Reborn My 2002

What to say about this novel! The plot of Breaking Point is insufficient. There are too many chapters about Wukong, too much data, and too little real content. The previous title of the book was "Youth Explosion", but it did not show the process of enjoying the sunshine of youth that it should have, and it did not have the maturity or growth that it should have. Overall, it's quite refreshing. Maybe I'm just talking nonsense, sorry.

The writing of "All Reborn" is not flammable at all. You said you want to establish a character and set up a character for so long. It is of no use and the achievement is not great. It feels like this book is anticlimactic. It is obvious that "All Reborn" is nothing.

New year, new beginning, new year, new atmosphere! Life is happy and family is happy, career is booming, bid farewell to the old year and welcome the new year! ! 🌹🌹 I wish you all good health, financial resources, and good luck in the new year! 🙏🙏

In fact, the chapter is well written. I personally feel that your character's appearance is a bit messy, but the outline is not messy and the personality is full. I think Han Yue wrote it well, a very strong girl. I always feel bad about the protagonist. Maybe I have been reading novels for many years, almost 10 years. The writing seems a bit light, for you. But very nice. Compare to other novels. I have a strong sense of reading (only for me)

Well written, keep up the good work 😁

So pathetic! There is no need to sign a contract with so many words

Comrade author, I think even if you are short, you are much better than such crazy watering. Too much watering will reduce the reading experience for us readers. If you write 1,000 words and get paid 1,000, there is no need to find a way to get 2,000, otherwise it will feel very embarrassing.

After reading part of it, I found that the author's writing style was poor, but the plot was too good, and it was so watery that I couldn't stand it anymore. I think the reason that affected the signing of the contract was probably because it was too watery, which led to poor writing skills and no water level. But I have already invested, and as a new author, there is a lot of room for improvement!

I believe in you, the author, you must write well, don't be stupid and pretend to be a slap in the face, you must have an IQ.

Piyou is here to help, come on ^0^~, Ollie is here

I have read a lot of books, it must have been 8 years now, and I have read all kinds of books 😌. Now I just like to read some more ordinary books, not slap in the face, not worth hundreds of millions per minute, not popular, not stallion,,, etc. But it's always difficult I have found all the books like this that I can find. The book Rebirth of Me 2002 that I came across accidentally is very rare, really rare, so if the author can read it, I hope you can continue writing it, and don't stop writing 😭. For you, I registered for the first time and set a starting point, come on! Although I'm not a big shot

Do you know, the author, how many people can be persuaded to retreat in the first three chapters? Who can endure this plot? You can't do this if you want to arouse readers' emotions.

Let's start with 'eat meat' and hold on to the steering wheel! Time and space change and youth comes back, this life is so beautiful! Xiong Fei, who has returned to another world, has just caught up with the last wave of flights taking off in the bull market... The little tail! Faced with the embarrassing dilemma of being poor and penniless, in order to get the first bucket of start-up capital for entering the market, he knocked on the boss's wife's bedroom door...! Remarks: Everyone who voted, please go to the new book...! 😳😳

My youth is exploding, this second name is completely slippery! 😅 Now this name is said to be good, and some are said to be inappropriate. After all, the title of the book sounds like it is a mindless and cool novel, but it is actually a life and entertainment article! If you change your name, what should you change it to? Come on, let's complain! ! 🪖

After reading it, it's terrible. It's really well written. It's occasionally embarrassing and it tells stories. But really change the beginning. Seeing as you said you submitted the contract for the second time, you didn't just want to write it for fun. Most people will be poisoned to death by this beginning.

I finished reading 108😳 in one night, and I feel the plot design is good, and there is nothing that should be mentioned briefly. What I appreciate is the emotional setting of the protagonist: the grudges in the past life have not happened in this life, and the protagonist does not hold much grudge. There aren't many time-travel stories that aim to dominate the world! Overall positive reviews! Personally, I think the auxiliary role is a bit broad. I recommend tickets to support you first 🎁

It's understandable that the protagonist takes over, but it doesn't matter if you confess your love in public and the weird girl's words are unpleasant. If you have the courage to confess your love in public, you must also have the courage to face criticism. You can't blame the girl for this. After all, the author wrote the setting to confess his love in public. If the confession failed, you set the protagonist's heart to be closed and unwilling to study. It can only be said that the protagonist's heart is not strong enough. Has the author ever thought that in your article, the girl who was confessed in public, if she had not been strong in heart, retorted and insulted the protagonist in public, and gathered her mind, when the college entrance examination was about to take place, if the girl had been more fragile in heart, and the protagonist had confessed in public like this, would it have left an impression on her life? In 2002, everyone was still relatively innocent in high school. It can only be said that the protagonist's IQ and EQ were not good in his previous life. If you really want to blame, you can only blame yourself. Don't blame anyone. After all, no one forced the protagonist. He was tempted the first time he heard about it, and it was even more so the second time. After three years of social polishing after passing the college entrance examination, the protagonist himself is almost You should know more about Jin Jiliang. She was a goddess-like figure from a key university at that time. She had few contacts and few meetings. She said she liked you at a party and you took the bait. There was no other way. The protagonist was a liar in his previous life. In today's terms, to deal with this kind of person, you can succeed if you are a liar. I don't mean to complain, I just feel that after the protagonist is reborn, the author has downplayed his anger. After the rebirth, the protagonist should be happy. Rather than still living in the anger and helplessness of the previous life, as for the so-called revenge, it is just a side thing. 😁😁😁😁

Brother author, I would like to give you a suggestion: don't always belong to the Zhou family or the Zhang family. . . When I read these, I felt like I was going back to the novels written ten years ago, which was very inconsistent! And these families are not great people. If they must be a family, they must at least be provincial units or billionaires.

It took several chapters to explain the past life, which was a bit procrastinating.

The writing is very good, please write more.

I have been thinking about new books these days, so I have some ideas first. One is about the end of the college entrance examination in 2006, which coincides with the final take-off stage of the stock market. After all, I have written about daily experience in college, so it is easier to start; 😒 The other is directly This is a system stream for the 2007 graduation season. It is about entertainment stars who show off to others. I have no experience, and the whole opening chapter is difficult to write. However, the rhythm of the system stream will be faster, more refreshing and more conspicuous. It should be easier and more interesting for everyone to watch. 😠 The current plan is to write 20,000 to 30,000 or 30,000 to 50,000 words for both books and see how they turn out. Now I have doubts about the signing of the contract. I always feel that it is my fate to rush into the street and I can't escape., 😅😅

I want to say that this protagonist is the most miserable in this kind of time-traveling campus novel.

After his confession was rejected, he went to the hospital and then went back to school to apologize! When I saw the apology, I felt really embarrassed. It wasn't too poisonous, but it was also uncomfortable to watch.

She doesn't like pandas anymore, which annoys her. Yingying! Your pathetic self-esteem will never belong to you unless you fight for it! If you can't let it go, go earn it! When you have an idea, you should chase him. When you separate on the day after the college entrance examination, you should hug him. When you don't like him, you reject him. If you like him, you go after him! If I don't chase you, I'll let go completely. The character I brought into Yingying can't come out!

This kind of routine has eight hundred even if it doesn't have one thousand.

After reading Chapter 16, I felt stupid and decisively quit.

Regarding pandas, what do you think of this approach? The two of them drank when they graduated, got drunk, and left a seed for the Xiong family. The pandas must keep this child. It was only after a few years that the protagonist accidentally discovered it. From then on, the pandas inherited the family business, and Li Meng ran away to the Northeast when he had time.

The writing is quite good, but a little lacking. 🙂

You talk about the author, should I give this book a recommendation vote, or should I order you a copy?

Melancholy, the feeling of this book. There are many details that touch me. Do I hate the study committee member, do I apologize, do I hate the monitor, or do I hate the person named Wu? There is hatred, pity, and helplessness. In the end, you may be like Li Meng and want to change others and give others happiness, so that you can truly release yourself. The heroine? If I choose, I might be the squad leader. I have already gone through the pain. I want myself and her to enjoy beauty and happiness. Isn't that what life is like? Do you still want to pass your painful experience as if it were ordinary? I want to be better, and those who have suffered must also become better. I personally feel that Li Meng in the current novel is just accepting pain. I want to pursue him directly and defeat the villain directly, so that I can overcome the unbearable past. To endure it silently is just compromise and helplessness. A little reflection of the characters in the book. Palm fish is a sensitive person. Also, hey, as for this novel, I personally will talk about one shortcoming and one key point. Don't always copy the book. . . It seems quite helpless. Should I watch Rebirth or The Legend of Wukong? . . Or just make up the word count? Hehe. The main point is that the main plot of this book is too simple. Making money by writing a book, buying a house, and the people around you are all small stories. Maybe it would be easier to write by borrowing some stories and adding them in, but it is too much. If the priorities are not clear, the protagonist is always excluded, making the novel incoherent. My teacher told me about the paintings he painted. He painted lotus leaves, but because he painted dewdrops so well, people didn't want his paintings. Some people say this is the finishing touch! But no, I think writing a book is the same. I draw the lotus leaves and improve the quality of the lotus leaves before I draw the other embellishments so that they look comfortable and smooth. A little advice for authors, writing novels is quite difficult. We are also picky. Come on!