No Different Species

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I have been reading this book for a long time. In fact, I can see that the author has changed a lot along the way. Both the writing style and the development of the plot have undergone great changes and improvements. This is good. But, problems also arise. I want to make a complaint first. I wonder if the author has noticed my paragraph comment. When the author uses the third person, he likes to use "it". This is a bit incorrect. Generally, when using the third person, he uses "she", "he" and "it". As for how to use it, I won't go into details here. Maybe the author types too fast. Secondly, I think the author's description of psychological activities is a bit lacking. Psychological activities are of great help to the attraction of the book, the development of the plot, and the smoothness of the writing. The last thing is the development of the plot. I think the author's development of the plot is a little flat. Of course, it has been greatly improved compared to before.        ，，，，， The same goes for books. Every author hopes that his writing style is good, his plot is good, and his book is good. And every word typed bit by bit on the screen or on the keyboard also carries our dreams and the dream of this book. This kind of dream is the purest and most beautiful. Finally, I wish the author can achieve his goals and ideals. Listening to the wind outside the forest

Very good, quite exciting, support and support. Come on. . . . .

Just now, Lamb quietly summarized the categories of the world view of this book, which include Gaowu (the power system has this element), summoning, system, technology, apocalypse (the third volume will be released), transformation (the third or fourth volume will be released), martial arts (the fighting has this element, and cold weapons) There are such elements directly), Xianxia (the three civil institutions and special physical skills have this feeling), interstellar (the two planets can barely be considered interstellar!), Parallel universe (there is a certain element of this that will not be removed), evolutionary mutation (different species belong to this category), online games (some readers think it has this feeling). Currently these categories are occupied. There may be other plans in the future, but that's it for now. PS: As for the introduction method summarized by Lamb, this book is classified as a science fiction apocalyptic semi-interstellar novel. Thank you for your support!

Come on, come on, it's good,✌✌

I can't post the comment. I don't know why. I'll make it up tomorrow. Good night. Let's work hard together, come on!

They are all people who work hard for their dreams, come on

Come on, encourage each other, collected!

You have to have your own path when writing a book! We both have the same idea! Come on! ! ?

Great work, I have collected it and ask for a return visit! 😊

... This book finally has a cover.

I've accepted it, but your chapter is too short.

120,000 Words and 100 chapters are too few words per chapter.

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I rarely read this type of article, so there are relatively few comments. As for the advantages, the imagination is quite fun, and the blood is very good. 2333 Can see that he has worked hard to code the system, which is very detailed. The background is also very imaginative and attractive, and the complaints about the characters also have a soothing rhythm, but. Have you coded the outline? What about the details? The shortcomings are that newcomers have always been poor in writing and characterization. In fact, I complained a lot while watching 2333 First of all, there was too much nonsense, and someone pointed out that the segmentation was wrong in the first chapter. To be honest, anyone can tell the difference between intelligent and non-sapient alien species. Just mention them by name. Readers are not as stupid as you think. Actually, I have always felt that a system introduction like this could be given one by one, but no one would have the patience to read it all together. And if it wasn't very novel, there would be no need to mention it, after all, I have read so many novels. There is though! Why is it always written as Xianran? When it comes to segmentation, it can be divided into segments depending on what time a person did and what time they did. It is fine when the rhythm is slow at ordinary times, but when it comes to fighting, it needs to be short and clean to feel good. Is there any old use later? Just connect it at this moment. It will affect the perception a bit. The number of related words added is completely water. Characters, characters, did you have a background idea for the main characters before writing? I feel that the description of the characters is very weak. Whether it is the reaction to trouble or the daily speech, it seems to be superficial. Ah, the contrast is not bad, that Liangba is cute 2333 Describe a person from multiple aspects, and don't just stick to the perspective. This can also lead to the description of an event, like being hunted by someone. Start with the environment and atmosphere, and then go to the protagonist's psychology, the weapons and movements of the person being chased, and just focus on one point, so as to better create the sense of the picture. Similarly, synaesthesia techniques can be considered. Okay, keep up the good work, you are still very perseverant to write more than 100 chapters, keep persevering, accumulate more and more.

From now on, this book collects all known and unknown science fiction items from readers, from food, clothing, housing and transportation to weapons and ships. As long as you have a good idea, you can leave your footprints in this building. Lamb will consider the situation to determine whether it is suitable, and then consider adding it to the novel.

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This book contains a lot of popular science content. If something is wrong, you can write down what you think is right here to popularize it for everyone.

As long as the words Blue Star, Earth, and Moon appear in this book, you can leave clues here. Those contents are all wrong. It would be better to leave the chapter where the problem occurred.

Already collected, hope to visit again, let's work together

It's a bit like a modern science fiction novel, with some features, but a little boring. Alas, come on, the author, read more novels of the same type and style, and learn from them.

It's very well written, why don't you update it more? Come on! Welcome to visit us again! Already collected

There are errors in all chapter reviews. This is normal and means that someone has read the book. As for the reason for the error, Lamb changed the entire book and moved each chapter, so the chapter reviews were retained, but the review sentences were incorrect. Lamb here apologizes to everyone. For your better experience, this modification is necessary. I hope everyone can forgive me.

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