Pendor's Prophecy Companion

Various Knights

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I saw this occasionally today, the beginning of my novel 🤓, I wrote it in this notebook when I had nothing to do

I saw it in the post bar, support the author

Recently I have been preparing to revise the chapters of Anson and Kahuila. The arrangement at the beginning was a bit messy, so there will be new updates but it is actually the previous content 😰

Riders, Pende is a good mod.

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A very good story that makes the friends in the game more vivid

A very good story. It would be great if there were interactive stories between the companions. After all, Teddylan failed for several chapters. I feel that he and the Son of Prophecy can unify Pendor alone.

Why not write it

The narration from different perspectives runs through a main line, and the author's writing style can completely defeat those Internet writers who write water and saliva. The storyline is also remarkable, but the biggest problem is that the foreshadowing of the narrative from different perspectives is too slow. If the prophecy child is the protagonist, his appearance is too late, and the story of the NPC companions is all written in front of the protagonist. The narrative without the protagonist's appearance will miss an important core. The chapters of each NPC companion are their own story protagonists, and the protagonists are just mentioned in one stroke. To foreshadow the story, just write one or two chapters in the front, and you can intersperse some writing in the back, and pile them all at the front to foreshadow the story. One or two characters are fine, but so many characters all at the front will seem draggy, and readers will soon lose interest. The above is just a personal opinion. I hope the author can write better and better. The succinct writing is not worth learning from. Internet writing is also a part of literature and should not be deliberately distinguished. It is just that the vast majority of Internet writers are not good enough in writing, which causes the subjective impression that online writing is not literature. In my opinion the author has great potential, come on! !

I don't know how long the author can persist, but if you update one day, I will wait for you another day

A good book, but the ending was unexpected

The story is analyzed from different perspectives, and a dagger is used as the hidden main line throughout the book. It is indeed very innovative in writing techniques compared to similar books. However, the writing method of online articles is not advantageous, and the specific activities of the protagonist are not more clearly highlighted.

What is the name of the child of prophecy?

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Shouldn't be placed in a short story

What do you mean, author, you started singing from Donovan?