine if you don't read it, but if you read it, it will affect your perception of the whole book. ③ Mountains and seas are all fake, only Phoenix is ​​true (Chapter 36-123) The beginning of "Mountains and Seas" is quite good, a fantasy and magnificent world, a world full of strange beasts. Just thinking about it makes me feel full of anticipation, right? The birthplace is a blue sea, and then the beasts have opened the prelude to the mountains and seas. You must have fantasized about the appearance of each mythical beast and their innate magical powers when you were a child. So is this a fantasy feast? Almost all readers, including me, will ask themselves this question. But to be honest, there are only a few strange beasts that impress people. Because most of the time I didn't describe this strange environment and this magnificent dream. Most of the time, our protagonist Jiang Wang is still running for his life, running for his life, running for his life in the mountains and seas. It gives people the feeling that they are tired of traveling and traveling, and they are exhausted. Why don't you change your name to Zuo Guangshu Zuo Guangshu? The relationship between you and Jiang Wang seems to be that of brother and sister. I don't understand why Jinda described Zuo Guangshu as a young master like butter. When you were fifteen years old, your brother was the best in the world. The scene of you making milky sounds is really chilling. Your relationship is very twisted, just like the relationship between Jiang Wang and Fu Dou. Of course, the appearance of fireworks burning the city is still very dazzling, after all, I have waited from the first chapter to now. Jiang Wang and Zuo Guanglie completed the handover with little awareness of the reader. The moment the fireworks appeared on the city, I let out a long breath. Then for some reason, Xiang Bei and Tai Yin, the two inner palace officials, suddenly thought that they could surround and kill Xingyue Yuan, and pierced Jiang Wang in the Jingwai Building opposite with his sword. Please think about his notoriety before taking action. Of course Qu Shunhua is the most speechless. I am not saying that I am speechless towards Qu Shunhua, but Qu Shunhua is definitely speechless about his magical powers. Hello! Go and see if the yellow relic is good. What does it mean to be overwhelmed by the sea of ​​suffering? What does it mean that the waves come and go and I return alone? It's not that I want to laugh at you. Your magical powers are really like those of a dragon and a tiger, and they can't trap anyone. Of course, there are three great gods in the mountain and sea realm, one with a gun like a dragon, a fishing expert, and a violent man. There is not much wrong with the portrayal of these three people. The senior brother's first appearance after "shooting to repay the favor of the country and returning to take revenge on the city." Is like recharging the value. I have never seen a big scene, because he is a big scene! Compared with the other two, they are really a monster, a monster. Wang Changji is in this state. To create a thunder pool and open the Tianfu, it was still possible to open it in the outer building. Shocking! At the end of the fight, he was in a monster state. He said "I caught you" and Ge Fei was so frightened that he almost said you were a human or a ghost. Dou Zhao only has two words, Macho Man! Speaking of which, I have to talk about the final battle. This meeting must be ranked in the top three of the Heartfelt Fight Rankings. A hearty battle and a wonderful cooperation. The God of Killing is coming from the outer building. Unless it is a genius, he is determined not to be able to overcome it. The impact and scene of this battle are outstanding, and it can be regarded as a good ending for Shanhai. Of course, the most powerful thing about Shanhai Realm should be Huang Weizhen's decryption. She returned from the fantasy and is worthy of being extraordinary. Needless to say, the final chaotic fight against the candle dragon, the debate between freedom and life, must also be the hidden thread left behind by Huang Weizhen's return. It just depends on how you write it. Actually, I have no intention of mentioning the scene between Jiang Wang and Xiao Fang, because I know that no matter how I evaluate it, it will always cause controversy.​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out out out out out loud are three lines from "The Great Gatsby" for everyone to think about. First sentence:Whenever you feel like criticizing someone, you must remember that not everyone in this world has what you have. The second sentence:People's sense of good and evil differs from birth. Second sentence:Some people's character seems to be built on hard rock, and some seems to be built in mire, but beyond a certain limit, I don't care what it is built on. Back to a more important question, if Jiang Wang will become the person who patrols the sky, he must answer the questions raised by the three sentences above. What is controversial is also the conversation between Jiang Wang and Zuo Guangshu about Huang Weizhen. I will not comment on this kind of plot about the fight back in the book club circle. But for a casual reader, knowing that this is a riposte would be damaging to the reading experience. Wang Changji appeared and was very strong. The senior brother appeared and was very strong. No one in Fenglin martial arts is weak. It will inevitably give people the illusion that Maplewood City is the center of the Chixin universe. But I personally think that as the saying goes, there are no coincidences, and there are similar examples in reality. Times make heroes. There is nothing to say about this. Generally speaking, people who like the content of the mountain and sea realm will think that the flaws are not concealed, and those who don't like it will think that the flaws are not concealed. PS: The God's Arrival volume is too long and is still in the process of creation. Therefore, this post will be distributed in two parts, upper and lower, to be continued.

I obviously came here to read the story, but it backfired. The author seemed to be writing a philosophy textbook instead of a story, insisting on word for word, repeatedly mentioning his own thoughts in inappropriate places. I understand that many literate writers always want to say something and do something in their stories to show that they have "ink" in their stomachs. Of course, there is no problem with this, but can it be done? Can you combine what you want to say into the story, let them develop naturally, let the protagonists of the story talk to each other, let them think about themselves, and let the audience immerse themselves in it and think empathically, instead of repeatedly mentioning these ideas that have appeared many times in the text from the perspective of educating the audience. The audience does not need you to analyze words and repeat questions like a teacher, because it is the characters in the story who need to answer, not the audience. There are too many meaningless redundancies in the article, such as the glorious or lonely deeds of a certain character, a certain empire, or a certain era in the past. These deeds do not need to be repeated too much. The characters in the story understand these deeds, and the audience only needs to glance at them. Like those words that express philosophy, repeating these things again and again will not have any effect. The reason why so-called philosophical ideas and truths are so thought-provoking is not because of the number of times they appear, but because of the concepts they contain. The author should streamline some of his writing. Instead of making up numbers like primary school students or junior high school students writing essays, it is better to use more gorgeous, spectacular, and grand words to modify their stories.

The plot is nonsense - the layout of the World Honored One, the Buddha's conversion Up to now, although Kujue was mercilessly killed by someone, but combined with the chronology and association (←main), I suddenly had a bold idea: Is the death of Kuxing before Kujue's death just an independent event? Kujue goes crazy and insults the transcendent Buddha, and refuses to worship gods and Buddhas and regards me as the Buddha. Does this "symptom" look familiar? In addition to the close relationship between Ku Xing, Zuo Guanglie, Jiang Wang and Ku Jue, what kind of "coincidences" can be discovered from the plot timeline? I am here to draw out ideas, make random connections, and make violent comments. Everyone is welcome to discuss in a civilized manner, check for omissions and fill in the gaps, and try to tear up the outline of something. The premise of this association is: the origin of Jiang Wang's strange relationship with Buddha, the beginning of all the rebellious madness of Kujue, and the death of Kuxing at an unknown time, is not actually an independent event. In addition to the suffering of death and the suffering of madness, there is a person who is not related at first glance, but is very similar when you think about it. He also despises the World Honored One and regards me as a Buddha. This person is the father of Huang Relic, the most outstanding genius in the Jingguo Kaxian Cave 30, and the number one real person in the Northern Territory, Huang Fu. "No one expected that the yellow-faced old monk would slander the Buddha! This simply violated the bottom line of Buddhist practitioners!" - Chapter 103 of Bai Yujing in the Sky "'I cultivate my Buddha no matter what he says, and what he says is the most important thing.' Jingli said something that could be called arrogant, but his expression was Ordinarily, the eyes are clear and there is no trace of madness at all. "——Ji Cheng Today Me Chapter 52 "Most people are speechless about this so-called Sanskrit chant, and its content completely subverts people's general understanding of Buddhism. Only some people understand the situation. Only then did I realize that this is the text of the "Great Compassion and Pursuing Heart Sutra" - Chapter 424 of "The Journey is Difficult" "Huang Fu, the general of Huanglongwei, established himself as a Buddha, built a temple to worship himself, and used the title of "Yellow Face Buddha" to accumulate faith" - Chapter 93 of "The Yellow Faced Old Man". The monk Kujue and the yellow-faced Buddha Huangfu, one is playing life in Sanbao Mountain, and the other is calling the wind and rain in the Jing Kingdom in the northern region. They seem to have nothing to do with each other, but their attitudes towards the Buddha are actually similar - one slanders the Buddha and the other believes in heresy, one teaches his disciples to "cultivate my Buddha", and the other worships himself as the Buddha. Of course, looking at it now, the two have similar strengths. One was able to defeat all the enemies in one battle despite being defeated, and the other overpowered Zhongshan Yanwen and Huyan Jingxuan and became the number one true in the Northern Territory. In the previous generation, both were regarded as geniuses. "Because for Huang Fu, who was truly orthodox in Buddhism, had been a monk, and had experienced many ups and downs in his life, the 'relic' was the most precious thing in the world!" - Chapter 428 of the Difficult Journey Volume Since Huang Fu and Ku Jue have similarities and connections in one aspect, a coincidence that was not a coincidence has surfaced, that is, the age of Huang Fu and Zuo Guanglie are similar. Coincidentally, the age of Huang Relic was updated in the volume of Bai Yujing in the sky to be 24 years old when he participated in the Yellow River Meeting in 3919 of the Dao calendar, which is closer to Zuo Guanglie's age of 25 if he was still alive. Following this similar age and going back 24 to 25 years, the time is probably 3894 to 3895 in the Dao calendar. This time is very close to a major event related to Buddhism - in 3893 in the Dao calendar, Jiang Wuliang, the deposed prince of Qi, was completely defeated. The third holy place, Kurongyuan, was razed overnight. The Guangwen Bell, one of the three Buddhist faiths, was transported to the Muguo Minhe Temple and fell into the hands of the high priest Tu Hu. What's more coincidental, the two true kings who reminded Jiang Wang that his Buddhist karma may not be good ones were Zhu Sui who guarded the ruins of Kurongyuan, and Tu Hu who took over the Guangwen Bell from Kurongyuan. Except for the new beginning of the Dao calendar, the great sects of the world joined the three gates of Jingguo at the best time to establish their own countries, but they were all firmly suppressed by the current hegemons and even the powerful countries that were expected to compete for hegemony. What gave Kurongyuan the confidence and belief to completely intervene in the affairs of the Qi State with one clan, one bell, and one prince? Did Emperor Wu's restoration of the country rely on years of hard work in the court? Is it Jiang Wuliang who has the spirit of Yandao to support him and does not hesitate to fight against the emperor Jiang Shu? God's will is in the most natural place, so before the prince lost power in 3888 and the princelings were completely purged in 3893, Kurongyuan and Jiang Wuliang joined hands to fight for the throne, trying to succeed in Qi's first expedition to Xia, and before the hegemony was achieved, controlling the torrent of humanity that was almost a hegemon, was it also beyond the wishes of the Lord? The Chengjing Kingdom of the Taoist Sect was overwhelming the world after the new beginning of the Taoist calendar, and the Buddhist Sect also began to forcefully join the torrent of humanity. Jiang Shu's first expedition to Xia ended abruptly when Jingguo established Yitian Temple. Did Jingguo only establish one Yitian Temple? I am looking at Huang Fu at this time. He can be called the genius of the previous generation. He was born in the orthodox Buddhist school. If it still exists, he will definitely travel thousands of miles to teach unfilial children. Either Huang Fu, as a real person, as the great general of the Overlord Guards, has completely suppressed this unlucky Buddhist sect, without causing any trouble. Either the authentic Buddhism he came from has disappeared - wouldn't Kurei-in be a good fit? Kureiyuan once suppressed the murderous thoughts of Chongxuan Pagoda and completely transferred it into Buddhism. How can Huang Fu, whose faith collapsed, create his own scripture killing method? "Stop talking nonsense! Kill him, kill him, kill him, kill him, kill his whole family!" Looking back, Zuo Guanglie may still die from being unable to withstand the suffering brought by the light of humanity. A hero dies before he rises to power, just like You Que who erased his identity and escaped to the country of equality, and like Jiang Wang, the Baiyun boy who shook his head at the thought of half his life. But if this unwholesome Buddha-condition originates from the nature of suffering, from faith in the Buddha, and from the thought of the World Honored One arranging the present world, then it is really unpredictable, and can even be said to be extremely dangerous. This Buddhist chant has caused a great Buddhist sect to vanish into thin air. One of the genius Buddhist disciples of the previous generation died, and the faith of two Buddhist geniuses collapsed, and they have since become heresies. Now that Zuo Guanglie and Jiang Wang are burdened by their double fates, they are truly transcendent and ruthless. The World Honored One has transcended. Who are those who stand in the way of the World Honored One's great wishes and fiddle with the fate of the geniuses in this world? Digression: Fu Dongxu knows very well about the death of suffering. Search the full text for the keywords "we" and "can we be friends", and there will be surprises.

The first time I felt a little dissatisfied with Chi Xin was probably when I wrote about Jiang Wang who couldn't beat Zhong Xuan Zun during the Chinese New Year. That time I thought, eh, buddy, Jiang Wang has beaten so many geniuses along the way, but on New Year's Day, you show me this? Can't beat Zhongxuanzun? Later, the author said that in terms of age, Jiang Wang is young, and in terms of qualifications, he is not as good as Zhong Xuanzun, so it is normal that he cannot be beaten. He is not deliberately disgusting readers. I frowned at that time, thinking that the author said it was so realistic, that's okay, I accept it. The second time was "great". When I was fighting in the Mysterious Realm, I read the adjective "great" more than ten times, probably in chapter five or seven. The power was also great, and the will was also great, but I didn't know which one was great. Did any other readers cross my line and say that shouldn't be great? I went back and highlighted the word great chapter by chapter. I said, isn't this an abuse? Is there any great thing that does not need to be set off? You say great is great? Due to the quarrel, the dissatisfaction at the time turned into a bit disgusting. The third time is to prove Yandao, still sweeping the genius all the way, still taking the path of invincibility in the world, still just one move away But this time it is amazing. Originally, his qualifications were not good this time. Jiang Wang's adventures over more than ten years have made Chongxuan Zun unable to keep up with Jiang Wang's speed of becoming stronger. Young people all say that now they are old enough. After 15 years of dungeons, at the age of 30 they can become invincible and conquer the world as a genius. The two certificates of heaven and being are unprecedented and unparalleled. They can also compete with themselves who think about the way of heaven and have the power of heaven and even seal the state of heaven and being. And even if he no longer has the strongest killing power in the human state, it will be easy to defeat any martial arts master, this first true or that first true. With the halo of "fighting talent", "sword immortal", "brilliance of humanity" and "the evolution of the three small worlds", even a real person can take the sword of the true king Li Yi and prepare to prove the Tao with force. The result is still the same, I sent it as always, it is a perfect replica. No matter how hard it was for him to walk all the way before, how powerful the enemies he faced, how resourceful his own people were, how invincible Jiang Wang was, how the human race could protect the world with its detachment, and how awesome the human race planners were. Planning in the sea, even if they have known for a long time that martial arts has been plotted, even if the torrent of humanity is rolling, there are countless strong people, even if the glory of humanity is blessing, even if transcendence takes action, they still cannot control the plots of a few Yan Dao against the top geniuses of the human race. It seems that the top combat power and top plans of the human race are all for show. It is even more like that no genius in the human race has been plotted before Jiang Wang. I see that there are two words between the lines, reversal I won't talk about the direct logic this time. In order to reverse, the magic power that the Eight Wise Ministers cannot solve, even the magic power that Yu Beidou can only solve with the position of the true king and the fate of the true king. When everyone knows that creation is more difficult than destruction, Dongzhen has a way to polish its true meaning for his own use. For the sake of reversal, the huge difference between Zhenren and Zhenjun can be smoothed out. At this point, the logic is that sometimes, the characters are sometimes strong and sometimes weak, and the only thing is that there are more and more patches. Who is stronger and who is weaker depends on how many patches the author has applied, and patches are king. Forget it, there was still a lot I wanted to write after writing this, but it turned out to be a bit boring, because no matter how much I say, I can't change the current situation of this book It's really tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it

I really like Big Brother's 😭 I really can't accept this ending and I don't believe this is the ending either 😭 Don't come here to say anything, he is just a mortal and his talent is not good I just want to believe that there is even the slightest miracle in him His cultivation is low, so the cost of resurrection is very low, he has temperament The human sutra is close to him, so is it possible that the power of merit has preserved the last trace of his true spirit? I don't believe that his heart can only prove and catalyze the true heart. Is there a backup in the heart to retain the last soul? So far, no Shinto monk has described whether he can convert to Shinto... In short, I don't want to believe that this is the last face of Ling He in this book. He is the one who collects the corpse for Fang Laosi. He is the one who picks up An An when Jiang Wang is busy. He is diligent and works as hard as Jiang Wang, but he lacks talent. If it were anyone else, who could be like him who had been buried in the deserted city for five years and two months? Who can recite sutras for five years and two months like him? Does that sutra have no effect at all? What he said when he saw Jiang Wang after a few years was, don't be afraid. Don't be afraid, you are doing the right thing. Jiang Wang was once confused. He asked Qing Yu what was right and wrong. Maybe he later understood what was right and wrong. But who would have thought that Jiang Wang, a protagonist who harbors overwhelming hatred, would be afraid? Only Linghe. The readers have never thought about whether Jiang Wang was afraid of one day, and no one else in the book revealed it. Only Linghe. He said to the third child, don't be afraid. I really burst into tears as I wrote this. I miss Ling He so much. I don't believe this is the ending for him. He is gentle, down-to-earth, diligent, and has a compassionate heart to save others. I originally thought he had something in common with the Little Saint Monk and Master Guanyan. I originally thought that he might break through the barriers and surprise Yujingshan. Now I don't think about anything, I just want him to live. To be honest, I came to Qidian partly because Ah Shen asked for the original copy several times at the end of the chapter and said I was embarrassed, and partly because of the living people in the first volume. It is now the tenth volume, and I still miss the people from the first volume. Among everyone in the first volume, I miss Ling He the most. The first thing I did when I came to Qidian was to add Chixin Xuntian to my bookshelf, and then search for "Linghe" in the book circle. I want to see how everyone evaluates and discusses him, and whether there is any mention of Linghe's subsequent plot that I haven't seen yet. But few, almost none. Then it's up to me to miss you. I will always like Linghe.

When I saw the protagonist saying that he had a clear conscience, I couldn't help but stand up and say a few words. First of all, author, I support what kind of protagonist you want to write, and I have helped you to defeat many people. But when the protagonist looks back on the past and says that he has a clear conscience, has he really forgotten the brothers and family elders who were indirectly killed by the protagonist Huoshui Dongyin because of the Heart-Eating Demon? And why do we only mention the soldiers who died in the Yang Kingdom, but not the innocent people like the old, weak, women and children of the Mo family, who were all executed by the Chongxuan family?

This book is truly a masterpiece. It can be said that it is the starting point of the book. There are only a few works that can compare with it!

4. The audience is full of ministers, and the long sword will scream (Chapter 124) "The audience is full of ministers!" This was the second sentence of the young man named Guo after he stepped onto the Huangliang Terrace. At that time, the person sitting on the court was either the queen of the country or the hero of the world. It is worthy of the "full house of ministers" in Chu Yuzhi's sigh. At a moment when no one expected it, Chu Yuzhi said to all the ministers: "Chu State has accumulated disadvantages for thousands of years, starting from the aristocratic family." Translated: Chu State will perish in your hands in the future. As soon as this sentence came out, not only those on the court could not sit still, but the readers off the court were also in an uproar. The friends on the court cut off their robes and sleeves, and the readers off the court battled it out. I think this is what the author has planned and is happy to see. Watching the confrontation and collision of different ideas is often more interesting than reading a novel. In any case, I like Chu Yuzhi, and I have also made a review for him. I don't think he is hypocritical. His change of thought and attitude is completely justified and has its cause and effect. Only when a person finally has no way out will he think about whether to find a way out on his own. This was the case for Chu Yuzhi, after he kept trying but failed in the mountain and sea realm, after his friend finally lost the qualifications of the Yuanshi Dan Society, and after he finally went around in circles, he found "Damn, there is no way". He finally understood, maybe he still understood it naively at this time, but he finally understood: Chu State has accumulated disadvantages for thousands of years, starting from the aristocratic family. Chu Yuzhi doesn't really have no way out, does he? His friend is the grandson of Duke Huai. He has already opened up a road to wealth through his hard work, hasn't he? But Chu Yuzhi was not born for aristocratic families. He does not serve any aristocratic family, he serves his country. When he saw a dark cloud in the sky of Chu State, it was impossible for him to hide under the umbrella of the noble family. For the sake of the millions of future civilians of Chu State, and for the sake of the majority of people in Chu State, today Chu Yuzhi cuts off his sworn ties with this crowd of ministers. No wonder, the future Marquis Wu'an of Great Qi will stand up and watch him leave. No wonder, the most beautiful woman in Chu State will also murmur to herself: He doesn't even look at me. Chu Yuzhi is transcendent. He is transcendent. He is transcendent to all the ministers. He is transcendent to the light and shadow of the great heroes who have covered him in the past. His personal charm has infected some readers through his words and actions. Even though some said he was naive and some said he was blind, no one doubted his courage. Even except for Jiang Wang, who said nothing, all the ministers in the room were actually a few points shorter than him. I hope he can go further, see more, and think more clearly. Although there is only a short chapter, the characterization effect is outstanding and unexpected, but it is also reasonable. Because of the character's personal charm and the fact that he does not appear again in the following chapters, I will write a separate chapter for him. 5. Thunderstorm and strong wind, looking up and suddenly seeing the dawn moon (Chapter 125-129) Chu Yuzhi shook his sword and made a sound that resounded throughout the countryside. When the ministers were all seated, he cut off his robe and severed his righteousness. This was a martial arts play. Yue Tiannu clasped his palms together, and patterns rippled in all directions. In a land full of clouds and mist, he realized his Zen mind. This is a literary play.                                                      From "mountains shaking and ground shaking" to "clouds and smoke hanging paintings", from "bold" to "charming", one moment it seems like one is about to rebel, the next moment one wants to become a monk. People often see red dresses in the fighting team, and pink and white are often seen in the shadow of flags. To put it simply, a tense, lively, twists and turns story has been finished. Now let's bring in some lively, colorful and interesting content to relieve the readers' emotions. But literary drama is not necessarily easier to write than martial arts drama. A wonderful literary drama can make the work smooth, fleshy, and enjoyable. A good literary drama should leave readers with a long aftertaste. Chapter 127 "Shan Zai" is such a literary drama. Use the author's own words to evaluate this chapter, which is called: The wind in the sky is at ease and the flowing clouds are gentle. Yuetiannu, Yuzhen and the Patriarch, all the people who appear in this chapter and their dialogues, all present the compassion of our Buddha in the worldview of the sincere heart. Precisely because I, the Buddha, am compassionate, whether it is giving up or taking it, whether it is the mortal world or pure cultivation, it is all "good, good". Especially what Yuzhen said with a smile: "I'm greedy." It immediately reminded me of what Zhao Min said with a frown: "I have to force myself!"  I know that things in this world can't always be had at the same time, but I'm greedy. I know that nine out of ten things in this world are not what I want, and some things cannot be forced, but I just want to do it. The difference is that Zhao Minai is aboveboard, while Yuzhen can only bloom in the dust. Miaoyu writes better than Ye Qingyu, this is a fact. But who Jiang Wang will be with in the end does not depend on that fact. One more thing to say here is that Jiang Wang is not qualified to talk to Miaoyu from the perspective of revenge. It can be said that the author's level of writing literary drama is a hundred times higher than that of writing martial arts. Very large scripts can be almost different, which awkwardly reflects the fighting scene of the "Sword Immortal with a Cloak of Desire". I must seriously say that the repetitive fighting scenes against the main character is one of the shortcomings of this book. It is worth mentioning that in these transition chapters, the current situation of the Dan Kingdom is mentioned, the war between Wang Changji and Zhang Linchuan has begun, Yi Shengfeng runs away when he sees the fake Gefei, and the game between Gao Zheng and the fake Gefei is mentioned. These all plant the seeds for the decisive battle with Zhang Linchuan later in the article. Generally speaking, these chapters are pretty good. My favorite is Chapter 129 "Seventeen Years". In just a few lines of dialogue, a far-sighted Yue politician emerges from the page. What is he thinking? That Ge Fei who said "I am no taller than a broom, I want to sweep the world"? The fall of talents is always sad. The feeling of not liking him seemed to have faded. It should be mentioned here that Jiang Anan and even the entire Lingxiao Pavilion have become a transition tool after intense scenes. Sometimes readers can even predict in advance the general direction of Jiang Wang's post Qi. 6. Why did the innocent man sit alone on the high platform (Chapter 130-132) On the way to Sui City, Jiang Wang first passed by the Yue Kingdom, where he tidied up the Lingkong Temple that had been casually arranged in the Yue Kingdom, and defeated the Wusheng Cult here. To be honest, the portrayal of Jiang Wang here is terrible. The first is the part where Jiang Wang kills Taoist Baina. Yu Li, wouldn't it be more appropriate to subdue a person with perfect five mansions and magical powers in the Yue Kingdom to deal with the Wu Sheng Cult than to kill him? In terms of love, Taoist Baina did not have any negative impact on Jiang Wang himself. He even died under Jiang Wang's sword without knowing Jiang Wang. This does not make sense. The only reason for his death was that he was interested in the position of the master of Lingkong Palace. This man died so badly that Jiang Wang killed him inexplicably. Let's look at the original description: "His hands control the eight things here, namely, Jue, Lu, Waste, Place, Kill, Live, Give, and Take. Wherever his eyes go, no one dares to look directly." If I didn't know that he was Jiang Wang, I might have thought that this was an emperor. There is another place in the article where it is mentioned that Wei Bofang led people to raid the home of Taoist Baina. Considering Wei Bofang's lascivious character, Jiang Wang didn't even bother to check his house this time, which was unreasonable. In this paragraph, "The Sutra of No Life" appears in front of readers for the first time. The teaching of "The common people pity me, I pity the common people" is very good. But Leader Zhang, you have never pitied the pagoda of the common people, so how can you find that one-in-a-million opportunity in the common people? You don't pity the common people, so the common people don't pity you. There are two problems here: 1. During the battle between the Wusheng Cult in Yue State, Jiang Wang had fully realized how powerful the Wusheng Cult was. The two sides were fighting at a point where time was running out. However, it was not until Lin Youxie died that Jiang Wang used the power of Qi to deal with the Wusheng Cult for the first time. He missed a good time. 2. Jiang Wang worked hard and almost hollowed out the mountains and seas to create the Immortal Warriors. It was supposed to be a product of the Immortal Palace that even fortune tellers and demons could not predict, but it did not appear in the later chapters. He lost his good method. 7. Sitting on the star path, rivaling the arrogance of the past and today (Chapter 133-141) I like Lu Shuanghe's words very much: "Swords born with the purpose of killing people, there is no reason not to allow people to break them." Zuo Guanglie can die, but others are not allowed to die too? This also foreshadows the end of the chapter in Sin City where the genius falls and the hero is frustrated. In the Unredeemed City, this is a place where you can survive by giving money. The record was broken twice in one day. The first time was when someone came in without giving a penny. The second time was when someone gave "forty-one thousand and twenty-seven" Dao Yuan Stones plus "twenty taels" of red gold, "thirteen taels" of snowflake silver, and "twenty-six" ring coins to buy only forty destiny. The first person was Jiang Wang, the later Marquis of Wu'an, who had sufficient confidence in himself. The latter person is from the Dan Kingdom, his name is Xiao Shu, a friend of Chu Yuzhi, please allow me to introduce him again, the genius Xiao Shu! A genius who has nothing to lose, who has an idea that shines like a starry sky, who was born at the wrong time, and who faces certain death. In Jiang Wang's long life in the past and the future, there must be a chapter called the death of Xiao Shu. Xiao Shu has to do something. He has to spend forty days from the inner palace to the gods. This is almost impossible. But genius is to make the impossible possible, even just possible! That's why miracles are so moving. On the first day, he sat there, The God of Death was sitting outside the door. On the thirtieth day, he sat there, the stars were shining in the sky. He deviantly changed the thinking of his predecessors, not carving star towers, but shaping star roads. His courage was as much his genius as his. If you show off your intelligence, you are called a hero; if you are courageous, you are called a hero. What is a hero? This is a hero! Xiao Shu used practical actions to tell the world's heroes, It's too late for me to display my talents, but my courage is already above everyone else's.  When the eight winds blow, God's presence is at hand, and I light a fire where no one has gone before. But he still died. It was a long time before we found out why he died and why he failed. Before he died, the people from Dan Kingdom stared at him, and the people from Yong Kingdom flew away in an instant. The audience scattered except Jiang Wang. He taught Jiang Wang the most precious thing in his life, not only the secret method of carving the star tower, but also the courage to change the world! So Jiang Wang, how much have you learned? Now let me introduce him for the last time, the most talented man in Dan Kingdom, Xiao Shu! PS: For book reviews of Chapters 1-123 of the God's Coming Volume, please see my post "A Long Review of the Beginning of the God's Coming Volume: The Case of Concubine Lei, Mountain and Sea Realm". Let me embrace the process of reading and re-reading again! Finally, I wish you all the best and the epidemic will subside!

This is a very long novel with outstanding strengths and weaknesses. There are a lot of outstanding chapters, such as "The Misguided Path in the Devil's Cave", "Surrounding the Leader", "The World of Gods", "The Nameless Ksitigarbha Bureau", "The Battle between Humans and Monsters" and other related chapters are quite interesting. The world view and humanistic details are extremely solid. History, articles, customs, and slang penetrate the world. The practice system and supernatural powers are ingenious. The multi-line layout is wonderful. The creation of enemies and strong men is full of legend and idealism. The protagonist is a local with a clear growth curve and does not rely on concepts to gain strength. The overall story is extremely complete, the outline is extremely complete, and there are many foreshadowings. However, the emotional writing occasionally sacrifices logic when mobilizing the atmosphere, the youthful illness and group portraits are mishandled, there are too many meaningless reversals and euphemistic foils, the late narrative is protracted, and the final boss treatment is disappointing, which lowers the overall experience. Let's talk about the advantages first First of all, the world view and background setting Humanistic details and realism The humanistic details in the book are very solid. Historical events, articles, songs, customs, local slang, etc. Are all written in detail. Everything makes the world come to life, and it is not just a background panel surrounding the protagonist, but penetrates into all aspects of the world, making the world appear real and vivid. Many other books don't take this into account and therefore lose a sense of reality. When writing historical events in this book, it makes people feel that there is such a history, which is not only related to the protagonist, but also reflected in all aspects, especially the history that refers to the past and the present, and the characters in history who have come to the present. Naming also has a sense of culture. Good names and nouns have cultural heritage. This book's control of various humanistic details is quite rigorous, at least in terms of presentation, making many stories feel real. The setting of the practice system is interesting and the performance is good; magical powers such as Samadhi True Fire, Misdirection, etc. Are set up with ingenuity and memory points. The second is character creation Protagonist aspect The creation of the protagonist is a highlight of this book. The protagonist is a local, and unlike some novels, he does not appear to be a brat, extremely shrewd, not like a child but like a person who has experienced the world. The protagonist of this book has an obvious growth process and growth curve, illuminating himself and gradually growing up along the way. The configuration of the protagonist seems "mediocre" and does not rely on lofty concepts to add strength; many novels are eager to give all kinds of lofty concepts and abilities to the protagonist, all of whom are "strong at a glance", but the configuration of this book alone is very "mediocre". The combination does not rely on conceptual ability, but relies on many touching stories to make people believe that he is indeed that strong. But the creation of the protagonist also leaves some problems. In some places, he seems to bully the weak and fear the strong: on the one hand, he says that he has a lot of love and justice, punishes evil and eradicates evil, cannot tolerate any evil, and does his best to eliminate evil that can be beaten; on the other hand, he even feels sympathy for some negative characters. For example, the villain who is also a fierce murderer and kills for his own benefit is beaten to death by the leader. When they encounter Hell No Way, they start to cooperate, and they become sympathetic to each other, very much like Tian Boguang's treatment. Another example is murdering people, but these things don't matter. Didn't the emperor kill many people? Where are the two armies in front? Not to mention that there is no right or wrong in war, there is always an aggressor (such as the Yang Kingdom). The author also tried to explain these issues and wrote them well, but the conflicts still exist. Other characters Enemies and strong men are created with a "legendary" and idealistic color. Most of the enemies are intelligent and try their best to defeat the enemy, but they are not tools to subdue intelligence. The "legendary feeling" is well controlled. For example, in the game with the previous generation White Bone Daozi, in just a few chapters, a previous generation hero was vividly sketched. He deceives gods and deceives ghosts, and turns people around with just a few words. There are many such creations, such as the Sanshenghua Demon Ancestor who only appeared in a few chapters. At the same time, there are also some bad aspects of shaping. In order to quickly shape some parts in the early and middle stages, some extreme personality descriptions were used. For example, the stronger you are, the more miserable you are, and the more miserable you are, the stronger you are. You must describe a strong person as being particularly miserable (or particularly emotional), with a complicated past, and some quirks. This problem was alleviated later, but it was replaced by another problem (the problem of pad characters). The book contains a large number of idealists who risk their lives to pursue their dreams and principles. The various morals and struggles are quite touching. The forces are not empty shells, there are many characters and they all have their own plans, and the density of the layout is even more complicated than reality. Nowadays, the more mainstream setting of online books is that "most people are villains", but many characters in this book are magnanimous, proud and reserved, which is rare. Many races have heroes, and times are turbulent, each with its own ups and downs and stories. Many settings can be expanded into settings for more than a dozen books with just a few changes. In addition, the "hypocrisy and righteousness" is very obvious in some characters: many characters shout about the righteousness of the human race and the overall situation, but what they actually do are frivolous things, such as the plots related to Li Guo and Wuliang. Trying to create a positive character seems false and empty, and the world seems to be crowded with countless "Lin Guangming". ，"""""""""" Just because it's not mentioned doesn't mean it's not exciting. Most of the stories in this book are rated above 80 points in the online version. Basically, there are wonderful stories in every volume, but the most memorable ones are often the stories with perfect scores. Excellent multi-line layout. The author often arranges dozens of lines in a chapter, each of which is wonderful, complementary and independent of each other. For example, in the world of Shenxiao and the Endless Ksitigarbha Bureau, more than a dozen people have their own intentions, clues and moves, and in the end they are intertwined, which is really amazing. The degree of completion of this book is very high, with reflections from before and after, and a lot of foreshadowing. It spans millions of words and is still functioning, and the outline is terrifyingly complete. However, "many foreshadowings" does not mean "foreshadowing god", and it is not appropriate to directly deify "many foreshadowings". Foreshadowing and foreshadowing are also different. For example, "I went to play at a friend's house and saw a pair of white socks." Many chapters later, "My friend had not been married for a long time and had a falling out at home, so he revealed that he was gay." This is false foreshadowing in the form of a trailer. The information does not change the status quo or advance the story. It can only show that there was a warning and highlight the "completeness" of the story outline. This is the case with many foreshadowings in this book, such as warning Churchill a long time ago. Such foreshadowing is just that after the incident happened, it was suddenly discovered that there had been warnings, but it could not change the status quo. The real foreshadowing should be: Many chapters later, "My friend was involved in murder accusations, and he thought of the White Sox. After some investigation, he found out that he was gay, thus overturning the motive for the crime." This is a useful foreshadowing. Of course, this book has a lot of foreshadowing, but if you really want to say how amazing the foreshadowing is, it is actually similar to many clever novels. The book repeatedly emphasizes that justice is not only "result justice" but also requires "procedural justice", and the latter may be more important. Most of the villains in the book use the wrong process to achieve the right ideals, and have been criticized repeatedly. You may get good results if you ignore the process, but the people and things that become the cost cannot be ignored. That is what is emphasized throughout the article: the wrong path cannot lead to the right result. It's just that the secondary gray characters in the book also do evil in the name of good, and they don't have enough power to stop them - until the protagonist appears. Emotional Writing and Literary Youth The author regulates emotions well and emphasizes the way of writing emotions, but there are also some shortcomings. In many places, in order to arouse emotions and push the atmosphere to the extreme, some logic is often lost. When people can be immersed in emotions, they don't care, but if a certain part of the skill is not enough, or if they think about it afterwards, they always feel inconsistent. At the same time, if you write in this way, it will be easy to write in a literary style. There are three characteristics of literary youth: being high-minded and reclusive, being tortured for the sake of being tortured, and "group portraits". This book has them all. If you don't grasp it well, you will look stupid. There are several places like this in the book. I wanted to write a group portrait, but in the later stage it turned out to be a forced addition of supporting characters, which overshadowed the main role. In order to write a "group portrait", the author will overshadow past characters, and he especially likes to use a "detached" (referring to the degree of shaping) character to cushion a bunch of new characters. Then the new characters can only be shaped to the level of "God's Coming". Another important perspective that has been ignored is the perspective of ordinary people, which lacks the observation and weight of ordinary people. (Similar to "Sword of Dawn") At the same time, in order to create characters that are "not black and white," the positions and behaviors of many people are blurred. Many places rely on dead people to advance, which is also a problem. Finally, let's talk about some other shortcomings and problems One is the expansion of combat power The protagonist stays in each stage for too long, resulting in a very fragmented combat power in each realm. It was especially obvious in Shenlin, Zhenren, and Yandao, and Yandao and Xiaosheng eventually became a mess. However, the expansion of combat power is a common problem in many novels, not something special. The other one is a political drama I personally don't like politics in the extraordinary world, and it's easy to laugh and laugh. There are a little too many political dramas in this book. Although it is considered to be relatively well written, it is still a demerit. There is also the battle of water injection and meaningless reversal in the later stage. In the later stage, the author has more and more meaningless descriptions, which means it is getting more and more watery. Such as a lot of redundant appearance descriptions, profile descriptions (what does this mean, mention it repeatedly), various euphemistic descriptions (a is so, so b is like this, implying that it is better/almost better than a), and a few sentences can be said clearly and repeatedly. Each battle is extremely complicated to write, and the descriptions do not match the battle conditions. Many moves are written like the "one sword in ten years" stunt, but the speed of light is in vain, it only breaks the skin, and the actual effect is just an early trial attack, forcibly called "reversal". There are some well-written reversals, such as the battle between Jiang Di and Zhuang Zu, one versus six, the battle between heaven and man, etc.; But for battles like "Killing the Lord of Zhuang", each unique move is used, and the description is just superficial for a long time, and the perception is much worse. Finally, the handling of the final boss was a failure. I rated the final boss as NPC. Compared with the previous one, it was finished. The final boss, which has been prepared for a long time, turns out to be just an "ancient strong man" who has been defeated many times in history. He lacks qualifications: he is neither a fate-level opponent (demon race) nor some kind of conceptual power or existence. The description is so indescribable and mysterious that if you know it, you will die. It is made as if no one knows it. In the end, only the readers do not know it. When the fight begins, everyone already knows and has plans. It is really the worst way to write. Then there are things like "narrative layer", "said in the book" and "author theory". They are really not new and I have long been tired of them. The most recent one was at the end of "All Tens: Beginning with the Slaying of Demons at the End of the Bakumatsu". The deconstruction of that book was quite amazing, while this book is quite NPC in comparison. Although the author didn't bother much about this, it is still cliché. The author is indeed good at writing some "ideal people", and the sense of pursuing the path is very good, but he is really not good at writing "metaphysical concepts". It would be better to honestly write about the decisive battle between humans and demons, the decisive battle between humans and demons, or the decisive battle between Liuhe, which are all feasible endings. In general, many chapters in the middle of the book are very brilliant, and the settings and characters are thick enough to be expanded into multiple books. However, the rhythm, battle and ending processing in the later period obviously drag down the overall completion. It is a long novel with both highlights and regrets, and a huge ups and downs in reading experience.

The protagonist of yours is born more than Tang San, and the entire Tiansha Lone Star, a bunch of well-shaped supporting characters are killed one after another for the so-called plot advancement, just like making dumplings, Master Protector? Die! Father-in-law? Die! Good gay friend? Die! Wild dad? Die! I would like to ask if there is a better plot arrangement to better promote the plot? Instead of promoting the plot in such a way that the supporting characters are treated as consumables? The sacrifice of a bunch of characters created a double-standard Plus version of Tang San's Crimson Eyes. After so many people died, Tazmi was finally created. Anyway, I will never read this author's works in the future. It is purely harmful to readers.

This book is nearly eight million words long. Let me start by saying, welcome to your fairy world. Here I am, eight million words in, but I still don't understand what the way of heaven is? How did so many glorious eras disappear? I don't understand the history, and I don't know what the future holds for Pig's Feet. He killed Zhuang and avenged his homeland, but he had no country, and the story about home was dull and boring. He is already the number one real person and can spread the Tao at any time. The next step is to transcend and complete the whole book. I haven't seen his love either. When did he go crazy for love? Fighting for love? Moving forward for your ideal? It ends after killing Zhuang, and it's still a good story. What did he want to do after killing the villager? Others kill his master, he kills the five real people, some real people from other races? The next time someone kills his friend, he will kill some more people. Maybe there will be a big scene later and the real person will escape from the situation? It's not like he's never been around before? Chao Wenwen asked, what is his Tao? Can any reader friend tell me? From the current point of view, his way is, you and the people around me, I will kill you, and not to the end, just kill a few and it will be over? What about next time? What about an infinite number of times? It is mentioned in the article that everything he has seen and heard is very impressive. Both the good and the bad guys in the article seem to have goals, whether it is for home, for family, for country, for race, for transcendence to live forever or for a few! So this is a novel that, unlike other novels, puts improving yourself first. In many novels, people's Tao is to seek immortality and a high realm to be free! And you? Most of the detachments in your book focus on the country and the ethnic group. As a result, I wrote about a pig's trotters who is a special commissioner for a small country in the United Nations who is not in the five permanent members. The most ridiculous thing is that I don't see him fighting for the interests of small countries, let alone all small countries and the vast majority of the bottom! See and hear everything to seek the Tao! What about Tao? How many more words do you plan to write? The money is shabby and you can't make money from the next book? So unsure? Do you have an ending in your heart? Have you fantasized about an ending? I'll watch the ending when you finish. If I ask you to earn my last piece of money, your wealth will be estimated to be tens of millions of me. It's really ridiculous! Nothing else, from now on I will only use my coins for cool articles

I started reading the latest chapter at 20:08 on July 3, 2023. I read it for half an hour. Until 21:08 when I edited this post, I still couldn't calm down for a long time. My stirring emotions tell me that I need to write a post like this to at least remember this moment. Fenglin Old Dream, when I saw the chapter name, I was shocked. It symbolizes the beginning of Jiang Wang and reverses Jiang Wang's fate. It is the white hair that was disturbed by the wind when Jiang Wang carried An An away from home, and it is also the blood that flowed out from the palm of Jiang Wang's red sword. But it represents more than that. It is also the title of fan among our book friends, and it is the bridge between reality and fantasy. We seem to be wanderers who care about Fenglin, sharing joys and sorrows with Jiang Wang. And when I saw the clip of my eldest brother Ling He, I understood that I would eventually wake up from the dream. Old also means the past that cannot be retained and the future without it. Alas~ The three roars at the end are even more shocking. In the comments, book friends said it felt like Shawshank, which is true. The end of a chapter, the end of a volume, and the end of a main plot. The ever-increasing emotions have been suppressed for too long, tolerated for too long, and pretended for too long, finally! Repetition is emphasis, while simplicity represents an extreme. I don't know why, with three roars, I recalled the ups and downs Jiang Wang had experienced along the way, and recalled the cover I read over and over again every time I read a book, holding a sword and clothes stained with blood, turning my back to all living beings, facing the bloody sun. All have become me today, this is the title of this volume. From me yesterday to me today, I have spanned more than thousands of rivers, thousands of mountains, sun, moon and stars. It's over, but it's a new beginning. I look forward to the future, to Jiang Wang's future that is not smooth but exciting enough. In the future, I will be with you. That's it.

1. Does killing people feel good? 😅 Zhengdao should at least kill a few villains who have been prepared for a long time. Do you feel any sense of satisfaction after killing these passers-by who only appeared a few chapters ago... It feels like the protagonist has killed a few soulless scarecrows, and it is still easy and easy to kill. Does it feel like I am like a god coming to win with difficulty? So I don't know where the fun is. 2. Is it good for heaven and earth? What about the thirteen heavenly beings? Heavenly beings are a new concept introduced in the previous chapter, and there is no outstanding description in this chapter. I have the impression that they have never appeared in the previous chapters. Look at the heavenly being who has appeared, Wu Zhaixue, the little Riddler who writes about ghosts and hemp. World Honored One, the great riddler who travels across all realms. A sinless man, a clown who fights with another transcendental clown just to say a few words to Jiang Wang. We ordinary people live to be a hundred years old, and some of us have lost all emotion and anger when things happen. Two transcendental people who have lived for ten thousand years have to fight just to see a young man. Are you transcendent or a three-year-old child? The appearance of heavenly beings is inexplicable, the descriptions of heavenly beings are vague, and the thirteen enlightenment heavenly beings are even more ridiculous to the extreme. At such a young age, Jiang Wang has the ability of the Eight Wise Ministers? The eight virtuous ministers lived tens of thousands of years before they used the river of fate as a bathtub. At the age of thirty, you, Jiang Wang, used the deep sea of ​​heaven as a bus? 3. Is fighting fun? The reality of combat in the current realm can only be described in an abstract way. In the early stage, there was a battle between supernatural powers and swordsmanship, and the swords saw blood. It was very exciting. The sword of a man, the sword of a mountain, can at least cut people. Zhao Rucheng's battle with Huang Relic in the Neifuchang, and Jiang Wang's battle with Qin Zhizhen are much more specific than the current battles. I can still think of the scene where Huang Relic smashed Zhao Rucheng's mask with a stick and Zhao Rucheng's face was bleeding. The main focus of the current moves is an abstraction, such as the Jie Wu Kong Mirror Realm, the Song of Time, the Seven Emotions and Six Desires, the Heavenly Man Jiang Wang versus the real Jiang Wang. I can't imagine the specific scene at all. It's like a game made with RPG MAKER. There are only move names and damage values, and I have no idea of ​​the specific scene. The two Jiang Wang's levels are getting higher and higher, and their moves are getting more and more fancy, but there is no scene or picture. Think again about the high-level battles described by Ah Shen before. Zhenren Guanyan grabbed Zhenren Laolong's fists to the flesh in the universe. When Zhaowang Nanxia Thunder God comes, can he return to his previous level? The reason for this problem is that Jiang Wang's moves are generational upgrades, and there is no system at all. All the commonly used moves in the early stage were eliminated in the later stage. The Misguided Magic was so awesome in the original description that it is not even used now. If you are not careful, you will be matched with a killing nail. Now my lack of style has become the background. I'll give you five more Dharma signs, with more and more moves, but I don't know what they mean. I only know that the numbers are getting higher and higher. 4. It's better to rest When you are tired, rest more. Take a month or two off and then come back to give this book a perfect ending. The transition from inheritance to integration has reached the stage of integration, and there will be no shortage of updates in the past few days. If you have to work like this all day long, why not recycle all the old foreshadowings. What's wrong with Mukunihara Tenjin? How will Qi's struggle for heirs end? Can you solve the mystery of Lord Loulan? Is it time to decrypt the three giants of the equal country? What's the deal with Tianmen and Tianwai? What is the ultimate conspiracy of Yizhendao? Let's recycle Miaoyu's story line! When will you get married to Qingyu? What is Ye Lingxiao's behind-the-scenes story? Also, combat is less abstract and more concrete. I thought that in the early stage of Elden's Ring, it was very exciting to ride a horse and fight with the big tree guards. In the later stage, it was also very exciting to go to the snowy mountains and fight with the Valkyrie. How concrete it is that the Valkyrie's ultimate move is to open a scarlet flower. Could you please give me a more specific picture?

I first came across "Red Heart" probably at the end of 2019 or the beginning of 2020. It's been so long that I can't remember clearly. I started reading at Qidian around 2005, and it's been 20 years now. So when choosing novels, I actually have very clear requirements. Firstly, they must have writing style, secondly, they must have connotation, and thirdly, they must not be too obscene and exaggerated. When I first read "Red Heart", it was only on the daily guide. It didn't have such a huge readership and it was always at the top of the list. At that time, I was first attracted by the simple and concise writing style. The plot and character creation were well-written. It showed obvious standards among many novels that lacked words and brains. Then I read it all the way, received good reviews, and occasionally posted some book reviews. My initial idea of ​​trying to figure out the author's thinking was completely dispelled by Ah Shi's grand world view, rich plot and characterization as I continued reading - Ah Shi's level of ancient poetry creation is no longer as high and deep as ordinary lovers (such as me) who are immersed in this art can see. I can only say that it is a good product at your fingertips. Then the world view is laid out, which is drawn from the sea of ​​five thousand years of Chinese literature and history without falling into the stereotypes, and can be integrated into the current trend of fairy tales to find a new way and have a unique style. Then, the foreshadowing of the plot and the characterization of the characters are so sharp, just like the tragic tiger is to the horse, and the white stone is to the shrimp. With just a few strokes, a character with strong character and appearance has already jumped into my mind. Especially since the writing of the text, the thousands of various characters supporting such a huge world view have their own characteristics and are not the same, which really surprised me. Finally, the moving nature of "Bare Heart" is inseparable from the extremely real attributes of this illusory world. It is precisely because of this 100% "virtual reality" depiction of the world of the novel that gives Jiang Wang's timeless "Bare Heart" the rare attribute that always makes people gasp in admiration. To portray such a world is not just a matter of imagination. It requires the author to have a sufficiently objective and profound understanding of the present world. And Ashen has shown that he has far more profound insights into the entanglement of love and hate, insight into people's hearts, the struggle for power, and even political thinking, etc. Than I do. "Bare Heart" is true because of its cruelty, and also cruel because of its truth. So I gave up the book twice. Although "Bare Heart" is the only book on the top of the bookshelf and automatically subscribed, I always avoid it at the top of the list every time I click on the Qidian app. The first time was when Jiang Wang was framed by Zhuang Gaoxian and trapped in the demon world, with his life hanging by a thread and being ambushed from all sides. At that time, I also posted a special book review, complaining about Ah Shi's cruelty to Jiang Wang, and to such a protagonist who cultivates diligently without a moment's rest. I started reading again after about half a year. As Jiang Wang retreated and Qi Qi came true, readers finally saw the general picture of the world planned by Ah Shi. The plot no longer relied on Wang Zai running around with a knife hanging over his head. There were enough supporting characters to continue to promote the plot. But when I read about Ao Shu's intention to spill blood on Shenlu and Fu Yunqin hanging on to watch the river, I couldn't stand it anymore. This kind of inability to read is not because the book is not good-looking, but because the book is too good-looking, and Ah Shen's writing power is too profound. The novel world is cruel to the point of being real, and the plot is so heavy that it evokes some of my own pain in the world I live in, making me afraid to continue reading, and I am afraid to read further. Then a few days ago, the book shortage was really severe. There was not enough "food" in the bookshelves. Of course, there were other novels that were really mediocre, so I hesitated for a long time, with a kind of "fear" in mind. I clicked on this book again and it showed more than 130 unread chapters on the top of the bookshelf. Having not read a few pages, I saw Jiang Wangguan standing on the river platform with his lone sword and refusing to respond to Jiang Hong, playing with a group of monsters and Anhui tribe. I was surprised at first, and then depressed - in today's world, I also need such a tyrannical existence that can break the "hidden rules" and demonstrate justice, but the reality is just like the novel in which General Xiong rebuked the Prince of Chu. There is no "Jiang Wang" in reality. This is really deeply saddening. It is already difficult to have a pure heart, let alone one who persists in patrolling the sky? When a person looks at the world, he actually sees his own mind. Feeling that things in the world are difficult to calm down means that one's heart is troubled. I wish I could not be as diligent as Mr. Jiang and escape the shackles of this world! At first, I just wanted to get a sense of being a scholar, and I just wanted to check in the book review area where there are many great writers, but I didn't expect that I would end up here. Haha, let's go.

I have never denied that True Heart is a good book. Even before it was put on the shelves and not many people read it, I recommended it to my friends many times and praised and respected it, just for fear that no one would read it, burying the good work, and even more afraid that it would not be read. Facts have proved that my vision is indeed good, and I am tough enough to survive the most difficult days (just a guess, maybe I am not short of income from online articles) However, the recent content is indeed a bit boring, not to say aggrieved, but boring. Even in the Mountain and Sea Realm dungeon, when many people said it was procrastinating, I actually didn't think it looked bad, and I didn't have the idea of ​​​​pointing to the country. As a fellow author, I naturally know how to respect creation, and I don't like people who give advice. Don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you. But in this chapter, the appearance of the tiger suddenly made me feel a little boring. It's not that I feel aggrieved, but that I can't calm down, and I'm even more confused: What on earth is the protagonist going to do? Walking around like a gangster all day long, and then being targeted by various people? To put it bluntly, it is not that there is a problem with the author's creation, but that it lacks a very important sense of expectation in online articles. Cao Hui Snake Line is indeed awesome, and the grand layout is not easy, but web writing still has its own speciality after all, and that is the sense of expectation. It doesn't mean that you can't write group portraits, or that you can't lay out a sloppy and linear layout, but readers of online articles need a "goal" more, and only when they see the main line of the protagonist working towards the goal and moving forward will they have a sense of expectation and can better capture people. Moreover, most of the time, the goal is best to be obvious, the layout can be macroscopic, and clues can be buried in different chapters and in the middle of the plot, but the goal is best to be very clear and easy to understand. For example, in the upgrade stream, the protagonist's progress, improvement in cultivation, etc., Even if it is slow, even if it is tortuous and difficult, as long as it is reflected intuitively, it can bring a "sense of pleasure", or a reading experience. Surveying the Sky with a Red Heart, the title of the book actually points to the topic, that is, the book is more or less hinted at, but it is still not clear enough, or lacks short-term, foreseeable goals (I am like a god, it does not count, Wang Zai runs as fast as a god, but it doesn't work, the supporting characters have come as gods one after another) , the protagonist is still dawdling on the second floor, and the progress has not been clearly reflected. It still lacks the thrill of impact and the intuitive sense of expectation) Therefore, the recent content gives readers (me personally) the feeling that it is starting to be a bit boring, and I have no particular desire to follow up. The above, some superficial opinions made the Fang family laugh.

In the past two days, I have been reading the book circle every day, and I have found that there are indeed many plots that I don't understand. I will post a thread to discuss what I don't understand. If you have any questions, you can also discuss them together. There are experts who can explain (Xiao Changha, you can just read the title) Summary of doubts about Shenlinjuan 1. Investigating the case (the specific plot is okay, but looking back now, I feel that it has little to do with the main plot and the promotion is small) I am quite strange when Jiang Wang opens the case to investigate the case. What case should I investigate? It's not that the logic of the investigation is not good, it's mainly that in the long run, he spends a lot of time to get involved without any benefit, so he just gained favor with Emperor Xiuyuan Qi, which reflects a sense of justice. Judging from the foreshadowing, for a while, the Queen's Line and Lei Fei's Line cannot be expanded. So what does this case have to do with him? The biggest benefit should be that Qingpai has performed better and can take over Zheng Shi's class, but Jiang Wang is not suitable either. So Jiang Wang has simply received a wave of attention. . Alas, this paragraph is okay if you look at it alone. When combined with the back stabbing of Zhuang Gou but not redeeming the city, it is outrageous. The enemy is so strong, but they still spend time on these things. . . I'm not surprised if I check Zhuang Gou Yandao for another two days. Of course, this plot is also well written. Jiang Wuqi is the most outstanding, especially when he is naked and holding a jade, the emperor sighs, which is very impressive. It is also very good to have a long journey. I have written down the courage of a man to travel a long distance, and the regret of being empty and bearing the rain. . . 2. Mountain and Sea Realm (both humans and ghosts are showing off, only Wangbao is resisting the beating) Wang Changji The supporting characters in Mountain and Sea Realm. . They are all very good, but I really don't like Wang Changji. He is very powerful, but he is too indifferent to people and has no human touch A person like this actually gets along well with Jiang Wang, because I have always felt that Jiang Wang is very humane, soI feel that Jiang Wang has a bit of a double standard when it comes to friendship with Wang Changji. . I respect him just because he is strong. If he were weak and indifferent like this, what would Jiang Wang's attitude be? I think they just meet by chance and don't have much contact. Does anyone think that Wang Changji and Yin Guan Sanguan are somewhat similar? Wang Changji's reason for restraining himself because of Wang Changxiang's kindness is actually quite different from Yin Guan's willingness to restrain himself for profit. . Except for the character design, I think the most outrageous thing when compared with Jiang Wang is the method of the soul, which is really unpredictable and relies entirely on self-taught. In contrast, Jiang Wang is just a big player. He has been using the Soul Hidden Snake since Tenglong, and the Soul Flame Bird during the Second Mansion. . . The Falling Sun in the Yellow River was the only update, and it disappeared after that. Xiang Bei said that the power of the souls in the outer building would make a big leap, but Jiang Wang really didn't show it. After the Yellow River, the power of the souls basically didn't change, and they were all at the level of small quantitative changes Big Brother (Big Brother) The combat power is a mystery. After Jiang Wang was invincible, I felt that no matter how strong the senior brother was, he would be left behind. I didn't expect that the outer building was so much faster than Jiang Wang) The senior brother was very powerful, but his power was a bit sudden. I always thought that Jiang Wang was stronger than the senior brother. . After all, Senior Brother Jiang Wang Youmai has become a Dragon. When Jiang Wang took Samadhi and became an Inner Palace, Senior Brother also just took the Sun and became an Inner Palace. . . In comparison of combat power, the senior brother's one magical power is stronger than Jiang Wang's five magical powers. The true sun fire has a spiritual aspect. Jiang Wang's five magical powers are all averagely developed, and his marksmanship is even more powerful than Jiang Wang's swordsmanship, which is said to be able to reach the gods. . Maybe they are a bit exaggerated than what Jiang Wangqiang said, but the impression of the mountain and sea realm is that the senior brother is protecting Jiang Wang. . Later, the eldest brother came first, and it was more powerful than Jiang Wang. It was even more true. It is said that the elder brother has the resources to redeem the city so he is quick, but I really think that Jiang Wang's resources are not bad. He is backed by the Chongxuan family, the Viscount of Qi, a good brother of the Zuo family of Chu, and a good brother of Yuheng Xingjun. . The resources are quite abundant. . Douzhao is pretty good. . I like it very much! If you don't talk about him, he will be stronger if you are strong. In one sentence, I really don't like that little girl from the Qu family. She sells Jiang Wang in the land of mountains and seas. She looks generous but is actually stingy. In short, everyone in the mountains and seas is very beautiful, and everyone has a god, but Jiang Wang is relatively low in it 3. Unredeemed City (the plot that I am most confused about) First of all,Jiang Wang asked Lin Zhengren to take Du Yehu and Xiaobing to be seriously injured. The more I think about it, the more I feel that even if it is an act, it is absolutely impossible, because the difference is too big. Why should the inner government injure the top outer building of Tianfu? Why can't the top outer building burn Du Yehu to death As long as Du Yehu, who resists the injury head-on, will not die in this paragraph, if I were Du Ruhui, I wouldn't believe it. . Then Jiang Wang also received a mountain and river thorn, which was said to be Du Ruhui's test of Jiang Wang's state. Then if Jiang Wang plays him, he can test out his skill by throwing it from a long distance? Can't act due to serious injury? If Jiang Wang is really dead, what if he kills Jiang Wang with the skill he throws? Anyway, I don't understand the part where Du Ruhui tests Jiang Wang. It was later discovered that the focus of this plot was not to redeem the city, and to ambush Jiang Wang was a casual move. . It wouldn't be perfect if it wasn't perfect But I was really shocked that the main plot didn't redeem the city, soThe hundreds-year-old Shenlinhuang sister, the guilty king who maneuvered among the major forces, fell in love with Zhu Weiwo, and the daughter of Huang Weizhen, who was very aware of Zhuang Jun's murderous intentions and methods, was so dirty, letting a junior know it. It was really calculated. I had no idea of proving my innocence. I brought a new god to confront Dong Zhen. I don't know what I thought, but I was so reckless. I don't know how Zhuang Gou did it. Mo Jingyu, a top-level god, an important combat force stationed in Yong Kingdom, died without any feedback. . Wang Yiwu was about to die and Jiang Mengxiong came immediately. Lin Zhengren also had something that could summon Du Ruhui, but Mo Jingyu didn't. . You want to say that the Mohist family does not value him. . He even sent two Dongzhen to take revenge. . In short, not only did Shen Lin die, but the Zhuang Gou who killed him escaped unharmed, and he also succeeded in dirtying the city of Buhui. It can only be said that the gods and ghosts are unpredictable, and the methods of heaven and man are unpredictable. His father was ashamed of himself when he came. Father and son belong together. Then the Mohists did not look at Huang Wei's true face at all, did not investigate carefully, did not think about logic, and did not think about why the neutral city of Unredemption suddenly killed the Yong Kingdom God came. I have already offended the Zhuang Kingdom by taking Zhu Wei into the city without redeeming it. If I kill Mo Jingyu, I will also offend the Yong Kingdom. . Such a strange thing, I quickly confirmed the "truth" with great confidence, and arrested Sister Huang. . . In the end, the two gods were caught, the other wounded, and the family was gone Jiang Wang retreated hastily In front of you, your senior brother accompanied you to wander the world, but after two chapters, "I would rather break this gun than stab the one I love", one was wounded, the other was imprisoned, and the other escaped. . Kuishan is also crazy, such a straight man, a top martial artist. . Going crazy without being attacked by the soul. . I broke through the defense, brothers, Zhuang Gou is a real dog, Jiang Wang has opened the book and is still thinking about investigating the case. . . . Gaia! ! ! After that, we were invincible all the way The momentum was very strong The fourth floor was successfully established before the battle, I thought we won for sure In the end, Brother Zun exploded. . Brother Zun's combat power is beyond the standard, and Wangzai has said it many times with magical powers and special effects. . I won't go into details Oh, looking back over it, I am very worried! Of course, even if I am confused about the above plot, Ash also has many outstanding aspects. For example, I really like the group of people in the mountain and sea realm fighting chaos. Wang Changji's fake Tianfu enters the gods, Douzhao's golden body shines on half the city, Zhongli Tiehanhan, Sancha and so on, I am deeply impressed. In a word, I have doubts, but I also remember the highlights. Probably these are the doubts about the main plot I think there are a lot of doubts, maybe caused by the foreshadowing not being developed, but it is too slow and really makes people break the defense There are also real shaping problems and script issues, welcome to discuss together In addition, if I don't redeem the city, I will really break the defense. Do you understand how excited I am when the three giants of Mountain and Sea Realm Senior Brother, Wang Changji, and Jiang Wang destroy the village meet? With this configuration, two holes are guaranteed to be a powerful god. How can the Flying Dragon Rider lose? In the end, the senior brother almost died. Jiang Wang was the protector of Qi State. Jing Guo didn't want to protect Zhuang State, otherwise Jiang Wang would have to die. . I am emo😭

To be honest, I was very happy when I discovered this book at the beginning of the year. It was a rare Xianxia novel that didn't just focus on combat power but had a plot. However, I gave up the book when I saw that the protagonist was about to leave Qi. When I read that, I thought this guy was so interesting. A man who has enjoyed the title of Lord for a long time, and even saved his life because of the Qi State. Because the emperor had different ideas from him, he told the emperor, I helped you stand guard all night, but you always want to stab your allies, which I can't stand, and then I passed five levels and killed six generals. The emperor was even more funny. He actually agreed. A man who was willing to stab his ally in the back would not say: Your brain is broken. Come here, your hands and feet will be broken, and your martial arts will be useless. Lock it up for a hundred years and see if your brain gets better. " The principle of the protagonist's selectivity is very interesting, and it is very difficult for me to sympathize. When things go well, I am the Marquis of Daqi. Who dares to insult me! When things go wrong, you, the emperor, are not honest. I don't want this country anymore, and you can't taint my reputation.

This is a book that has been written for 7 years. I am fortunate to learn about it in 2024 and read it calmly. It will end today, May 27, 2026. From the first chapter, his amazing perseverance has no audience, to the last chapter, when the king's heart remains the same; from the first sentence's description of the great sun, love is ruthless, to the last chapter's description of the heartless generation, I have selfish intentions; from the first scene, when Jiang Wang is about to die, to the last scene, after all the calamity. There are too many pictures in my mind. Seven years in reality is thirty years in the story. I'm glad that this book "passed by" my world when my personality and thoughts were relatively sound. This book is the book that I have been reading for the longest time. It is also the book with the most words that I have ever read. It is also the book that I remember the most characters. Reading this book while boating in the long river of time, I can't help but want to carve the boat into the words and ink. What gives me the ability to carve time is not memory, but resonance. It is Jiang Wang's character who has been evolving and moving forward in his writings like a living person and an old friend after being created; it is Miaoyu's regret that she only hates that she was born in the mud and hopes that she will not meet him by mistake in this life; it is Wei Xun's words "your sword is not enough to protect your dignity"; it is Lin Youxie who uses his mortal body to detect evil gods. As his name suggests, evil is everywhere in the world. In my eyes, thinking without evil is just for justice; it is Chai Asi's innocence, Zhu Dali's pursuit of the truth, the equality of the World Honored One, and those who practice mind will have their successors; it is Ye Xiaohua's revenge, it is the longing of the Five Heroes of Maplewood... All those touches and beauty have carved a scale in time, measuring the thickness of my soul and regulating the direction of my life.         ，， When it comes to foreshadowing, it's like a grass snake and a gray line, and the story lies thousands of miles away. When it comes to the plot, still waters run deep but the sun shines high. When it comes to eloquence, he is the most elegant one I have seen in twenty-eight years. It tells the story of a young man from the beginning of revenge to the establishment of three views: I will come in the future and my heart will be the same. Every article, every chapter, every paragraph, every word, and every sentence is nourishment for "me". I am reading it, and it becomes because of me. That sentence "Everything has become who I am today" is a thought that I couldn't think of before I read it, and it is also an expression of my feelings after reading it today. Without me, there is no book. If the audience is not there, there is no need to mention that it has successfully broken through the circle. Without it, there is no self. If it is not there, there is no need to mention that I am who I am today. The so-called mother gave birth to me, and I gave birth to mother. When I first read it, it was extremely scary and weird, but when I think about it carefully, it is nothing more than that.         ，，，！         ，，，         ，，，，，，         ，，，，，，，，，                                                                                                                                                                                 t a                                                                               Thinking about struggling to survive at the end of the road like in "Heroes", is the seed of sincerity and the fruit of wrong path. A heart of hatred is half clear, and a night of deceit clears the sky. There is still half a heart full of resentment, entangled in every possible way, don't hope to be imprisoned, love turns into evil.                                                                                                                                                                               , seded, in "The Road Is Hard", the man who carries the mountains and the sea is a trace of kindness, and the famous man in the world repays a touch of family affection.         ，，， Not only do you divine destiny, but also kill demons, take advantage of the difficulty of traveling, and ride on the wind of the world's drama. Although it is ninety thousand miles away, it is insignificant, but the bigger the roc is, the farther it is.         ，，，，， Under the surging atmosphere of seeing all the splendor, the stars leaning against each other, and the swords coming out of Dingjiang, there are so many people blowing horns and holding swords while drunkenly dreaming, and how many people are lighting up the lamp and wearing armor to wait for the day.         ，，，，         ，，，，，，，                                            There is another story in "Everyone Has Become What I Am Today", where he meets the eight sages while floating on the land, captures dragons and destroys demons, and begs for a living. A dream in the maple forest explains the hatred in the heart, and the half-turbid and pure heart stays in Zhizhuang. There is also "White Jade Capital in the Sky" which talks about the mind and deeds regardless of the Buddha. Dependent origination and annihilation are not dependent on truth. There is a long river to relieve hatred in Fenglin, and the cause and effect of the Three Treasures determines the fate of Tianjing. There is also "Hua Zhang Tianqiu". There are candles in the mountains and seas, and Hua Zhangxin returns in fantasy. The land of Sanqianchu is the most romantic, and the phoenix is ​​full of energy.                                             "Chao Wen Dao" The road is exhausted and the history is the best. One autumn leaf comes with thirteen certificates. It is not my intention to hear the way in the court, and the way of heaven will always be like a ridge of earth. "The World Honored One" also has the ten palaces of reincarnation of Ksitigarbha, and the emperor is born in the underworld. During the day, he erected monuments to carry the mountains and seas, and honored him as the World Honored One.                                                       "Chengcha Xinghan" ascended to the throne and destroyed the leader of thieves, I will be the first in the world. Against the infinite light, eternity cannot be used as a sword.         ，，，，，，，，，，！         ，， The soul has passed through countless places Jiang Wang has visited, and has a conversation with Ah Shen across the air. It can be regarded as a kind of peace of mind. This is my hometown. If there is a next sentence, is it okay to ask Chixin? Why not go and see it for yourself? Who is that shadow going to? Thousands of mountains are covered with snow at dusk, and there are clouds covering thousands of miles. You should have something to say. May 27, 2026 Diary

As someone who has read the whole story, I personally think the ending is a bit too hasty. On the one hand, I feel that Zhu You's appearance as the villain is too short and he doesn't have much sense of presence. On the other hand, I feel that the game was defeated too quickly. The Pact of Transcendence was over as soon as it was released, which always felt like it was almost boring. On the other hand, the Lieshan Renhuang's utopia feels like it has no sense of existence. It stands to reason that this utopia should be able to expand a little bit, such as how to retrieve it later, and how it operates internally, but there is no such thing. Also, after the sincere sky survey, the whole world must have changed. I should have explained it, but the same, no. Finally and most importantly, Du Yehu, Zhu Yao, Jiang Anan, Ye Qingyu, and Miaoyu, the supporting characters that run through the whole story, except for Ye Qingyu's role in the later period, all other characters no longer feel like they exist. Moreover, the main story does not give Ye Qingyu a wedding. It is supplemented by extra chapters, which always feels almost meaningless. Miaoyu is supposed to be a very important character. She saves Jiang Wang at the beginning, and then saves Jiang Wang, but then there is no news, and it feels like the story is not finished. Of course, overall I think Chixin Xuntian is still an excellent work. On the one hand, it does have historical background. It can feel that this is a very chronological world. The previous eras have relatively clear time divisions, the demon clan is in heaven, the demon creates humans, the human emperor leads hundreds of clans to overthrow the demon clan, the human emperor destroys the demon tide, forces the dragon emperor, destroys hundreds of clans, the era of all saints, and the prosperity of Shinto. However, there are still a few points that I still feel are not fully explained. One is the Yizhen era. It is not clear how the Yizhen Taoist died. The history of that period is relatively vague. The Netherworld feels like it should be quite important, but I don't know who created it. On the one hand, after merging with reality, only Hades has a role to play, and Ji Ji Zang and several other Netherworld gods don't feel like they have much of a role to play. If I hadn't mentioned it in the extra chapter, I almost forgot about the Bai Yujing Restaurant. I feel that the Yellow River Conference hosted by Jiang Wang will have no role in the future. As a supporting character who can be compared to the protagonist, Jiao Ming only wrote a few sentences. The ending was that Long Fo gave her the skills given by Duke Wu Han. She has never fought against the protagonist, but the length is relatively long, so it feels a bit tasteless. There is also the small force in Chengguo. They wrote some about it at that time, but later they wrote about the annihilation of Wusheng Cult and then nothing was written about it. In addition, Qin and Jing feel very weak compared to Jing, Qi, Chu and Mu, and their sense of existence is not high. The relationship between Jingguo and the protagonist is Huang Relic, and there are not many stories about Zhongshan Weisun. Qin State only had an intersection with Gengyuan once. I can only say that writing it is too big and it is difficult to flesh out many things. In the next part, we can consider appropriately reducing the size of the world to make the content more substantial.

After reading the whole book, as many book friends said, it is amazing at the beginning and becomes overwhelming in the middle. As for the ending, I personally felt it was barely contained (at least it was above the passing line. For this kind of 10-million-word level, half a group portrait article can explain it 50-60% clearly, which is pretty good) Then the writing style is what I want to complain about the most. It looked fine from the beginning, but I don't remember when it started writing in a half-literary, half-white, semantically unclear way. I know I wanted to write that kind of grand and grand scene, but it looked really awkward. As for the messy rhythms of the author's real world, I am not very clear about it, and I don't care. I have always thought that communication between readers and the author is enough through the works. If you are happy with it, vote for it, and if you are not, just abandon it.

After reading "Red Heart" a few times, I started reading the comments, and found that many people thought Jiang Wang was born and thought he should sit at the same table as Xu Fengnian and Chen Ping'an. I don't quite understand. First of all, about whether the protagonist was born. I don't even know why I have such doubts. Jiang Wang didn't do anything harmful, right? Didn't you mention abusing local people (born in Xu Fengnian)? Before the status of Qingyang Town came up, he also protected the people with his life. After he gained the status, he did not engage in bullying, and he did not behave like I am more powerful than you are inferior to others. There is no change from "Dai Boss" to "Mubai, you say". Secondly, about hypocrites. Many people think that Jiang Wang is not worthy of his reputation and cannot bear the reputation of surveying the sky. Brother, Shi Hao is either an open book or the Emperor of Desolate Heaven. If you make Shi Hao, who is half-read, exhausted to death, he will not be able to reflect the heavens. There are many people who say that Jiang Wang has no great ambitions, no ideals for all sentient beings, and is not a saint. Being demanding of others is the devil among devils, but since he is a character in a novel, there is no need to say anything about it. But the beauty of this book is that it specifically depicts a model character - the World Honored One. This is a true saint who loves all sentient beings in the world, and he himself has transcendent force. But he was still beaten to death. No saint can satisfy all the wishes of sentient beings, because the wishes of sentient beings are in conflict with each other. The opposite of one kind of right is not necessarily wrong, but may be another kind of right. Don't you understand the lesson Wei Xun taught Jiang Wang? After that, Jiang Wang never boasted, but always sought strength first and then reason. Jiang Wang was born as a young man in a small town. He had no country and no family and lost his life. It was not until Dongzhen that he had the strength to break ranks at the same level, but he could not jump up the ranks like other novels. For a protagonist with such a clear and limited growth trajectory, he would not have been able to "kill the four masters and disciples of Tang Seng". But Jiang Wang later taught the world what he had learned, saved the Shui Tribe in the town of Changhe, erected the White Sun Monument, defeated the selfless man and the devil, and risked his life to equalize the two saints of the country. I personally think it was not easy, and Jiang Wang did it with all his strength. Finally, about whether Jiang Wang should sit at the same table as Xu Fengnian and Chen Pingan. Not to mention Xu Fengnian's moral character, as far as growth is concerned, the beginning is related to the enlightenment, and he can become a master in the world without practicing. It may seem bumpy, but there are failures along the way. No matter what, there are people who come out to give face and repay the cause and effect, but the personal struggle and efforts are not seen. The same goes for Chen Ping'an, who started "transcendentally". The dogs on the Novice Village Road were all masters and old acquaintances. Their origins were not ordinary, and they were different from Jiang Wang. The later stages of Jianlai were too confusing, and there were certain flaws with this book in shaping combat power, but I still think the flaws in this book are less severe and the look and feel is better. This book has always had a kind of simple values. There is no stallion, and it does not take pride in engaging in conspiracy and plotting to harm others. It does not say "No one in the world must be killed, and no one in the world must kill me." The protagonist has always taken the high road. This actually looks very comfortable and is more in line with the tastes of people of all ages, which should be regarded as the advantage of online articles. I have always believed that a good book must not disgust readers, at least not deliberately. It can deliberately cater to some people, but it cannot deliberately disgust other people. That's about it for this book. It's obviously not going to be liked by everyone, but it's not going to leave readers feeling "stabbed in the back." The death and strong exit of supporting characters are not "toxic points" and should not be used as a reason for new readers to avoid lightning. Besides, this book is actually a happy ending, isn't it?

I probably came to Qidian last year, and I just walked with Chixin through the period before the end. So apart from working hard to upgrade and voting for a few monthly votes for Chixin, and writing a few strategies for Chixin to upgrade to LV6 and Qidian's popular character activities, I don't have many stories to share. Then let me go back to the novel itself and talk about some of my reading experiences. It also fits the theme. I would like to talk about some of the things that impressed me about the "Bear Heart Survey". The first is the creation of characters. What impressed me deeply at the beginning was the scene of the duel between Jiang Wang and Fang Pengju in Maplewood City. The first thing Jiang Wang did when he came back was to decisively deal with his former brothers and today's enemies. According to the routine, he should have finished the story and not jump to the next plot. But the author did, and wrote that Jiang Wang was sad, and Ling He, Du Yehu and Zhao Rucheng each had their own sadness. I feel that at this moment, the Five Heroes of Maplewood stood firm. They are people with depth and emotion. I think Qing He Yi Shi is really good at writing about people. I started to hate Fang Heling very much. I thought how long would he have to dance like a clown? How could he still have a role? But when he died, I felt it was subtle, complicated and difficult to understand. From Jiang Wang's point of view, I hate the evil deeds of the White Bone Sect, but when Jiang Wang eliminated the Twelve Faces of the White Bone Sect, I was also somewhat unexpectedly touched by the fact that a very tool-like facer sacrificed his life for the survival of his beloved. The characters in Qing He Yi Shen are alive and have their own love and hate growth. And there seems to be no absolute good or bad people in Chixin, only different positions. This was the case when Li Yi killed Zuo Guanglie, the same was true when Dong A abandoned Maplewood City, and the same was true when Chongxuan defeated Qi Xia in the war to take Ji Cheng's head. This is a point that surprised me, I feel like the character really stands up! In addition, I really feel that Qing He Yi Shi is particularly good at writing intense emotions between characters, especially those that are love-oriented or can be interpreted as love. This is my personal favorite point, and it was also the main reason why I made up my mind to come to Qidian to pursue books after receiving Amway. Huang Jinmo's arrogant pursuit in Sin City and Zhu Weiwo's half-hearted acquiescence, Zhu Weiwo's willingness to cut off the gun for Huang Jinmo and his proud understanding of her, this is a happy couple created, I like it very much. I have mixed feelings about the other couple. Lu Shuanghe treats everyone equally, is indifferent to his apprentice Yi Shengfeng, and is ruthless to his master Nan Doudian. I thought his heart can only tolerate Dao Dao. Ren Qiuli is nothing to him. However, but... Why did you keep her sword and hairpin at the end of your life? Lu Shuanghe, you could have stood by and watched her die, but you used your sword to save her, so that she could no longer forget the dazzling sword light in despair. I don't know if she knows you like her, Lu Shuanghe, but you actually like her? ! Haha, yes, a person who can stand by as a disciple and master can save a "trash" that has lost its value. What else can it be besides liking it? Although this feeling is no match for the road in your eyes. In my opinion, she acted a one-man show, which is just wishful thinking. It is even more stupid to use her life as a bet to fight for your chance of survival. But why did you keep that sword and hairpin? It made me cry uncontrollably. She only has you, but you only have the sword. She lives by the sword, and she also dies by the sword. Maybe it's a good ending for her. Others include Yin Guan and Lou Jiangyue (I also want to make some fanfics. I have rewritten all the interactions between the two, and then I made up their usual interactions and planned to write them out. I also made up another one because Teacher Shen stabbed King Chu Jiang. Modern campus cookies, but I gave up because my hand speed of two to three hundred words per hour could not keep up with fan activities), Chong Xuanzun and Wang Yiwu, Wangzi, Qingyu, and Miaoyu. There is even more to talk about the next few pairs, but the length is too long, so I will leave it like this for the time being. I will talk about it later when I have time. In the end, the plan couldn't keep up with the changes, and I accidentally spent too much ink on character analysis. I originally planned to write some plot analysis (probably from the perspective of the overall plot, and why the emotional lines of the secondary characters are touching, but the emotional lines of Jiang Wang and Qingyu are a bit dry) and the finale. I had previously speculated on the direction of filling the hole (including echoing the big brother Linghe, brothers moving forward, what is the true heart, humans and demons, the struggle between Liuhe, history and era, and Jiang Wang's personal growth line), but at my speed, I probably won't be able to finish it after the event. Let's start with the character chapter to catch up on the event, and I will write the other two parts when I find time. ious [ps.

"Surveying the Sky with a Red Heart" is my favorite fairy tale novel. Looking back, the fireworks that burned the city in the first chapter rekindled my silent memories of that period. Chu, Qin, Mo... These words instantly make people think of the war and the turbulent situation. I guess this should be a good novel. Maplewood City always reminds me of my hometown in northeastern Guangdong. It is not big, but full of fireworks. It can also accommodate the spirit of a young man who has never seen the depths of the world. This was beautiful until Jiang Wang's hometown was destroyed and everyone around him was separated. To be honest, the first two to three hundred chapters have many highlights, but also many flaws. But the young Jiang Wang at that time, just like what he said after reaching transcendence in the last chapter, would rather lose nothing so that he could fulfill all the regrets he had in his hometown. After going to Qi, strictly speaking after Jiang Wang's inner mansion, the novel begins to become truly exciting. What impressed me most was Jiang Wanghuizhuang. At that time, he had little ability and chose to return to the village for revenge. The fight on the rainy night and the escape were compared to the brilliant fireworks that my sister saw in Yun Kingdom. At the same time, his game struggle with Lao Zhuang is wonderful. The twists and turns are constant, but they are like waves that push the plot to a climax. The oppression of Lao and Zhuang is extremely terrifying, which made me feel angry while reading it. I even wondered whether the author really wanted the protagonist to die. Fortunately, in the final battle between life and death, Jiang Wang prevailed. But it wasn't over yet. He came out of the tiger's mouth and entered the wolf's den again. After fighting, he had to face the pursuit of Ruyuan Xiaozhuang. Fortunately, Kujue arrived in time and Cai finally escaped. After this plot, I gradually fell in love with this novel. I think the days in Qi State should be Jiang Wang's most high-spirited days. What I love most is the scene where he drank and had fun with a few friends in Linzi after a certain war, or went to Yun Kingdom to live a happy life for a few days. At that time, as a young man, his heart could truly rest. The Meeting on the Yellow River is also the climax of the book. Heroes gathered together, geniuses gathered together, and with closed eyes, one could imagine the high-spirited and unrestrained heroes on the line between the river and the sky. The ultimate fight, under Zhen Zhen's writing, is like mercury pouring down the ground, creating a scroll of countless intertwined spells and sword shadows. At the same time, when I saw Rucheng and Jiang Wang meeting each other, I shed tears involuntarily. Young friends, whose life and death have not been heard for many years, meet again in this grand event in the world. At that moment, the words naturally heightened the atmosphere to the extreme and made me cry. To be honest, I almost never cried while reading the book, but I was deeply moved by it time and time again and felt sad and happy for the characters in the book. There were several times when I cried while watching it. I remember one time when Yu Beidou died in front of Wang Zai, one time when Wang Zai returned to Yun Kingdom after fighting the Mysterious World War and cried on Qing Yu's shoulder, one time was during the Battle of Xia, when Chongxuan Sheng had to temporarily leave Wang Zai behind and left in embarrassment, and another time was when Ku Jue stood up to the six real ones by himself (thank you, he looked like Jiraiya, that was the only time I cried while watching Naruto). I don't need to go into details about how exciting the Battle of the Yellow River is. The writing is really like a storm. It was really exciting to watch at that time. The most praiseworthy thing is that Jiang Wanggang returned to the country in glory, but he was deeply imprisoned. He was framed by the kings and ministers of the Zhuang Kingdom and Jing, and was forced to go to heaven and to the earth. And his encounter with his old friend Miao Yudu touched my heart even more. The joy of meeting suddenly turned into melancholy, and their hearts were always pulling at each other and spinning around. I think another wonderful plot in this book is the killing of the village dog. This plot is not only extremely reasonable in its combat design, but also has a fast pace without any sloppiness. Various foreshadowings are gathered together in one place, like the screen breaking, it is so exciting! It happened to be the Spring Festival of 2026, and it was rare to have a quiet day to rest. I woke up early in the morning and watched it with concentration. My eyes almost never left the screen that day. When I saw the moment when Jiang Wang finally got his revenge, my eyes couldn't help but moisten... This journey has been extremely difficult. I happened to start chasing after the heart during the winter vacation of my junior year. During this period, various exams and other troublesome things came up one after another. I was looking for a good novel to relax more. Unexpectedly, when I read it later, I became obsessed with it. I could hardly control myself when I got up every day. After reading for a while, I thought about reading "The True Heart". Before going to bed every night, I look forward to getting up earlier tomorrow and using the extra time to watch it. I am a person who rarely stays up late and has a very regular schedule, but I actually went to bed outside twelve o'clock for several days to read Red Heart. The feeling of reading novels can only be compared to when I read Jin Yong's novels when I was a child, and even the feeling is inferior to Chasing Red Heart (only for me). To be honest, I didn't read the first thousand chapters on the official website. It's funny to say. I read the first few hundred chapters and often left comments at the end of the article. I couldn't bear it. I didn't want my pearl to be dusted, so I downloaded Qidian. I wanted to support it. But when I opened the starting point, I discovered that Chixin actually had such impressive results! Call! This made me feel at ease and felt very relieved! This book is really worth it, and I will always miss reading it in one go. It's a pity that most of the first chapters were read on other platforms and I didn't purchase them at Qidian. I'll order them later! I'm looking forward to reading it for the second time (unfortunately, it's so good that I'm addicted to it. I don't dare to read it now if I'm going to take the postgraduate entrance examination) In fact, I started writing this short essay the day I finished it. I forgot everything as soon as I got busy, and I didn't think of finishing it until today. Well, I hope to see more extras, and I'm looking forward to the anime adaptation of Chixin!

Congratulations on the completion of "Surveying the Sky with a True Heart". We have been together for six years. What a blessing! {"TopicId":"607172005921357824","TopicName":"Sincerely Surveying the Sky"}{"TopicId":"683295355802091520","TopicNa me":"Jiang Wang"}{"TopicId":"995007324090269696","TopicName":"Book Review Activity"} I was only a freshman in high school when I first watched "Red Heart Survey", and now I am about to be a senior. From the perspective of time, it does not feel long, especially since the past few years have been wonderful and vivid, so I don't want to say "Ye Qingjie", so let's use this as a stop and look back. At that time, the young man who grew old overnight in Maplewood City walked into the world with a sword in hand and an endless hatred of his country and his family. There is a classic line that Lord Wei Xun said to Jiang Wang, "When your sword is not enough to protect your principles, you must know how to advance and retreat." Today, Jiang Wang's sword is surrounded by the entire universe. This is a very good story. It has nothing to do with the theme, intention, or reality. It does not require 10 million words. It is a very good story. Over the years, the author has changed, the readers have changed, and Jiang Wang has also changed. We don't know where the future will go, but we just move forward with original intention, faith and courage. The name of the first chapter of "Surveying the Sky with a Heart" is: His amazing perseverance has no audience. It is Jiang Wang, who is typing on the keyboard full of hope, but he does not imagine that the future will be so magnificent. At the beginning of "Red Heart", there were only a few dozen orders. Ah Zhen just walked alone with a weak firelight. He was confused and exhausted, but never stopped. So the fireworks naturally bloomed. Now, his amazing perseverance is all the audience. Jiang Qingyang, Wu Anhou, Dangmo Tianjun, Jiang Daozhu, so I followed Jiang Wang's footsteps and looked back at "me": Well, I don't seem to remember myself very much six years ago. This is not a year-end summary, and six years is too vast, so when I try to recall an abstract and general impression, my mind is empty. Ah ha, as expected! I have always only focused on the present me. All things in the past are dead, and all things in the future are illusory. But the person I am today is happy, angry, melancholy, and calm, with a yearning for beautiful things and an ambition to climb to the top. What has been accomplished is the food that feeds me and the soil that shapes me. What is yet to be accomplished is the driving force that attracts me to move forward. It is the fruit and path that I pursue. In this way, I am composed of a complex, passionate and vivid me. Recently I am trying to practice a principle: pay attention to the process, believe in hard work, and then wait for the flowers to bloom. I don't go towards a specific goal, I just do what's right. At this moment, I have achieved some results, but I am far from being complacent. The more I travel, the more difficult it becomes. The feeling of fatigue will always haunt me, and the worry of gains and losses will always tear me apart. When you look up, the stars are shining brightly; when you look forward, the sky is high and far away; when your feet are on the ground, it's hard to stand straight in the sea. It is difficult to move even an inch in the world of ephemera, but it is this world that deeply attracts me. I use words to engrave my mood at the moment, tired and exciting: I hope that I will always maintain the enthusiasm and ambition to explore the world; I can compromise due to the current situation, but I cannot settle for mediocrity; I can pursue happiness, joy, and any beauty in the world, but I cannot settle for a moment of narrow joy. I have the greatest desire for what I see in the world. This is the fire of my life, the true belief that has led me to this point. May he never be extinguished. Finally, I would like to thank Qing He Yi Shen and Jiang Wang for the excitement and growth you have brought to me. I wish you, and everyone who sees this, that you will not forget your original intention and move forward.                                                                                                      . Let's encourage you all!

There are tens of millions of years in the book, seven spring and autumn years outside the book, and I am lucky enough to be together for two spring and autumn years. Every time I talk to my friends about my experiences with literature, film, television, sports, music, etc., I always like to say that I always join at the most appropriate time: I started watching basketball in the fifth game of the 2016 NBA Finals, and I happened to see James complete a comeback in the finals that is unparalleled in NBA history, and I fell in love with basketball; music, I always happened to watch and hear the singer Da Cheng or the old man reviewing his career. Music, movies or concerts, I always lament that I am not experiencing a golden age but seeing everyone look back; not to mention movies and TV, I appeared around 20 years ago when the masters have gradually disappeared, and fell in love in the 25 years of the transition between old and new. I always say that I missed it and got lucky; in literature, I always cautiously despise classics and have enthusiasm for online articles and tweets. I think I am a manifestation of the trend of the new era. Actually, this is just a comment on my ignorance, and I only gradually understood it recently. Every moment of devotion will create a different splendid experience. The splendid experience is limited by infinite material and spiritual resources, but the initial love is always equal to everyone. It was the summer vacation of 2024 when I first opened "Sky Heart Survey". At that time, I thought that a graduate student could only grasp what I could grasp. In such a hot summer, I saw one or two volumes of "The Bright Moon in the Sky" and "I Have No Heart to Love Good Nights". This was just a work that seemed to be more realistic, nothing special. "The End of the Galaxy" and "Heroes", the plot comes to the Warring States Period that I am fascinated by. It was the era of wars where heroes and heroes co-existed that many reading friends longed for. This aroused some of my interest; I saw Jiang Wang's infinite reversal of wisdom and courage in order to survive under Zhuang Chengqian's hands. Although the writing has the meaning of reversal, I think of my postgraduate career that has not yet come, I think of the time that keeps moving between me and her, I think of many dilemmas that are still in the future and in the past but are not in the present, and I use laziness and cowardice to start to exile myself in the infinite imagination. "Traveling is difficult", many novels have peak battles, and many anime have famous martial arts tournaments, such as "The World's Best Martial Arts Tournament", "Battle of Shinjuku", "War on the Top", "War of Universe Geniuses", "War of Three Thousand Daoshu Geniuses", "War of Hundred Dynasties", "Starry Sky Ancient Road", etc., And the "Yellow River Tournament" in this book is on the list. When everyone is driving various Among all kinds of cheats, only Jiang Wang came to the end with various auxiliary skills and "combat talents". In all the daydreams that little boys had, I really did not expect any superpowers of invisible time, space, water, fire, speed, but longing for a high-spirited and optimistic attitude of always winning. And Jiang Wang is indeed such a protagonist. I love such a character, and he began to quietly guide me. "Fuyao" and "I am like a god" are just a continuation of Shuangwen, but I understand the unfreedom, constriction, and metaphorical reality and society that the author wants to describe. I accept it and I have walked through it. "Crane Soaring to the Sky" and "Flower in the Mirror", the story goes to the monster, the dragon, and the past. In the final analysis, it is just a matter of class, race and history. I saw Jiang Wang's personal high spirits were submerged in a random collision of some kind of torrent, and he was struggling; I saw that some of the problems I was concerned about in reality were not as simple as I once thought. But I seem to have forgotten that my cowardice and avoidance are constantly eroding me. When I start to think about those distant and grand propositions, instead of paying attention to the practical words and deeds at my feet, my self-collapse is coming. At that time, I actually thought that I was an ordinary person with material limitations who was concerned about the country and the people and was considered a genius. "Everyone became who I am today", Jiang Wang completed the most important early plot recycling in the book, killing the Lord of the Zhuang Kingdom who destroyed all his happiness, and his old dream of Maplewood City ended that day. I felt high-spirited. I thought about the people I hated. I fantasized that under certain circumstances I could replicate Jiang Wang's behavior. I fantasized that I was the righteous one. I had a heroic fantasy in my infinite fantasy, but it was filled with actual hostility. At that time, my contempt for the postgraduate entrance examination had begun to bite me. I couldn't learn professional courses, I hated the reality that I couldn't understand, and I longed for the distant beauty to belong to me. I was so greedy that I would fail. "Bai Yujing in the Sky" and "Hua Zhang Tianqiu" are Jiang Wang causing trouble in the Heavenly Palace. I saw him resolutely resisting when he couldn't bear it, and I didn't dare; I saw him getting involved in the struggle for the almighty plan, and I was afraid of failure and waited for death. I felt ashamed because of Jiang Wang's brilliance. "Chao Wen Tao", I saw Jiang Wang exhausting all the imagination he could touch to survive and ask, and finally developed the Tao, and finally became a chess player. I saw a person who has been working hard and fervently reaped his fruits. He reached the highest point in the book, but still used his sword to defend the correct truth. He did not abuse it. He is full of love, he is full of hope, and I see the hesitant and painful me in the infinite light. I always tell myself that the graduate student is still in my hands, and I see that the opportunity I long for is still around me, but the deepest voice in my heart tells me: If I continue to be confused, everything will leave - and I pretend not to hear. Starting from "The World Honored One", the combat effectiveness of the whole book reached the highest level of rule collision. I caught up with the author's updates here and started the road to catch up. The world no longer unfolded in front of me with fighting, but with the collision of ideas as the core. Here I suddenly began to understand: how stupid was the complacent intelligence in the past, and how foolish was the superiority that was created out of nothing in the past. I see that there are actually only a few collisions between right and wrong in this world, and there are more collisions between right and correct. This kind of collision is the most intense, the most painful, and the most without room for maneuver. Everyone will always show their infinite strength until now, and they will try their best to hide the infinite softness they cherish. This is when I am most miserable. I will get up early every day and go to the library to play games for the day. I will leave the library early every day to play basketball or go to the Internet cafe. I will chat with friends about movies or music. More often than not, I will eat like crazy every time I am bored. I will do endless things and not do exactly what I should do. Preparing for the exam is actually not difficult, so my teachers who like me, my brother who takes care of me and who always believe in me will always look at me with unquestioning eyes. I feel endless burning in this look. I feel that my past endless evasion and cowardice in facing the truth finally came back to me and destroyed me head-on. I am like a stray dog ​​that wanders the streets all day long, wandering between the gap between the "right path" and the "sincerity", falling without limit. At the end of 24.11, I had completely surrendered to the postgraduate entrance examination but could not say it, so I bought a scale and equipment and started to engage in real exercise. When the number pointed to 120kg, I was like the protagonist in a Christian novel who finally realized that he was contaminated. I wanted to leave this world in some way, but fortunately I thought of Jiang Wang, and fortunately I thought of the sports I love. They taught me that mastering my own body is the foundation, and all extensions come from a solid self. I have infinite resistance to knowledge and real rules, but I still have some enthusiasm for sports. I lost 15kg in a short period of time during the winter vacation, and my life returned to normal. I miraculously found a job with a good salary. My thesis tutor was a responsible and gentle tutor recommended by my seniors. . . . . . Suddenly, the path to innocence is endless! Everything in my world extends to beauty. I am immersed in beautiful fantasies, weaving the kingdom of dreams. "Riding the Stars", I saw Jiang Wang erecting a white sun monument: Do not do evil under the daylight, I was fascinated by it; I saw that his ideals that tried their best to protect themselves were still crushed by other people's greater ideals and power, and I was painful. At the same time, that beautiful dream was shattered in the blink of an eye. Behind the gentleness of the teachers in school was the strictness and neatness of the thesis design, which I could not face directly because I was skipping classes and wasting away. Behind the abilities of the bosses in society were the cruel gray rules of how the world operates, which was not something I could understand because of my stubbornness and honesty. I couldn't tell whether the teacher was strict or oppressive, I couldn't tell whether the boss was guiding me or tempting me. What I thought was correct collided with what was actually correct and fell to pieces. But this book encouraged me at that time. I saw that Jiang Wang was not invincible in the world, but he made a declaration. He said that he would protect what he could protect, and he would study day and night and practice swordplay non-stop for this purpose. Along the way, my fragility is clear, but I no longer think that I am worthless. I believe that I am weak, but still have possibilities. I believe that I can get better, even if the pace is slow. As I continue to polish my employment and the postgraduate entrance examination during World War II, I have listened to a lot but have been unable to make up my mind. The next day I went back to school to take graduation photos. Some of my lovely juniors took photos with me and asked me where I was going. I was so tired that I talked about my work, but they didn't listen seriously. They just looked at me with big eyes that showed trust and friendliness. I don't know why, but I wanted to stop warning them that work is not easy. When I said it, I didn't think about whether these cuteness were related to ignorance and childishness. I thought of Jiang An'an, Ye Qingyu, and Chu Yao. I suddenly felt that these people are so beautiful, my junior students are so beautiful, this time is so beautiful, I want to come back here, I want to start over, and I want to repair the mistakes of my life. So I decided to start all over again, and I wanted to set a monument to my life. The last volume of "Surveying the Sky with a Heart" will be launched with me in June of 25th year. The climax of the battle between the gods and my exam will come together in December. It is always easy to talk big words, and serious enthusiasm for study cannot compete with the inertia deep in life. I kept the most basic progress every day, but spent a lot of time every day watching movies and idle books, doing things that I didn't understand. At that time, I just felt that life was another endless landslide. Today, I see that a little progress every day, maybe It has been my change; It is always easy to divide the fat. The serious preparations of the human race cannot match the bloodiness of the alliance army. The human race strives for perfection everywhere, but they see the infinite reunion of the alliance army that is not afraid of death and fights for every possibility of life. I saw the star divination master die from divination, the battlefield master die on the battlefield, and the talented boy died from his talent. I saw pride being constantly chopped into pieces, but instead the blood and will to life inspired high-spirited poetry. In the last month, I finally launched a charge with all my heart. I no longer thought about whether I had wasted the previous six months. I just wanted to burn all my fuel wood in the last month and die without regrets. Maybe it was luck, I became proficient in the two professional courses through endless repetition, and when I wrote every word, my heart was filled with the courage to win; maybe it was fate, at the end of December, when the emperor of the Jing Kingdom and the First Killing Formation came out to rescue the people, he responded to the soldiers he had been fighting with a combat power that transcended the battlefield. The war between Shenxiao ends at this moment! In January, a huge emptiness swept over me, and I fell into confusion again. My weight rebounded slightly, and I no longer had any control. I put my heart in movies, but only spent time in pain and nothingness. At that time, I just went to Shijiazhuang to visit one of the few close friends in my life. He had already embarked on a new journey of marriage work. I did not imagine the hardships he had gone through this year. I only saw that the responsibilities and burdens of life only suppressed his gentle smile and gave him a little more persistence. Shenxiao is over, the ideals of the defeated are nowhere to be realized, the reckonings of the victors are all over the place, and reality is instantly wiped out beyond recognition. I see the confusion of the victors is even greater than that of the losers. I think, I think about my various postures between victory and defeat in the past two years. I correct my direction. I feel that the engine of my life is heating up slightly, and I may be about to roar. In February, the results of the preliminary examination were high and I entered the interview with high scores. The end of February bore fruit. Long-term thinking about life requires paying the price of not being familiar with the subject knowledge. The high requirements of the re-examination made me worry about gains and losses all day long. Jiang Wang, who was invincible in Yan Dao, did not remain arrogant for too long. Once he was forced to transcend the signature, he once again fell into the pressure of climbing. Jiang Wang and I finally walked together at this moment, and my pursuit made sense. In March, the turning point in my life came. A friend I had not seen for many years insisted on taking a walk with me, and with one word he untied the knot in my heart that had been sleeping for ten years. It was the source of all my pain, the reverse of all my escapes at that time, the reason for all my cowardice, and the end of all my fantasies. But in fact, I am not happy or sad, I just feel lost. After so many years of scrutiny and obsession, the truth has already appeared in the imagination. In fact, it is not the real you and me who can't get out, but my own imprisoned heart. Once I was enlightened, I no longer had too many mental obstacles. I felt that my thoughts were finally flowing smoothly, I felt that the world had regained its color, and I felt that all the questions in the re-examination were looking after me. In the book, the world is in chaos, the world is open, and in the war and strife, I see the Emperor Liuhe's commitment to the doomsday, I see the Dacheng Holy Saint's commitment to the doomsday, I see Jiang Wangdang Mo's commitment to the doomsday, and I see my own commitment to my actions. April, admission. My friend's words guided me to constantly move towards a better version of myself. I became a monk like Jiang Wang, exercising hard and protecting my love. My weight dropped by 12kg again. In the book, there are three certificates of immortality. The most heroic and powerful people in the book have a final decisive battle, and Jiang Wang ignites fireworks at the end of the universe, and he embarks on the road to be invincible in the world. May is dull. I infected my friend, who stepped into the moving river from frustration and trance. We started a new practice to meet more possibilities and better selves, even if there are infinite unknowns in the future. Zhu You appeared, saying some clichés about not paying attention to plants and treating people as human beings when they are strong, and was weakened by the joint efforts of all those who love the world. Jiang Wang cut off the injustice of destiny, burned the old demon's obsession, and gave the world infinite fairness and possibility, and the world continued to set off towards the unknown and possibility. . . . . . . I think of the time and love I lost, and I don't want to lose them again; I think of the things I love that have been hurt, and I don't want to allow them anymore; I think of the ordinary, ordinary and confident person that I am, and I don't want to fail to act again. I have to work hard. "Like entering a fire, you will find a cool door" is originally a Taoist saying. From other sources, I first thought it was like entering a flame and still feeling cool, which is an unfathomable state of freedom. This was exactly the ignorance I experienced in the hot flames in the midsummer of 24 years; later I learned that this sentence means entering the flame but feeling cool. This is the second fool who has been burned out. This is also the annotation of my 25 years of wandering; Nowadays, I believe that the trials of life are as hot as flames at certain moments. This flame is just like Jiang Wang's Samadhi True Fire, which carries all the knowledge about me and burns me personally. However, there is such a state that through self-cultivation and mind cultivation, by embracing the torrent of reality, I can obtain some kind of transcendent cultivation, so that I can survive such a fire unscathed and feel cool and calm. It is said to be "like entering a fire, getting a cool door." I hope my well-intentioned misinterpretation will echo back to me many years later. I believe that some friends will see my words directly, and some friends will feel it. I want to be a person who lives up to my loving friends. I believe that everything between you and me still has a chance. I believe that these words I write now will reach your ears one day. I hope you will cherish them. I believe that my thinking, my actions, my efforts, and my knowledge are not ignorant and empty. One day, these will shake the universe in my own eyes. I hope everything is fine.

There is indeed a reason for the popularity of the Immortal Cultivation novel "Red Heart Patrolling the Sky". I followed it when it continued to dominate the monthly votes list. It was recently completed and I will read it after I have finished it. The overall plot of this book is good, the line skills and characterization are also top-notch, and the author's writing style is very good. Hey, the more I read to the back, the more difficult it is to put it into words. I still remember a comment I made about 70-80% of the time when I read a certain chapter. It was very appropriate to describe my feelings, "The plot is unreliable, the words are gorgeous, and the chapter is summarized." The author always describes things that are too insignificant in too much detail, and repeatedly emphasizes on insignificant points. This book can write 10 million words and you can feel it just by looking at the size. From the point of view of writing a story that needs to be detailed and appropriate, it is quite a demerit. If the content and plot could be streamlined, this book would become a masterpiece. Alas, it's a pity