Sword and Blood Thrush Record

The writing looks pretty good. When I read it for the first time, the first three chapters were blurry. Maybe I didn't read it carefully, so I read the first three chapters for the second time. Then I discovered that 1. The first one to come out was a city gate guard named "Fish Ban". I don't know what the role of the first character is. Maybe he will have a role in the future, but I personally feel that he is overqualified for this position. 2. The purpose of the sick prince's appearance is also a bit unclear. Before he could be explained clearly, the scene was skipped again. 3. As the fourth character, the protagonist is a very important protagonist, but we don't see who the protagonist is. An ordinary scholar would not be treated like this. Then the identity of the protagonist was not clearly explained, and why he wanted to leave this divine capital. Another shot. In fact, since you plan to create a big world and background from the beginning, don't be so anxious. Obviously at the beginning, there are many stories to tell, and they can be very attractive if they are well written, but it just jumps around like a movie montage. I read the beginning twice and then...