Transmigrating to the Soul-Summoning Plane

To be honest, it's better to write about an aboriginal. When writing about time travel, the emphasis is always on being in one's 20s, but in the end, what he does and what he says is not as good as a child of a few years old.

The subject matter is good! What to say about the content. . . Pig's Foot was 21 years old before time travel. How come his mind has declined after time travel? I always say that I have read countless horror movies, and this sentence gives me a headache 😅

Wuyu, you have traveled through time, what is it? I was like a retarded person for so many years in my previous life, and then I couldn't explain anything about Golden Finger, it was inexplicable

I think most people think the front is poisonous. Let me share my thoughts on the second supernatural thing I saw. The description of the orphanage at the beginning, to be honest, I thought it was quite good. The depression of life, coupled with the presence of ghosts, actually created a good atmosphere of horror. As for the criticized issue of the protagonist's adult time travel being impatient with his IQ, I thought about it. As an adult with a sound IQ, if I go to a place with ghosts, I will probably be mostly afraid. The collection of clues may only be at the level of the protagonist. After all, not everyone can calmly analyze and investigate the truth in that kind of environment. Overall, the first copy was relatively successful. The content after that was a bit painful to read. Reporters began to appear. I thought the description was good and thought it was a small foreshadowing. However, later on, I forced science popularization and introduced the concept of unkown, saying that unkown has a host, and then there was a confrontation on the second floor. This long paragraph completely dissipated the previous description of the terrifying atmosphere. From humans versus supernatural beings to humans versus humans, the importance of supernatural beings decreased. In my opinion, it was a bit of a failure. Maybe the author has his own ideas. In the second manor, there is actually something wrong with the dialogue content of several children. The logic and analytical skills they reveal are not possessed by children in their early teens and early teens. If they have this ability, it means that they are more mature mentally and will not bully the protagonist before or make appointments with the manor. Then the second supernatural incident occurs. The protagonist's behavior here is also a bit confusing. As an unknown with increased power, how can he have the confidence to protect himself and Issie from being killed by ghosts? What is the basis for his confidence? From the behavior of the three ghost children when he opened the door later in the story, and the behavior of the ghost father, it turns out that the protagonist actually does not have the ability to protect himself and others. Then the contrast between the protagonist's personality and the performance is very abrupt. If you want to describe an ordinary person struggling to survive in the face of ghosts, the description of the first supernatural event before the confrontation on the last second floor is very good. The subsequent portrayal of the protagonist is, to be honest, a bit of a pity. It feels a bit deliberate. It does not depict confident and calm thinking, and there is no reality of struggling to survive. The cold and stern look of a child of several years old, to be honest... Really deserves a beating. Maybe this is also the reason for the portrayal. After all, some of the behaviors of young murderers in real life and children in horror movies are also very scary. These are some of the advantages and disadvantages I have seen. I hope they can help the author. Finally, I wish the author can write better and better, after all, writing is not easy! 😁

I can't stand it after just one or two. Why is a twenty-one-year-old adult's brain so slow to react? How did he live by himself for three years?

This book has no logic at all and is a complete mess. The author talks about recruiting soldiers in Chapter 46 and says it has nothing to do with their orphanage. The friends will not be eight years old until this year. However, in the next chapter, several friends are going to be soldiers. I suspect that I am reading a fan of Naruto. They go to the army to serve as soldiers at the age of 7. No wonder this book is still half-dead after writing so much.

Chapter 489, but the protagonist is still a weakling. If you have no intelligence or strength, you will always be played around by the enemy. So my grades are not good, I don't even have a few comments, and I don't know what the use is of writing it down!

More than 100 chapters later, he is still a weakling. There is no benefit at all from fighting monsters. He has two pieces of equipment but no experience. The frequency of encountering monsters and the degree of weakness of this protagonist make it strange that he has not died yet.

I just thought I found a good book, but after reading a few chapters I can only say that the author wasted a good subject and idea.

,,,, What the hell is UNKNOWN? Didn't you say time travel to The Conjuring? There seems to be no such concept of UNKNOWN in The Conjuring Universe. Then a reporter there popularized a non-existent thing to you, and said that powerful force can destroy a city. He also said that he saw it from the newspaper. The Conjuring Universe is obviously a world that conforms to human society. The government will not allow newspapers to publish this kind of thing at all. This kind of thing will cause panic. And how can you, a reporter in his teens, have so much scheming? If you lie to him, don't blame him. There is a cold look in his eyes. Also, didn't it say that the protagonist traveled through time in his twenties? Then why is it written like a child, a proper primary school student?