The Heavens-Spanning System Gourmet Hunter

A book is basically all about battles, not much food, and not much original plot. How can this attract readers who are influenced by food and hunters and come to read the book?

Author, the next system reward should be a complete set of Nian system practice methods, so that there will be no need for help. Then the concepts developed are best related to food! This way you won't be accused of selling dog meat to others... Anyway, come on! Power generation with love! Great author!

I was looking forward to this book. It might turn out to be the same as or better than the Food Hunter book. At the beginning, I met the second-generation gangster who was brainless and ignorant in the city of gourmet food. He killed him to establish his authority, which was normal. The management of the Food City is normal. The protagonist is still like that when he arrives at the Sky Arena, but the management of the Sky Arena are such idiots! Having seen so many people using Nen and weird Nian, as well as Nian after death, I would have no problem provoking a madman for the sake of trivial benefits and face, and a madman with unknown Nian abilities. If such people had died long ago, in a world with extraordinary power, people without power and with abnormal brains would not survive the second episode. ... Delete after leaving a message.

Hunter World is really awesome. According to what you wrote, every gang has the strength of the Yin Beast. I am laughing so hard! ! ! If you don't read the original work carefully, if you don't check the information, it will be a purely self-obscene novel! ! ! ! Selling dog meat on a sheep's head

It's not the protagonist who has a problem, it's the author who has a problem. You always arrange to change the map and encounter artificial contradictions and collisions, and then kill people by brushing the map. Do you know what writing rhythm is? Do you think that after killing people and then having a meal, it will slow down... Not to mention that the protagonist has a basis for killing people, it was not arranged by you yourself

To be honest, I was looking forward to this subject, but the more I read, the more disappointed I became. The logic is very confusing. It is one thing to have a system to improve, but it cannot be practiced? As soon as I say that I can only do what I want to do, and rely on the system, there is Bisji, a master of telekinesis, who refuses to learn. I have to wait for others with malicious telekinesis to forcefully open telepathy, and then try to improve myself by relying on the system? I talked about my plans throughout the whole story, but to be honest, I didn't see any plans for the protagonist's actions.

It's miserable to write these three books, one book and two updates a day, with 13,000 words. 😆My fingers and hand joints have been sore for a month. .

As far as I can see so far, this book has a big problem, the creation of contradictions. The author likes to use the style of fantasy novels, bully, slap in the face, make things big, bring out a bunch of people, the protagonist can't beat them, and develop. Later, he became stronger and stronger, and the clan was exterminated. This kind of simple routine can be used once, but if it is used multiple times, it will make people feel tired. Why are there always people who don't have eyesight? The author can refer to the hunter fanfic of the author of Pirates Harm. The author needs to improve the conflicting points in the construction, as well as the main plot construction behind it. He can no longer use the above set, Lao Bai really can't read it. Other feelings are handled well, I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

A gourmet coupon triggers a gourmet journey. The funniest thing is that the longevity rice and the two-tailed hell rattlesnake actually appeared in the human continent. I was convinced. Did the author seriously read the original work?

I was a little confused when I read it. I originally thought it was a food article + a hunter's adventure story. As a result, I cooked some noodles at the beginning and became a little chaotic, and then I kept fighting and killing. It doesn't matter if you just fight or kill, the telekinesis ability you have developed can be used to beat the enemy's hands a few times, and kill some not weak telekinesis users in an instant. As a result, when faced with a piece of garbage that could be killed instantly, he was tricked by the other party, and his telekinesis ability was blocked. . Go ahead, the main character has killed thousands of people in about 100 chapters. How many people are going to be killed next? Be careful, 404. There are only a few fellow hunters, so be careful.