Starting Out in American Comics, Traveling Across the Heavens

Is there no Shennong to explain the character design? How are the medicinal properties? Toxic or tonic, to tonify the kidneys or tonify the mind

I saw what happened to the people of the motherland. I was really speechless. The protagonist was obviously super powerful, but the author insisted on writing it like a weak chicken. I won't say it anymore. The most important thing is to forcibly reduce intelligence. The protagonist's IQ is equivalent to that of a first-year junior high school student, or at most a second-year junior high school student.

This book is very poisonous. The author himself lacks human sophistication. In many places, he describes his own wishful thinking, and it is the kind of thing that a normal person would know is impossible at a glance. In addition, it lacks common sense in Western countries, so when describing Westerners' dialogue, there is a Chinese tone. Moreover, he lacks scheming and dares to trust and tell anyone. The protagonist of a book can tell the personality of the author. Basically, it is concluded that the author is young, self-centered, likes to enjoy himself, has not experienced any worldly feelings, and his family also protects the author very well. These can be seen in the book

I saw Chapter 155, and the dialogue was really awkward. I don't know what the author was thinking. He was talking to a bunch of foreigners. I don't want you to feel like the translator in the movie. You can do it even with a modern Chaoyang accent. But guess what, it feels like an ancient martial arts novel. When they arrived in Wakanda, the old king said to the protagonist and his party, "Welcome to Wakanda. I have been rude, but I hope to atone for my sins." If this sentence is not enough, there is another sentence after it, "I haven't asked you what to call me? Why did you come to our Wakanda?" Are you serious? What does a bunch of African foreigners sound like? You are just saying "Come here, Gaha'er?" From Northeast China. I thought you were joking! What the hell is this ancient style of yours?

I don't know which world you want to see in the next world. 1: Man of Steel (including the Superman series) 2: Superman Hancock 3: My Superman Ex-Girlfriend 4: Black Robe Pickets (I don't know if anyone will watch this) Yes, Li Yue couldn't stand that his strength was too low, so he asked me to help him get superhuman powers. (It is not necessary to go to these worlds.) You can also comment and write other worlds you want to see.

After reading about the first 100 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The setting in the Marvel world in the early stage was okay and not too toxic. Then I wrote about the black-robed pickets, and the whole setting collapsed into a mess. Just now, he shot a meteorite with a weapon at the level of Marvel's Heavenly Father. Then it becomes only able to protect against bullet damage. It's almost as strong as a Panther tank with only one millimeter of armor. A body that cannot be torn apart even when traveling through space, and a body that cannot be penetrated even by bullets. It's really too bad to see.

The title of the book should be changed to - I Want to Lick Through the Heavens or - Lick Through the Heavens starting from Marvel

Almost all the authors who write about Marvel are licking shit. Most Marvels start out as licking shit, and then become SHIELD tools, or follow a few protagonists, without innovation.

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The protagonist was speechless when the teleportation was played like this. He was clearly invincible in the early stage, but he was forced to be unable to get close. Thinking about how the Flying Thunder God is played, how the surgery fruit is played, and how Sasuke's God's Power is played, the protagonist is used as an auxiliary, teleporting people. The plot can be simple, but I'm afraid it will be brainless.