Unmatched

The ending felt too hasty and hasty. What was the last page of "Su Wen Jing"? How did Qiao Shu's mother have this page? Who did she accept? She just took the initiative to find the Jiao family. Did Master Zhen finally regain his identity as Fang Xiangye? There were also reactions from descendants of the Fang family, including the reactions of his wife and many colleagues. There was no follow-up between the second wife of the Fang family and Mr. Yan, nor was there any mention of her relationship with Fang Er. The scene between the master and Li, and the relationship between Hongdou and Tang Zhongyuan should also be described. There is no description of the wedding scene of the male and female protagonists. Xie Chengze became emperor too quickly. I also wanted to see a description of the family relationship between him and Princess Zhennan after the disaster. I feel that there are many scenes that need to be described after finding the murderer behind the scenes, but there are none. I have written almost 900 chapters. It doesn't hurt to have a few more chapters 😭

I was watching it a few days ago and was thinking about whether it would be finished. I wanted to ask in the group, but after thinking about it, I can read as many comics as I want, hahaha. I never expected that it would end in just a few days and start a sequel, so please give me as many sequels as possible. I wonder if there is any chance of a sequel with the female supporting character and Tianci in front of me? Congratulations to Manda! Finished the third novel! Come on for the fourth book! Although each of the Manda books is very long, I like to read them all. The more I read, the more I can't stop reading them. And the themes are different, which is great. The new books are the same. Keep up the good work!

Better than the previous one. But if you don't read the previous one, this one will be a lot less fun.

Although I wasn't happy about it in the early stages, her mental journey and ending are also disappointing. I hope the author can use her as the protagonist to tell a story of growth and transformation along the way.

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In addition, I have something to say. Although I don't know if the author can read it, I really think it would be great if the female supporting character, Celestial Master, could be published in physical books. I really want to collect a set.

Flowing Water and Falling Flowers, Spring Gone, ****, comes from Li Yu's "Lang Tao Sha". It was written when Li Yu was kidnapped to Bianjing after his surrender to the Song Dynasty and was under house arrest. It expresses his infinite nostalgia for his motherland, home and the beautiful life in the past, and reflects the poet's desolate state of mind when he was reduced from the king of a country to a prisoner among his subordinates. Looking at it this way, the conspiracy seems to be directed against the empress. This reminds me of the first chapter of Tiansheng Yipin. Anle seems to have an older brother who is still alive. I wonder if those with evil intentions will use this as a weapon.

Master of Heaven should be made into a TV series and it would be great to watch

Is there any Wen Anli who is as beautiful as the author writes... I am short of writers... The writing style should be good, the plot should not be watery, the heroine should not be delicate and dependent on others, should not be bloody, not love-minded, and not OOC.

The author's ability to control the setting of the story, as well as the level of storytelling and handling of details, is definitely a figure at the level of a Qidian female channel god. However, there are not many works, and the influence may not be enough. I hope to keep writing and see the day when the great god becomes a god.

The lack of rigor at the beginning makes people look down on it. Chinese people have never called women by their husband's surname. Why did Miss Qiao have to call her Mrs. Fang? Only foreigners do this! There are not a bunch of Mrs. Jia in Dream of Red Mansions. Serious people are called Mrs. Shi, Mrs. Wang, and Mrs. Xing.

It just feels like a lot of the cases here end in an anticlimax, and they can't be pursued for fear of the powerful... It's true. Especially the murder case of Miss Yuan, where so many people were killed, but the result was that the prisoner did not plead guilty and had a special status, and then nothing happened... Hahaha, is this a family matter? Is it something that the family can just let go without pursuing it? We have already made trouble at Dali Temple. The evidence is conclusive. You can still operate like this, but you are drunk. There are also Mrs. Fang, more people died, one clan, and then nothing happened... Although the reality is impossible to be truly fair and just, but everyone in the court will not always be afraid of the powerful, there will always be proud people, and the hostile forces will spare no effort to attack. I took a rough look at it and may have skipped some details, but it was really depressing.

How old did Miss Qiao live to be in her last life? The mind is so clear Have any book friends noticed this information? Having said that, I think the author's writing style is very good, the transitions are also well written, and the characters are vivid. In the last book, various comments made me sick. Many people will compare Xida's books. I would like to say that although the heroines of the two authors are both strong female characters with a clear mind, the plots are not similar. Each has its own merits. Don't you think it is very lucky to have their books complement each other in this book shortage? I think civilized readers should stay and read if they like it. If they don't like it, leave silently. Don't be so venomous. Otherwise, you can do what you want?

I really liked this book at the beginning, but the more I read it, the more I felt dissatisfied. I didn't solve a single case, and I didn't have the feeling of enlightenment. I solved all the cases, but each one was vague and sticky.

I'm very curious about what kind of heroine the heroine is. I read the beginning and thought the heroine is very weak. I personally prefer strong women. If not, please tell me, book friends.

From the first book about a female supporting character cultivating immortality to the third book The Mismatch of Heaven, every book is wonderful and you will never get enough of it.

Can you train that child Hongdou? At least grow up a little longer and be smarter, just like raising a child. Of course, if you think it's good for your slave to be honest, then just pretend I didn't say that.

To be honest, the heroine's performance in this chapter was a bit like a virgin. Even though he had a good impression of Xu Shi, he was suspected of betraying his whereabouts to the princess and almost succeeded. At least she didn't tell the heroine about her hookup with the princess at all. I was very disgusted with Xu Shi just because of this. In addition, I think neither Xu Shi nor Xie Chengze look like good people, they both make people feel weird.

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Sometimes I am afraid that the author has changed his original intention after writing, and it can still be seen generally. The characters are inconsistent and strange, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I am. The beginning of the book is good, but in the end, I really get involved in the cases. Those cases are so mysterious

I don't understand what it's about. It's a slow pace.

The beginning was outrageous. Would an orphan girl who was living in a relative's villa and had no one to rely on dare to negotiate terms with the wife of the house like this? The heroine is completely at the mercy of others at this time. She should find a way to save her own life first, but she even threatens the wife of the head of the house to ask for money and people, and to report the case to the officials. She doesn't even think about whether she has left another village, Li Liyuan is so amazing. They found two random domestic slaves and killed her, then reported her death due to illness and the whole book was over.

Congratulations on slowly being promoted to L5 writer, why not celebrate with a big bang 🤭🤭

Hey, show me your fan title🌹🌹

This meme of making someone sneeze no matter who mentions their name is used too often. 🤔 Sometimes just thinking about the name in your mind makes someone thousands of miles away sneeze, which is too much. . .

Can anyone tell me, there is obviously a Ministry of Punishment, but why are the people who solve the case are the Ministry of Personnel and not the Ministry of Punishment?

The case is actually well written, but many of the motivations and results of the case are vaguely written. There are too many threads buried, and it is a bit difficult to integrate in the end. The ending is anticlimactic, but overall it is a good book. Many people's endings ended without being clear. It is a pity, and the ending of Xie Chengze went back in time. It is a bit redundant. It is unnecessary to forcefully sensationalize. I hope the author can still write detective books in the future, but don't bury so many foreshadowings.

What nonsense is written? It's so messed up.

Pei Zongzhi in the previous book and Zhang Jie in this one need to be smart and capable. Why do they feel like tool men born specifically for the heroine? 🤔 I have nothing serious to do, so I just hang around the heroine and contribute to her career; even Pei Qingqing, the child of the hero and heroine in the previous book, has become the heroine's follower and bodyguard here like a tool man. The child is only ten years old, the age for learning knowledge, and her parents don't care. . 😓 Zhang Jie was so smart and clever when he was a child. There is no sparkle at all in this book, just standing behind the heroine in obscurity, as if invisible. In the case of Shanxi Road, our Zhang Jie Zhang Tianshi couldn't even tell that the people controlled by the poisonous insects were poisons, or the method discovered by the second male lead to get rid of the poisonous insects. 💀

From the beginning, it seemed like it was a bit confusing.