A Swordsman

Already seen. The writing style is quite good, and there are no quips. I just want to talk about my feelings about the plot. We new authors all have a common problem. The text does not have a strong sense of substitution, so readers cannot read it and do not want to read it. For example, in Da Da's writing, the background of the story is very unclear, ancient or modern? Even if it's a false statement, pay attention to the way the characters speak. Furthermore, what are the conditions of the protagonist's family? There are servants, but I always feel that the description of life is quite ordinary. What is the origin of the book that flew out later? This is just my little feeling, it may not be correct. Come on!

The writing is really good and it looks great. Come on!

1. Is this a first-person novel? Obviously not, but there are a lot of "I"s used in some places, which made me confused. 2. The beginning of Chapter 1. What beginning did you start with? Carrying water? Rushing for the exam? Still the last secret! It looked so cloudy and foggy. 3. Some paragraphs are too long, which affects the reading experience!

After reading a few chapters, I can see that the author has good writing skills, but the mixture of ancient words and modern nouns gives people a very abrupt feeling and makes the readers lack a sense of involvement.

Received! The author has his own writing style, which is very admirable. The writing style is smooth and the writing style is chic! Come on!

The writing is still smooth, please read the follow-up, I like ancient martial arts, please keep reading

Hmm... The sense of immersion is not strong, but the writing is quite fluent, so keep up the good work.

Here I am, am I envious of your writing style? Other than that, the plot is simply too good and engaging!

The writing is pretty good, but some of the language needs a little polishing, so keep up the good work.

The author is very good, his writing style is very distinctive

The author's writing and plot are excellent, worth reading👍

As for martial arts, the language description is more biased towards urban novels. I don't know if it's a new style of martial arts writing, but the last time I watched a martial arts movie was The Thousand Doors. There is no big problem with the description of the scene. The description of the characters' appearance in the first chapter feels a bit behind. But because I have only read the first three chapters, I haven't fully understood the character. It seems that the big article is slow to develop, please work harder

I have collected a lot of works and encourage each other.

I am also someone who writes about traditional martial arts. It is really difficult to write pure martial arts nowadays. I will give you a vote today. There are several suggestions. The first is that the title does not fit well with the character of the protagonist. I suggest that both elements of the scholar and the swordsman can appear at the same time. In this regard, I recommend watching the Pili Puppet Show. Many of the characters' nicknames are very suitable for them, such as the story about the Buddhist sword. Come on!

I am a ruthless book-warming robot, please come on↖(^ω^)↗

Great book! Collected👍👍👍

Everyone's little opinion: It's better to write the chapters of the book, and try not to use the first person (the author can use his own ideas) The first chapter is a bit watery.

First of all, I would like to express my respect for the traditional martial arts and the authors who insist on writing traditional articles. Secondly... The writing style is passable, average to below average, the flow of the article is not very strong, and some sentences are not smooth. Then, I compiled a few suggestions: 1. The introduction does not particularly match the character of the male protagonist, or the author has arrangements later. 2. The opening is not too eye-catching, there is no obvious conflict point, and it is a bit flat. 3. It is recommended to indicate the number of chapters. (Just a suggestion, no need to take it seriously)

I'm coming😁😁😁

The pace is a little slow in the beginning. The third golden chapter could use more conflict. Come on, it's a good story and the author has ideas 👍

You can tell that the story is thoughtful, not to mention the writing style. Let me talk about the shortcomings. The sense of immersion is not strong. After reading four chapters, I was sure that this was an aborigine, not a time-traveling party. There are also several places in the story that are not explained clearly First, if you fail the exam three times, you will give up the exam. According to the Thirty Old Ming Jing, the Seventy Young Scholars will be awarded the Jinshi. Second, the origin of the martial arts book was not explained. An ordinary family had this book. Third, water carrier, what kind of family is this? Town life, people in the city, people drawing water from wells? It's almost like this, it feels like it's the family of pig's feet, pig's feet, the introduction is not clear! The sense of involvement is poor!

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that they are not in line with the title. Personally, the author added a background introduction or something. Maybe I don't often read this type of content, so I feel a little confused.