A Certain Scientific Hogwarts

The author who came to me is a data maniac. I really can't understand it without any academic qualifications.

The book is indeed good, but the large sections of popular science knowledge gave me a bit of a headache. It felt like I was reading a popular science book 😅 The story and plot itself are still very attractive. Thank you for the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Although the writing is pretty good, it is impossible for a child to be conscious before he is one year old, because he has no brain yet, and his brain only develops to the point where he can think after the age of two, let alone memory. Moreover, in the first few chapters, I felt that the author wrote whatever came to mind, so that he could only write like that later, and almost collapsed.

I can only use two words to describe it, confused.

In the future, will Pigfoot find out that he has a relative named Zhang Chulan😁🙂

See Chapter Nine. . . The author should sort out the plot and characters. In just a few chapters, there are dozens of characters from Harry Potter's Chinese and Western to Xingyue and Inception. It's like rushing to a show, one scene is completed and another scene is dizzying. There are too many characters that are mentioned in one stroke, which can easily make people feel like they are reporting a running account, and readers cannot figure out the author's intentions. Reading novels now is basically reading rational imagination. I feel like something is too abrupt,

The author suffers from ankylosing spondylitis, not pneumonia. New readers, please don't get me wrong. Temperature changes and cloudy days with rain and snow can cause severe pain. Generally, in this case, you will not have the energy or mood to write.

Silence! May the deceased rest in peace, may the living work hard, and may the motherland prosper!

Is this a stream of consciousness novel? It feels like the author is enjoying himself, but keep going! Just write more and practice more

I was a little confused and felt very confused, but when I came out of my subconscious, I felt a little bit interesting, but soon it became confusing again. I hope the author can sort it out. It may be unclear in a book, so don't cram it all in at once. Besides, the book is good, keep up the good work (ง •̀_•́)ง

Thinking too much? Fate for a while, HP for a while, Uncle Jiu for a while, I was looking at the clouds and mist?

Some of my humble opinions 1. It may be due to my reading habits. Articles are used to stacking a lot of information together, which makes it difficult to read. However, this article is a light-hearted article, which makes it a bit unreadable. Suggestion: The author must learn hydrology, crush his words and soak them in water. 2. The article is a bit messy. In fact, if you look carefully, most of the dialogue between characters in the book is the interaction between two or three people, and there will be blank spaces in the communication between each other. For example, in the previous chapter, the protagonist rubs his hands on the computer and Dumbledore comes to visit. Their communication lacks order and topic focus like the flow of a diary. They basically talk about whatever comes to mind. 3. Multiple sentence fragments. In fact, it means hitting the Enter key more often. Each Enter key corresponds to a central idea, and each sentence corresponds to a central idea. Large blocks of text are tiring to read, but short lines of three or two are much more comfortable.

It's so chaotic. There is a huge gap between the time ratio between the dream world and reality. Currently, a series of plots of 200,000 words including the protagonist's ability development, personality changes, and world connections are only completed in 3 days in reality! The protagonist is still 1 year old, so it seems that by the time Harry enters school, the book will have 2 to 3 million words. If the main plot is Harry Potter, I haven't even seen the beginning yet; if it's the gods, then the protagonist is too young. This is not a toddler, this is a baby! ! I think it is best for the author to clarify the priorities and omit the unimportant ones as much as possible to speed up the aging of the protagonist.

Where does the plot suitable for ordinary people start? The plot seems like different pieces of the puzzle are spliced ​​together. The author can explain it. If you just write something for fun, please tell me and I will leave silently orz

I have only seen more than 70 pictures, and I feel that the author is as casual as the protagonist, and the content is more based on the author's own words, without much consideration of the various character structures in the original work. Although it is a fan, there is no sense of familiarity with the characters in the various works. Anyway, let's take care of it for a while. I hope the author can write better and better~

It's so imaginative, I read 20 chapters and I didn't understand it at all. . . .

I saw Gardevoir come in. If you don't excuse me, I'll leave.

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The author's work of letting himself go!

What he wrote even I can't tell whether it's a dream or reality.