Jiangshan Mojian

Not enough to watch yet, but it's good

Additional comments about this book The character structure is realistic and delicate. The most important point is that the characters of men and women do not fall into stereotypes. Nowadays, there are many female and male counterparts, but that is not the case here. Anyone can be the protagonist, and why would a woman not want to be happy in the world? The female characters here are very individual and do not have that rigid feeling (however, other aspects still need to be strengthened). Take Zhao Qingqiu, the apprentice of the protagonist in the first volume. She is a female knight-errant who enjoys being in the world. She has a certain personality of a woman (this personality is difficult to explain in words and needs to be understood personally 😏). There is also the boldness of men (I feel), the love of freedom (mainly see Chapter 10.9), And the brains... (This came from the chat in this old Dragon King group a few days ago) (Group R Buqiu is very pitiful)

1.Writing First of all, the writing style is what I admire the most. Everyone who has read it knows that the author's writing style is rare (anyway, I only saw 5 good writing styles in other novels). The author also put a lot of effort into the training of writing style, also integrated Excellent writing style (you won't believe me if I tell you, I actually saw the shadow of Cthulhu) 2.Things This work has a general outline, starting from the introduction, which means that it is very difficult to write this book well later. 3.Finally picked out the shortcomings that are not shortcomings I feel that this work will be slow to develop, and I always feel that it lacks a bit of warmth (my personal taste is more picky) (I finally found a fault, and finally found the bones in the egg🐶 to save my life) (2 pros and 0.1 Deficiencies comments added below)

I haven't read much martial arts, but if I read it patiently, it feels good and has some charm. Come on, author! But I still want to say something that is not good. Your introduction is too long. It is recommended to shorten it. Secondly, it is best not to have such a thing as a prologue, because many readers click on the table of contents and see the words prologue, and they are likely to stop reading. Today's readers like to see straightforward things.

If the judges feel interested, they can post their own special skills here, and the bamboo can be used to collect martial arts and incorporate them into the world. Martial arts name: Martial arts effect: (High martial arts and low martial arts are also acceptable) Martial arts origin: (righteous way, cult, hiding in the world, etc.) Martial arts introduction: Young heroes can post their names here, and Zhuzi will randomly select them and enter the world. (Those who join the penguin group and have titles must join) Hurry up and report your name! Name: (Please don't use uncommon words) Gender: Character: (external and internal personality, etc.) Age: Weapon: Martial Arts: Cultivation: (One to Nine Realms - Grandmaster/Real Person) Origin: (Choose one of five righteous, neutral, cult, hidden sect, and individual) Thank you for your love, Zhuzi is very grateful!

Come on Bamboo! Don't worry too much about other people's eyes, just go for it.

Don't look back The lights behind you are not your home.

Come on! Who will form a team at the end of the college entrance examination (1/10000)

I feel that the author's writing style is suitable for short stories, publishing, and magazines. Not many people can read such slow martial arts with peace of mind in the starting point, but I still say "Come on＾0＾~" to the author.

Sure enough, Zhuzi's writing style is very strict, but it's a pity that there is one less young hero in the world, and one more storyteller. It's so good that I can't say enough about it, but it comes from the approval of my friends👌🏻

Through the feelings after reading the prologue, a martial arts dispute begins. What kind of past does Xiao Mo's children's shoes have? What role does it play in the martial arts world? Through chatting with the author, I know that Xiao Mo's children's shoes are not pig's feet. So where are the pig's feet hanging around now? Please listen to the explanation next time to predict what will happen next.

It has a strong ancient style and concise writing style. This kind of writing style is rarely seen on martial arts channels with a lot of iron heads. Come on!

Come from Jianghu Youyou, come on, vote for recommendation first and support it

Come on. Rush rush rush. The writing is good.

I am your fan. When will it be released?

Come on author, your book is excellent.

Don't worry, Zhuzi, after I apply for a bank card, I will top up the 5 yuan I got from grabbing red envelopes for you 🤭

The writing style is very good, and the poetic martial arts of the wind and clouds can also feel the weight of history. It is very interesting and has been collected. Martial arts is not easy. Come on, keep at it.

You have to persist and don't stop updating like me. Your writing will be promising. However, this website is called the grave of newcomers. It's not too late to consider it properly.