Knights in the Big World of American TV Series

Chapter 148 The End of Merlin... What did the protagonist receive? What did you get? Merlin's plot... What are the consequences of the protagonist's push for change? The entire Merlin volume is completely the author's self-excitement for unknown reasons, and then he was so excited that he let himself go, and he was ruined for 148 chapters... He ended the Merlin volume with a confused look 😡 The protagonist in the Merlin volume deliberately suppressed his means and strength, which has been explained, but! The final showdown seemed a bit childish! Especially the protagonist's king's treasure and the bone dragon fought for a while, and the bone dragon was fine, and then in the blink of an eye, it was hit in the head by two arrows from the dragon-slaying crossbow on the city wall and took a quick lunch! Even though your king's treasure is a replica! But it is by no means powerless and cannot even be considered a parallel import!

I took a look at it for free, and found that the setting is completely broken, there is no power system, and the feeling of strength depends entirely on subjective assumptions, sometimes strong and sometimes weak. And that's not all. When I woke up from the first battle, I started cutting and castrating. When I read Chapter 249, I suddenly lost my strength and was useless. I overthrew everything and started over. I changed the map and started again? So what are the first two hundred and forty-eight chapters about? More than 200 chapters of identity and background introduction? Then you only need to read the introduction of this book and then skip the previous chapters and start reading from scratch. Objectively speaking, I can't say it's highly toxic, but I can see it secretly. . .

This book is very uncomfortable to chew. Merlin will poison you to death. I don't know what the author means by writing this. If we want to understand the plot, we can just read Merlin. Why are we reading this book? It keeps advancing the original plot. I don't know if the author can't write his own plot or something, but the protagonist is not like Kay, but like Arthur. I have read a hundred chapters now, and the protagonist has been wiping the old king's butt, wiping Morgana's butt, wiping Merlin's butt, and wiping Arthur's butt. This book might as well be renamed "The World's Most Powerful Book" "The Strong Knight's Journey to Wipe the Butt" Well, I was really frustrated to watch it. The plot relies on wiping the butts of a few people to advance. It was originally a story about an invincible knight beating the world, but it turned out to be a journey to wipe the butt. The writing is good, but the way the plot is advanced is really disgusting to the readers. The more I read it at night, the more frustrated I became. I was torn apart.

Advice to authors: Please do not use nicknames instead of names in the text. When readers read novels, a very important point is immersion. In the author's novel, Morgana's maids are always referred to by the so-called "Gun Niang" instead of their names. I personally feel very bad... Just like now, I don't remember the name of the maid who appeared in so many chapters. I only remember an inexplicable "Gun Niang"... For characterization, this feels really bad. The title "Gunniang" is obviously a nickname and a joke for virtual characters in a certain circle. Just like people who have watched Naruto will call Naruto "Prince", people who play Diablo III will call the Crusaders "Beans". But for people who don't watch Naruto and don't play Diablo III, they might think: What's all this? ? ? (Question mark face). You have been using Gun Niang instead of your name in your novels, which means you have been playing tricks that some readers cannot understand. Firstly, it is baffling for readers who have never come across that small circle. It feels like the author is always playing tricks that they do not understand and is enjoying himself in it, which greatly affects the sense of immersion. Secondly, this makes people feel that it is a drama and affects the rhythm of reading. Nicknames are only used when people are talking to each other, and "weird nicknames" are always used instead of names in the text. It feels as if I am not "reading" a novel, but the author is "talking" about stand-up comedy... Anyway, every time I see the word "Go away", I feel choked. The plot of the novel is quite interesting, but the "get out of here" type of plot really makes me feel uncomfortable. I hope the author will consider my suggestions. After all, your novel should not only be written for some people like you who have watched the "Gun Girl" TV series. You have to consider the broadest group of readers. I think it should be a very basic requirement for readers to "understand" the novel. 🙂

The chapter before the protagonist falls asleep is quite good, and I feel that the theme content is relatively clear and clear. From the moment it was put on the shelves, just like book friends said, the protagonist collapsed after waking up. Other stories can be passed according to the original historical process. It doesn't matter whether he is there or not. Moreover, the protagonist feels that he is only worthy of three lives in it, but he is forced to play the decisive role, but the result is not much different from the original plot. When I saw 245, I couldn't stand the rest. I feel like I might as well go see the original movie...

The combat power is a bit strange. He boasts about being a thief. He fought with Gilgamesh and killed the Frost Giant King with Odin's father. He has the ability to kill and become stronger. It is written in Chapter 9 that killing creatures will increase the energy bar. When the energy bar is full, you can add attributes and have a certain chance of plundering the abilities of creatures. As a result, after traveling for ten years, a griffon snatched away the horse on the way home. He was forced to walk for five days. Ten years of free development time. You say you are a mage, but you wear heavy armor and hold two swords. You say you are a melee mage, but your mental power is only 40 points. What have you been doing in the past ten years? What are your other abilities? Strength? A gryphon struck seven times with an axe, without breaking the defense. It took more than ten minutes to chop off the head. How agile? Chapter 40: Owen went to pick up the gloves, but the protagonist was so close and did not stop him. He watched the child die in front of his eyes. And the biggest problem in the whole text is your unnecessary English. I don't understand. Do you want the book to have a more Western feel, or do you want to use each letter to represent a word, so the number of words is different? 🤔🤔

Don't look at it, don't look at it, don't look at it! Important things have to be said three times. This book is highly toxic, don't read it!

This is a book to kill time The protagonist's personality is unpleasant and too weak, and the protagonist's abilities are too confusing and immature. The plot is a bit stiff and the lines and dialogue are inconsistent. It can only be used as a running account, to read and pass the time.

I can't stand Morgana's self-centeredness and Arthur's ethical romance. The plot is good, but the more I watch it, the more awkward and uncomfortable it becomes 😅

The writing is so complicated and pieced together. Do you think you can perfectly control your ideas? I can't stand it anymore!

The book is really good, but the first one is about becoming a nanny in the theater. I hope I can live out my own style. The characters are pretty good too, League of Gentlemen and Bayonetta have good reviews.

Basically, the next chapter is all about legend science. I am writing two lines and then I will do legend science.

Let's put it this way, overall it's pretty good, but since it's a fantasy novel, there should always be combat. I see that most of the time, I feel like I just let the guys fight or watch others fight, which is not very enjoyable.

These two pictures are a bit perfunctory and watery. In fact, they can really set off the pig's feet.

I would like to remind new readers to just start reading from chapter 249, because everything before has become identity and background. Chapter 249 directly changes from god to waste and starts from scratch. Oh, I forgot to mention that chapter 249 starts with the Marvel plot after 2008. I don't know what it is specifically, because I removed this post after I posted it. It's quite disgusting🤮🤮

The more I write, the more it collapses. The power has no system, sometimes big and sometimes small. The legendary knight meets Odin and fights the ice giant. If you can't reach the level of God King, you must at least be at the level of Lord God. As a result, he was useless when he returned home, unable to even defeat a witch. Intersect with Seth, meet the sacrifice of Anubis, and if it is not a complete mummy, it will be destroyed with just one hand? !

This book seemed fine at first, but it got worse as I read later. With a god-like twist, he suddenly disappeared and then changed his body. Delete your account and practice again! Waste of my money subscribing. . Reported.

So far, the story is quite exciting, but I haven't seen the protagonist take full action once. In addition, the setting is a bit unreasonable. Because the body structure of Marvel's Asgardians is different from that of earthlings (their body density is three times that of earthlings), even if they are civilians, their physical fitness is several times that of earthlings. This group has an average natural lifespan of five thousand years. Whether it is lifespan or strength, the top ones, the ones who are called gods, are stronger. Among them, Thor, who is not fully awakened, can almost defeat the Hulk in a duel in Thor 3. (The rational version of the Hulk can lift more than a hundred tons of weight with one arm.) The physical fitness gap between him and normal earthlings is estimated to be hundreds of times. I hope it is worthwhile for the protagonist in the novel to add points to his skills, otherwise I don't know how to explain his successful cooperation with the King of Asgard.

The writing is pretty good, but that Morgana (PS: I really don't want to call her the heroine) is so disgusting. She is completely self-centered and cannot listen to others. (PS: I read it from beginning to end, but I really can't stand it anymore. This woman is so disgusting.) I posted this post just to tell the author to pay attention.

The opening chapter is very exciting. The protagonist, as the brother of King Arthur, has an affair with Odin, is a brother-in-law with Gilgamesh, has sex with Zeus, and has sex with Athena. As a result, he was messed up by a bunch of ordinary drug dealers at the back. 😅

As Mr. Xing said, beauty is like a flower that needs green leaves to set off. With Gun Niang as a backdrop, the emperor's beauty has risen to another level. If you don't believe it, just watch "Merlin" and you will know.

It's obvious that they can show their strength, but they are all juniors, pretending to be cool, and just walking away from the plot, it's almost over. Do you have to delete your account and start training again? ? ? ? I feel like I have followed the old way of traveling between planes in the past few years. When my strength is high, I delete my account. It's not interesting at all.

Hey, this book is still being written! 249 Walks under the collection

I have canceled it, and the cool article has almost turned into a sad article. I deleted the account and started again. The time span is too big. There are still paragraphs after paragraphs. This is not how to leave foreshadowing. It makes people uncomfortable to read.

The protagonist is that the emperor is not in a hurry, but the eunuch is in a hurry. Americans are messing with Americans. You are not an American, but you have traveled through time. What kind of savior do you think you are, Holy Mother?

Write a book, just write a book, don't bring xenophobic ideas, you can think about it, but please don't write it in a novel, and don't let others notice the angry youth and affect other people's mood of reading the book.

I would like to give you a suggestion. When writing American comic novels, it is best to have less description of China. It is best if you can briefly mention it. If possible, it is best not to write it, but it should be unrealistic. This has nothing to do with politics or anything like that. It is simply that the writing is really bad, and it is really embarrassing when I read it😓

The first part was fine, but the change of body in the middle was extremely poisonous to me, and I couldn't continue watching it. . . . .

This is the first time I have seen the main character's power system written backwards, getting weaker and weaker as it gets written, ranging from a steel god king to a mortal being.

This book probably records the story of how the protagonist gets worse and worse step by step. From the prequel ten years of fighting with the ancient gods py everywhere - to the battle of Camelot with the ancient wizard - the first battle with the British knight king fighting the German army - the rural police chief.