Cultivating Immortality in a Matriarchal World

I didn't want to watch it when I saw the protagonist saying that he wanted to change the social atmosphere of sissies. This is like a woman-dominated native who came to modern times and wants to turn all men into sissies.

It's a very interesting book, I must keep writing it!

Brother author, your writing is very good. I support you, so can you not give up?

Write the words of a female deity cultivating immortality. The male protagonist should be more indifferent. Boys must learn to protect themselves when they go out.

This kind of writing about female protagonists is poisonous. Think about it, all the people taking bath are men. She has been showing her naked body to other men since she was a child. Her head really feels green and glowing 😐

It's ugly. Not only is the writing poor, but the plot is also ridiculous. I'm really sorry for the plot in Chapter 3. How can a young lady in the world of heroines turn into a squeamish young lady in the normal world? There is also a storyline where the protagonist doesn't want to take the role, and the woman told you not to go there, and even said it several times, but it still happened. The development of the plot is far-fetched, and the protagonist treats it like a woman for the first time. Holy shit, she just passed through and assimilated? I won't go into details, but all in all, this is a bad book with no room for improvement.

The handsome man has woken up ∩∩ （´･ω･） ￣￣￣￣￣￣ The ugly people are still sleeping ⊂⌒／ヽ-＿_ ／⊂_/＿＿＿＿／ ￣￣￣￣￣￣￣

Author, don't give up, this book is very interesting.

First of all, there are too many unnecessary reports. Your book is already poisonous, and the poison is still looming. It is too powerful to persuade you to retreat. What you should express in the front has been clearly expressed, but you feel beeping later, so do it if you have the strength! The director said a lot before starting work. The protagonist's thinking is a little bit off. After reading more than seventy chapters, your protagonist's brain is a little off. It would have been stable and developed, but he had to rush hard and became a bit stubborn. Secondly, the combat power is a little chaotic, but the story is good. It would be good if you fast forward a little. In general, your book is messed up internally, but externally the subject matter is okay, although a bit poisonous.

The book is good, but I don't think it will be popular. It's hard to have a sense of immersion in this book. In some plots, I have to change the gender in my mind so that I don't feel peace-keeping, which is a bit uncomfortable.