The Mysterious Return of Ice and Fire

The quality of this book is okay, the text is good, and the writing is okay. However (this is Masaka), in many places the protagonist's decisions and actions are inconsistent with his character. The development of the plot in many places is just twists and turns for the sake of twists and turns, conspiracy for the sake of conspiracy, not much excitement, and overflowing with literary youth disease. The overall feeling I have is that the author has trouble with money, and the fans are consuming the original work by putting it on the shelves. However, this book is self-satisfying and allows readers to see that the author has good writing skills and can also arrange the plot. Although I have my own interpretation and second thoughts on many of the foreshadowings in the original work, overall it still gives people the feeling that I am showing off my own skills. There are too many private things. I may feel great after writing it myself, but it actually feels quite bad when I read it. I would give it a six out of ten. I hope this self-satisfaction problem will be corrected in the next book.

If you want to succeed, you still have to write your own stuff. The reason why you are here is probably based on the American TV series of Game of Thrones. There are probably very few people who have read the original novel, let alone those who can read it carefully and understand it. Therefore, try to avoid spoilers of the plot or results in the book, and do not retell the plot of the original novel with your book friends. If you can understand some things, you will naturally make up the original novel in your mind. If you don't, just treat it as a new story for book lovers.

I started to think that I could still read it with a little bit of poison, until I saw the protagonist leaving Xiao Peipei and Xion together without anyone watching, and I knew that this book was impossible to read. It was extremely poisonous and forced to reduce the intelligence. Later readers, please don't read it. Hey💩Here comes a new trick 😅😅😅😅 The plot is quite bloody after it was released in the mid-term

Do you think you are very humorous? Your reversal is not satisfying at all. I feel so awkward. I am betrayed once every seven or eight chapters on average. All the novels I have read before are not comparable. Such betrayals make me doubt that there is something wrong with the protagonist's character.

I just read it, chapter 30 or 40, and the protagonist was betrayed five or six times, and I just wanted to say, it's not that big of a deal, right? (~_~;)

No golden finger? It doesn't have to be too strong, but at least give it some

Do you know why the grades are poor? Because the protagonist is a white-eyed wolf. Understand?

Promise me not to be like the white-eyed man in the TV series😁

Is it tiring to watch? I can't write a farming story properly, and the plot goes on and on forever. I feel that the protagonist doesn't need to worry so much and just goes to work for the Dragon Mother. For the first time, Zhenghe Wen saw that the base area had been raided three times, and the beatings continued in circles in the north.

I naively thought that at the end of the last volume, when Bran escaped, the Northern Army was left empty and wasted, he was forced to take the blame for poisoning 10,000 Northerners, and his lover was turned into a White Walker, this was Xu Luo's lowest point, and Xu Luo could finally slowly plan and develop. As a result, the dragon mother burst into flames. . . 😭 miserable Xu Luo miserable

This time travel has not changed much. I remember there is a saying that I would rather teach me to betray the world than teach the world to betray me. It doesn't matter if I don't know the plot. I know it and still boast like this.

You definitely can't write the feeling of ice and fire, after all, you have to pass the review!

The Skagos are not a subspecies recorded as giants. They are huge in size, have thick hair, and have a strong body odor. They can smelt bronze to make weapons and armor. A small number of them ride large unicorns. If they are not more than 2 meters tall, they cannot be called huge. The rock species here are written as if they are natives of tropical black Africa.

Since he is already Jon, let's use the same name.

Could the author please change the name, otherwise it won't seem interesting?

After watching Game of Thrones, I don't have a good impression of the Wolf family at all.

The TV series sucked. It sucked. It sucked. Snow stabbed the Dragon Mother to death and it was gone. . . . . 😡😡

Xu Luo has paid so much for Westeros. The southerners obviously have a way to know whether the White Walkers are real, but they would rather pretend to be stupid and not get evidence. They just believe that it is false. Jon is a tyrant. Xu Luo, Westeros is not worth it.

Little Rose was written to death like this. What a pity for this beauty.

Shouldn't the title of the protagonist be changed? Xu Luo, a fan of A Song of Ice and Fire, always feels embarrassed

Finished spreading flowers🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 It is indeed the purest ice and fire fanfic I have ever read! Super awesome! There are still some questions about the ending: 1. Xu Luo still survived after committing suicide. My personal understanding is that only death (suicide with Dragon Crystal Dagger) can prevent Xu Luo from becoming the King of the White Walkers, and if he fails to commit suicide successfully, Xu Luo will still exist as a White Walker. (Could it be that he was resurrected by Aunt Mei after his death?) By the way, I mentioned Xu Luo and the princess. I didn't expect that the love between them was the key to changing the ending. I guessed before that Xu Luo had other back-ups besides Arya (wry smile). But to be honest, I was not very impressed by how they fell in love and stayed together until death (laughs). In comparison, the plot of Morona dying as a substitute shocked me even more. 2. Regarding the setting of Xu Luo being the Blood Stone Emperor, it seems that there is no explanation except for killing the blood crow and the ending. (Maybe I missed it) In the original book, the Blood Stone Emperor was only mentioned in the setting collection. I'm a little confused. I'd like to learn more about it. 🌸

I finished the book too quickly, and I still haven't finished it yet.

I'm very curious, how did Snow's child come about?

These chapters of the little devil's battle of wits remind me of Yan Zi's mission to Chu hhh

Why not finish it at one million words... The book that started with "Game of Thrones" was also around 900,000 words long... At least it should be a hundred!

Dad, is your new book ready yet?

When I read the power struggle in the novel, I don't know why, but I always feel like I've seen it in a Qiong Yao romance novel! How funny!

The author writes so well. The epic new book "The Counterattack of the Beggar King of Ice and Fire" welcomes Ice and Fire fans to read and give advice.