Kai Xuan Ji

It's been a long time since I've had a piece of writing that I loved. I was hesitant and bored, but I never thought about this day. I was afraid that I would step on shit. I came across this article when I went out. I guess I got that shit luck. With my hard-core reading habits, I didn't feel any excitement when I first saw the title of the book. But when I read the first chapter, I apologized for the first sentence I said. The writing is smooth, the context is clear, and it can be summed up in one sentence. It makes people's eyes light up and I feel that I must chase it. After reading the first dozen chapters of this article, I am more happy than disappointed. I have a few feelings and I would like to leave a few words. I hope Haihan will forgive me for any shortcomings. First of all, the writing style is not exquisite, but it is simple and capable. Secondly, the story line structure is clear. If the author does not follow the detailed outline of the story, then the logical structure ability will get a thumbs up. Thirdly, the environment and atmosphere are created more delicately, and the overall writing style and texture are quite good. Finally, judging from the layout structure of the story, the author's writing skills are still very strong, and the story line is clear and orderly. However, I have to say no, I won't elaborate on the good aspects. I will mainly talk about a few aspects that I think the author needs to pay more attention to. First, the issue of story rhythm. To be honest, the first chapter of the story is not bad at first glance, but then read on and look at the entire story context. The overall story is draggy, the plot arrangement is not prioritized, and it is too cumbersome. Second, the story pattern is not expanded and not grand enough. The story must be advanced and cannot be separated from the pig's feet. Pig's feet are always the same... There must be layers. The expansion of the pattern behind a story will be very large. Don't limit it to a single character. The story will appear petty. It is still a fantasy novel in itself. Third, pay attention to the arrangement of thickness. Are there too many and too detailed descriptions? You must learn to make trade-offs, otherwise readers will inevitably become fatigued. The fourth point is that Pig's Feet loves to compose poetry too much. The key issue is to pay attention to poetry, which is very particular. Otherwise, when someone understands it, some poems just don't make sense, and if they praise them, the high-class atmosphere created by this article will of course be completely lost. I won't go into too much detail above, and I'll forgive Wang Haihan if I don't go outside. Overall, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, and it is a good article worth reading. Come on

Reading the catalog is a bit like a novel about picking up girls, so I asked for help... Shen Nong Shen Nong, tell me, is it a romance novel? I won't enter.

Reading this book gives me an inexplicable sense of anticipation, looking forward to seeing the latest content soon.

It's a pleasant read. I haven't read such a flavorful novel in a long time.

I looked through the list of renovators and saw this book. The introduction was interesting, so I read on. After reading the first few chapters, I knew that the author's writing style was really good. Whether it was the portrayal of the protagonist or the description of the minor characters, they were very detailed and meticulous, each with its own characteristics. The description of the environment and scenery echoed the background. What impressed me the most was the author's poems. Beidingbian and Taipingchun were really grand. I read it several times. I read 60,000 words in one go, and now I want to know what the next plot will be. I am especially looking forward to how a little person who just wants to succeed in the imperial examination can become an immortal and live forever.

The content is very good, but the updates are too slow. Please update! ! !

Although I don't know what it's about, it's very well written.

It feels a little bit like literary style, and I quite like it.

My friend said this book is good, let me take a look

Already collected! Recommended! Come on 😜 Welcome to return and support the female channel of "The Distance of Cultivation of Immortals"!

I can't tell that this is a fantasy novel. It's slow-paced and unsystematic. It's not suitable for being a fairy tale. It can only be read as embarrassing history at best.

I always feel that the title and content of the book are not very consistent... The content of the article is good. The working people who are oppressed by the exploiting class want to change their destiny through the imperial examination. I am looking forward to the following plot and hope that the protagonist will not give up the imperial examination!

The writing is good, the writing style is okay, but the content of the book does not match the introduction. It is a bit like (literary novels such as Confucianism and Taoism). Come on, the author, and look forward to the follow-up development.

This book gives people a great feeling. The plot has ups and downs, room for development and imagination, and twists and foreshadowing. It makes people wonder and make them want to read on. The opening chapter is about the male protagonist Shishan losing his reputation. The joyful mood of hearing others go to high school one by one forms a sharp contrast with the lonely mood of the male protagonist's failure. It has a great impact. The emotional contrast makes people feel the inner loss and helplessness of the male protagonist. And a poem before leaving is narrated in the form of a guest reading it, which gives a different feeling. The key is that the person who can understand Shishan's poem is still a woman. I am very curious about the identity of this woman, and whether she will meet Shishan later? This is also a kind of fate, isn't it? I went back to meet the teacher Tang Bin. The teacher was kind-hearted and prepared a way out for Shishan. Although he was just a jailer, it was not a waste of time. However, the teacher had prepared a letter of recommendation in advance. Just like Shishan himself thought, the teacher also thought that he would not be able to go to high school. , So I prepared it in advance. Although it is well-intentioned, it will inevitably make people feel heartbroken. What touched me the most in this book written by the author is the poems and emotional fluctuations. The delicate and in-depth description allows people to personally experience the emotional changes of the characters in the book, and the poems This is what I admire the most. I thought that the poems could just be copied from ready-made ones, but I asked Du Niang that there is no such poem, which means that these poems are all original. What is the concept of originality? Only talented people and people who have studied poems can write them, such as If the poems in this book are all written by the author himself, then I admire it from the bottom of my heart. You must know that only everyone can write good poems now. There are many people who write novels, but there are only a few people who can write poems. I hope the author can keep it up! The character Yao Manman in the back can be regarded as a talented woman, and she can also appreciate Shishan's poetry. The meeting between the two was accidental, but also destined, so I have a bold guess, is the woman who stayed in the guest room where Shishan stayed at the beginning is Yao Manman? It's just that in the context of ancient times, a woman like Yao Manman who is in the public eye is not a lady in general, but any family with restrictions will not let our ladies freely enter and exit various mixed situations. However, Yao Manman still feels good, and Shishan is sincere. The expression is unexpected. In modern times, it's just naked teasing. I didn't expect that Shishan has such a side. He is probably a sultry persona, haha. Shishan's body slowly changes, which also pave the way for his subsequent plots. There will be no sudden turning points. There have been several times. It was pointed out that Shishan's face was pale and there was a chill in his heart, and then the identity of the person in the prison was pointed out, which further verified the changes in Shishan's body. Although he knew that nothing would happen in the end, people could not help but feel sorry for him. Even if he could get through it safely, he would still have to go through it. In terms of life and death, Shishan's fate in the early stage was quite troubled. He offended his immediate boss before he even got to work, and he was filled with coldness. It was definitely the darkness before dawn. To sum up, this book is really good to read. I definitely wanted to stay up late to read it, so the author should hurry up and update it. It's great!

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When I read the first chapter, I thought it was historical, but it turned out to be fantasy. The opening scene was at a low point. It's hard to be the protagonist.

It can be seen that the author has good skills and writes well.

Zhao Tiancai is so shameless, he still wants to eat young grass at such an old age

The first few chapters don't look like fantasy, but the author's writing is good.

A capable person cannot be hidden. Yao Manman has a good eye.

The person behind bars is probably the one who opened the door to the new world in Shishan 😄

Zhao Yan is really a dog-fighter, so arrogant!

The content of this book feels very good and worth reading. The update should be speeded up.

The beginning is too procrastinating and lengthy 🪖 I read ten chapters in a row and never got to the point. If you are writing in the historical genre, I think that is fine, but if you are writing in the fantasy genre 🪖, not many fantasy readers will be able to read it patiently. The remaining readers will also have their patience slowly polished by you🪖