Pokemon: The Pay-to-Win Trainer

Suddenly I discovered that the strong and magically defended Gui Chan was invincible.

The author is still struggling or doesn't understand why people think it's poisonous to tell Qianli that he can change his characteristics, so he defended it a lot and put forward a lot of arguments. It is also good that the author is willing to communicate instead of blindly deleting posts, but readers who think it is poisonous still think it is poisonous. Because the biggest problem here is not whether it is reasonable to tell Qianli to change his characteristics, but the author's plot setting that destroys the reader's sense of immersion. 1 One year after time travel, he fainted because his original parents died? And he wanted to take revenge against the lava group later? It is clear that the time traveler protagonist is still missing his relatives and friends in the original world a year later. The feelings are so deep, why does a college student recognize his parents so easily? If the time traveler is a child, or if the parents are very kind to the time traveler, it is only reasonable to write like this. But the author solved it in just one sentence. It is more reasonable to say that it is the indigenous people who have obtained the memories of the time travellers. 2. Making friends with Qianli for a period of time is also very brainless, and it is set for the sake of setting. According to the setting, he is 11 years old, 6 years after the time travel, and 5 years after the death of his parents. You are still out of tune with the whole world. Which dimension are you a college student in? So mentally fragile? If you are a child who doesn't know the world of Pokémon, or you have depression, is this okay? I can barely accept this as a time traveler with a golden finger. You can at least write a few chapters to convince me. Not to mention making friends with someone just because he doesn't fit in? Is Qianli a stupid thing or is there so much road? 3 After so many years of forcing school party members to stay, nothing has been accomplished. I don't even understand what the author means by writing about school? If you know the Pokémon settings like the back of your hand and have a golden finger, why do you need a school to forcefully start a war with a traveling party? If you want to tell me that you are young, you idiot is only 10 years old. The main player who has been trained for so many years has only reached this level, and you are talking about increasing his talent? Are you not in a hurry to find Team Lava to avenge your parents at this time? Don't tell me what resources you have. Are your parents alone and have no friends or relatives? The alliance can only send orphans to schools for care. Is there any other way to compensate? If that doesn't work, you can join Team Rocket and borrow wood to kill Team Lava? Summary: The author has a certain tendency to enjoy himself, and writes forcefully for the sake of outline /setting, without carefully polishing the logic. Anyway, I can't accept the performance of an adult time traveler, without any sense of substitution.

After watching this protagonist for a long time, I feel that he is a bit high-profile. I wish others would know that his elf characteristics are different. Moreover, the protagonist's elf characteristics are often changed. Isn't the Z-movement a bit too brainless? Generally speaking, it's just okay. It's very good at the front, but it becomes more and more stupid as you go to the back.

I'm thinking that a Gardevoir with a mysterious guardian + the ability to change freely + a teleportation show until it flies up would be very...

I'm very puzzled. The protagonist has special capsules and super-evolved formulas and information. He doesn't want this product site to get a little profit. He always deals with one lump sum and always says he is short of money. This time traveler protagonist is really bad.

The quality of elf fan fiction is considered average. Let me talk about the two biggest problems I think. . First, the author likes to use long paragraphs to explain the behavior of Goldfinger or a certain character. However, this is not something that can be changed. It is a problem with writing skills and is acceptable. Second, this is more important. The core of elf literature is the elf. There is no doubt about this. However, this book has too little description of elf character, elf's daily life, interaction between elf and protagonist, etc. To give the simplest example, I read dozens and nearly a hundred chapters, and I know that the protagonist's initial and ace elf is the Dou Li Mushroom. What then? What is the personality of the Dou Li Mushroom? What is the bond between you and the protagonist? There is almost no description, so I can't get any impression of it except its attributes. . . It's always about changing the characteristics of the golden finger, what skills I learned, what my attributes are, I played against xxx and won, that's all. . . The description of the system far exceeds the sum of all the elves of the protagonist, right? The author also asks the author to realize that the protagonist's elf in this book is not the data in the handheld game you play, but the protagonist's life and death partner. It is easy to get tired of it in the middle and later stages of writing.

The more I read it, the more it looks like a self-help article. There is a lot of data. Everyone knows the attributes of features. If you don't understand, you can write a separate chapter for those who don't understand. You forcefully write it in the main text, as if you are explaining yourself. It looks very poisonous, and it is still difficult to write it in. It's too watery. There are more than 200 chapters written in a glass whistle cup. It will make people more and more bored and tired after reading it. I skipped it after reading dozens of chapters. It was tiring and annoying. I will try to change it later 😒😒😒

I finally know what the talent of pig's feet is, which is vomiting and self-excitement. Under the talent of elf training, there is no systematic modification and exploration of characteristics. The elf trainer is the pinnacle.

Changing the characteristics of Qianli is really annoying to me. I forcefully explain that it's just a few props, and you won't change it for your own elf in the future? If you had to say that Qianli was a good person, you would not report it to the alliance. With your ability to show off, I think a lot of people will know about it later. There is a big difference between changing characteristics and modifying characteristics. If you dare to expose it, do you really think that dark organizations like Team Rocket are idiots? Unless you become the King of Heaven in a year, otherwise you are just waiting to be captured.

Very watery. Modifier 10%, data 40%, inner drama 20%, other introduction, explanation, 20%